模板04 邀请信(答题模板与解题技巧)(全国通用)2027年高考英语二轮复习讲练测
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模板04 邀请信
01 题型解读
02 答题模板构建
03 满分词汇模板
04 满分句型模板
05 满分作文模板
06 知识迁移强化
【读者注意】
适用对象:高三学生(自主复习)/高中英语教师(备课讲义)
核心内容:500 个单词 · 300 个短语 · 60 个句型
50 条避错清单 · 15 篇范文 · 2 篇模板示例
使用建议:第一部分读规则,第二部分搭骨架
第三、四部分积词句,第五部分排雷,第六至九部分成篇
在新高考英语卷中,应用文写作稳定占 15 分,是主观题里投入产出比最高的一道。命题形式高度固定:设定真实情境,给出明确身份,列出三条要点,要求写一封 80 词左右的信或邮件。邀请信是其中出场频率最高的子类——学校办活动,需要你以学生会、班级或本人名义,向外教、友好学校学生、家长、专家或朋友发出邀请。它看似简单,实则同时考三件事:要点全不全、语气准不准、句子像不像英语。
命题特点
特点一:情境真实,身份与对象双重限定。题目从不凭空要你写信,而是先给场景——你校将办文化节、你是学生会主席李华、请给外教写信。身份决定你能代表谁,对象决定你用什么语气。这两条限定一旦写错,语言再漂亮也算跑题。
特点二:要点提纲化,信息密度高。题目给的三条中文要点是硬任务,每条都必须在文中找到落点。80 词里要装三条要点、一次邀请、一个结尾,几乎没有铺陈空间,所以比的不是写得多,而是一句一个信息。
特点三:交际功能优先,语气必须得体。邀请信的本质是办事:说明来意、交代信息、给出理由、促成回复,四步缺一不成。评分因此很看重语域统一:对外教用 I would appreciate it if...,对朋友用 Hope to see you there,两者混用就显得不伦不类。
特点四:结构高度稳定,三段式是默认框架。阅卷节奏极快,骨架必须三秒可见:第一段交代身份、目的、活动与时间地点;第二段展开内容、安排与意义;第三段表达期待、回复方式与联系方式。
特点五:准确是底线,亮点是加分项。评分按四档,核心看要点是否齐全、语言是否准确得体、篇章是否连贯。语法错误和要点遗漏会直接压到低档;只有在准确的前提下,一两个得体的复杂句才是往高档走的台阶。
特点六:卷面与词数直接影响档位。80 词左右的安全区间是 70 至 100 词。低于 70 说明要点没展开,高于 110 容易啰嗦出错。书写、分段、书信格式这些隐性分,往往才是真正的差距。
从近年走向看,还有三个变化:情境从校内通知式转向真实交流式,更多要求向校外人士介绍中华文化、邀请对方参与志愿服务;要点从三个明点变为两个明点加一个隐含任务,比如“说明活动意义”常藏在题干里;词数收紧,逼着考生学会压缩取舍。
由此得到的备考启示只有一句:背模板不如背模块。模板是一整篇,题目一变就套不上;模块是功能件——怎么开场、怎么交代活动、怎么给理由、怎么收尾。把功能件练到能自由拼装,才是应对任何邀请信的稳妥办法。
这一部分把一封邀请信拆成“骨架”和“零件”。先看整体结构,再逐段看每一段该做什么、写几句、用哪些句式,最后收拢成一份可以直接套用的骨架。
【三段式结构总览】
一封合格的邀请信,三段各司其职,不能互相顶替。下表是三层结构的任务分配,写作时按“功能”而不是按“字数”去填。
表1 邀请信三段式功能分配
段落
核心任务
必须写到的信息
建议词数
常见失误
第一段
亮明身份、说明来意、发出邀请
身份、写信目的、活动名称、时间、地点
25–30
只说“想邀请你”,活动信息一概没有
第二段
给对方一个“值得来”的理由
活动内容、流程安排、亮点或意义(2–3 个要点)
35–40
要点堆砌、无衔接、只写“我们有什么”
第三段
促成回复,把下一步交代清楚
期待、回复方式与截止时间、联系方式
15–20
忘留联系方式;重复第一段的邀请句
三段之外的“首尾件”还有两处:称呼(Dear Mr. Smith, / Dear friends,)与署名(Yours sincerely, / Li Hua),它们不计入正文词数感,但格式错一眼就能看见。
【第一段怎么写:三句话把“事”说清】
第一段只有一个任务——让对方在第一眼就知道“谁请谁、请做什么、什么时候、在哪里”。写得好,读者三秒入戏;写得糟,后面全篇都在补救。
写法一,直接式,最稳,适合绝大多数题目。先自报身份,再说写信目的,最后把活动、时间、地点一次交代完。
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I am writing to invite you to attend our English Speech Contest, which will be held in the school auditorium at 3 p.m. on Friday, June 12.
写法二,背景式,适合活动需要一点铺垫的题目(文化节、校庆、友好学校交流)。先给一句背景,再用 on behalf of 引出邀请,显得自然。
Our school is going to hold a Traditional Culture Festival next week. On behalf of the Students' Union, I am writing to invite you to join us.
写法三,敬语式,适合邀请外教、专家、校长等长辈或地位较高者。把“邀请”放在“荣幸”的框架里,语气立刻上一个档次。
It would be a great honour for us if you could come and give us a lecture on Chinese calligraphy. The lecture is scheduled for 4 p.m. next Wednesday in Room 305.
四个必写成分:身份、目的、活动名称、时间地点。三个可省成分:具体门牌号(写 in the school hall 即可)、活动全称的长定语(可后置成从句)、对方的头衔(称呼里已交代)。判断标准很简单——删掉之后读者还能不能来。能来,就删;不能来,就留。
句式弹药(第一段通用):I am writing to invite you to...;On behalf of..., I would like to invite you to...;It is my great pleasure to invite you to...;We are greatly honoured to invite you to...;Nothing would please us more than your presence at...。五句轮换使用,不必每次都用第一句。
提示|两个最常见的硬伤:一是 invite you to attend 中漏掉 to,写成 invite you attend;二是时间介词混用,at 用于钟点、on 用于具体某天或某天的上下午、in 用于月份年份季节,且 next/last 前一律不加介词。
【第二段怎么写:把“值不值得来”讲出来】
第二段是全文的重心,也是拉开档次的地方。它要回答一个问题:我为什么要来?答题思路是三层递进——What(活动做什么)、How(怎么安排)、Why(对我有什么意义或收获)。三层不必平均用力,但至少要有两层,否则第二段就成了活动清单。
要点排序有两条路:时间顺序(先开幕、再比赛、最后颁奖)和重要性顺序(先讲最吸引人的亮点,再补其他安排)。三条要点建议一条一句,句与句之间用 First / Then / Besides / What's more / In addition 中的一至两个衔接,不要每句都挂一个连接词。
高频动词:take part in、participate in、attend、join us for、experience、appreciate、learn about、try one's hand at、compete in、watch、taste、make。注意 participate 后必须接 in,attend 后直接接活动名词,不要写成 attend in。
六组可直接用的句型:The activity will start with..., followed by...;You will have the chance to...;Not only will you..., but you will also...;It is a good opportunity for you to...;Those who are interested can...;We have prepared... for you。其中 Not only 置于句首时的部分倒装,是最容易被阅卷人记住的一处亮点,一篇用一次即可。
The festival will start with a short opening speech, followed by paper-cutting and calligraphy workshops. You will have the chance to try your hand at making lanterns and taste traditional food such as mooncakes. Besides, a folk music concert will be given in the evening, which will help you understand Chinese culture better.
这段的写法值得拆开看:第一句交代流程(start with... followed by),第二句给对方“可参与”的动作(try your hand at, taste),第三句补亮点并用 which 从句点出意义(help you understand)。三句话完成了 What、How、Why,且没有一句是空话。
提示|第二段三个典型问题:写成活动通知(通篇“我们有”,没有“你能得到”);要点并列但无连接,读起来像清单;时态前后跳(已定的安排可用一般现在时表将来,未定的用 will,全文要统一口径)。
【第三段怎么写:把“下一步”给出来】
第三段的职能常被误解为“再说一次希望你来”。其实它要解决的是“然后呢”——对方看完信,知道该怎么回复、什么时候之前回复、有事找谁。四件事:表达期待、说明回复方式、留联系方式、致谢,四选三即可,全写会显得冗长。
礼貌层级要和对象匹配。对长辈、专家、外教,用 I would appreciate it if you could reply by Friday.;对同学、朋友,用 Hope to see you there! 就够了。若把后者用在给教授的邮件里,会显得轻慢;把前者用在给同桌的微信式邀请里,又显得生硬。
I would appreciate it if you could reply by June 10 so that we can reserve a seat for you. If you need any further information, please feel free to contact me at 12345678 or lihua@school.com. Looking forward to your reply.
这一段的三个禁忌:不要重复第一段的邀请句(Repeat 会被判语言贫乏);不要用 I hope you must come 这类带强迫意味的表达;不要把联系方式写成“你可以来找我”这种没有落点的句子。
还有一个容易被忽略的细节:如果题目要求“说明是否能来”,第三段就必须出现明确的确认请求,例如 Please let me know at your earliest convenience whether you can come.;如果题目只要求“表达期待”,加一句 Looking forward to your reply 即可,不必自行增加任务。
【落笔前必须处理的八件事】
以下八条是阅卷中最常见的失分点,写完后逐条对照一遍,通常能挽回 3 至 5 分。
表2 邀请信落笔八项自查
序号
检查项
具体要求
1
称呼与署名
称呼顶格、后加逗号(Dear Mr. Smith,);结束语与署名分两行、署名右下(Yours sincerely, / Li Hua);对熟人可用 Yours, / Best wishes,
2
身份一致
严格照题目给的身份写,学生会主席、班长、普通学生不可互换,也不要自创“校团委书记”等题目未给的头衔
3
时态统一
活动尚未发生用将来时;已确定日程可用一般现在时表将来(The contest starts at 9 a.m.);背景介绍用一般现在时或现在完成时
4
语域一致
对外教、专家用 would/could/may 等委婉表达;对朋友用自然口语;全文不混用敬语与随意语
5
要点覆盖
题目三条要点逐条落实,一条至少一句;隐含任务(如“说明意义”)不能漏,也不能用半句带过
6
词数控制
70–100 词为安全区;不足 70 词说明要点未展开,超过 110 词容易啰嗦出错
7
衔接适度
每段用一至两个衔接词即可;Firstly/Secondly/Last but not least 连用三句,反而显得模板化
8
卷面格式
段首统一缩进;书信不写标题;不画边框、不用彩色笔;字母大小写、标点规范
【可直接套用的通用骨架】
把上面三段的功能串起来,就是一份可复用的骨架。方括号内为待替换信息,其余为稳定表达。注意:骨架只保证“不缺件”,分数高低仍取决于替换进去的内容是否具体。
Dear [称呼],
I am [身份], and I am writing to invite you to [活动名称], which will be held [时间] in [地点].
The activity will begin with [环节一], followed by [环节二]. During the event, you will have the chance to [可参与的事]. Besides, [亮点或意义]. It is a good opportunity for you to [对方收益].
I would appreciate it if you could [回复要求] by [截止时间]. If you need any further information, please contact me at [联系方式]. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
[署名]
这份骨架共约 85 词,正好落在安全区。若题目要点只有两条,可在第二段补一句活动意义;若要点有三条且都需展开,则压缩第一段的定语从句、简化第三段的联系方式,把腾出的词数留给第二段。
【不同对象的语气调节】
同一件事,写给三个人要有三种写法。这不是“文采”问题,而是“得体”问题,也是评分表中“应用语言得体”一项的直接依据。
表3 三类邀请对象的语气对照
邀请对象
语气基调
典型表达
外教、专家、校长
正式、敬重,多用委婉与被动
It would be a great honour if you could...;We would be grateful if you could...;I would appreciate it if you could reply by...
友好学校学生、交换生
热情、平等,突出交流价值
We would love to have you with us.;You will have the chance to...;We are sure you will enjoy...
同学、朋友
轻松、口语,可用短句与感叹
Hope you can make it!;Come and join us!;Looking forward to seeing you there!
【满分词汇模板】
这一部分提供两套可直接调用的词汇清单:500 个单词与 300 个短语,按“邀请—活动—时间地点—校园人物—文化—动词—形容词—衔接”的功能顺序排列。使用方法有四条:一是按组记忆,每天 30 至 40 个,一周一轮;二是遮住中文回译,能一次说对才算掌握;三是每个词至少配一个“邀请信语境”的短句,避免只认识不会用;四是写作前先按主题挑 8 至 10 个词,用完再换,不要通篇堆砌生词。
一、核心单词模板(500 个)
下表按主题分组,每组末尾标注条数。表中“单词”与“释义”一一对应,同一词的不同释义只取邀请信写作中最常用的一项,以免记混。
表4 邀请信高频单词 500 例(按主题分组)
序号
单词
释义
一、邀请与回应(60 个)
1
invitation
邀请
2
invite
邀请
3
invitee
受邀者
4
inviter
邀请方
5
host
主办
6
hostess
女主人
7
guest
客人
8
attend
出席
9
attendance
出席
10
attendee
出席者
11
participant
参加者
12
participate
参加
13
presence
出席
14
honour
荣幸
15
honoured
感到荣幸的
16
pleasure
荣幸
17
privilege
荣幸
18
delight
欣喜
19
cordial
热诚的
20
sincere
真诚的
21
heartfelt
由衷的
22
gracious
亲切的
23
hospitable
好客的
24
hospitality
好客
25
courtesy
礼貌
26
etiquette
礼节
27
welcome
欢迎
28
receive
接待
29
accept
接受
30
acceptance
接受
31
decline
婉拒
32
refuse
拒绝
33
regret
遗憾
34
apology
歉意
35
apologize
道歉
36
confirm
确认
37
confirmation
确认
38
reply
回复
39
respond
答复
40
response
回复
41
acknowledge
告知收到
42
arrange
安排
43
arrangement
安排
44
reserve
预留
45
register
登记
46
registration
报名
47
enroll
注册
48
contact
联系
49
inform
通知
50
notify
通知
51
remind
提醒
52
reminder
提醒
53
assure
使确信
54
appreciate
感激
55
grateful
感激的
56
thankful
感谢的
57
gratitude
感激之情
58
sincerity
真诚
59
enthusiasm
热情
60
enthusiastic
热情的
二、活动与赛事(59 个)
61
activity
活动
62
event
活动
63
programme
活动安排
64
contest
比赛
65
competition
竞赛
66
competitor
参赛者
67
contestant
选手
68
champion
冠军
69
championship
锦标赛
70
judge
评委
71
jury
评审团
72
award
奖项
73
prize
奖品
74
medal
奖牌
75
certificate
证书
76
trophy
奖杯
77
performance
表演
78
perform
表演
79
rehearsal
排练
80
rehearse
排练
81
stage
舞台
82
audience
观众
83
spectator
观众
84
exhibition
展览
85
exhibit
展品
86
display
展示
87
fair
展销会
88
festival
节日
89
carnival
狂欢节
90
parade
游行
91
gala
盛会
92
concert
音乐会
93
drama
戏剧
94
opera
歌剧
95
chorus
合唱团
96
band
乐队
97
orchestra
管弦乐队
98
ballet
芭蕾舞
99
lecture
讲座
100
speech
演讲
101
seminar
研讨会
102
workshop
工作坊
103
forum
论坛
104
conference
会议
105
session
场次
106
symposium
学术研讨会
107
debate
辩论
108
discussion
讨论
109
training
培训
110
course
课程
111
club
社团
112
society
社团
113
association
协会
114
committee
委员会
115
organizer
组织者
116
organize
组织
117
organization
组织
118
sponsor
赞助
119
sponsorship
赞助
三、时间与场地(60 个)
120
deadline
截止日期
121
duration
持续时间
122
period
期间
123
interval
间隔
124
occasion
场合
125
opportunity
机会
126
punctual
准时的
127
punctuality
准时
128
promptly
及时地
129
timely
及时的
130
annual
每年的
131
annually
每年地
132
semester
学期
133
term
学期
134
vacation
假期
135
weekend
周末
136
noon
正午
137
midnight
午夜
138
dawn
黎明
139
sunset
日落
140
quarter
一刻钟
141
beginning
开始
142
ending
结束
143
final
最后的
144
initial
最初的
145
previous
先前的
146
following
接下来的
147
subsequent
随后的
148
current
当前的
149
recent
最近的
150
upcoming
即将到来的
151
forthcoming
即将举行的
152
temporary
临时的
153
permanent
永久的
154
frequent
频繁的
155
occasional
偶尔的
156
simultaneous
同时的
157
consecutive
连续的
158
extend
延长
159
postpone
推迟
160
delay
推迟
161
cancel
取消
162
reschedule
重新安排
163
expire
到期
164
commence
开始
165
conclude
结束
166
venue
场地
167
site
地点
168
campus
校园
169
auditorium
礼堂
170
hall
礼堂
171
gymnasium
体育馆
172
stadium
体育场
173
playground
操场
174
laboratory
实验室
175
library
图书馆
176
canteen
食堂
177
dormitory
宿舍
178
classroom
教室
179
gallery
画廊
四、校园与人物(66 个)
180
school
学校
181
college
学院
182
university
大学
183
institute
学院
184
academy
学院
185
department
系
186
faculty
全体教师
187
staff
教职员
188
principal
校长
189
headmaster
中小学校长
190
president
校长
191
teacher
教师
192
professor
教授
193
lecturer
讲师
194
tutor
导师
195
instructor
指导教师
196
coach
教练
197
student
学生
198
freshman
新生
199
sophomore
二年级学生
200
junior
三年级学生
201
senior
毕业班学生
202
graduate
毕业生
203
undergraduate
本科生
204
postgraduate
研究生
205
classmate
同学
206
schoolmate
校友
207
roommate
室友
208
monitor
班长
209
captain
队长
210
leader
领导者
211
member
成员
212
membership
会员资格
213
chairman
主席
214
secretary
秘书
215
representative
代表
216
delegate
代表
217
expert
专家
218
scholar
学者
219
researcher
研究人员
220
scientist
科学家
221
artist
艺术家
222
musician
音乐家
223
writer
作家
224
poet
诗人
225
painter
画家
226
designer
设计师
227
engineer
工程师
228
journalist
记者
229
reporter
记者
230
editor
编辑
231
photographer
摄影师
232
translator
译者
233
interpreter
口译员
234
alumnus
男校友
235
council
理事会
236
league
联盟
237
parent
家长
238
guardian
监护人
239
citizen
公民
240
resident
居民
241
visitor
来访者
242
newcomer
新来者
243
stranger
陌生人
244
partner
伙伴
245
gathering
聚会
五、文化与传承(60 个)
246
culture
文化
247
cultural
文化的
248
tradition
传统
249
traditional
传统的
250
heritage
遗产
251
legacy
遗产
252
history
历史
253
historic
有历史意义的
254
historical
历史的
255
ancient
古代的
256
modern
现代的
257
contemporary
当代的
258
custom
习俗
259
convention
惯例
260
ritual
仪式
261
festive
节日的
262
lantern
灯笼
263
firework
烟花
264
firecracker
鞭炮
265
dumpling
饺子
266
mooncake
月饼
267
cuisine
菜肴
268
dish
菜肴
269
flavour
风味
270
recipe
食谱
271
snack
小吃
272
beverage
饮料
273
teapot
茶壶
274
chopsticks
筷子
275
calligraphy
书法
276
painting
绘画
277
brush
毛笔
278
paper-cutting
剪纸
279
embroidery
刺绣
280
porcelain
瓷器
281
pottery
陶器
282
silk
丝绸
283
costume
服装
284
robe
长袍
285
mask
面具
286
puppet
木偶
287
folk
民间的
288
folklore
民间传说
289
legend
传说
290
myth
神话
291
tale
故事
292
poem
诗
293
poetry
诗歌
294
proverb
谚语
295
idiom
习语
296
relic
文物
297
antique
古董
298
monument
纪念碑
299
temple
寺庙
300
garden
园林
301
architecture
建筑
302
tower
塔
303
palace
宫殿
304
souvenir
纪念品
305
gift
礼物
六、动词与表达(85 个)
306
hold
举办
307
conduct
进行
308
launch
启动
309
initiate
发起
310
establish
建立
311
found
创立
312
create
创造
313
design
设计
314
prepare
准备
315
preparation
准备
316
coordinate
协调
317
cooperate
合作
318
collaborate
合作
319
cooperation
合作
320
communicate
交流
321
communication
交流
322
exchange
交流
323
interact
互动
324
interaction
互动
325
share
分享
326
discuss
讨论
327
negotiate
协商
328
consult
咨询
329
inquire
询问
330
request
请求
331
require
要求
332
demand
要求
333
suggest
建议
334
recommend
推荐
335
advise
建议
336
propose
提议
337
proposal
提议
338
offer
提供
339
provide
提供
340
supply
供应
341
donate
捐赠
342
contribute
贡献
343
support
支持
344
assist
协助
345
help
帮助
346
aid
援助
347
guide
引导
348
lead
带领
349
direct
指导
350
instruct
指导
351
teach
教
352
train
训练
353
mentor
指导
354
supervise
监督
355
manage
管理
356
administer
管理
357
evaluate
评价
358
assess
评估
359
score
得分
360
win
赢得
361
defeat
击败
362
compete
竞争
363
challenge
挑战
364
attempt
尝试
365
achieve
取得
366
accomplish
完成
367
fulfil
实现
368
complete
完成
369
succeed
成功
370
success
成功
371
failure
失败
372
fail
失败
373
improve
提高
374
enhance
增强
375
develop
发展
376
promote
促进
377
spread
传播
378
expand
扩大
379
increase
增加
380
reduce
减少
381
raise
提高
382
collect
收集
383
gather
聚集
384
recruit
招募
385
apply
申请
386
application
申请
387
interview
面试
388
select
挑选
389
choose
选择
390
decide
决定
七、形容词与副词(80 个)
391
important
重要的
392
significant
重要的
393
essential
必要的
394
necessary
必要的
395
vital
至关重要的
396
crucial
关键的
397
valuable
有价值的
398
useful
有用的
399
helpful
有帮助的
400
beneficial
有益的
401
meaningful
有意义的
402
worthwhile
值得的
403
rewarding
有回报的
404
fruitful
富有成果的
405
successful
成功的
406
effective
有效的
407
efficient
高效的
408
practical
实用的
409
realistic
现实的
410
creative
有创意的
411
original
原创的
412
unique
独特的
413
diverse
多样的
414
colourful
丰富多彩的
415
lively
生动的
416
vivid
生动的
417
impressive
令人印象深刻的
418
memorable
难忘的
419
unforgettable
难忘的
420
remarkable
非凡的
421
outstanding
杰出的
422
excellent
优秀的
423
superb
极好的
424
wonderful
精彩的
425
splendid
壮丽的
426
magnificent
壮观的
427
gorgeous
华丽的
428
attractive
有吸引力的
429
charming
迷人的
430
appealing
吸引人的
431
fascinating
迷人的
432
amazing
令人惊叹的
433
fantastic
极好的
434
brilliant
出色的
435
perfect
完美的
436
ideal
理想的
437
suitable
合适的
438
appropriate
恰当的
439
proper
适当的
440
reasonable
合理的
441
convenient
方便的
442
accessible
可进入的
443
available
可获得的
444
flexible
灵活的
445
reliable
可靠的
446
responsible
负责的
447
considerate
体贴的
448
thoughtful
周到的
449
generous
慷慨的
450
patient
耐心的
451
diligent
勤奋的
452
devoted
忠诚的
453
dedicated
敬业的
454
confident
自信的
455
optimistic
乐观的
456
positive
积极的
457
negative
消极的
458
active
积极的
459
energetic
精力充沛的
460
dynamic
有活力的
461
modest
谦虚的
462
humble
谦逊的
463
polite
有礼貌的
464
respectful
尊重的
465
honest
诚实的
466
frank
坦率的
467
independent
独立的
468
cooperative
合作的
469
competitive
有竞争力的
470
challenging
有挑战性的
八、逻辑与衔接(30 个)
471
however
然而
472
therefore
因此
473
moreover
而且
474
furthermore
此外
475
besides
此外
476
otherwise
否则
477
meanwhile
与此同时
478
eventually
最终
479
firstly
首先
480
secondly
其次
481
finally
最后
482
similarly
同样地
483
unlike
与…不同
484
despite
尽管
485
although
虽然
486
unless
除非
487
whether
是否
488
whereas
然而
489
instead
代替
490
anyway
无论如何
491
thus
因此
492
hence
因此
493
accordingly
相应地
494
consequently
结果
495
particularly
尤其
496
especially
特别
497
generally
一般地
498
roughly
大致
499
approximately
大约
500
definitely
肯定地
二、核心短语模板(300 个)
短语是“半成品句子”,比单词更接近考场产出。建议按“邀请—活动—参与—时间地点—目的意义—期待回应—礼貌服务”的顺序记,每记一个短语,顺手想一个能放进邀请信的句子。
表5 邀请信高频短语 300 例(按功能分组)
序号
短语
释义
一、邀请与回应(56 个)
1
on behalf of
代表
2
in the name of
以…的名义
3
extend an invitation to
向…发出邀请
4
extend a warm welcome to
向…表示热烈欢迎
5
invite sb to do sth
邀请某人做某事
6
send out invitations
发出邀请
7
accept an invitation
接受邀请
8
decline an invitation
婉拒邀请
9
at the invitation of
应…的邀请
10
a guest of honour
贵宾
11
be invited to attend
受邀出席
12
cordially invite
诚挚邀请
13
be honoured to
荣幸地
14
take the liberty of inviting
冒昧邀请
15
in response to your invitation
应你的邀请
16
look forward to your presence
期待您的光临
17
your presence is requested
敬请光临
18
request the pleasure of your company
敬请您光临
19
honour sb with one's presence
赏光出席
20
a warm invitation
热情的邀请
21
a formal invitation
正式邀请
22
a personal invitation
私人邀请
23
invitation letter
邀请信
24
reply to an invitation
回复邀请
25
confirm one's attendance
确认出席
26
accept with pleasure
欣然接受
27
regret to decline
遗憾婉拒
28
be unable to attend
无法出席
29
make one's apologies
致歉
30
owing to prior engagement
因已有约
31
for personal reasons
由于个人原因
32
in advance
提前
33
ahead of time
提前
34
at short notice
临时通知
35
a last-minute invitation
临时邀请
36
follow up
跟进
37
keep sb informed
随时告知某人
38
get in touch with
与…取得联系
39
reach sb at
通过…联系到某人
40
be available
有空
41
be fully booked
已订满
42
reserve a seat
预留座位
43
take sb's place
代替某人
44
fill in the form
填写表格
45
sign up for
报名参加
46
register for
注册参加
47
entrance fee
入场费
48
free of charge
免费
49
admission ticket
入场券
50
invitation card
邀请卡
51
hold a reception
举行招待会
52
attend a reception
出席招待会
53
RSVP by
请于…前回复
54
confirm by
于…前确认
55
no later than
不迟于
56
at the latest
最晚
二、活动组织与流程(44 个)
57
take place
举行
58
be held
举办
59
be scheduled for
定于
60
be scheduled to
定于
61
kick off
开始
62
start with
以…开始
63
end with
以…结束
64
followed by
随后是
65
be divided into
分为
66
consist of
由…组成
67
range from ... to
从…到…不等
68
a variety of
各种各样的
69
a wide range of
广泛的
70
a series of
一系列
71
in celebration of
为庆祝
72
in memory of
为纪念
73
in honour of
为向…致敬
74
on the occasion of
值…之际
75
mark the occasion
纪念这一时刻
76
hold a ceremony
举行仪式
77
opening ceremony
开幕式
78
closing ceremony
闭幕式
79
award ceremony
颁奖仪式
80
graduation ceremony
毕业典礼
81
welcome party
欢迎会
82
farewell party
欢送会
83
get-together
聚会
84
cultural festival
文化节
85
art festival
艺术节
86
science festival
科技节
87
sports meeting
运动会
88
English corner
英语角
89
speech contest
演讲比赛
90
singing contest
歌唱比赛
91
debate competition
辩论赛
92
writing competition
写作比赛
93
photo exhibition
摄影展
94
calligraphy exhibition
书法展
95
book fair
书展
96
trade fair
交易会
97
job fair
招聘会
98
open day
开放日
99
field trip
实地考察
100
volunteer work
志愿工作
三、参与与协作(37 个)
101
community service
社区服务
102
social practice
社会实践
103
exchange programme
交流项目
104
summer camp
夏令营
105
winter camp
冬令营
106
study tour
研学旅行
107
workshop session
工作坊环节
108
group discussion
小组讨论
109
panel discussion
专题讨论
110
question-and-answer session
问答环节
111
hands-on activity
动手实践活动
112
live performance
现场表演
113
dress rehearsal
彩排
114
final round
决赛
115
first prize
一等奖
116
honourable mention
优秀奖
117
participation certificate
参与证书
118
take part in
参加
119
participate in
参与
120
join us for
和我们一起参加
121
compete in
参加…比赛
122
compete against
与…竞争
123
cheer for
为…加油
124
try one's hand at
尝试
125
get involved in
参与其中
126
be engaged in
从事
127
contribute to
有助于
128
make a contribution to
为…做贡献
129
play a part in
在…中起作用
130
play a role in
在…中发挥作用
131
set up
建立
132
carry out
开展
133
work out
制定
134
draw up
拟定
135
map out
规划
136
team up with
与…合作
137
in cooperation with
与…合作
四、时间与地点(59 个)
138
with the support of
在…的支持下
139
under the guidance of
在…的指导下
140
with the help of
在…的帮助下
141
thanks to
多亏
142
in advance of
在…之前
143
on time
准时
144
in time
及时
145
just in time
正好赶上
146
from ... to ...
从…到…
147
between ... and ...
在…之间
148
at the end of
在…结束时
149
at the beginning of
在…开始时
150
in the middle of
在…中间
151
on the morning of
在…的上午
152
in the afternoon
在下午
153
at noon
在正午
154
at midnight
在午夜
155
on weekdays
在工作日
156
at the weekend
在周末
157
during the holiday
在假期期间
158
throughout the year
全年
159
all the year round
一年到头
160
every other day
每隔一天
161
once a week
每周一次
162
twice a month
每月两次
163
in the long run
从长远看
164
in the short term
短期内
165
for the time being
暂时
166
at present
目前
167
up to now
到目前为止
168
so far
迄今为止
169
in the past few years
在过去的几年里
170
in the coming years
在未来几年
171
in the near future
在不久的将来
172
in the school hall
在学校礼堂
173
in the lecture hall
在报告厅
174
on the playground
在操场
175
on the campus
在校园内
176
at the school gate
在校门口
177
on the third floor
在三楼
178
in the centre of
在…中心
179
on the left
在左边
180
on the right
在右边
181
next to
紧邻
182
opposite
在…对面
183
close to
靠近
184
within walking distance
步行可达
185
a ten-minute walk
十分钟的步行路程
186
be located in
位于
187
be situated in
坐落于
188
be easily accessible
交通便利
189
be within easy reach
容易到达
190
around the corner
在拐角处
191
on the way to
在去…的路上
192
pick sb up
接某人
193
drop sb off
送某人到某处
194
show sb around
带某人参观
195
give sb a lift
捎某人一程
196
by subway
乘地铁
五、目的与意义(41 个)
197
on foot
步行
198
rush hour
高峰时段
199
parking lot
停车场
200
seat number
座位号
201
front row
前排
202
back row
后排
203
in order to
为了
204
so as to
为了
205
with the aim of
目的是
206
for the purpose of
为了…的目的
207
with the intention of
意在
208
be intended to
旨在
209
be designed to
旨在
210
be meant to
旨在
211
aim at
针对
212
be aimed at
旨在
213
serve as
充当
214
act as
担任
215
provide sb with sth
向某人提供某物
216
offer sth to sb
向某人提供某物
217
make it possible for sb to
使某人有可能
218
enable sb to do
使某人能够
219
allow sb to do
允许某人做
220
give sb access to
使某人有机会接触
221
expose sb to
使某人接触
222
broaden one's horizons
开阔眼界
223
enrich one's experience
丰富经历
224
gain an insight into
深入了解
225
have a better understanding of
更好地理解
226
develop a sense of
培养…意识
227
raise awareness of
提高对…的认识
228
promote the exchange of
促进…的交流
229
strengthen the ties between
加强…之间的联系
230
build a bridge between
在…之间搭建桥梁
231
bring people together
把人们聚在一起
232
bring out the best in sb
激发某人最好的一面
233
make a difference
产生影响
234
leave a deep impression on
给…留下深刻印象
235
be of great benefit to
对…大有裨益
236
be beneficial to
对…有益
237
be essential to
对…至关重要
六、期待与回应(38 个)
238
play an important part in
在…中起重要作用
239
make full use of
充分利用
240
take advantage of
利用
241
make the most of
充分利用
242
get the most out of
从…中获得最大收益
243
look forward to
期待
244
look forward to doing
期待做某事
245
expect to
期望
246
hope to
希望
247
be eager to
渴望
248
can't wait to
迫不及待
249
long for
渴望
250
yearn for
渴望
251
at your earliest convenience
尽早
252
as soon as possible
尽快
253
without delay
立即
254
by all means
务必
255
if possible
如有可能
256
if necessary
如有必要
257
let sb know
告知某人
258
keep sb posted
随时告知某人
259
give sb a call
给某人打电话
260
send sb an email
给某人发邮件
261
reply by
于…前回复
262
respond to
回复
263
get back to sb
回复某人
264
hear from sb
收到某人的来信
265
await your reply
等候您的回复
266
your early reply
您的早日回复
267
an immediate reply
立即回复
268
confirmation of attendance
出席确认
269
a definite answer
明确答复
270
make it
赶上
271
be unable to make it
无法前来
272
count on sb
指望某人
273
depend on
依靠
274
rely on
依赖
275
be welcome to
欢迎…
七、服务与礼貌(25 个)
276
feel free to
随意…
277
don't hesitate to
不要犹豫
278
be at your service
随时为您服务
279
for further information
如需更多信息
280
should you have any questions
如有任何问题
281
thank sb for sth
因某事感谢某人
282
be grateful for
对…心怀感激
283
express one's gratitude
表达感激之情
284
in appreciation of
为感谢…
285
with sincere thanks
致以诚挚谢意
286
Thank you for your time
感谢您抽出时间
287
Thank you in advance
提前致谢
288
It is very kind of you
您真是太好了
289
It is thoughtful of you
您想得真周到
290
We would appreciate it if
如…我们将不胜感激
291
You are more than welcome
非常欢迎您
292
Please accept our apologies
请接受我们的歉意
293
I am sorry to inform you
很抱歉通知您
294
Much to our regret
令我们十分遗憾的是
295
with best wishes
顺致最美好的祝愿
296
best regards
此致敬意
297
all the best
一切顺利
298
take care
保重
299
keep in touch
保持联系
300
look forward to hearing from you
期待收到您的回信
【词句使用的三条原则】
原则一:优先用“准确的小词”,不用“模糊的大词”。把 very good 换成 rewarding、把 many things 换成 a variety of activities,分数提升远大于硬塞一个不认识的难词。
原则二:一篇作文的生词不超过三个。生词多了,搭配出错的风险成倍上升;已经准确的小词,比半懂不懂的大词更能得分。
原则三:词要为要点服务。第二段每个要点配一个“动词+名词”的准确搭配,例如 hold a workshop、reserve a seat、sign up at the office,比形容词堆砌有效得多。
【满分句型模板】
句型分三类,对应文章的三段:开篇要“亮”,一句就让人知道来意;中间要“实”,把活动和理由说清;结尾要“收”,把下一步交代明白。每类 20 句,按由简到繁排列,考前各挑 3 至 5 句练到能默写。
开篇亮“凤头”
表6 开篇句型 20 例
序号
句型(英文)
中文释义
使用提示
1
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of our school.
我是本校学生会主席李华。
自我介绍+身份,万能开篇第一句
2
I am writing to invite you to attend our English Speech Contest.
我写信是想邀请您参加我们的英语演讲比赛。
最直接的来意句,适合绝大多数题目
3
On behalf of our school, I would like to invite you to the Traditional Culture Festival.
我谨代表学校邀请您参加传统文化节。
代表集体发出邀请,语气正式
4
It is my great pleasure to invite you to our graduation ceremony.
非常荣幸邀请您参加我们的毕业典礼。
对长辈、嘉宾使用,礼貌度高
5
We are greatly honoured to have you as our guest at the opening ceremony.
能请您作为嘉宾出席开幕式,我们深感荣幸。
强调“嘉宾”身份,适合重要场合
6
I am writing to ask whether you would like to join us for a campus concert.
我写信是想问您是否愿意参加校园音乐会。
用 ask whether 委婉提出,适合朋友或平辈
7
Nothing would please us more than your presence at the exhibition.
没有什么比您出席展览更令我们高兴的了。
高级表达,适合开头第二句
8
Our school will hold a Science Festival next Friday, and we sincerely invite you to be our guest.
我校下周五将举办科技节,诚挚邀请您做我们的嘉宾。
先背景后邀请,衔接自然
9
Knowing that you are an expert in Chinese calligraphy, I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture.
得知您是书法专家,我写信邀请您给我们做讲座。
用 Knowing that 起句,交代邀请理由
10
I am delighted to inform you that our school is going to hold an art week.
很高兴通知您,我校将举办艺术周。
inform 后接 that 从句,正式得体
11
May I take the liberty of inviting you to our New Year's party?
恕我冒昧,能否邀请您参加我们的新年晚会?
极正式,适合邀请地位较高者
12
It would be an honour if you could attend our sports meeting.
如您能出席我们的运动会,我们将不胜荣幸。
虚拟语气,礼貌度极高
13
I am writing on behalf of Class 3 to invite you to our reading sharing session.
我代表三班写信邀请您参加读书分享会。
班级名义,适合班内活动
14
We would be much obliged if you could join us at the farewell party.
如您能参加欢送会,我们将十分感激。
be obliged 表感激,书面感强
15
Allow me to invite you, in the name of all the students, to our English corner.
允许我以全体学生的名义邀请您参加英语角。
in the name of 提升正式度
16
I am more than glad to invite you to the photo exhibition to be held in our school.
我非常高兴邀请您参加将在我校举办的摄影展。
to be held 作后置定语,简洁
17
Since you are fond of Chinese culture, I am sure this festival will interest you.
既然您喜爱中国文化,相信这个节日会让您感兴趣。
以对方兴趣切入,适合第二句
18
Here is a piece of good news for you: a cultural exchange meeting will be held in our school.
有个好消息告诉您:我校将举办文化交流会。
轻松开头,适合朋友之间
19
I am writing to extend a warm invitation to you on behalf of the Students' Union.
我代表学生会向您发出热情邀请。
extend an invitation 高级搭配
20
Please allow me to introduce our annual Campus Culture Week and invite you to its opening.
请允许我介绍我校一年一度的校园文化周,并邀请您参加开幕式。
先介绍后邀请,信息量大
中间有“猪肚”
表7 主体句型 20 例
序号
句型(英文)
中文释义
使用提示
1
The activity is scheduled to take place in the school auditorium from 2 to 5 p.m. next Saturday.
活动定于下周六下午两点到五点在报告厅举行。
交代时间地点,be scheduled to 正式
2
It will start with a short opening speech by our principal, followed by students' performances.
活动以校长简短致辞开始,随后是学生表演。
start with...followed by 写流程
3
During the festival, you will have the chance to try paper-cutting and taste traditional food.
节日期间您将有机会体验剪纸、品尝传统美食。
have the chance to 突出参与感
4
Not only will you enjoy excellent performances, but you will also learn about Chinese customs.
您不仅能欣赏精彩表演,还能了解中国习俗。
Not only 倒装,全文用一次即可
5
We have prepared a variety of activities, ranging from calligraphy to folk music.
我们准备了丰富的活动,从书法到民乐。
ranging from...to 列举,句式紧凑
6
What makes this contest special is that every participant will receive professional advice.
这次比赛的特别之处在于每位参赛者都能得到专业指导。
What 主语从句,突出亮点
7
As a well-known expert in this field, you are the very person we would like to hear from.
作为该领域知名专家,您正是我们想聆听的人。
给对方“非你不可”的理由
8
It is a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture in person.
这是您亲身感受中国文化的好机会。
形式主语,说明意义
9
Those who are interested are welcome to sign up at the Students' Union office before Friday.
有兴趣者欢迎在周五前到学生会办公室报名。
Those who 定语从句,交代报名方式
10
In addition to the exhibition, a workshop will be given by an experienced artist.
除展览外,还有一位经验丰富的艺术家开设工作坊。
In addition to 补充信息
11
The meeting will last about two hours, with a fifteen-minute break in between.
会议约持续两小时,中间休息十五分钟。
with 复合结构,信息密集
12
We would be grateful if you could share your experience with us at the meeting.
如您能在会上与我们分享经验,我们将不胜感激。
提出具体请求,语气委婉
13
You will be picked up at the school gate at 8 a.m. and shown around the campus.
早上八点会在校门口接您,并带您参观校园。
被动语态交代接待安排
14
Apart from the performance, there will be a prize-giving ceremony at the end.
除表演外,结尾还有颁奖仪式。
Apart from 补充流程
15
The theme of this year's festival is "Green Campus", which calls for everyone's participation.
今年节日主题是“绿色校园”,需要每个人参与。
which 从句点题,衔接自然
16
What impresses visitors most is the combination of tradition and modern technology.
最打动参观者的是传统与现代科技的融合。
What 从句写亮点,适合文化类
17
To make the event more enjoyable, we have invited several guest performers.
为让活动更精彩,我们邀请了几位嘉宾表演者。
不定式表目的,置于句首
18
Everyone present will receive a small gift as a token of our thanks.
到场每位都将收到一份小礼物,以表谢意。
as a token of 高级搭配
19
Since the seats are limited, an early reply would be highly appreciated.
因座位有限,尽早回复将不胜感激。
说明限制,推动对方回复
20
Should you need any further information, I will be glad to provide it.
若您需要更多信息,我很乐意提供。
Should 引导的倒装条件句,书面感强
结尾有“豹尾”
表8 结尾句型 20 例
序号
句型(英文)
中文释义
使用提示
1
I would appreciate it if you could reply by June 10.
如您能在六月十日前回复,我将不胜感激。
最标准的礼貌收尾句
2
Looking forward to your early reply.
期待您的早日回复。
简洁常用,适合正式与半正式
3
We are looking forward to seeing you at the opening ceremony.
期待在开幕式上见到您。
look forward to doing,注意动名词
4
Please let me know at your earliest convenience whether you can come.
请尽早告知您能否前来。
明确的确认请求
5
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 12345678.
如有问题,请随时致电 12345678 联系我。
留联系方式,feel free to 显礼貌
6
I do hope you can make it, and I am sure we will have a wonderful time together.
真心希望您能来,相信我们会共度美好时光。
do 表强调,语气真诚
7
Thank you for your time and consideration.
感谢您抽出时间并予以考虑。
正式场合收尾,稳重
8
Your presence will surely make the event more memorable.
您的到来定会让活动更加难忘。
强调对方价值,不显谄媚
9
Please reply at your convenience, and we will make all the necessary arrangements.
方便时请回复,我们会做好一切安排。
顺带交代后续安排
10
I am looking forward to the pleasure of your company.
期待您的光临。
极正式,适合邀请贵宾
11
We sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation.
我们真诚希望您能接受邀请。
直接表达期望
12
An early reply will be greatly appreciated, as we need to finalize the schedule.
因需最终确定日程,尽早回复将非常感谢。
给出理由,回复更有说服力
13
Should you be unable to come, please let me know so that we can make adjustments.
若您无法前来,请告知我们以便调整。
给对方留余地,得体
14
I can be reached at lihua@school.com if you need more details.
如需更多细节,可通过 lihua@school.com 联系我。
补充联系方式,避免与前句重复
15
Hope to see you there!
希望能在那儿见到你!
仅限朋友、同学,轻松口语
16
Looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
非常期待您的到来。
稍显书面,适合半正式
17
Thank you again for your kindness, and I hope to hear from you soon.
再次感谢您的好意,盼早日回复。
致谢+盼复,双重收尾
18
We would be honoured by your presence and grateful for your reply.
若您能出席我们将深感荣幸,并感谢您的回复。
并列结构,正式庄重
19
Please confirm your attendance before Friday so that we can reserve a seat for you.
请在周五前确认出席,以便为您预留座位。
把回复与具体安排挂钩
20
With best wishes for a pleasant weekend.
顺致周末愉快。
礼节性结束语,适合邮件
【高频避错清单】
下面 50 条来自真实考场与日常练习中最常出现的错误,按“搭配与介词—时态与一致—冠词与名词—语气与结构—格式与篇幅”的顺序排列。用法很简单:写作时不必逐条背,改成“写完对照”的检查表,逐条扫一遍,见到同类结构就停下来核对。
表9 邀请信高频避错 50 条
序号
错误表达
正确表达
错因
1
I am writing to invite you attend the meeting.
I am writing to invite you to attend the meeting.
invite sb to do sth,介词 to 不能省
2
Please reply me before Friday.
Please reply to me before Friday.
reply 作“回复”时不及物,须加 to
3
I look forward to hear from you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
look forward to 中 to 是介词,后接动名词
4
We will join in your activity.
We will join you in the activity.
join in 后不直接接活动名词,join sb in sth 更规范
5
The contest will be held in Friday morning.
The contest will be held on Friday morning.
具体某天的上下午用 on
6
The party begins on 7 o'clock.
The party begins at 7 o'clock.
钟点前用 at
7
Our school will hold a lecture in next week.
Our school will hold a lecture next week.
next/last 前不加介词
8
I am writing to invite you join our club.
I am writing to invite you to join our club.
invite sb to do,同第一条
9
We are looking forward to your come.
We are looking forward to your coming.
介词后接名词或动名词
10
She is responsible to organize the activity.
She is responsible for organizing the activity.
be responsible for doing sth
11
The activity is aimed to help students.
The activity is aimed at helping students.
be aimed at doing sth
12
We will provide you many information.
We will provide you with much information.
provide sb with sth;information 不可数
13
Please contact with me at 12345678.
Please contact me at 12345678.
contact 及物,不加 with
14
We will hold a meeting about the environment protection.
We will hold a meeting about environmental protection.
名词作定语修饰需用形容词形式
15
Thank you for your invite.
Thank you for your invitation.
invite 是动词,名词用 invitation
16
The activity will be taken place in the hall.
The activity will take place in the hall.
take place 不及物,无被动
17
Many students will took part in it.
Many students will take part in it.
will 后接动词原形
18
I have join many activities.
I have joined many activities.
现在完成时用过去分词
19
There will have a lot of guests.
There will be a lot of guests.
there be 句型,不能换用 have
20
The meeting was hold last week.
The meeting was held last week.
hold 的过去分词是 held
21
Every student are invited to the party.
Every student is invited to the party.
every+单数名词作主语,谓语用单数
22
The number of the participants are increasing.
The number of the participants is increasing.
the number of 作主语,谓语用单数
23
Neither the teacher nor the students is coming.
Neither the teacher nor the students are coming.
neither...nor 遵循就近原则
24
If you will come, please tell me.
If you come, please tell me.
条件状语从句用一般现在时表将来
25
I am writing to you since I want invite you.
I am writing to you since I want to invite you.
want 后接不定式,to 不可省
26
Our school is going to hold a English contest.
Our school is going to hold an English contest.
元音音素开头的词前用 an
27
I am the chairman of the Students Union.
I am the chairman of the Students' Union.
名词所有格漏撇号
28
We need many equipments.
We need much equipment.
equipment 不可数,用 much 修饰
29
Please give me some advices.
Please give me some advice.
advice 不可数
30
I'm writting to invite you.
I'm writing to invite you.
write 去 e 加 ing
31
We will have a 3-days holiday.
We will have a three-day holiday.
复合形容词中的名词用单数
32
The activity will last for two hours time.
The activity will last for two hours.
hours 后不再加 time
33
He is an honour guest.
He is a guest of honour.
“贵宾”固定搭配为 guest of honour
34
I very hope you can come.
I do hope you can come.
very 不能修饰动词,用 do 强调
35
We will hold an activity, you must come.
We will hold an activity, and we hope you can come.
逗号不能连接两个独立句;语气过硬
36
Please coming to our school on time.
Please come to our school on time.
祈使句用动词原形
37
I am writing to tell you a good thing.
I am writing to share some good news with you.
中文直译,英语惯用 share good news
38
Our school will hold an activity which is very interesting and very meaningful and very useful.
Our school will hold an activity which promises to be both interesting and rewarding.
重复堆砌 very,句式单调
39
Looking forward to your reply, and thank you.
I look forward to your reply. Thank you.
分词短语不能独立作谓语,句子成分残缺
40
I hope you can come and I hope you can reply me and I hope we will meet soon.
I hope you can come. Please reply at your convenience.
连续 I hope 排比,句式无变化
41
Dear Mr. Smith:
Dear Mr. Smith,
英文书信称呼后用逗号,不用冒号
42
Yours sincerely Li Hua
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
结束语与署名分两行,结束语后加逗号
43
You are welcome to our school and you will have a good time and we will be happy.
You are welcome to our school, where you will have a wonderful time.
流水句,缺主从结构
44
The reason why I invite you is because you are famous.
The reason why I invite you is that you are an expert in this field.
the reason is because 冗余;理由要具体
45
I am writing to invite you to attend our meeting. I am Li Hua.
I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to attend our meeting.
信息顺序颠倒,应先自我介绍
46
Please give me a reply in two days.
Please reply by Friday.
语气生硬;截止时间用 by 更清楚
47
We will be very honoured if you can coming.
We will be very honoured if you can come.
情态动词后接动词原形
48
If you don't come, we will be disappointed.
We would be sorry if you could not make it.
带胁迫意味,不得体
49
The letter has no punctuation and all sentences are joined together.
Break the text into sentences and vary long and short structures.
标点缺失、一句到底,可读性差
50
The composition is only 55 words.
Keep it between 70 and 100 words and develop each point in one sentence.
词数不足,要点未展开
【满分作文模板】
这一部分给出一份“成篇模板”。它和第二部分骨架的区别是:骨架只列功能位,模板把每个功能位都填成可选句式,并标注词数配额,套用时只需替换信息、删减冗余。
一、成篇模板(带占位符)
Dear [Mr. Smith / friends],
I am Li Hua, [身份:chairman of the Students' Union / a member of Class 3]. I am writing to invite you to [活动名称], which will be held [时间] in [地点].
The activity will begin with [环节一], followed by [环节二]. During the event, you will have the chance to [可参与的具体动作]. Besides, [亮点或安排], which will help you [对方收获]. It is a good opportunity for you to [意义].
I would appreciate it if you could [回复要求] by [截止时间]. If you need any further information, please feel free to contact me at [联系方式]. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
词数配额:第一段 30 词、第二段 40 词、第三段 18 词,称呼与署名不计。套用时先按配额写,写完再数一遍,超了就从第二段的修饰成分里删,缺了就在第二段补一个“对方收益”的短句。
二、逐段可替换句库
模板的价值在于“可换”。下面每组给四个变体,按对象和题目灵活选择;同一篇内同一功能只用一句,避免堆叠。
表10 三段功能句替换库
功能位
可选句式(择一)
身份自述
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. / I am Li Hua, a student from Class 3. / This is Li Hua, president of the English Club. / I am writing in the name of all the students of our class.
说明来意
I am writing to invite you to... / I am writing to extend a warm invitation to you. / On behalf of our school, I would like to invite you to... / It is my great pleasure to invite you to...
交代时间地点
The event is scheduled for 3 p.m. next Friday in the school hall. / It will take place from 9 to 11 a.m. on June 12 in Room 305. / The activity is to be held in the auditorium at 2 p.m. this Saturday. / We have booked the school hall for the whole afternoon of May 20.
活动流程
The activity will start with..., followed by... / It will open with... and end with... / The first half of the event is..., and the second half is... / We will begin with... before moving on to...
可参与内容
You will have the chance to... / You are welcome to try your hand at... / You can join us in... / You will be invited to take part in...
亮点与安排
Besides, ... will be given by... / What makes it special is that... / We have also prepared... for all the guests. / Another highlight is...
对方收益
It is a good opportunity for you to... / This will help you... / You will gain a better understanding of... / It will be a rewarding experience for you.
期待与回复
I would appreciate it if you could reply by... / Please let me know at your earliest convenience whether you can come. / An early reply would be greatly appreciated. / Looking forward to your reply.
联系方式
Please contact me at 12345678 or lihua@school.com. / You can reach me at the Students' Union office. / Feel free to call me if you need more details. / I am available at 138xxxx1234 after class.
结尾致谢
Thank you for your time and consideration. / Your presence will surely make the event more memorable. / Thank you again, and I hope to hear from you soon. / With best wishes.
三、模板使用的三条纪律
第一,模板的句子必须“落地”。保留 which will be held、followed by 这类结构性成分,替换的必须是具体信息;一篇通篇只有 our school will hold an activity 的作文,即使句式正确也只能落在中档。
第二,模板不能盖过题目。题目若要求“介绍活动意义”“说明报名方式”,模板里没有对应句,就必须自己补,不能为了套模板而漏要点。
第三,模板只能用一次同一功能句。有些同学把 I would appreciate it if... 在第一段和第三段各用一次,看似礼貌,实则暴露句式单一。同一功能句在全文出现一次即可。
【模板示例】
下面两篇示例分别对应“正式语气”与“轻松语气”两种典型场景。每篇之后附逐句标注,说明每一句承担哪个功能位,便于对照模板拆解。读的时候先看标注,再回读原文,最后遮住原文按标注自己复述一遍。
一、邀请外教参加校园英语周开幕式(正式语气)
情境:假定你是李华,你校将举办英语周。请给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,邀请他出席开幕式并致辞,同时告知活动时间、地点和其他安排。
参考范文:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I am writing to invite you to the opening ceremony of our English Week, which will be held at 9 a.m. on Monday, May 12, in the school hall.
The ceremony will begin with a short speech by our principal, followed by students' performances in English. We would be greatly honoured if you could say a few words to open the week, as your encouragement means a lot to us. During the week, there will also be a speech contest, a film show and an English corner, and you are welcome to join any of them.
I would appreciate it if you could reply by May 8 so that we can arrange the programme. If you need any further information, please contact me at lihua@school.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
表11 示例一逐句功能标注
序号
位置
功能
对应模板位置
1
第一段第 1 句
自我介绍+身份
对应模板「I am [身份]」
2
第一段第 2 句
写信目的+活动+时间地点(which 定语从句)
对应模板「I am writing to invite you to..., which will be held...」
3
第二段第 1 句
活动流程(start with...followed by)
对应模板「活动流程」功能位
4
第二段第 2 句
具体请求+对方价值(would be honoured if...)
对应模板「亮点与安排」,同时完成“致辞”这一要点
5
第二段第 3 句
补充安排(there will also be...)
对应模板「补充信息」,避免要点单薄
6
第三段第 1 句
礼貌请求+截止时间+理由
对应模板「期待与回复」
7
第三段第 2 句
联系方式
对应模板「联系方式」
二、邀请朋友参加校园音乐会(轻松语气)
情境:假定你是李华,校音乐社将于本周六晚举办校园音乐会。请给你校交换生朋友 Anna 写一封邮件,邀请她参加,并简要介绍演出内容。
参考范文:
Dear Anna,
Our music club is giving a concert this Saturday evening, and I'm writing to ask if you'd like to come with me.
The concert will start at 7 p.m. in the school hall and will last about two hours. The school band will play several songs, and two students will sing Chinese folk songs. You'll also hear a piano piece by our music teacher. I'm sure you'll enjoy it, even if you don't know all the words. After the show, we can go for a walk along the river and talk about the music.
Just let me know before Friday if you can make it. I'll save a seat for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
表12 示例二逐句功能标注
序号
位置
功能
对应模板位置
1
第一段
背景+邀请(I'm writing to ask if you'd like to...)
朋友语气:不用 invite you to attend,改用 ask if you'd like to
2
第二段第 1 句
时间地点与时长
信息仍然齐全,只是句式更口语
3
第二段第 2–3 句
演出内容(具体到乐队、民歌、钢琴)
用具体内容替代空泛的“精彩表演”
4
第二段第 4 句
对方感受(I'm sure you'll enjoy it)
朋友间可直接表达判断,不必用 I would appreciate it
5
第三段
截止时间+承诺(I'll save a seat for you!)
轻松收尾,用感叹号增强亲切感
前面的模板、词句都是“零件”,这一部分讲“装配顺序”。考试时间有限,写作要按固定动作走,才不会临场乱。
一、审题四步:先定四件事,再动笔
第一步定身份:题目给你的头衔是什么,能代表谁。第二步定对象:写给谁,决定语气与称呼。第三步定要点:把三条中文要点改写成三个英文“信息块”,每块一句话的关键词先写下来。第四步定语域:正式还是轻松,通篇不换调。
这四步大约花两分钟。很多低分作文不是不会写,而是写偏了:身份写成“学生会干事”、对象写成“亲爱的同学”却通篇用敬语、三条要点只落实两条。审题两分钟,胜过返工十分钟。
二、要点扩展三法:把短语变成句子
题目给的要点往往只有四五个字,直接翻译成英文只有半句,必须扩展。方法一是加细节:把“活动内容丰富”扩成“有剪纸、书法、民乐三个环节”。方法二是加效果:补一句“这能让你更直观地感受中国文化”。方法三是加安排:说明时间、地点、报名方式、接送安排。三种方法各用一次,三条要点就能自然撑满第二段。
扩展时守住一条线:所有补充信息必须是“合理的常识”,不能编造具体数字、专有名称或对方说过的话。写“将在学校礼堂举行”是合理的,写“将有 328 人参加”就是自找风险。
三、语言升级三法:从“对”到“好”
第一法换词:把 good 换成 rewarding,把 very important 换成 essential,把 many 换成 a variety of。第二法换句:把两个简单句合并成定语从句或分词结构,例如把 “The festival will be held next week. It will last three days.” 合成 “The festival, which will last three days, will be held next week.”。第三法加衔接:在段内加一处 Besides 或 What's more,在段间用第一段的 which 从句自然过渡到第二段。
升级要有节制。一篇 80 词的短文,一处定语从句、一处倒装或形式主语、两三个精准形容词,就已经够亮;处处长句反而容易出错,也会让阅卷人读得吃力。
四、五分钟检查清单
表13 交卷前五分钟检查清单
顺序
检查什么
怎么改
1
要点是否三条齐全
对照题干逐条划线,缺哪条就在第二段补一句,不要挤进结尾
2
时态是否统一
圈出所有动词,未发生的活动统一为将来时或一般现在时表将来
3
介词与搭配
重点查 invite sb to do、attend、participate in、reply to、look forward to doing
4
冠词与单复数
an English contest、much information、two hours、a three-day holiday
5
书信格式
称呼后逗号、结束语与署名分行、署名右下、段首缩进统一
6
词数与卷面
数一遍词数(70–100),确认没有大面积涂改、没有超出答题区
最后提醒一句:检查时优先改“硬错”(时态、搭配、拼写、要点遗漏),不要花时间把已经正确的句子改写得更花哨。考场上的每一分钟,都应该用来减少失分,而不是增加风险。
以下 15 题覆盖邀请信的主要场景:校内活动、对外交流、专家邀请、家校沟通、社区服务、节日文化。建议按“限时 20 分钟独立写作—对照范文—标注差距—重写一遍”的四步使用,不要只是阅读。参考范文均约 150 词,比考试要求的 80 词更长,目的是提供更完整的句式和衔接样本;实际答题时按题目词数要求压缩,保留三段结构与核心句即可。
一、写作题与参考范文
题目 1 | 假定你是李华,你校将举办传统文化节。请给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,邀请他参加,并介绍活动的时间、地点和主要内容。
写作要点:身份+活动名称;时间地点;活动内容(剪纸、书法、民乐等);期待回复
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 2 | 假定你是李华,你校将与英国友好学校的学生举行线上文化交流会。请给对方学生代表 Chris 写一封邮件,邀请他参加并介绍会议安排。
写作要点:线上会议时间;交流内容(校园生活、节日);互动环节;参会方式
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 3 | 假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将于周五下午举办英语演讲比赛。请给你的同学 Peter 写一封邮件,邀请他参赛。
写作要点:比赛时间地点;主题与规则;奖品;报名截止时间
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 4 | 假定你是李华,是三班班长。学校将举办家长开放日,请给家长写一封邀请信,介绍当天的安排。
写作要点:开放日时间;上午听课;中午就餐;下午家长会;回复方式
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 5 | 假定你是李华,校学生会主席。学校想请职业规划专家王教授来校做讲座,请给他写一封邀请信。
写作要点:讲座主题;时间地点与时长;听众;问答环节;交通安排
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 6 | 假定你是李华,你班将举办中秋晚会。请给班里的交换生 Anna 写一封邮件,邀请她参加。
写作要点:晚会时间地点;节日介绍;做月饼与学唱中文歌;赏月
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 7 | 假定你是李华,社区志愿者。社区将组织周末环保清洁活动,请给社区居民写一封邀请信。
写作要点:活动时间地点;垃圾分类讲解;分组清洁;旧电池回收;报名方式
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 8 | 假定你是李华,你校下周将举行运动会。请给你初中时的朋友 Tom 写一封邮件,邀请他来观看。
写作要点:运动会时间地点;比赛项目;你的参赛项目;乐队表演;入校手续
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 9 | 假定你是李华,你校七月将举办夏令营。请给你的笔友 David 写一封邮件,邀请他参加。
写作要点:夏令营时间与地点;上午课程;下午选修;外出参观;费用与回复时间
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 10 | 假定你是李华,科技社社长。学校将举办科技节,请给人工智能专家李教授写一封邀请信,请他出席并做简短报告。
写作要点:科技节时间地点;学生项目展示;邀请理由;报告主题;回复时间
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 11 | 假定你是李华,你校将迎来建校六十周年校庆。请给校友陈先生写一封邀请信。
写作要点:校庆日期;上午庆典;下午参观旧教室、见老师;晚上晚会;回复时间
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 12 | 假定你是李华,中华文化社成员。社团将举办书法工作坊,请给留学生 Maria 写一封邮件,邀请她参加。
写作要点:工作坊时间地点;汉字介绍;握笔与书写练习;写中文名字留念
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 13 | 假定你是李华,三班班长。班级读书会将于周五举办分享会,请给同学们写一封邀请信。
写作要点:分享会时间地点;学生分享书目;小组讨论;教师阅读建议;报名方式
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 14 | 假定你是李华,学生会主席。学校将为任教一年的外教 Ms. Green 举办欢送会,请给另一位外教 Mr. Brown 写一封邀请信。
写作要点:欢送会时间地点;回顾视频;学生表演;赠送礼物;请他致辞
参考范文(约 150 词):
题目 15 | 假定你是李华,摄影社成员。社团将举办校园摄影展,请给你的朋友 Lucy 写一封邮件,邀请她参观。
写作要点:展览时间地点;展出作品;摄影讲座;约好同行
参考范文(约 150 词):
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模板04 邀请信
01 题型解读
02 答题模板构建
03 满分词汇模板
04 满分句型模板
05 满分作文模板
06 知识迁移强化
【读者注意】
适用对象:高三学生(自主复习)/高中英语教师(备课讲义)
核心内容:500 个单词 · 300 个短语 · 60 个句型
50 条避错清单 · 15 篇范文 · 2 篇模板示例
使用建议:第一部分读规则,第二部分搭骨架
第三、四部分积词句,第五部分排雷,第六至九部分成篇
在新高考英语卷中,应用文写作稳定占 15 分,是主观题里投入产出比最高的一道。命题形式高度固定:设定真实情境,给出明确身份,列出三条要点,要求写一封 80 词左右的信或邮件。邀请信是其中出场频率最高的子类——学校办活动,需要你以学生会、班级或本人名义,向外教、友好学校学生、家长、专家或朋友发出邀请。它看似简单,实则同时考三件事:要点全不全、语气准不准、句子像不像英语。
命题特点
特点一:情境真实,身份与对象双重限定。题目从不凭空要你写信,而是先给场景——你校将办文化节、你是学生会主席李华、请给外教写信。身份决定你能代表谁,对象决定你用什么语气。这两条限定一旦写错,语言再漂亮也算跑题。
特点二:要点提纲化,信息密度高。题目给的三条中文要点是硬任务,每条都必须在文中找到落点。80 词里要装三条要点、一次邀请、一个结尾,几乎没有铺陈空间,所以比的不是写得多,而是一句一个信息。
特点三:交际功能优先,语气必须得体。邀请信的本质是办事:说明来意、交代信息、给出理由、促成回复,四步缺一不成。评分因此很看重语域统一:对外教用 I would appreciate it if...,对朋友用 Hope to see you there,两者混用就显得不伦不类。
特点四:结构高度稳定,三段式是默认框架。阅卷节奏极快,骨架必须三秒可见:第一段交代身份、目的、活动与时间地点;第二段展开内容、安排与意义;第三段表达期待、回复方式与联系方式。
特点五:准确是底线,亮点是加分项。评分按四档,核心看要点是否齐全、语言是否准确得体、篇章是否连贯。语法错误和要点遗漏会直接压到低档;只有在准确的前提下,一两个得体的复杂句才是往高档走的台阶。
特点六:卷面与词数直接影响档位。80 词左右的安全区间是 70 至 100 词。低于 70 说明要点没展开,高于 110 容易啰嗦出错。书写、分段、书信格式这些隐性分,往往才是真正的差距。
从近年走向看,还有三个变化:情境从校内通知式转向真实交流式,更多要求向校外人士介绍中华文化、邀请对方参与志愿服务;要点从三个明点变为两个明点加一个隐含任务,比如“说明活动意义”常藏在题干里;词数收紧,逼着考生学会压缩取舍。
由此得到的备考启示只有一句:背模板不如背模块。模板是一整篇,题目一变就套不上;模块是功能件——怎么开场、怎么交代活动、怎么给理由、怎么收尾。把功能件练到能自由拼装,才是应对任何邀请信的稳妥办法。
这一部分把一封邀请信拆成“骨架”和“零件”。先看整体结构,再逐段看每一段该做什么、写几句、用哪些句式,最后收拢成一份可以直接套用的骨架。
【三段式结构总览】
一封合格的邀请信,三段各司其职,不能互相顶替。下表是三层结构的任务分配,写作时按“功能”而不是按“字数”去填。
表1 邀请信三段式功能分配
段落
核心任务
必须写到的信息
建议词数
常见失误
第一段
亮明身份、说明来意、发出邀请
身份、写信目的、活动名称、时间、地点
25–30
只说“想邀请你”,活动信息一概没有
第二段
给对方一个“值得来”的理由
活动内容、流程安排、亮点或意义(2–3 个要点)
35–40
要点堆砌、无衔接、只写“我们有什么”
第三段
促成回复,把下一步交代清楚
期待、回复方式与截止时间、联系方式
15–20
忘留联系方式;重复第一段的邀请句
三段之外的“首尾件”还有两处:称呼(Dear Mr. Smith, / Dear friends,)与署名(Yours sincerely, / Li Hua),它们不计入正文词数感,但格式错一眼就能看见。
【第一段怎么写:三句话把“事”说清】
第一段只有一个任务——让对方在第一眼就知道“谁请谁、请做什么、什么时候、在哪里”。写得好,读者三秒入戏;写得糟,后面全篇都在补救。
写法一,直接式,最稳,适合绝大多数题目。先自报身份,再说写信目的,最后把活动、时间、地点一次交代完。
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I am writing to invite you to attend our English Speech Contest, which will be held in the school auditorium at 3 p.m. on Friday, June 12.
写法二,背景式,适合活动需要一点铺垫的题目(文化节、校庆、友好学校交流)。先给一句背景,再用 on behalf of 引出邀请,显得自然。
Our school is going to hold a Traditional Culture Festival next week. On behalf of the Students' Union, I am writing to invite you to join us.
写法三,敬语式,适合邀请外教、专家、校长等长辈或地位较高者。把“邀请”放在“荣幸”的框架里,语气立刻上一个档次。
It would be a great honour for us if you could come and give us a lecture on Chinese calligraphy. The lecture is scheduled for 4 p.m. next Wednesday in Room 305.
四个必写成分:身份、目的、活动名称、时间地点。三个可省成分:具体门牌号(写 in the school hall 即可)、活动全称的长定语(可后置成从句)、对方的头衔(称呼里已交代)。判断标准很简单——删掉之后读者还能不能来。能来,就删;不能来,就留。
句式弹药(第一段通用):I am writing to invite you to...;On behalf of..., I would like to invite you to...;It is my great pleasure to invite you to...;We are greatly honoured to invite you to...;Nothing would please us more than your presence at...。五句轮换使用,不必每次都用第一句。
提示|两个最常见的硬伤:一是 invite you to attend 中漏掉 to,写成 invite you attend;二是时间介词混用,at 用于钟点、on 用于具体某天或某天的上下午、in 用于月份年份季节,且 next/last 前一律不加介词。
【第二段怎么写:把“值不值得来”讲出来】
第二段是全文的重心,也是拉开档次的地方。它要回答一个问题:我为什么要来?答题思路是三层递进——What(活动做什么)、How(怎么安排)、Why(对我有什么意义或收获)。三层不必平均用力,但至少要有两层,否则第二段就成了活动清单。
要点排序有两条路:时间顺序(先开幕、再比赛、最后颁奖)和重要性顺序(先讲最吸引人的亮点,再补其他安排)。三条要点建议一条一句,句与句之间用 First / Then / Besides / What's more / In addition 中的一至两个衔接,不要每句都挂一个连接词。
高频动词:take part in、participate in、attend、join us for、experience、appreciate、learn about、try one's hand at、compete in、watch、taste、make。注意 participate 后必须接 in,attend 后直接接活动名词,不要写成 attend in。
六组可直接用的句型:The activity will start with..., followed by...;You will have the chance to...;Not only will you..., but you will also...;It is a good opportunity for you to...;Those who are interested can...;We have prepared... for you。其中 Not only 置于句首时的部分倒装,是最容易被阅卷人记住的一处亮点,一篇用一次即可。
The festival will start with a short opening speech, followed by paper-cutting and calligraphy workshops. You will have the chance to try your hand at making lanterns and taste traditional food such as mooncakes. Besides, a folk music concert will be given in the evening, which will help you understand Chinese culture better.
这段的写法值得拆开看:第一句交代流程(start with... followed by),第二句给对方“可参与”的动作(try your hand at, taste),第三句补亮点并用 which 从句点出意义(help you understand)。三句话完成了 What、How、Why,且没有一句是空话。
提示|第二段三个典型问题:写成活动通知(通篇“我们有”,没有“你能得到”);要点并列但无连接,读起来像清单;时态前后跳(已定的安排可用一般现在时表将来,未定的用 will,全文要统一口径)。
【第三段怎么写:把“下一步”给出来】
第三段的职能常被误解为“再说一次希望你来”。其实它要解决的是“然后呢”——对方看完信,知道该怎么回复、什么时候之前回复、有事找谁。四件事:表达期待、说明回复方式、留联系方式、致谢,四选三即可,全写会显得冗长。
礼貌层级要和对象匹配。对长辈、专家、外教,用 I would appreciate it if you could reply by Friday.;对同学、朋友,用 Hope to see you there! 就够了。若把后者用在给教授的邮件里,会显得轻慢;把前者用在给同桌的微信式邀请里,又显得生硬。
I would appreciate it if you could reply by June 10 so that we can reserve a seat for you. If you need any further information, please feel free to contact me at 12345678 or lihua@school.com. Looking forward to your reply.
这一段的三个禁忌:不要重复第一段的邀请句(Repeat 会被判语言贫乏);不要用 I hope you must come 这类带强迫意味的表达;不要把联系方式写成“你可以来找我”这种没有落点的句子。
还有一个容易被忽略的细节:如果题目要求“说明是否能来”,第三段就必须出现明确的确认请求,例如 Please let me know at your earliest convenience whether you can come.;如果题目只要求“表达期待”,加一句 Looking forward to your reply 即可,不必自行增加任务。
【落笔前必须处理的八件事】
以下八条是阅卷中最常见的失分点,写完后逐条对照一遍,通常能挽回 3 至 5 分。
表2 邀请信落笔八项自查
序号
检查项
具体要求
1
称呼与署名
称呼顶格、后加逗号(Dear Mr. Smith,);结束语与署名分两行、署名右下(Yours sincerely, / Li Hua);对熟人可用 Yours, / Best wishes,
2
身份一致
严格照题目给的身份写,学生会主席、班长、普通学生不可互换,也不要自创“校团委书记”等题目未给的头衔
3
时态统一
活动尚未发生用将来时;已确定日程可用一般现在时表将来(The contest starts at 9 a.m.);背景介绍用一般现在时或现在完成时
4
语域一致
对外教、专家用 would/could/may 等委婉表达;对朋友用自然口语;全文不混用敬语与随意语
5
要点覆盖
题目三条要点逐条落实,一条至少一句;隐含任务(如“说明意义”)不能漏,也不能用半句带过
6
词数控制
70–100 词为安全区;不足 70 词说明要点未展开,超过 110 词容易啰嗦出错
7
衔接适度
每段用一至两个衔接词即可;Firstly/Secondly/Last but not least 连用三句,反而显得模板化
8
卷面格式
段首统一缩进;书信不写标题;不画边框、不用彩色笔;字母大小写、标点规范
【可直接套用的通用骨架】
把上面三段的功能串起来,就是一份可复用的骨架。方括号内为待替换信息,其余为稳定表达。注意:骨架只保证“不缺件”,分数高低仍取决于替换进去的内容是否具体。
Dear [称呼],
I am [身份], and I am writing to invite you to [活动名称], which will be held [时间] in [地点].
The activity will begin with [环节一], followed by [环节二]. During the event, you will have the chance to [可参与的事]. Besides, [亮点或意义]. It is a good opportunity for you to [对方收益].
I would appreciate it if you could [回复要求] by [截止时间]. If you need any further information, please contact me at [联系方式]. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
[署名]
这份骨架共约 85 词,正好落在安全区。若题目要点只有两条,可在第二段补一句活动意义;若要点有三条且都需展开,则压缩第一段的定语从句、简化第三段的联系方式,把腾出的词数留给第二段。
【不同对象的语气调节】
同一件事,写给三个人要有三种写法。这不是“文采”问题,而是“得体”问题,也是评分表中“应用语言得体”一项的直接依据。
表3 三类邀请对象的语气对照
邀请对象
语气基调
典型表达
外教、专家、校长
正式、敬重,多用委婉与被动
It would be a great honour if you could...;We would be grateful if you could...;I would appreciate it if you could reply by...
友好学校学生、交换生
热情、平等,突出交流价值
We would love to have you with us.;You will have the chance to...;We are sure you will enjoy...
同学、朋友
轻松、口语,可用短句与感叹
Hope you can make it!;Come and join us!;Looking forward to seeing you there!
【满分词汇模板】
这一部分提供两套可直接调用的词汇清单:500 个单词与 300 个短语,按“邀请—活动—时间地点—校园人物—文化—动词—形容词—衔接”的功能顺序排列。使用方法有四条:一是按组记忆,每天 30 至 40 个,一周一轮;二是遮住中文回译,能一次说对才算掌握;三是每个词至少配一个“邀请信语境”的短句,避免只认识不会用;四是写作前先按主题挑 8 至 10 个词,用完再换,不要通篇堆砌生词。
一、核心单词模板(500 个)
下表按主题分组,每组末尾标注条数。表中“单词”与“释义”一一对应,同一词的不同释义只取邀请信写作中最常用的一项,以免记混。
表4 邀请信高频单词 500 例(按主题分组)
序号
单词
释义
一、邀请与回应(60 个)
1
invitation
邀请
2
invite
邀请
3
invitee
受邀者
4
inviter
邀请方
5
host
主办
6
hostess
女主人
7
guest
客人
8
attend
出席
9
attendance
出席
10
attendee
出席者
11
participant
参加者
12
participate
参加
13
presence
出席
14
honour
荣幸
15
honoured
感到荣幸的
16
pleasure
荣幸
17
privilege
荣幸
18
delight
欣喜
19
cordial
热诚的
20
sincere
真诚的
21
heartfelt
由衷的
22
gracious
亲切的
23
hospitable
好客的
24
hospitality
好客
25
courtesy
礼貌
26
etiquette
礼节
27
welcome
欢迎
28
receive
接待
29
accept
接受
30
acceptance
接受
31
decline
婉拒
32
refuse
拒绝
33
regret
遗憾
34
apology
歉意
35
apologize
道歉
36
confirm
确认
37
confirmation
确认
38
reply
回复
39
respond
答复
40
response
回复
41
acknowledge
告知收到
42
arrange
安排
43
arrangement
安排
44
reserve
预留
45
register
登记
46
registration
报名
47
enroll
注册
48
contact
联系
49
inform
通知
50
notify
通知
51
remind
提醒
52
reminder
提醒
53
assure
使确信
54
appreciate
感激
55
grateful
感激的
56
thankful
感谢的
57
gratitude
感激之情
58
sincerity
真诚
59
enthusiasm
热情
60
enthusiastic
热情的
二、活动与赛事(59 个)
61
activity
活动
62
event
活动
63
programme
活动安排
64
contest
比赛
65
competition
竞赛
66
competitor
参赛者
67
contestant
选手
68
champion
冠军
69
championship
锦标赛
70
judge
评委
71
jury
评审团
72
award
奖项
73
prize
奖品
74
medal
奖牌
75
certificate
证书
76
trophy
奖杯
77
performance
表演
78
perform
表演
79
rehearsal
排练
80
rehearse
排练
81
stage
舞台
82
audience
观众
83
spectator
观众
84
exhibition
展览
85
exhibit
展品
86
display
展示
87
fair
展销会
88
festival
节日
89
carnival
狂欢节
90
parade
游行
91
gala
盛会
92
concert
音乐会
93
drama
戏剧
94
opera
歌剧
95
chorus
合唱团
96
band
乐队
97
orchestra
管弦乐队
98
ballet
芭蕾舞
99
lecture
讲座
100
speech
演讲
101
seminar
研讨会
102
workshop
工作坊
103
forum
论坛
104
conference
会议
105
session
场次
106
symposium
学术研讨会
107
debate
辩论
108
discussion
讨论
109
training
培训
110
course
课程
111
club
社团
112
society
社团
113
association
协会
114
committee
委员会
115
organizer
组织者
116
organize
组织
117
organization
组织
118
sponsor
赞助
119
sponsorship
赞助
三、时间与场地(60 个)
120
deadline
截止日期
121
duration
持续时间
122
period
期间
123
interval
间隔
124
occasion
场合
125
opportunity
机会
126
punctual
准时的
127
punctuality
准时
128
promptly
及时地
129
timely
及时的
130
annual
每年的
131
annually
每年地
132
semester
学期
133
term
学期
134
vacation
假期
135
weekend
周末
136
noon
正午
137
midnight
午夜
138
dawn
黎明
139
sunset
日落
140
quarter
一刻钟
141
beginning
开始
142
ending
结束
143
final
最后的
144
initial
最初的
145
previous
先前的
146
following
接下来的
147
subsequent
随后的
148
current
当前的
149
recent
最近的
150
upcoming
即将到来的
151
forthcoming
即将举行的
152
temporary
临时的
153
permanent
永久的
154
frequent
频繁的
155
occasional
偶尔的
156
simultaneous
同时的
157
consecutive
连续的
158
extend
延长
159
postpone
推迟
160
delay
推迟
161
cancel
取消
162
reschedule
重新安排
163
expire
到期
164
commence
开始
165
conclude
结束
166
venue
场地
167
site
地点
168
campus
校园
169
auditorium
礼堂
170
hall
礼堂
171
gymnasium
体育馆
172
stadium
体育场
173
playground
操场
174
laboratory
实验室
175
library
图书馆
176
canteen
食堂
177
dormitory
宿舍
178
classroom
教室
179
gallery
画廊
四、校园与人物(66 个)
180
school
学校
181
college
学院
182
university
大学
183
institute
学院
184
academy
学院
185
department
系
186
faculty
全体教师
187
staff
教职员
188
principal
校长
189
headmaster
中小学校长
190
president
校长
191
teacher
教师
192
professor
教授
193
lecturer
讲师
194
tutor
导师
195
instructor
指导教师
196
coach
教练
197
student
学生
198
freshman
新生
199
sophomore
二年级学生
200
junior
三年级学生
201
senior
毕业班学生
202
graduate
毕业生
203
undergraduate
本科生
204
postgraduate
研究生
205
classmate
同学
206
schoolmate
校友
207
roommate
室友
208
monitor
班长
209
captain
队长
210
leader
领导者
211
member
成员
212
membership
会员资格
213
chairman
主席
214
secretary
秘书
215
representative
代表
216
delegate
代表
217
expert
专家
218
scholar
学者
219
researcher
研究人员
220
scientist
科学家
221
artist
艺术家
222
musician
音乐家
223
writer
作家
224
poet
诗人
225
painter
画家
226
designer
设计师
227
engineer
工程师
228
journalist
记者
229
reporter
记者
230
editor
编辑
231
photographer
摄影师
232
translator
译者
233
interpreter
口译员
234
alumnus
男校友
235
council
理事会
236
league
联盟
237
parent
家长
238
guardian
监护人
239
citizen
公民
240
resident
居民
241
visitor
来访者
242
newcomer
新来者
243
stranger
陌生人
244
partner
伙伴
245
gathering
聚会
五、文化与传承(60 个)
246
culture
文化
247
cultural
文化的
248
tradition
传统
249
traditional
传统的
250
heritage
遗产
251
legacy
遗产
252
history
历史
253
historic
有历史意义的
254
historical
历史的
255
ancient
古代的
256
modern
现代的
257
contemporary
当代的
258
custom
习俗
259
convention
惯例
260
ritual
仪式
261
festive
节日的
262
lantern
灯笼
263
firework
烟花
264
firecracker
鞭炮
265
dumpling
饺子
266
mooncake
月饼
267
cuisine
菜肴
268
dish
菜肴
269
flavour
风味
270
recipe
食谱
271
snack
小吃
272
beverage
饮料
273
teapot
茶壶
274
chopsticks
筷子
275
calligraphy
书法
276
painting
绘画
277
brush
毛笔
278
paper-cutting
剪纸
279
embroidery
刺绣
280
porcelain
瓷器
281
pottery
陶器
282
silk
丝绸
283
costume
服装
284
robe
长袍
285
mask
面具
286
puppet
木偶
287
folk
民间的
288
folklore
民间传说
289
legend
传说
290
myth
神话
291
tale
故事
292
poem
诗
293
poetry
诗歌
294
proverb
谚语
295
idiom
习语
296
relic
文物
297
antique
古董
298
monument
纪念碑
299
temple
寺庙
300
garden
园林
301
architecture
建筑
302
tower
塔
303
palace
宫殿
304
souvenir
纪念品
305
gift
礼物
六、动词与表达(85 个)
306
hold
举办
307
conduct
进行
308
launch
启动
309
initiate
发起
310
establish
建立
311
found
创立
312
create
创造
313
design
设计
314
prepare
准备
315
preparation
准备
316
coordinate
协调
317
cooperate
合作
318
collaborate
合作
319
cooperation
合作
320
communicate
交流
321
communication
交流
322
exchange
交流
323
interact
互动
324
interaction
互动
325
share
分享
326
discuss
讨论
327
negotiate
协商
328
consult
咨询
329
inquire
询问
330
request
请求
331
require
要求
332
demand
要求
333
suggest
建议
334
recommend
推荐
335
advise
建议
336
propose
提议
337
proposal
提议
338
offer
提供
339
provide
提供
340
supply
供应
341
donate
捐赠
342
contribute
贡献
343
support
支持
344
assist
协助
345
help
帮助
346
aid
援助
347
guide
引导
348
lead
带领
349
direct
指导
350
instruct
指导
351
teach
教
352
train
训练
353
mentor
指导
354
supervise
监督
355
manage
管理
356
administer
管理
357
evaluate
评价
358
assess
评估
359
score
得分
360
win
赢得
361
defeat
击败
362
compete
竞争
363
challenge
挑战
364
attempt
尝试
365
achieve
取得
366
accomplish
完成
367
fulfil
实现
368
complete
完成
369
succeed
成功
370
success
成功
371
failure
失败
372
fail
失败
373
improve
提高
374
enhance
增强
375
develop
发展
376
promote
促进
377
spread
传播
378
expand
扩大
379
increase
增加
380
reduce
减少
381
raise
提高
382
collect
收集
383
gather
聚集
384
recruit
招募
385
apply
申请
386
application
申请
387
interview
面试
388
select
挑选
389
choose
选择
390
decide
决定
七、形容词与副词(80 个)
391
important
重要的
392
significant
重要的
393
essential
必要的
394
necessary
必要的
395
vital
至关重要的
396
crucial
关键的
397
valuable
有价值的
398
useful
有用的
399
helpful
有帮助的
400
beneficial
有益的
401
meaningful
有意义的
402
worthwhile
值得的
403
rewarding
有回报的
404
fruitful
富有成果的
405
successful
成功的
406
effective
有效的
407
efficient
高效的
408
practical
实用的
409
realistic
现实的
410
creative
有创意的
411
original
原创的
412
unique
独特的
413
diverse
多样的
414
colourful
丰富多彩的
415
lively
生动的
416
vivid
生动的
417
impressive
令人印象深刻的
418
memorable
难忘的
419
unforgettable
难忘的
420
remarkable
非凡的
421
outstanding
杰出的
422
excellent
优秀的
423
superb
极好的
424
wonderful
精彩的
425
splendid
壮丽的
426
magnificent
壮观的
427
gorgeous
华丽的
428
attractive
有吸引力的
429
charming
迷人的
430
appealing
吸引人的
431
fascinating
迷人的
432
amazing
令人惊叹的
433
fantastic
极好的
434
brilliant
出色的
435
perfect
完美的
436
ideal
理想的
437
suitable
合适的
438
appropriate
恰当的
439
proper
适当的
440
reasonable
合理的
441
convenient
方便的
442
accessible
可进入的
443
available
可获得的
444
flexible
灵活的
445
reliable
可靠的
446
responsible
负责的
447
considerate
体贴的
448
thoughtful
周到的
449
generous
慷慨的
450
patient
耐心的
451
diligent
勤奋的
452
devoted
忠诚的
453
dedicated
敬业的
454
confident
自信的
455
optimistic
乐观的
456
positive
积极的
457
negative
消极的
458
active
积极的
459
energetic
精力充沛的
460
dynamic
有活力的
461
modest
谦虚的
462
humble
谦逊的
463
polite
有礼貌的
464
respectful
尊重的
465
honest
诚实的
466
frank
坦率的
467
independent
独立的
468
cooperative
合作的
469
competitive
有竞争力的
470
challenging
有挑战性的
八、逻辑与衔接(30 个)
471
however
然而
472
therefore
因此
473
moreover
而且
474
furthermore
此外
475
besides
此外
476
otherwise
否则
477
meanwhile
与此同时
478
eventually
最终
479
firstly
首先
480
secondly
其次
481
finally
最后
482
similarly
同样地
483
unlike
与…不同
484
despite
尽管
485
although
虽然
486
unless
除非
487
whether
是否
488
whereas
然而
489
instead
代替
490
anyway
无论如何
491
thus
因此
492
hence
因此
493
accordingly
相应地
494
consequently
结果
495
particularly
尤其
496
especially
特别
497
generally
一般地
498
roughly
大致
499
approximately
大约
500
definitely
肯定地
二、核心短语模板(300 个)
短语是“半成品句子”,比单词更接近考场产出。建议按“邀请—活动—参与—时间地点—目的意义—期待回应—礼貌服务”的顺序记,每记一个短语,顺手想一个能放进邀请信的句子。
表5 邀请信高频短语 300 例(按功能分组)
序号
短语
释义
一、邀请与回应(56 个)
1
on behalf of
代表
2
in the name of
以…的名义
3
extend an invitation to
向…发出邀请
4
extend a warm welcome to
向…表示热烈欢迎
5
invite sb to do sth
邀请某人做某事
6
send out invitations
发出邀请
7
accept an invitation
接受邀请
8
decline an invitation
婉拒邀请
9
at the invitation of
应…的邀请
10
a guest of honour
贵宾
11
be invited to attend
受邀出席
12
cordially invite
诚挚邀请
13
be honoured to
荣幸地
14
take the liberty of inviting
冒昧邀请
15
in response to your invitation
应你的邀请
16
look forward to your presence
期待您的光临
17
your presence is requested
敬请光临
18
request the pleasure of your company
敬请您光临
19
honour sb with one's presence
赏光出席
20
a warm invitation
热情的邀请
21
a formal invitation
正式邀请
22
a personal invitation
私人邀请
23
invitation letter
邀请信
24
reply to an invitation
回复邀请
25
confirm one's attendance
确认出席
26
accept with pleasure
欣然接受
27
regret to decline
遗憾婉拒
28
be unable to attend
无法出席
29
make one's apologies
致歉
30
owing to prior engagement
因已有约
31
for personal reasons
由于个人原因
32
in advance
提前
33
ahead of time
提前
34
at short notice
临时通知
35
a last-minute invitation
临时邀请
36
follow up
跟进
37
keep sb informed
随时告知某人
38
get in touch with
与…取得联系
39
reach sb at
通过…联系到某人
40
be available
有空
41
be fully booked
已订满
42
reserve a seat
预留座位
43
take sb's place
代替某人
44
fill in the form
填写表格
45
sign up for
报名参加
46
register for
注册参加
47
entrance fee
入场费
48
free of charge
免费
49
admission ticket
入场券
50
invitation card
邀请卡
51
hold a reception
举行招待会
52
attend a reception
出席招待会
53
RSVP by
请于…前回复
54
confirm by
于…前确认
55
no later than
不迟于
56
at the latest
最晚
二、活动组织与流程(44 个)
57
take place
举行
58
be held
举办
59
be scheduled for
定于
60
be scheduled to
定于
61
kick off
开始
62
start with
以…开始
63
end with
以…结束
64
followed by
随后是
65
be divided into
分为
66
consist of
由…组成
67
range from ... to
从…到…不等
68
a variety of
各种各样的
69
a wide range of
广泛的
70
a series of
一系列
71
in celebration of
为庆祝
72
in memory of
为纪念
73
in honour of
为向…致敬
74
on the occasion of
值…之际
75
mark the occasion
纪念这一时刻
76
hold a ceremony
举行仪式
77
opening ceremony
开幕式
78
closing ceremony
闭幕式
79
award ceremony
颁奖仪式
80
graduation ceremony
毕业典礼
81
welcome party
欢迎会
82
farewell party
欢送会
83
get-together
聚会
84
cultural festival
文化节
85
art festival
艺术节
86
science festival
科技节
87
sports meeting
运动会
88
English corner
英语角
89
speech contest
演讲比赛
90
singing contest
歌唱比赛
91
debate competition
辩论赛
92
writing competition
写作比赛
93
photo exhibition
摄影展
94
calligraphy exhibition
书法展
95
book fair
书展
96
trade fair
交易会
97
job fair
招聘会
98
open day
开放日
99
field trip
实地考察
100
volunteer work
志愿工作
三、参与与协作(37 个)
101
community service
社区服务
102
social practice
社会实践
103
exchange programme
交流项目
104
summer camp
夏令营
105
winter camp
冬令营
106
study tour
研学旅行
107
workshop session
工作坊环节
108
group discussion
小组讨论
109
panel discussion
专题讨论
110
question-and-answer session
问答环节
111
hands-on activity
动手实践活动
112
live performance
现场表演
113
dress rehearsal
彩排
114
final round
决赛
115
first prize
一等奖
116
honourable mention
优秀奖
117
participation certificate
参与证书
118
take part in
参加
119
participate in
参与
120
join us for
和我们一起参加
121
compete in
参加…比赛
122
compete against
与…竞争
123
cheer for
为…加油
124
try one's hand at
尝试
125
get involved in
参与其中
126
be engaged in
从事
127
contribute to
有助于
128
make a contribution to
为…做贡献
129
play a part in
在…中起作用
130
play a role in
在…中发挥作用
131
set up
建立
132
carry out
开展
133
work out
制定
134
draw up
拟定
135
map out
规划
136
team up with
与…合作
137
in cooperation with
与…合作
四、时间与地点(59 个)
138
with the support of
在…的支持下
139
under the guidance of
在…的指导下
140
with the help of
在…的帮助下
141
thanks to
多亏
142
in advance of
在…之前
143
on time
准时
144
in time
及时
145
just in time
正好赶上
146
from ... to ...
从…到…
147
between ... and ...
在…之间
148
at the end of
在…结束时
149
at the beginning of
在…开始时
150
in the middle of
在…中间
151
on the morning of
在…的上午
152
in the afternoon
在下午
153
at noon
在正午
154
at midnight
在午夜
155
on weekdays
在工作日
156
at the weekend
在周末
157
during the holiday
在假期期间
158
throughout the year
全年
159
all the year round
一年到头
160
every other day
每隔一天
161
once a week
每周一次
162
twice a month
每月两次
163
in the long run
从长远看
164
in the short term
短期内
165
for the time being
暂时
166
at present
目前
167
up to now
到目前为止
168
so far
迄今为止
169
in the past few years
在过去的几年里
170
in the coming years
在未来几年
171
in the near future
在不久的将来
172
in the school hall
在学校礼堂
173
in the lecture hall
在报告厅
174
on the playground
在操场
175
on the campus
在校园内
176
at the school gate
在校门口
177
on the third floor
在三楼
178
in the centre of
在…中心
179
on the left
在左边
180
on the right
在右边
181
next to
紧邻
182
opposite
在…对面
183
close to
靠近
184
within walking distance
步行可达
185
a ten-minute walk
十分钟的步行路程
186
be located in
位于
187
be situated in
坐落于
188
be easily accessible
交通便利
189
be within easy reach
容易到达
190
around the corner
在拐角处
191
on the way to
在去…的路上
192
pick sb up
接某人
193
drop sb off
送某人到某处
194
show sb around
带某人参观
195
give sb a lift
捎某人一程
196
by subway
乘地铁
五、目的与意义(41 个)
197
on foot
步行
198
rush hour
高峰时段
199
parking lot
停车场
200
seat number
座位号
201
front row
前排
202
back row
后排
203
in order to
为了
204
so as to
为了
205
with the aim of
目的是
206
for the purpose of
为了…的目的
207
with the intention of
意在
208
be intended to
旨在
209
be designed to
旨在
210
be meant to
旨在
211
aim at
针对
212
be aimed at
旨在
213
serve as
充当
214
act as
担任
215
provide sb with sth
向某人提供某物
216
offer sth to sb
向某人提供某物
217
make it possible for sb to
使某人有可能
218
enable sb to do
使某人能够
219
allow sb to do
允许某人做
220
give sb access to
使某人有机会接触
221
expose sb to
使某人接触
222
broaden one's horizons
开阔眼界
223
enrich one's experience
丰富经历
224
gain an insight into
深入了解
225
have a better understanding of
更好地理解
226
develop a sense of
培养…意识
227
raise awareness of
提高对…的认识
228
promote the exchange of
促进…的交流
229
strengthen the ties between
加强…之间的联系
230
build a bridge between
在…之间搭建桥梁
231
bring people together
把人们聚在一起
232
bring out the best in sb
激发某人最好的一面
233
make a difference
产生影响
234
leave a deep impression on
给…留下深刻印象
235
be of great benefit to
对…大有裨益
236
be beneficial to
对…有益
237
be essential to
对…至关重要
六、期待与回应(38 个)
238
play an important part in
在…中起重要作用
239
make full use of
充分利用
240
take advantage of
利用
241
make the most of
充分利用
242
get the most out of
从…中获得最大收益
243
look forward to
期待
244
look forward to doing
期待做某事
245
expect to
期望
246
hope to
希望
247
be eager to
渴望
248
can't wait to
迫不及待
249
long for
渴望
250
yearn for
渴望
251
at your earliest convenience
尽早
252
as soon as possible
尽快
253
without delay
立即
254
by all means
务必
255
if possible
如有可能
256
if necessary
如有必要
257
let sb know
告知某人
258
keep sb posted
随时告知某人
259
give sb a call
给某人打电话
260
send sb an email
给某人发邮件
261
reply by
于…前回复
262
respond to
回复
263
get back to sb
回复某人
264
hear from sb
收到某人的来信
265
await your reply
等候您的回复
266
your early reply
您的早日回复
267
an immediate reply
立即回复
268
confirmation of attendance
出席确认
269
a definite answer
明确答复
270
make it
赶上
271
be unable to make it
无法前来
272
count on sb
指望某人
273
depend on
依靠
274
rely on
依赖
275
be welcome to
欢迎…
七、服务与礼貌(25 个)
276
feel free to
随意…
277
don't hesitate to
不要犹豫
278
be at your service
随时为您服务
279
for further information
如需更多信息
280
should you have any questions
如有任何问题
281
thank sb for sth
因某事感谢某人
282
be grateful for
对…心怀感激
283
express one's gratitude
表达感激之情
284
in appreciation of
为感谢…
285
with sincere thanks
致以诚挚谢意
286
Thank you for your time
感谢您抽出时间
287
Thank you in advance
提前致谢
288
It is very kind of you
您真是太好了
289
It is thoughtful of you
您想得真周到
290
We would appreciate it if
如…我们将不胜感激
291
You are more than welcome
非常欢迎您
292
Please accept our apologies
请接受我们的歉意
293
I am sorry to inform you
很抱歉通知您
294
Much to our regret
令我们十分遗憾的是
295
with best wishes
顺致最美好的祝愿
296
best regards
此致敬意
297
all the best
一切顺利
298
take care
保重
299
keep in touch
保持联系
300
look forward to hearing from you
期待收到您的回信
【词句使用的三条原则】
原则一:优先用“准确的小词”,不用“模糊的大词”。把 very good 换成 rewarding、把 many things 换成 a variety of activities,分数提升远大于硬塞一个不认识的难词。
原则二:一篇作文的生词不超过三个。生词多了,搭配出错的风险成倍上升;已经准确的小词,比半懂不懂的大词更能得分。
原则三:词要为要点服务。第二段每个要点配一个“动词+名词”的准确搭配,例如 hold a workshop、reserve a seat、sign up at the office,比形容词堆砌有效得多。
【满分句型模板】
句型分三类,对应文章的三段:开篇要“亮”,一句就让人知道来意;中间要“实”,把活动和理由说清;结尾要“收”,把下一步交代明白。每类 20 句,按由简到繁排列,考前各挑 3 至 5 句练到能默写。
开篇亮“凤头”
表6 开篇句型 20 例
序号
句型(英文)
中文释义
使用提示
1
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of our school.
我是本校学生会主席李华。
自我介绍+身份,万能开篇第一句
2
I am writing to invite you to attend our English Speech Contest.
我写信是想邀请您参加我们的英语演讲比赛。
最直接的来意句,适合绝大多数题目
3
On behalf of our school, I would like to invite you to the Traditional Culture Festival.
我谨代表学校邀请您参加传统文化节。
代表集体发出邀请,语气正式
4
It is my great pleasure to invite you to our graduation ceremony.
非常荣幸邀请您参加我们的毕业典礼。
对长辈、嘉宾使用,礼貌度高
5
We are greatly honoured to have you as our guest at the opening ceremony.
能请您作为嘉宾出席开幕式,我们深感荣幸。
强调“嘉宾”身份,适合重要场合
6
I am writing to ask whether you would like to join us for a campus concert.
我写信是想问您是否愿意参加校园音乐会。
用 ask whether 委婉提出,适合朋友或平辈
7
Nothing would please us more than your presence at the exhibition.
没有什么比您出席展览更令我们高兴的了。
高级表达,适合开头第二句
8
Our school will hold a Science Festival next Friday, and we sincerely invite you to be our guest.
我校下周五将举办科技节,诚挚邀请您做我们的嘉宾。
先背景后邀请,衔接自然
9
Knowing that you are an expert in Chinese calligraphy, I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture.
得知您是书法专家,我写信邀请您给我们做讲座。
用 Knowing that 起句,交代邀请理由
10
I am delighted to inform you that our school is going to hold an art week.
很高兴通知您,我校将举办艺术周。
inform 后接 that 从句,正式得体
11
May I take the liberty of inviting you to our New Year's party?
恕我冒昧,能否邀请您参加我们的新年晚会?
极正式,适合邀请地位较高者
12
It would be an honour if you could attend our sports meeting.
如您能出席我们的运动会,我们将不胜荣幸。
虚拟语气,礼貌度极高
13
I am writing on behalf of Class 3 to invite you to our reading sharing session.
我代表三班写信邀请您参加读书分享会。
班级名义,适合班内活动
14
We would be much obliged if you could join us at the farewell party.
如您能参加欢送会,我们将十分感激。
be obliged 表感激,书面感强
15
Allow me to invite you, in the name of all the students, to our English corner.
允许我以全体学生的名义邀请您参加英语角。
in the name of 提升正式度
16
I am more than glad to invite you to the photo exhibition to be held in our school.
我非常高兴邀请您参加将在我校举办的摄影展。
to be held 作后置定语,简洁
17
Since you are fond of Chinese culture, I am sure this festival will interest you.
既然您喜爱中国文化,相信这个节日会让您感兴趣。
以对方兴趣切入,适合第二句
18
Here is a piece of good news for you: a cultural exchange meeting will be held in our school.
有个好消息告诉您:我校将举办文化交流会。
轻松开头,适合朋友之间
19
I am writing to extend a warm invitation to you on behalf of the Students' Union.
我代表学生会向您发出热情邀请。
extend an invitation 高级搭配
20
Please allow me to introduce our annual Campus Culture Week and invite you to its opening.
请允许我介绍我校一年一度的校园文化周,并邀请您参加开幕式。
先介绍后邀请,信息量大
中间有“猪肚”
表7 主体句型 20 例
序号
句型(英文)
中文释义
使用提示
1
The activity is scheduled to take place in the school auditorium from 2 to 5 p.m. next Saturday.
活动定于下周六下午两点到五点在报告厅举行。
交代时间地点,be scheduled to 正式
2
It will start with a short opening speech by our principal, followed by students' performances.
活动以校长简短致辞开始,随后是学生表演。
start with...followed by 写流程
3
During the festival, you will have the chance to try paper-cutting and taste traditional food.
节日期间您将有机会体验剪纸、品尝传统美食。
have the chance to 突出参与感
4
Not only will you enjoy excellent performances, but you will also learn about Chinese customs.
您不仅能欣赏精彩表演,还能了解中国习俗。
Not only 倒装,全文用一次即可
5
We have prepared a variety of activities, ranging from calligraphy to folk music.
我们准备了丰富的活动,从书法到民乐。
ranging from...to 列举,句式紧凑
6
What makes this contest special is that every participant will receive professional advice.
这次比赛的特别之处在于每位参赛者都能得到专业指导。
What 主语从句,突出亮点
7
As a well-known expert in this field, you are the very person we would like to hear from.
作为该领域知名专家,您正是我们想聆听的人。
给对方“非你不可”的理由
8
It is a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture in person.
这是您亲身感受中国文化的好机会。
形式主语,说明意义
9
Those who are interested are welcome to sign up at the Students' Union office before Friday.
有兴趣者欢迎在周五前到学生会办公室报名。
Those who 定语从句,交代报名方式
10
In addition to the exhibition, a workshop will be given by an experienced artist.
除展览外,还有一位经验丰富的艺术家开设工作坊。
In addition to 补充信息
11
The meeting will last about two hours, with a fifteen-minute break in between.
会议约持续两小时,中间休息十五分钟。
with 复合结构,信息密集
12
We would be grateful if you could share your experience with us at the meeting.
如您能在会上与我们分享经验,我们将不胜感激。
提出具体请求,语气委婉
13
You will be picked up at the school gate at 8 a.m. and shown around the campus.
早上八点会在校门口接您,并带您参观校园。
被动语态交代接待安排
14
Apart from the performance, there will be a prize-giving ceremony at the end.
除表演外,结尾还有颁奖仪式。
Apart from 补充流程
15
The theme of this year's festival is "Green Campus", which calls for everyone's participation.
今年节日主题是“绿色校园”,需要每个人参与。
which 从句点题,衔接自然
16
What impresses visitors most is the combination of tradition and modern technology.
最打动参观者的是传统与现代科技的融合。
What 从句写亮点,适合文化类
17
To make the event more enjoyable, we have invited several guest performers.
为让活动更精彩,我们邀请了几位嘉宾表演者。
不定式表目的,置于句首
18
Everyone present will receive a small gift as a token of our thanks.
到场每位都将收到一份小礼物,以表谢意。
as a token of 高级搭配
19
Since the seats are limited, an early reply would be highly appreciated.
因座位有限,尽早回复将不胜感激。
说明限制,推动对方回复
20
Should you need any further information, I will be glad to provide it.
若您需要更多信息,我很乐意提供。
Should 引导的倒装条件句,书面感强
结尾有“豹尾”
表8 结尾句型 20 例
序号
句型(英文)
中文释义
使用提示
1
I would appreciate it if you could reply by June 10.
如您能在六月十日前回复,我将不胜感激。
最标准的礼貌收尾句
2
Looking forward to your early reply.
期待您的早日回复。
简洁常用,适合正式与半正式
3
We are looking forward to seeing you at the opening ceremony.
期待在开幕式上见到您。
look forward to doing,注意动名词
4
Please let me know at your earliest convenience whether you can come.
请尽早告知您能否前来。
明确的确认请求
5
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 12345678.
如有问题,请随时致电 12345678 联系我。
留联系方式,feel free to 显礼貌
6
I do hope you can make it, and I am sure we will have a wonderful time together.
真心希望您能来,相信我们会共度美好时光。
do 表强调,语气真诚
7
Thank you for your time and consideration.
感谢您抽出时间并予以考虑。
正式场合收尾,稳重
8
Your presence will surely make the event more memorable.
您的到来定会让活动更加难忘。
强调对方价值,不显谄媚
9
Please reply at your convenience, and we will make all the necessary arrangements.
方便时请回复,我们会做好一切安排。
顺带交代后续安排
10
I am looking forward to the pleasure of your company.
期待您的光临。
极正式,适合邀请贵宾
11
We sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation.
我们真诚希望您能接受邀请。
直接表达期望
12
An early reply will be greatly appreciated, as we need to finalize the schedule.
因需最终确定日程,尽早回复将非常感谢。
给出理由,回复更有说服力
13
Should you be unable to come, please let me know so that we can make adjustments.
若您无法前来,请告知我们以便调整。
给对方留余地,得体
14
I can be reached at lihua@school.com if you need more details.
如需更多细节,可通过 lihua@school.com 联系我。
补充联系方式,避免与前句重复
15
Hope to see you there!
希望能在那儿见到你!
仅限朋友、同学,轻松口语
16
Looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
非常期待您的到来。
稍显书面,适合半正式
17
Thank you again for your kindness, and I hope to hear from you soon.
再次感谢您的好意,盼早日回复。
致谢+盼复,双重收尾
18
We would be honoured by your presence and grateful for your reply.
若您能出席我们将深感荣幸,并感谢您的回复。
并列结构,正式庄重
19
Please confirm your attendance before Friday so that we can reserve a seat for you.
请在周五前确认出席,以便为您预留座位。
把回复与具体安排挂钩
20
With best wishes for a pleasant weekend.
顺致周末愉快。
礼节性结束语,适合邮件
【高频避错清单】
下面 50 条来自真实考场与日常练习中最常出现的错误,按“搭配与介词—时态与一致—冠词与名词—语气与结构—格式与篇幅”的顺序排列。用法很简单:写作时不必逐条背,改成“写完对照”的检查表,逐条扫一遍,见到同类结构就停下来核对。
表9 邀请信高频避错 50 条
序号
错误表达
正确表达
错因
1
I am writing to invite you attend the meeting.
I am writing to invite you to attend the meeting.
invite sb to do sth,介词 to 不能省
2
Please reply me before Friday.
Please reply to me before Friday.
reply 作“回复”时不及物,须加 to
3
I look forward to hear from you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
look forward to 中 to 是介词,后接动名词
4
We will join in your activity.
We will join you in the activity.
join in 后不直接接活动名词,join sb in sth 更规范
5
The contest will be held in Friday morning.
The contest will be held on Friday morning.
具体某天的上下午用 on
6
The party begins on 7 o'clock.
The party begins at 7 o'clock.
钟点前用 at
7
Our school will hold a lecture in next week.
Our school will hold a lecture next week.
next/last 前不加介词
8
I am writing to invite you join our club.
I am writing to invite you to join our club.
invite sb to do,同第一条
9
We are looking forward to your come.
We are looking forward to your coming.
介词后接名词或动名词
10
She is responsible to organize the activity.
She is responsible for organizing the activity.
be responsible for doing sth
11
The activity is aimed to help students.
The activity is aimed at helping students.
be aimed at doing sth
12
We will provide you many information.
We will provide you with much information.
provide sb with sth;information 不可数
13
Please contact with me at 12345678.
Please contact me at 12345678.
contact 及物,不加 with
14
We will hold a meeting about the environment protection.
We will hold a meeting about environmental protection.
名词作定语修饰需用形容词形式
15
Thank you for your invite.
Thank you for your invitation.
invite 是动词,名词用 invitation
16
The activity will be taken place in the hall.
The activity will take place in the hall.
take place 不及物,无被动
17
Many students will took part in it.
Many students will take part in it.
will 后接动词原形
18
I have join many activities.
I have joined many activities.
现在完成时用过去分词
19
There will have a lot of guests.
There will be a lot of guests.
there be 句型,不能换用 have
20
The meeting was hold last week.
The meeting was held last week.
hold 的过去分词是 held
21
Every student are invited to the party.
Every student is invited to the party.
every+单数名词作主语,谓语用单数
22
The number of the participants are increasing.
The number of the participants is increasing.
the number of 作主语,谓语用单数
23
Neither the teacher nor the students is coming.
Neither the teacher nor the students are coming.
neither...nor 遵循就近原则
24
If you will come, please tell me.
If you come, please tell me.
条件状语从句用一般现在时表将来
25
I am writing to you since I want invite you.
I am writing to you since I want to invite you.
want 后接不定式,to 不可省
26
Our school is going to hold a English contest.
Our school is going to hold an English contest.
元音音素开头的词前用 an
27
I am the chairman of the Students Union.
I am the chairman of the Students' Union.
名词所有格漏撇号
28
We need many equipments.
We need much equipment.
equipment 不可数,用 much 修饰
29
Please give me some advices.
Please give me some advice.
advice 不可数
30
I'm writting to invite you.
I'm writing to invite you.
write 去 e 加 ing
31
We will have a 3-days holiday.
We will have a three-day holiday.
复合形容词中的名词用单数
32
The activity will last for two hours time.
The activity will last for two hours.
hours 后不再加 time
33
He is an honour guest.
He is a guest of honour.
“贵宾”固定搭配为 guest of honour
34
I very hope you can come.
I do hope you can come.
very 不能修饰动词,用 do 强调
35
We will hold an activity, you must come.
We will hold an activity, and we hope you can come.
逗号不能连接两个独立句;语气过硬
36
Please coming to our school on time.
Please come to our school on time.
祈使句用动词原形
37
I am writing to tell you a good thing.
I am writing to share some good news with you.
中文直译,英语惯用 share good news
38
Our school will hold an activity which is very interesting and very meaningful and very useful.
Our school will hold an activity which promises to be both interesting and rewarding.
重复堆砌 very,句式单调
39
Looking forward to your reply, and thank you.
I look forward to your reply. Thank you.
分词短语不能独立作谓语,句子成分残缺
40
I hope you can come and I hope you can reply me and I hope we will meet soon.
I hope you can come. Please reply at your convenience.
连续 I hope 排比,句式无变化
41
Dear Mr. Smith:
Dear Mr. Smith,
英文书信称呼后用逗号,不用冒号
42
Yours sincerely Li Hua
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
结束语与署名分两行,结束语后加逗号
43
You are welcome to our school and you will have a good time and we will be happy.
You are welcome to our school, where you will have a wonderful time.
流水句,缺主从结构
44
The reason why I invite you is because you are famous.
The reason why I invite you is that you are an expert in this field.
the reason is because 冗余;理由要具体
45
I am writing to invite you to attend our meeting. I am Li Hua.
I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to attend our meeting.
信息顺序颠倒,应先自我介绍
46
Please give me a reply in two days.
Please reply by Friday.
语气生硬;截止时间用 by 更清楚
47
We will be very honoured if you can coming.
We will be very honoured if you can come.
情态动词后接动词原形
48
If you don't come, we will be disappointed.
We would be sorry if you could not make it.
带胁迫意味,不得体
49
The letter has no punctuation and all sentences are joined together.
Break the text into sentences and vary long and short structures.
标点缺失、一句到底,可读性差
50
The composition is only 55 words.
Keep it between 70 and 100 words and develop each point in one sentence.
词数不足,要点未展开
【满分作文模板】
这一部分给出一份“成篇模板”。它和第二部分骨架的区别是:骨架只列功能位,模板把每个功能位都填成可选句式,并标注词数配额,套用时只需替换信息、删减冗余。
一、成篇模板(带占位符)
Dear [Mr. Smith / friends],
I am Li Hua, [身份:chairman of the Students' Union / a member of Class 3]. I am writing to invite you to [活动名称], which will be held [时间] in [地点].
The activity will begin with [环节一], followed by [环节二]. During the event, you will have the chance to [可参与的具体动作]. Besides, [亮点或安排], which will help you [对方收获]. It is a good opportunity for you to [意义].
I would appreciate it if you could [回复要求] by [截止时间]. If you need any further information, please feel free to contact me at [联系方式]. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
词数配额:第一段 30 词、第二段 40 词、第三段 18 词,称呼与署名不计。套用时先按配额写,写完再数一遍,超了就从第二段的修饰成分里删,缺了就在第二段补一个“对方收益”的短句。
二、逐段可替换句库
模板的价值在于“可换”。下面每组给四个变体,按对象和题目灵活选择;同一篇内同一功能只用一句,避免堆叠。
表10 三段功能句替换库
功能位
可选句式(择一)
身份自述
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. / I am Li Hua, a student from Class 3. / This is Li Hua, president of the English Club. / I am writing in the name of all the students of our class.
说明来意
I am writing to invite you to... / I am writing to extend a warm invitation to you. / On behalf of our school, I would like to invite you to... / It is my great pleasure to invite you to...
交代时间地点
The event is scheduled for 3 p.m. next Friday in the school hall. / It will take place from 9 to 11 a.m. on June 12 in Room 305. / The activity is to be held in the auditorium at 2 p.m. this Saturday. / We have booked the school hall for the whole afternoon of May 20.
活动流程
The activity will start with..., followed by... / It will open with... and end with... / The first half of the event is..., and the second half is... / We will begin with... before moving on to...
可参与内容
You will have the chance to... / You are welcome to try your hand at... / You can join us in... / You will be invited to take part in...
亮点与安排
Besides, ... will be given by... / What makes it special is that... / We have also prepared... for all the guests. / Another highlight is...
对方收益
It is a good opportunity for you to... / This will help you... / You will gain a better understanding of... / It will be a rewarding experience for you.
期待与回复
I would appreciate it if you could reply by... / Please let me know at your earliest convenience whether you can come. / An early reply would be greatly appreciated. / Looking forward to your reply.
联系方式
Please contact me at 12345678 or lihua@school.com. / You can reach me at the Students' Union office. / Feel free to call me if you need more details. / I am available at 138xxxx1234 after class.
结尾致谢
Thank you for your time and consideration. / Your presence will surely make the event more memorable. / Thank you again, and I hope to hear from you soon. / With best wishes.
三、模板使用的三条纪律
第一,模板的句子必须“落地”。保留 which will be held、followed by 这类结构性成分,替换的必须是具体信息;一篇通篇只有 our school will hold an activity 的作文,即使句式正确也只能落在中档。
第二,模板不能盖过题目。题目若要求“介绍活动意义”“说明报名方式”,模板里没有对应句,就必须自己补,不能为了套模板而漏要点。
第三,模板只能用一次同一功能句。有些同学把 I would appreciate it if... 在第一段和第三段各用一次,看似礼貌,实则暴露句式单一。同一功能句在全文出现一次即可。
【模板示例】
下面两篇示例分别对应“正式语气”与“轻松语气”两种典型场景。每篇之后附逐句标注,说明每一句承担哪个功能位,便于对照模板拆解。读的时候先看标注,再回读原文,最后遮住原文按标注自己复述一遍。
一、邀请外教参加校园英语周开幕式(正式语气)
情境:假定你是李华,你校将举办英语周。请给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,邀请他出席开幕式并致辞,同时告知活动时间、地点和其他安排。
参考范文:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I am writing to invite you to the opening ceremony of our English Week, which will be held at 9 a.m. on Monday, May 12, in the school hall.
The ceremony will begin with a short speech by our principal, followed by students' performances in English. We would be greatly honoured if you could say a few words to open the week, as your encouragement means a lot to us. During the week, there will also be a speech contest, a film show and an English corner, and you are welcome to join any of them.
I would appreciate it if you could reply by May 8 so that we can arrange the programme. If you need any further information, please contact me at lihua@school.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
表11 示例一逐句功能标注
序号
位置
功能
对应模板位置
1
第一段第 1 句
自我介绍+身份
对应模板「I am [身份]」
2
第一段第 2 句
写信目的+活动+时间地点(which 定语从句)
对应模板「I am writing to invite you to..., which will be held...」
3
第二段第 1 句
活动流程(start with...followed by)
对应模板「活动流程」功能位
4
第二段第 2 句
具体请求+对方价值(would be honoured if...)
对应模板「亮点与安排」,同时完成“致辞”这一要点
5
第二段第 3 句
补充安排(there will also be...)
对应模板「补充信息」,避免要点单薄
6
第三段第 1 句
礼貌请求+截止时间+理由
对应模板「期待与回复」
7
第三段第 2 句
联系方式
对应模板「联系方式」
二、邀请朋友参加校园音乐会(轻松语气)
情境:假定你是李华,校音乐社将于本周六晚举办校园音乐会。请给你校交换生朋友 Anna 写一封邮件,邀请她参加,并简要介绍演出内容。
参考范文:
Dear Anna,
Our music club is giving a concert this Saturday evening, and I'm writing to ask if you'd like to come with me.
The concert will start at 7 p.m. in the school hall and will last about two hours. The school band will play several songs, and two students will sing Chinese folk songs. You'll also hear a piano piece by our music teacher. I'm sure you'll enjoy it, even if you don't know all the words. After the show, we can go for a walk along the river and talk about the music.
Just let me know before Friday if you can make it. I'll save a seat for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
表12 示例二逐句功能标注
序号
位置
功能
对应模板位置
1
第一段
背景+邀请(I'm writing to ask if you'd like to...)
朋友语气:不用 invite you to attend,改用 ask if you'd like to
2
第二段第 1 句
时间地点与时长
信息仍然齐全,只是句式更口语
3
第二段第 2–3 句
演出内容(具体到乐队、民歌、钢琴)
用具体内容替代空泛的“精彩表演”
4
第二段第 4 句
对方感受(I'm sure you'll enjoy it)
朋友间可直接表达判断,不必用 I would appreciate it
5
第三段
截止时间+承诺(I'll save a seat for you!)
轻松收尾,用感叹号增强亲切感
前面的模板、词句都是“零件”,这一部分讲“装配顺序”。考试时间有限,写作要按固定动作走,才不会临场乱。
一、审题四步:先定四件事,再动笔
第一步定身份:题目给你的头衔是什么,能代表谁。第二步定对象:写给谁,决定语气与称呼。第三步定要点:把三条中文要点改写成三个英文“信息块”,每块一句话的关键词先写下来。第四步定语域:正式还是轻松,通篇不换调。
这四步大约花两分钟。很多低分作文不是不会写,而是写偏了:身份写成“学生会干事”、对象写成“亲爱的同学”却通篇用敬语、三条要点只落实两条。审题两分钟,胜过返工十分钟。
二、要点扩展三法:把短语变成句子
题目给的要点往往只有四五个字,直接翻译成英文只有半句,必须扩展。方法一是加细节:把“活动内容丰富”扩成“有剪纸、书法、民乐三个环节”。方法二是加效果:补一句“这能让你更直观地感受中国文化”。方法三是加安排:说明时间、地点、报名方式、接送安排。三种方法各用一次,三条要点就能自然撑满第二段。
扩展时守住一条线:所有补充信息必须是“合理的常识”,不能编造具体数字、专有名称或对方说过的话。写“将在学校礼堂举行”是合理的,写“将有 328 人参加”就是自找风险。
三、语言升级三法:从“对”到“好”
第一法换词:把 good 换成 rewarding,把 very important 换成 essential,把 many 换成 a variety of。第二法换句:把两个简单句合并成定语从句或分词结构,例如把 “The festival will be held next week. It will last three days.” 合成 “The festival, which will last three days, will be held next week.”。第三法加衔接:在段内加一处 Besides 或 What's more,在段间用第一段的 which 从句自然过渡到第二段。
升级要有节制。一篇 80 词的短文,一处定语从句、一处倒装或形式主语、两三个精准形容词,就已经够亮;处处长句反而容易出错,也会让阅卷人读得吃力。
四、五分钟检查清单
表13 交卷前五分钟检查清单
顺序
检查什么
怎么改
1
要点是否三条齐全
对照题干逐条划线,缺哪条就在第二段补一句,不要挤进结尾
2
时态是否统一
圈出所有动词,未发生的活动统一为将来时或一般现在时表将来
3
介词与搭配
重点查 invite sb to do、attend、participate in、reply to、look forward to doing
4
冠词与单复数
an English contest、much information、two hours、a three-day holiday
5
书信格式
称呼后逗号、结束语与署名分行、署名右下、段首缩进统一
6
词数与卷面
数一遍词数(70–100),确认没有大面积涂改、没有超出答题区
最后提醒一句:检查时优先改“硬错”(时态、搭配、拼写、要点遗漏),不要花时间把已经正确的句子改写得更花哨。考场上的每一分钟,都应该用来减少失分,而不是增加风险。
以下 15 题覆盖邀请信的主要场景:校内活动、对外交流、专家邀请、家校沟通、社区服务、节日文化。建议按“限时 20 分钟独立写作—对照范文—标注差距—重写一遍”的四步使用,不要只是阅读。参考范文均约 150 词,比考试要求的 80 词更长,目的是提供更完整的句式和衔接样本;实际答题时按题目词数要求压缩,保留三段结构与核心句即可。
一、写作题与参考范文
题目 1 | 假定你是李华,你校将举办传统文化节。请给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,邀请他参加,并介绍活动的时间、地点和主要内容。
写作要点:身份+活动名称;时间地点;活动内容(剪纸、书法、民乐等);期待回复
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I am writing to invite you to our Traditional Culture Festival, which will be held in the school hall from 2 to 5 p.m. on Friday, May 20.
The festival will begin with a short opening speech, followed by paper-cutting and calligraphy workshops. You will have the chance to try your hand at making lanterns and taste traditional food such as dumplings and mooncakes. Besides, a folk music concert will be given in the evening, which we believe will help you understand Chinese culture better. About 200 students and teachers will attend, and every guest will receive a small gift.
I would appreciate it if you could reply by May 15 so that we can reserve a seat for you. If you need any further information, please contact me at lihua@school.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目 2 | 假定你是李华,你校将与英国友好学校的学生举行线上文化交流会。请给对方学生代表 Chris 写一封邮件,邀请他参加并介绍会议安排。
写作要点:线上会议时间;交流内容(校园生活、节日);互动环节;参会方式
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Chris,
I am Li Hua, a member of the Students' Union. I am writing to invite you to an online cultural exchange meeting, which will be held from 3 to 5 p.m. next Saturday.
The meeting will start with short self-introductions, followed by presentations on school life in our two countries. You will have the chance to share your favourite festivals and ask questions about Chinese customs. Besides, our students will show you how to make paper cuttings, and we hope this will bring us closer. Last term, students from both schools talked about music and food, and everyone found the discussion inspiring. You can also ask our teachers about Chinese school life.
Please let me know at your earliest convenience whether you can join us. The meeting link will be sent to you by email. Looking forward to seeing you online.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目 3 | 假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将于周五下午举办英语演讲比赛。请给你的同学 Peter 写一封邮件,邀请他参赛。
写作要点:比赛时间地点;主题与规则;奖品;报名截止时间
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Peter,
Our school is going to hold an English speech contest on Friday afternoon, and I'm writing to ask you to join us.
The contest will take place in the school hall at 2 p.m. Each speaker will have five minutes to talk about "My Dream". You are good at speaking in public, so I'm sure you will do a great job. Besides, the top three winners will receive books and certificates, and everyone will get some useful advice from our English teachers. Last year's winner said the contest helped her feel much more confident in front of others. If you need a topic list, I can send it to you. The whole school will watch the final. I am sure we will have a great time.
Hope you can make it! Just let me know before Wednesday if you'd like to sign up.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目 4 | 假定你是李华,是三班班长。学校将举办家长开放日,请给家长写一封邀请信,介绍当天的安排。
写作要点:开放日时间;上午听课;中午就餐;下午家长会;回复方式
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear parents,
I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 3. I am writing to invite you to our School Open Day, which will be held from 9 a.m. to 3 p.m. on Friday, June 10.
During the day, you will visit our classrooms and watch two lessons given by our teachers. At noon, you can have lunch with us in the school canteen. In the afternoon, a parents' meeting will be held in the hall, where our headmaster will introduce the new term plan and answer your questions. You will also see an exhibition of students' works in the library. We hope you can come and see how your children are doing at school. It will be a good chance for us to talk face to face.
Please reply by June 8 so that we can prepare enough seats and lunch. If you have any questions, feel free to call me at 12345678.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目 5 | 假定你是李华,校学生会主席。学校想请职业规划专家王教授来校做讲座,请给他写一封邀请信。
写作要点:讲座主题;时间地点与时长;听众;问答环节;交通安排
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Professor Wang,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of No. 1 Middle School. I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture on career planning.
The lecture is scheduled for 3 p.m. next Tuesday in the school hall and will last about one hour. About 300 senior students will attend, as they are eager to know how to choose a major and what skills they will need for the future. After the lecture, we would be grateful if you could answer some of their questions. Many of them are unsure about their future, and your advice would be very helpful. The school will send a car to pick you up at 2 p.m. We will also prepare a small gift for you.
Would it be convenient for you to come? Please let me know by Friday. We will arrange transport if necessary. Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目 6 | 假定你是李华,你班将举办中秋晚会。请给班里的交换生 Anna 写一封邮件,邀请她参加。
写作要点:晚会时间地点;节日介绍;做月饼与学唱中文歌;赏月
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Anna,
I am Li Hua, your Chinese classmate. I am writing to invite you to our Mid-Autumn Festival party, which will be held on the playground from 7 to 9 p.m. next Friday.
The party will begin with a short introduction to the festival, followed by games and performances. You will have the chance to make mooncakes with us and learn a Chinese song. Besides, we will watch the full moon together and share stories about our families, which we hope will make you feel at home. Last year, every exchange student said the party made them feel less homesick. We will also take photos together under the moon. Please bring a warm jacket, as it may be cold at night. I hope you can join us.
Please let me know if you can come before Wednesday. I'm sure you will have a wonderful time.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目 7 | 假定你是李华,社区志愿者。社区将组织周末环保清洁活动,请给社区居民写一封邀请信。
写作要点:活动时间地点;垃圾分类讲解;分组清洁;旧电池回收;报名方式
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear neighbours,
I am Li Hua, a volunteer from the Students' Union. I am writing to invite you to our weekend clean-up activity, which will take place in Green Park from 8 to 11 a.m. this Saturday.
We will start with a short talk about waste sorting, followed by group work. You will be given gloves and bags, and each group will be in charge of a small area. Besides, students will set up a booth to show residents how to recycle old batteries and bottles. It is a good opportunity for us to make our community cleaner and greener. Last year, more than 100 residents joined us, and the park looked much cleaner afterwards. Children are welcome too, as long as they come with an adult.
Those who are interested can sign up at the community office before Thursday. We look forward to your support.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目 8 | 假定你是李华,你校下周将举行运动会。请给你初中时的朋友 Tom 写一封邮件,邀请他来观看。
写作要点:运动会时间地点;比赛项目;你的参赛项目;乐队表演;入校手续
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Tom,
Our school sports meeting will be held next week, and I'd like to invite you to come and watch it with me.
The meeting will take place on our playground from 8 a.m. to 4 p.m. on Thursday and Friday. There will be running races, a long jump and a relay, and I will be in the 400-metre race on Friday morning. Besides, our school band will give a short performance at noon, and you can try some snacks at the food stands. Last year, the relay was the most exciting part, and the whole playground was full of cheers. I really hope you can be there, and we can have lunch together afterwards. It will be great fun.
Come and cheer for me if you can! Just tell me before Wednesday so that I can get a visitor pass for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目 9 | 假定你是李华,你校七月将举办夏令营。请给你的笔友 David 写一封邮件,邀请他参加。
写作要点:夏令营时间与地点;上午课程;下午选修;外出参观;费用与回复时间
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear David,
I am glad to tell you that our school will hold a summer camp in July, and I am writing to invite you to join us.
The camp will last five days, from July 10 to 14, on our campus. In the mornings, we will have English classes and group discussions. In the afternoons, you can choose art, music or sports. Besides, we will visit a local museum and a traditional village, which will help you learn more about Chinese life. You will stay with a host family, so you can practise English all day. In the evenings, we will have campfires and share stories. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you. I can book a place for you if you decide to come.
The cost is 200 yuan, including meals and accommodation. Please let me know by June 20 if you are interested.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目 10 | 假定你是李华,科技社社长。学校将举办科技节,请给人工智能专家李教授写一封邀请信,请他出席并做简短报告。
写作要点:科技节时间地点;学生项目展示;邀请理由;报告主题;回复时间
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Professor Li,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Science Club. I am writing to invite you to our Science Festival, which will open at 9 a.m. on May 25 in the school auditorium.
The festival will start with a robot show prepared by our students, followed by a science fair. You will see more than thirty projects on energy, water and recycling. We would be honoured if you could give a short talk on artificial intelligence, as your research is exactly what our students are curious about. Last year, one of our projects won a city award. The talk would take about twenty minutes, and students will have time to ask questions. We will also show you around our new science lab.
Please let us know at your earliest convenience whether you can come. We will take care of all the arrangements.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目 11 | 假定你是李华,你校将迎来建校六十周年校庆。请给校友陈先生写一封邀请信。
写作要点:校庆日期;上午庆典;下午参观旧教室、见老师;晚上晚会;回复时间
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Mr. Chen,
I am Li Hua, a student of No. 1 Middle School. On behalf of our school, I am writing to invite you to our 60th anniversary celebration.
The celebration will be held on October 18. In the morning, there will be a ceremony in the school hall, where former students will share their stories. In the afternoon, you can visit your old classrooms and meet your former teachers. In the evening, a gala will be given by the students. Sixty years ago, our school had only one building; today it has become one of the best in the city. We would love to hear your stories of the old days. Old photos and letters will be on show in the library.
Your presence would mean a lot to us. Please reply by October 1 so that we can arrange your seat and a school tour.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目 12 | 假定你是李华,中华文化社成员。社团将举办书法工作坊,请给留学生 Maria 写一封邮件,邀请她参加。
写作要点:工作坊时间地点;汉字介绍;握笔与书写练习;写中文名字留念
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Maria,
I am Li Hua, a member of the Chinese Culture Club. I am writing to invite you to a calligraphy workshop, which will be held in Room 305 from 4 to 6 p.m. next Wednesday.
The workshop will start with a short introduction to Chinese characters, followed by practice. An art teacher will show you how to hold the brush and write simple words. You will also have the chance to write your Chinese name on a paper fan and take it home. No experience is needed, and the teacher will help you step by step. Many exchange students found it a relaxing way to learn Chinese. You can keep the fan as a souvenir. Please come a few minutes early.
We have prepared all the materials, so you just need to come. Please let me know by Monday if you can join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目 13 | 假定你是李华,三班班长。班级读书会将于周五举办分享会,请给同学们写一封邀请信。
写作要点:分享会时间地点;学生分享书目;小组讨论;教师阅读建议;报名方式
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear classmates,
I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 3. Our reading club will hold a sharing session this Friday, and I am writing to invite you to join us.
The session will take place in the school library from 4 to 5:30 p.m. Five students will talk about their favourite books, and then we will discuss in small groups. You can bring a book you love and explain why it is worth reading. Besides, our Chinese teacher will give some advice on how to read more effectively. Last term, more than forty students joined, and several of them still keep in touch. You do not have to prepare anything unless you want to speak. Tea and snacks will be provided after the discussion. I am looking forward to your ideas.
Everyone is welcome. Please tell me before Thursday if you would like to speak.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目 14 | 假定你是李华,学生会主席。学校将为任教一年的外教 Ms. Green 举办欢送会,请给另一位外教 Mr. Brown 写一封邀请信。
写作要点:欢送会时间地点;回顾视频;学生表演;赠送礼物;请他致辞
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I am writing to invite you to the farewell party for our exchange teacher Ms. Green, which will be held at 6 p.m. this Friday in the school hall.
The party will begin with a video of the past year, followed by students' performances. You will hear songs, see short plays and enjoy a photo show of our English classes. Besides, we have prepared a special gift for her, and we hope you will say a few words at the party. Ms. Green has taught us for a whole year, and we all want to thank her properly. Many of her former students will come back for the evening. It will be a warm evening.
It would be wonderful to have you with us. Please let me know by Thursday whether you can come.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目 15 | 假定你是李华,摄影社成员。社团将举办校园摄影展,请给你的朋友 Lucy 写一封邮件,邀请她参观。
写作要点:展览时间地点;展出作品;摄影讲座;约好同行
参考范文(约 150 词):
Dear Lucy,
Our photography club will hold an exhibition next week, and I am writing to invite you to come.
The exhibition will open at 9 a.m. on Monday in the school gallery and will last five days. More than a hundred photos taken by students will be on show, including pictures of our campus, our city and our trips. Besides, two photographers will give short talks on Saturday afternoon and show how to take good pictures with a phone. Last year, more than 2,000 visitors came, and the best photos were printed in our school magazine. We can meet at the school gate at 8:45. The exhibition is free for students. I am free on Monday afternoon if that suits you.
I know you love photography, so I am sure you will enjoy it. Let me know if you can come and we can go together.
Yours,
Li Hua
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