应用文写作专题五：祝贺信 导学案-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

应用文写作专题5——A Letter of congratulations 假如你是李华,你的美国网友David 参加校园戏曲艺术节获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。内容包括: 1. 祝贺他获奖; 2.肯定他付出的努力; 3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。 Dear David, I am writing to offer/convey/express my heartfelt congratulations to you on your winning first prize in the Campus Opera Art Festival. You deserve the honour for what you have devoted to traditional Chinese opera these years. Not only have you had a good knowledge of Chinese culture, but also you have gained a deep insight into traditional opera art. You have made it a habit to practise Beijing Opera on a daily basis, which is the key to your success. Congratulations again! I'm looking forward to your making greater contributions to the promotion of Chinese culture. Yours, Li Hua 经典例题挑战 例题1：祝贺高考成功 假设你是李华，你的朋友李明在高考中取得了优异成绩，并被清华大学录取。请你写一封祝贺信，表达你的喜悦和祝福。Tsinghua University清华大学 Dear Li Ming, I am absolutely thrilled to hear that you have achieved outstanding results in the Gaokao and been admitted to Tsinghua University! This is truly a remarkable accomplishment, and I couldn’t be happier for you. Your hard work, perseverance, and dedication have finally paid off. You have set a shining example for all of us, proving that with determination, anything is possible. I sincerely hope that this is just the beginning of even greater achievements in your academic journey. May you continue to strive for excellence and make the most of your time at Tsinghua. Once again, congratulations! I look forward to hearing more about your future successes. Best wishes, Li Hua 欣闻你在高考中取得优异成绩并被清华大学录取，我由衷地为你感到欣喜！这确实是了不起的成就，我的喜悦之情难以言表。你付出的努力、坚持与专注终于得到了回报，为我们树立了光辉的榜样，再次证明只要意志坚定，万事皆可成就。 我衷心希望这仅是你学术征程上更大成就的开端。愿你在清华园继续追求卓越，不负韶华。再次祝贺！期待见证你未来更多的成功。 翻译说明： "absolutely thrilled"译为"由衷地欣喜"，既保留情感强度又符合中文表达 "remarkable accomplishment"采用"了不起的成就"增强口语化感染力 "set a shining example"译为"树立光辉榜样"，使用四字短语提升文采 将原文两个长句拆分重组，符合中文多用短句的阅读习惯 "make the most of your time"意译为"不负韶华"，引用经典成语增强文学性 例题2：祝贺知识竞赛获奖 （2024·江西·三模）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1. 祝贺；2. 回顾；3. 期待。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 准备相关词块 1.传达：extend→convey 2. 对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in 3. 充裕的adj.：abundant→sufficient 4. 参考丰富的资源:refer to abundant resources 5. consulted many locals and professionals咨询了许多当地人和专业人士 6. 致力于：devote oneself to→commit/dedicate oneself to 7. equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.使你对中国文化有全面的了解和掌握。 写作（80-100字） Dear Peter, Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world. Yours, Li Hua Upgraded Version: It is with immense joy and admiration that I congratulate you on winning the first prize in the City Chinese Traditional Culture Contest! This remarkable achievement is a testament to your deep passion, relentless dedication, and profound understanding of Chinese culture. Your success comes as no surprise to those who know your unwavering commitment. Beyond textbook knowledge, you immersed yourself in authentic cultural experiences—consulting local experts, delving into historical texts, and even mastering traditional arts. Such thorough exploration has not only enriched your expertise but also set an inspiring example for all culture enthusiasts. This victory is more than just a personal triumph; it is a celebration of cultural heritage. As you continue your journey, I sincerely hope you will take this opportunity to bridge cultures and promote global appreciation of Chinese traditions. Whether through academic research, public lectures, or digital content creation, your efforts can make Chinese culture more accessible and engaging for people worldwide. Once again, heartfelt congratulations! May your passion continue to illuminate the beauty of Chinese culture, inspiring others to explore and cherish it as you do. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 应用文写作专题5——A Letter of congratulations (首段祝贺)+(评论事件) +(展望未来，再次祝愿) 题型分析 祝贺信是向对方表示祝贺的信件，其命题形式通常以真实生活场景为背景，如同学获奖、朋友升学、亲戚创业成功、生日/节日祝福等。 祝贺信的核心要求是语言简洁真诚，格式规范，内容切题，体现祝贺的情感并适当表达鼓励或祝愿。 字数要求：80词左右（高考英语作文标准）。祝贺信也是人们情感交流的一种方式，写祝贺信可以使亲戚、朋友、同事之间加强联系，增进了解，彼此关心。 写作方法 祝贺信写作步骤： 说明事由并表达自己衷心祝贺→展开评论事件、赞扬收信人→再次表达良好祝愿 在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。 Activity 1 : Review the sample composition your have memorized. 假如你是李华,你的美国网友David 参加校园戏曲艺术节获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。内容包括: 1. 祝贺他获奖; 2.肯定他付出的努力; 3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。 Dear David, _________________________________________________________________________________in the Campus Opera Art Festival.我写信是为了祝贺你在校园歌剧艺术节中荣获一等奖。 _____________________________for what you have devoted to traditional Chinese opera these years. (这些年来你为传统戏曲所付出的努力，值得这份荣誉。) Not only have you had a good knowledge of Chinese culture, but also you have gained a deep insight into traditional opera art. You have made it __________________________ practise Beijing Opera ________________________________, which is the key to your success.你已养成每日练习京剧的习惯，而这正是成功的关键。 Congratulations again! _____________________________________________________________期待你为弘扬中国文化作出更大贡献。 Yours, Li Hua Upgraded Version: Dear David, I am truly delighted to extend my sincerest congratulations to you on your remarkable achievement of winning first prize in the Campus Opera Art Festival. This prestigious(  /preˈstɪdʒəs/有威望的；声誉高的 ——崇高荣誉)honor is a testament to your unwavering dedication and exceptional talent in the realm /relm/ of traditional Chinese opera. Over the years, your profound passion for Chinese cultural heritage and your relentless pursuit of artistic excellence have set you apart. Not only do you possess an in-depth understanding of Chinese culture, but you have also demonstrated extraordinary insight into the the refined art of traditional opera. Your disciplined daily practice of Beijing Opera exemplifies(举例说明；例证；例示) your commitment, and it is undoubtedly the cornerstone(基石；奠基石) of your success.多年来，你对中国文化的深厚热爱和对艺术卓越的不懈追求使你脱颖而出。你不仅对中国文化有着深刻理解，你还对传统戏曲雅致艺术展现出非凡的领悟力。您日复一日苦练京剧的执着，正是这份坚守的最佳印证，也无疑是成功的根本所在。 Once again, my heartfelt congratulations on this well-deserved accomplishment! I am confident that you will continue to shine as a cultural ambassador, making even greater contributions to the preservation and promotion of Chinese traditional arts. Warm regards, Li Hua Activity 2 Get familiar with the commonly used sentence patterns (首段祝贺)Learning that···， I an writing to extend my sincere congratulations 1. I’m writing to convey/extend/express my heartfelt congratulations on your receiving the offer from Peking University.我写信是为了表达我对你收到北京大学录取通知书衷心的祝贺。 2. I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. 得知你被推选为学校篮球队队长我很开心。 3. It is with great pleasure that I extend my warmest congratulations to you on... （非常高兴向你致以最热烈的祝贺……） (评论事件) 1. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Now you prove to me a mature and well-rounded（全面的）________in every respect. 2. Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off.（你的努力和奉献终于得到了回报。） 3. This success is a testament to your perseverance and talent.（这次成功证明了你的毅力和才华。） 4. You have set a great example for all of us.（你为我们树立了一个很好的榜样。） (展望未来，再次祝愿) 1. May this achievement be just the beginning of even greater accomplishments.（愿这次成就只是更大成功的开始。） 2. I hope you will keep striving for excellence.（希望你能继续追求卓越。） 3. Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on this well-deserved accomplishment.May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!"再次，我想对您这一当之无愧的成就致以最诚挚的祝贺。愿未来的岁月里，您所有的梦想都能实现！" 经典例题挑战 例题1：祝贺高考成功 假设你是李华，你的朋友李明在高考中取得了优异成绩，并被清华大学录取。请你写一封祝贺信，表达你的喜悦和祝福。Tsinghua University清华大学 Dear Li Ming, I ____________________________________to hear that you have__________________________ in the National College Entrance Examination and ___________________________ Tsinghua University! This is truly _______________________________________, and I couldn’t be happier for you. Your ________________________________________________________________________. You have set a shining example for all of us, ___________________________________________________(非谓语动词). I sincerely hope that this is just the beginning of even greater achievements in your______________. May you continue to __________________________________ and ___________________________ at Tsinghua. Once again, congratulations! I look forward to hearing more about your future successes. Best wishes, Li Hua 欣闻你在高考中取得优异成绩并被清华大学录取，我由衷地为你感到欣喜！ 这确实是了不起的成就，我的喜悦之情难以言表。你付出的努力、坚持与专注终于得到了回报，为我们树立了光辉的榜样，再次证明只要意志坚定，万事皆可成就。 我衷心希望这仅是你学术征程上更大成就的开端。愿你在清华园继续追求卓越，不负韶华。再次祝贺！期待见证你未来更多的成功。 例题2：祝贺知识竞赛获奖 （2024·江西·三模）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1. 祝贺；2. 回顾；3. 期待。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 准备相关词块 1.传达__________________________；2. 对……感兴趣：__________________________________________ 3. 充裕的adj.：________________________4. 参考丰富的资源:____________________________________ 5. 咨询了许多当地人和专业人士__________________________ 6. 致力于：____________________________________________________ 7. 使你对中国文化有全面的了解和掌握____________________________________________________ 写作（80-100字）(自行分段) Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Yours, Li Hua Upgraded Version:（体会用词） It is with immense joy and admiration that I congratulate you on winning the first prize in the City Chinese Traditional Culture Contest! This remarkable achievement is a testament to your deep passion, relentless dedication, and profound understanding of Chinese culture. Your success comes as no surprise to those who know your unwavering commitment. Beyond textbook knowledge, you immersed yourself in authentic cultural experiences—consulting local experts, delving into historical texts, and even mastering traditional arts. Such thorough exploration has not only enriched your expertise but also set an inspiring example for all culture enthusiasts. This victory is more than just a personal triumph; it is a celebration of cultural heritage. As you continue your journey, I sincerely hope you will take this opportunity to bridge cultures and promote global appreciation of Chinese traditions. Whether through academic research, public lectures, or digital content creation, your efforts can make Chinese culture more accessible and engaging for people worldwide. Once again, heartfelt congratulations! May your passion continue to illuminate the beauty of Chinese culture, inspiring others to explore and cherish it as you do. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$