读后续写 邻居的歌声：从噪音到生命赞歌的蜕变 讲义 2025届安徽省皖江名校高三下学期5月联考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I had been in a bad mood since my new neighbor moved in.I often typed articles on my computer,but nosooner had I become inspired to write than I could hear a girl singing next door.She always sang this song:"However hard the winds blow,you won't get lost anymore with my company…"

She didn't sing well,and she was even out of tune,so it was real noise pollution for me.Sometimes,when I was just about to write,she started singing.This happened over and over.How could I keep my spiritsup and go on writing?

One day,I sat down in front of the computer and heard the girl singing again.It was too no1sy anddisturbed my thoughts.I had my husband go to complain about the noise.Ten minutes later,my husband cameback with a sad look,saying:“That girl is only 17,but she's badly ill.”

I was taken aback by his words.“Her mother said that the more painful it is,the louder her daughtersings.The sirging helps her reduce her pain,”my husband continued.“Her poor mother begged our pardonagain and again for her daughter interrupting us.”

I felt truly sorry for what I had done before.From that day on,I no longer thought the girl was doinganything wrong,and even got used to her singing.I felt it was like sniffing(闻到)the smell of sunlight andwatching the flowers and plants.Her voice had become a part of my daily routine,a bittersweet reminder of thestruggles others faced.

Afterward,I left home on business.My husband phoned me one day and told me that the girl had been inhospital and become hairless after receiving chemotherapy treatment(化疗).When I relurned home a monthlater,I couldn't help feeling that something was missing:I could no longer hear the girl next door sing.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

One afternoon,I made a decision to do something myself.

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As I left the hospital,I felt a sense of gratitude and hope.

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一、续写分析​

第一段续写分析

第一段以 “我” 决定行动开篇，核心围绕 “我” 前往医院探望女孩，展现情感的深化与心灵的触动。“我” 精心挑选了一束鲜花和励志书籍，带着愧疚与关切来到医院。走进病房，看到女孩因化疗变得虚弱憔悴、头发脱落，却仍用微弱的声音哼着熟悉的歌曲，“我” 内心被深深震撼。“我” 主动向女孩和她母亲表达歉意，并真诚地倾诉这些日子来她的歌声对自己的影响，从最初的厌烦到如今的依赖与感激。女孩眼中闪烁着感动的光芒，与 “我” 分享她用歌声对抗病痛的信念，我们的对话充满温情与力量，为第二段的情感升华做铺垫。​

第二段续写分析​

第二段以 “我” 离开医院的感受为切入点，重点突出 “我” 的感悟和成长，以及对生活的新认知。离开医院时，夕阳的余晖洒在身上，“我” 的内心满是感恩与希望。“我” 意识到女孩用歌声传递的不仅是对抗病痛的勇气，更是对生命的热爱与不屈。这份坚韧让 “我” 反思自己以往因琐事抱怨的行为，学会珍惜平凡生活中的美好。此后，“我” 以更加积极乐观的态度面对生活，主动关心身边的人，并将女孩的故事分享给他人，希望这份希望与温暖能够传递下去，使故事主旨得到升华 。​

二、故事线​

矛盾产生线：新邻居女孩唱歌跑调，干扰 “我” 写作，引发 “我” 的不满与抱怨。​

真相揭示线：丈夫告知女孩身患重病，唱歌是为缓解疼痛，“我” 得知真相后感到愧疚。​

情感转变线：“我” 从厌烦女孩歌声转变为习惯并接受，歌声成为生活的一部分。​

意外变化线：女孩住院化疗，头发脱落，“我” 回家后再也听不到歌声，心中若有所失。​

温暖行动线：“我” 决定探望女孩，在医院收获感动，离开后获得感悟并传递温暖。​

三、短语积累​

in a bad mood：心情不好​

no sooner...than...：一…… 就……​

out of tune：走调，跑调​

noise pollution：噪音污染​

complain about：抱怨​

be taken aback：大吃一惊​

reduce one's pain：减轻某人的痛苦​

beg one's pardon：请求某人原谅​

get used to：习惯于​

a part of：…… 的一部分​

on business：出差​

chemotherapy treatment：化疗​

make a decision：做决定​

a sense of gratitude：感激之情​

pass on：传递​

四、主旨升华句​

Sometimes, the most annoying noises can transform into the most powerful symphonies of resilience when we understand the stories behind them.（有时候，当我们了解背后的故事，那些最令人烦躁的噪音也能变成最有力的坚韧交响曲。）​

Life’s unexpected encounters teach us that empathy and understanding can turn irritation into appreciation, and hardship into inspiration.（生活中意外的相遇教会我们，共情与理解能将恼怒化为欣赏，把困境变为激励。）​

In the face of true suffering, our petty grievances fade away, reminding us to cherish every moment and find beauty in the simplest of things.（在真正的苦难面前，我们的琐碎抱怨会消散，这提醒我们要珍惜每一刻，在平凡中发现美好。）​

A stranger’s struggle can become a mirror reflecting our own capacity for compassion and the strength to overcome life’s challenges.（一个陌生人的抗争可以成为一面镜子，映照出我们自身的共情能力和战胜生活挑战的力量。）​

The girl’s song, once a source of annoyance, became a timeless melody that taught us the profound lesson: hope and courage can bloom even in the harshest storms of life.（女孩的歌声，曾经是烦恼的源头，却成为了一首永恒的旋律，教会我们深刻的道理：即使在生活最猛烈的风暴中，希望与勇气也能绽放。）​

五、写作示范​

范文一​

One afternoon, I made a decision to do something myself. I bought a bouquet of