2025届高考英语读后续写高分技巧（善用公式轻取满分+巧妙结尾升华主题）清单

读后续写高分技巧

一、善用公式，轻取满分

（一）情绪描写

公式1:A wave/sense/look of＋情感名词（excitement/ delight/ nervousness /...）＋有灵动词（seized/overwhelmed/took hold of/washed over/flooded over/swept over/crossed）＋ sb （无灵主语句）某人感到……

①When the host announced that she won the prize, a sense of excitement took hold of her.当主持人宣布她获奖时，她感到非常兴奋。

②A wave of excitement and delight swept over me.

一阵兴奋和喜悦席卷了我。

公式2：One’s heart pounded/thumped/raced with +情感名词（excitement

 /nervousness/fear/terror/horror/...）激动/紧张/害怕得心怦怦跳

Her heart was racing with anticipation as she waited for the results.

她满怀期待，心脏怦怦直跳，等待着结果。

【高分句】

1.A look of annoyance crossed her face.恼怒的神色从她脸上掠过。

2.A strong wave of fear was sweeping over him, and Mike couldn’t utter a single word.一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身，迈克一个字也说不出来。

3.Her previous calm gave way to/was swept away by terror.她先前的泰然自若变为了惊恐。

4.His heart was pounding with nervousness before he stepped onto the stage.

在登上舞台之前，他紧张得心脏怦怦直跳。

（二）动作描写

公式1: 三连动作链：Sb+did A, did B and did C

The coach stepped forward, patted him on the shoulder, and reminded him softly.

教练走上前去，拍了拍他的肩膀，轻声提醒他。

公式2: 主语+did…,非谓语动词… (非谓语动词…,主语+did… )

①Looking around cautiously, my seven­year­old son slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.

小心地环顾四周后，我七岁的儿子从床上爬起来，蹑手蹑脚地走到窗前。

②Seeing his figure, she rushed to him with excitement and fell into his arms.看到他的身影，她兴奋地冲到他跟前，倒在他的怀里。

③Mrs Cook stood there and didn’t dare to move an inch, shivering/trembling/

shaking with fear.库克夫人站在那里，一动不动，害怕得颤抖/发抖。

公式3: 主语+did…, with+名词+非谓语动词/形容词/副词/介词短语

The boy dressed in dirty clothes looked up at me, with tears welling up in his eyes.那个穿着脏衣服的男孩抬头看着我，眼里涌出泪水。

【高分句】

1.She woke up, slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the door.

她醒了, 溜下床, 踮着脚走到门口。

2.John pressed his finger against his lips, pointed to the cat, and shook his head gently.约翰把手指放在嘴唇上, 指着猫咪, 轻轻摇了摇头。

3.Using its head, it touched our hands, seemingly saying that we were to be thanked.它用头碰了碰我们的手，好像在说, 它要感谢我们。

4.He leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms folded across his chest, glaring

at me.

他靠在厨房的操作台上, 双臂交叉在胸前, 怒视着我。

（三）语言描写

公式1: “…,” sb said in a… voice/tone某人以…的声音/语气说道：“……”

“All that we have suffered will eventually make us better.Don’t give up until the blessing happens,” he said in a firm voice.

“我们所遭受的一切最终都会让我们变得更好。在好事发生之前不要放弃，”他用坚定的声音说。

公式2: “...,” sb said in/with+心情类名词某人以…的的心情说道：“…”

“I hate you!” she screamed in anger.“我恨你！”她愤怒地尖叫起来。

公式3: “…,” sb said +adv+doing sth (添加非谓语动词表示后续动作)

“I don’t believe you anymore.” he yelled angrily, slamming the door.

“我不再相信你了” 他生气地喊道，砰的一声关上门。

【高分句】

1.“I don’t want to go with you.” said Emily in a tone of impatience.

“我不想和你一起去” 艾米丽用不耐烦的语气说。

2.“Nice to meet you,” he said with enthusiasm.

“很高兴见到你” 他热情地说。

3.“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.”  Mike said excitedly, hugging them tightly.

“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你们了”迈克激动地说, 紧紧抱住他们。

4.The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice，“It’s yours now.” 农夫抱起狗，跪下来，轻声说：“它现在是你的了”

读后续写增分技法六

二、巧妙结尾，升华主题

第一类，留白式结尾

公式：...floated in the air/filled+地点/...was bathed in.........飘在空中/充满/沉浸在.....

①The golden sunlight streaming in，laughter lingered around the yard and happiness floated in the air.

金色的阳光直射进来，笑声在院子里徘徊，幸福在空中飘浮着。

②Bathed in the warm sunshine，we made our way home happily.

沐浴在温暖的阳光下，我们愉快地回家了。

第二类，人生感悟式结尾

公式1：From then on, ...从那时起，......

From then on，I was determined to try my best to help the family.Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.

从那时起，我就决心尽力帮助这个家庭。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。

公式2：Only then did sb realize that ...直到那时某人才意识到......

Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.

直到那时，我才意识到，是善良和爱让我们的世界如此温暖和美丽。

公式3：Many years have passed，but I will never forget...许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记……

Many years have passed，but I will never forgetthe special gift.

许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记那份特别的礼物。