读后续写 A Puppy for Poppy 课件-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

A Puppy for Poppy Continuation Writing 1 Interpretation of the Text “I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy, ” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him. His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least.The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed. The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said, I’ll see you back hom P1 P2 P3 Main idea(P1-3) The boy went to the university, and the boy’s parents and Poppy saw him off. 1 Interpretation of the Text home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, “Okay. Poppy, time to go back home.” The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn't. They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats.They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, "What should we do to cheer Poppy up?" asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”hom P4 P5 Main idea(P4) After the boy’s leaving, his parents and Poppy all felt sad. 1 Interpretation of the Text wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We've tried everything.” “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,”smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let's get a little dog for Poppy.” It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell. P6 P7 Main idea(P5-7) The boy’s parents tried to cheer Poppy up, so they got a little dog for Poppy. 1 Key Elements of the Story Time(when) Place(where) Characters(who) Conflict(what) Reason(why) Action(how) after the boy went to the university at home the boy, the boy’s parents, Poppy, a little dog Poppy felt frustrated and the boy’s parents brought a little dog to cheer her up the boy left for the university ? 1 Plots and Emotions The family drove the boy to the university The boy said goodbye to his parents and Poppy Poppy didn’t seem interested in everything after returning home The boy’s parents brought a little doy for Poppy How could the story develop then? They weren’t quite able to keep their emotions under control All of them were reluctant to say good bye Poppy was sad, so did the boy’s parents What would be Poppy’s reaction? 1 Para1 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Para2 A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. What was Poppy’s reaction to the little dog? How did Poppy get along with the little dog? How did parents feel? 3衔接 2过渡 1升华 How did the big family welcome the boy? What was the boy’s reaction? How was the family atmosphere when the big family gathered together? Make a Prediction 1 Make a Prediction Para1 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Para2 A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. Poppy was excited to see the little dog. Poppy and the little dog got along well with each other. The parents felt moved and they expected the boy’s back. They hugged each other. The boy was surprised and happy to see the little dog. The big house was full of happiness and love. 1 句式提升 1. 词的积累(表达情感变化的形容词/名词) 情绪 形容词 名词 惊喜 surprised,amazed,astonished surprise,amazement,astonishment 愤怒 angry,furious anger,rage 悲伤 sad,sorry,bitter,upset sadness,sorrow,grief 害怕 dreaded,nervous,frightened fear,terror,horror 困惑 puzzled,confused puzzlement 满意 satisfied,contented satisfication,contentment 感动 moved,touched,warm a warm current 失望 disappointed,frustrated disappointment,frustration 1 句式提升 2. 亮点句型 ① 形容词或分词短语作状语 ② 动作链 ③ 独立主格 ④ with复合结构 ⑤ 从句(名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句) ⑥ 无灵主语句 ⑦ 虚拟语气 ⑧ 强调句 ⑨ 倒装句 ⑩ 感叹句 1 句式提升 动作链：在描写动作时，要学会细化动作，把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作(2—3个动作)，形成动作链，写出动作的连贯性，使描写具有画面感，使人物更立体。 句式：①主语+V1, V2 and V3 ②主语+V1 and V2，非谓语动词 /非谓语动词, 主语＋V1 and V2 ③主句，非谓语动词+and+非谓语动词 原句呈现: He stood up, hugged his parents and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him. 1 句式提升 无灵主语句=无灵主语+有灵动词 “无灵主语”常用来表示抽象概念、心理感觉、事物名称或时间地点等，谓语动词却常用“有灵动词”表达人或社会团体的动作和行为，如seize/take hold of sb(抓住)，sweep/flood over(席卷)，deprive... of (剥夺), swallow(吞噬)，choke(使哽咽/说不出话)，flood into /well up (涌入/涌出)等，这类句子往往带有拟人化的修辞色彩。 e.g. Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech. 我惊讶得说不出话来。 1 Possible Version Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.With a curious look in her eyes, the little dog tried to climb out but fell onto her back. When Poppy kept her eyes glued to the cute little fellow, she froze in amazement. Then she wagged her tail and barked with joy, with her eyes shining with excitement. At that moment, it seemed as if she had cast off the shadow(摆脱阴影). The little dog was not shy and immediately started barking and joyfully jumping around the older dog. It didn’t take long before the two played around the house,cheerfully chasing each other with boundless enthusiasm. 1 Possible Version A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He missed his beloved Poppy, longing to be reunited with her.When he swept his arms wide to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise when a small dog came racing up to lick his face too.“Oh my god,who is this?” the boy cried with his eyes fixed on his parents. His parents exchanged glances and laughed out loud/burst out laughing. “That’s Peewee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe you got yourselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mom. “This puppy is for Poppy!” Despite the chilly autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion. 1 Possible Version Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy’s tail wagged even faster. Meanwhile, a warm glow of satisfaction appeared on Poppy's face(无灵主语句). Gradually, Poppy calmed down and watched the little puppy with tenderness, as if she were a dedicated mother(虚拟语气). The little puppy returned Poppy's love with affection of his own, walking slowly and leaning on her(动作链). The parents were moved to tears by the sweetness of the dogs, mixed with their expectation for their sons' return(过去分词短语作伴随状语). 1 Possible Version A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He missed his beloved Poppy, longing to be reunited with her(现在分词短语作状语). When he swept his arms wide to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too.“Oh my god, who is this?” the boy cried with his eyes fixed on his parents(with复合结构). His parents exchanged glances and burst out laughing.“This puppy is for Poppy, ”said Dad. Smiling ever so bright(笑得更加灿烂), they hugged each other tightly. Despite the chilly autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion. Thank You! $$