读后续写:杰森和利亚姆故事 讲义-2025届湖北省武汉市华中师范大学第一附属中学高三下学期五月限时训练(月考)英语试卷

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Jason held his script too tightly, making the pages wrinkle. His palms had left damp marks on his Of Mice and Men script. Across the rehearsal(排练)room, Liam was doing his usual annoying trick—balancing a pencil on his nose during rehearsals——for the third time this week.

Last year, they were great partners when they acted in The Outsiders together. Their rooftop "Stay gold" scene even got featured in the school newsletter. But now, everything changed.

The trouble started during rehearsals. Jason insisted on following the book's exact gestures. But Liam kept adding new moves——hugging an invisible puppy during serious lines, pretending to trip over "rabbits".

"Lennie wouldn't do that!" Jason whispered angrily after a rehearsal.

"At least my Lennie wouldn't sound like a human tape recorder," Liam snapped back.

Their fight grew bigger every day. Liam put vinegar in Jason's water bottle. Jason "accidentally "locked Liam's favorite script in the storage room. Their teacher even put up a sign saying "NO MORE FOOD FIGHTS" after they threw ketchup packets at each other.

The exploding moment came during their final practice. During the barn scene, Liam suddenly howled like a wolf. The younger students laughed loudly. Jason was so mad that he ran off the stage–and crashed right into the wooden chairs, breaking three of them.

That night, Jason couldn't sleep. He kept thinking about how Liam used to gently push his shoulder before scary scenes to encourage him. At l a. m., he got on his bike and rode back to school.

The storage room light was on. Inside, Liam was sitting on the floor, trying to fix the broken chairs. Next to him was a chocolate bar—the kind Jason always ate.

Jason froze, his eyes wide with a mix of astonishment and guilt when he realized page number 0

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it was the chairs he had kicked and broken. "Liam.... I... I didn't think I'd see you here fixing these," Jason stammered, his voice barely above a whisper.

Liam kept his head low, "Yeah, well, someone had to. The show is next week. "

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(1)续写词数应为150个左右;

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Paragraph 1: Jason, at a loss for words but eager to help, grabbed a hammer and nails.

                                                                 

Paragraph 2: On performance day, Jason and Liam stood side by side, ready to take the stage.

                                                                 

 

杰森和利亚姆故事的续写

续写分析​

第一段分析(160 字)​

第一段以杰森主动帮忙修椅子展开,通过 “grabbed a hammer and nails”“silently sat down” 等动作描写,展现出杰森想要弥补过错、修复关系的急切心情 。“The air was thick with unspoken apologies” 生动地描绘出两人之间尴尬又充满歉意的氛围。杰森提及往事的对话 “Remember when we made that ‘Stay gold’ scene unforgettable?”,巧妙地打破僵局,唤起两人共同的美好回忆,促使利亚姆回应,让紧张的气氛得以缓和。“They both laughed, the tension melting away” 标志着两人矛盾的初步化解,随后他们交流对剧本的想法,将杰森对剧本的坚持与利亚姆的创意相结合,为后续表演的成功埋下伏笔,推动故事朝着和解的方向发展。​

第二段分析(160 字)​

第二段聚焦表演日,“stood side by side”“eyes met”“nodded at each other” 等细节,体现出两人和解后默契的团队协作和相互信任。表演过程中,“their chemistry was electric”“brought Lennie to life with just the right mix of humor and page number 1

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