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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was already hot and humid at eight on that July morning. With a cup of coffee in front of me, I sat at the kitchen table and planned my day: take out some cash at the bank and maybe go to the mall to shop for a new pair of sneakers.

Around 9 o' clock, I grabbed my purse, said goodbye to my daughter: Fawn, and headed for the car. The bark was two miles from the house. I pulled into a space in front of the glass enclosed ATM machine. I hopped out of the car with the engine running and the air conditioner on.

The ATM machine sucked in my card and asked for my PIN number. I typed it in.

When I got the cash, I went to the car and tugged（拉）on the door handle. If ever I had an uh-oh moment, it was then. The door was locked, and the key was in the car. !

The sun was beating down on me while I stood discouraged, wondering what to do. I didn't like the thought of a two-mile hike back to the house to get the spare set of keys.

I entered the bank and took a deep breath of cool air before approaching a teller window.  The young woman who greeted me listened sympathetically as I told her my problem. When I asked if I could make a call, she cheerfully showed me to the end of the counter and pushed a telephone across the polished surface.

"Hello, Fawn," I said when my daughter. answered. "I locked my key in the car at the bank, and the engine is running. Would you bring me the spare set, please?" Fawn wouldn't be able to help for a while. I hung up and relayed my dilemma to the young woman.

"You' re Fawn's mother?" she asked, sounding a bit apologetic for listening in on my conversation. "Yes, I am."

Her face lit up. "I'm Carmen. Fawn and I often work out in the same gym. She's a wonderful person. You must be an awesome mom."

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Carmen pulled out a set of keys,  and held them toward me.

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Fifteen minutes later I returned with Carmen's new car, my spare keys and my daughter.

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1. 续写分析​

第一段续写分析​

第一段以 “Carmen pulled out a set of keys, and held them toward me.” 开头，重点应放在卡门提出帮助 “我” 的具体行动和两人的互动上。可以描述卡门主动提出开车送 “我” 回家拿备用钥匙，展现她的热情善良；通过 “我” 的惊讶、感激与推辞，突出卡门的坚持；还能加入两人在路上的交谈，增进彼此了解，为后续情节铺垫。例如：卡门详细询问 “我” 家的位置，分享她和女儿在健身房的趣事，缓解 “我” 焦急的心情 。​

第二段续写分析​

第二段开头为 “Fifteen minutes later I returned with Carmen's new car, my spare keys and my daughter.”，续写时可围绕归还车辆、表达感谢展开。可以描写女儿对卡门的夸赞，三人之间温馨的对话，以及 “我” 内心的感动；也可进一步升华主题，如 “我” 决定传递这份善意，在生活中主动帮助他人，让温暖延续 。比如：“我” 邀请卡门到家里做客，大家一起喝下午茶，畅谈生活，使这段因意外建立的情谊更加深厚 。​

2. 故事线​

意外发生：七月炎热的早晨，“我” 出门去银行取钱，因粗心将钥匙锁在车内，发动机还在运转，陷入困境。​

寻求帮助：无奈之下，“我” 走进银行向柜员卡门求助，打电话给女儿却得知她暂时无法帮忙，陷入两难。​

善意相助：卡门得知 “我” 是她健身房好友小鹿的妈妈后，主动拿出车钥匙，提出开车送 “我” 回家拿备用钥匙。​

顺利解决：十五分钟后，“我” 带着备用钥匙、女儿以及卡门的车返回银行，问题得以解决。​

温暖延续：“我” 和女儿对卡门表达感激，这段经历让 “我” 感受到陌生人的善意，决心传递这份温暖 。

3. 短语​

take out cash：取钱​

grab one's purse：抓起某人的钱包​

pull into：驶入​

hop out of：跳下车​

be locked in：被锁在…… 里面​