2024届广东省深圳一模读后读写：报道的真实性 课件

fake news is often sensational by design sensational：炸裂的、哗众取宠的🤯 核实 verify fact check readership sensational story fake news credibility true news tell truth integrity 标题党 假新闻 谣言 rumor 公信力 调查 investigate credibility crisis clickbait “He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!”Ashley cried. We hurried back to the newsroom, agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline“Deerfield Stole Perry.” “This is just the story we need. Everyone will read it,”Ashley said confidently. 思考：Ashley有没有先fact check？ To my surprise, Ashley insisted on reporting the “Deerfield Stole Perry” story. 思考：我为什么会surprise？ Ashley为什么要坚持？（要交代原因）Ashley错在哪？ What possible consequences a fake news would lead to? Erosion(erode,侵蚀) of the Newspaper’s Credibility(公信力) If Unverified (No Fact-Checking) If Fact-Checked Accused Deerfield player faces cyberbullying Truthful Reporting:  Community shares heartfelt farewells Students organize protests against Deerfield Constructive Engagement: Students share their memories; strenghten bonding Lost Credibility: readership stays low Earned Trust: readership goes up; builds long-term trust within readers 核实 verify fact check readership sensational story fake news credibility true news tell truth integrity 标题党 假新闻 谣言 rumor 公信力 调查 investigate credibility crisis 如何在写作中运用这些词？ Paragraph 1 (争议与决策) To my surprise, Ashley insisted on reporting the “Deerfield Stole Perry” story. “This sensational headline will triple our readership overnight!” she claimed. I stepped forward, urging her to fact-check first. “Writing fake news betrays journalistic integrity,” I argued. Ashley’s confidence wavered. I pressed on: “Credibility is hard to build once it is lost.” She sighed, staring at Perry’s empty cage. “Fine. Let’s give Perry the farewell he deserves.” We began gathering photos and stories of his journey—from pep rally dances to comforting students during exams—crafting a heartfelt tribute to honor our feathered friend’s decade of loyalty. 点评：对话驱动情节、对话结合叙事、精选动人场景、将鹦鹉人格化 叙事 对话 （揭示道理） Paragraph 2 (发布与反响) On Thursday, the paper came out with the headline “Bye-Bye, Perry” on the front page. The verified(被证实的) story detailed his retirement to a sunny sanctuary, complete with vet letters and students’ memories. Tears filled classrooms as readers recalled—how Perry sang during math tests, how he nudged shy freshmen to cheer. By lunch, our mailbox overflowed with submissions: sketches of Perry, poems calling him “our feathered counselor.” With increasing students subscribed our newspapr, our readership rockets to the record high. Ashley approched me, now her voice soft: “You saved me from a huge mistake.” True stories may not grab attention like fake news, but they touch hearts and create real connections. 转变 升华 点评：通过具体细节营造温情场面、升华到位 结尾 True stories may not grab attention like fake news, but they touch hearts and create real connections. In journalism, truth matters more than attention—it builds lasting trust and meaningful bonds. Truth builds long-lasting trust—fake news is short-lived. Para 1 原版：To my surprise, Ashley insisted on reporting the “Deerfields stole Perry” story. Disappointed and upset, I couldn't hold my anger anymore, shouting at her, “You are a reporter, how dare you write down the fake news?” She responded me with silence. To protect against her breaking the rule of reporting, I chose not to write the “Deerfields stole Perry” story. Instead, I wrote down an emotional letter to say goodbye to Perry, titled “Bye-Bye Perry”. Below the article read a long postscript, clarifying the real great reporting is not about how eye-catching the story is, but lies in the truth and sincere emotions. I handed my article to her on Wednesday, when I spotted another essay titled Deerfields Doe Parry. On her table, which one would she choose? I was anxious. 修改版：To my surprise, Ashley insisted on going ahead with the “Deerfields Stole Perry” story. I was disappointed and upset—I couldn’t hold back my anger anymore and snapped at her, “You’re a reporter. How could you write something that isn’t true?” She responded me with silence. Integrity and truth-telling are at the core of journalistic ethics.To protest against her violating the journalistic ethics, I decided not to write the story myself. Instead, I wrote an emotional goodbye article to Perry, titled Bye-Bye Perry. At the end, I added a long postscript, explaining that real journalism isn’t about how dramatic a story sounds—it’s about truth and genuine feeling. When I submitted my piece on Wednesday, I saw another article on her desk titled “Deerfields or Wolffield? They stole our Perry!” Which would she go with? I was anxious. 黄同学 Para 2 原版：On Thursday, the paper came out with the headline “Bye-bye Perry” on the front page. With my eyes open widely, I couldn't hardly believe that she finally picked my article. I rushed to the newsroom, found Ashley, hugged her tightly and thanked her for telling the truth. But she shook her head, saying, “It is me who should thank you”. Had it not been your perseverance, I would step onto a wrong path to seeking false success. The newspaper became undoubtedly a hit. Although there was no striking plot, the emotion itself moveed all readers. More importantly, we vanished the fog in front of the school newspaper and found out the right way to revive it, to attract followers by highlighting the heartwarming truth instead of the eye-catching lies. 修改版：On Thursday, the paper came out with the headline “Bye-bye Perry” on the front page. I stared at it, eyes wide open—I could hardly believe she had actually chosen my article. I rushed to the newsroom, found Ashley, hugged her tightly, and thanked her for telling the truth. But she shook her head and said, “I should be the one thanking you.” “If it weren’t for your persistence,” she added, “I might’ve gone down the wrong path chasing false success.” The newspaper turned out to be a surprise hit. There wasn’t some dramatic twist, but the raw emotion struck a chord with everyone who read it. Most importantly, we cut through the fog that had been clouding the school newspaper and found a better way forward—drawing readers in not with flashy lies, but with stories that felt honest and real. 邓同学 Para 1 原版：To my surprise, Ashley insisted on reporting the “Deerfields stole Perry” story. “It’s the best story to regain population.” Ashley turned around to leave, seemed not caring about the truth, I rushed to the door telling the teammates who passed by our mistake. Some of them stayed with me to convince Ashley. With face flushed with red, I anxiously begged Ashley to think twice. Perry is our mascot, it should bring blessing to us instead of being used to create rumors. In our heating and exceptional eyesight, Ashley eventually nodded, but what our reporting club would go? “Depending on the red fortunate rabbit”, I replied with firm hope. We really owed a goodbye to Perry. Ashley agree. 修改版： To my surprise, Ashley insisted on reporting the “Deerfields Stole Perry” story. “It’s the best way to get attention back,” she said, turning to leave, as if she didn’t care about the truth. I rushed to the door and informed the teammates passing by of our mistake. Some of them stayed to help me talk to Ashley. Face flushed, I anxiously begged her to think twice. Perry is our mascot—it’s meant to bring us luck, not be used to spread rumors. In the heat of the moment, with emotions running high, Ashley finally nodded, “But now, how to boost our declining readership?” “We’ll count on the lucky red parrot,” I said, with firm hope. “We really owed Perry a proper goodbye.” Ashley agreed. para 2 原版 On Thursday, the paper came out with the headline, “Bye-bye Perry”, on the front page. In our newspaper detailed Perry's retirement and explained the player's need for a rabbit to accompany their family. Beyond our expectation, our report garnered widespread acclaim soon. I even heard some classmates murmur that our news should be praised as a “lucky report”.（？） It was evident that our integrity beat the lies and won us attention to revive in public as well. Encouraged by our report, flood of students spontaneously organized a farewell movement before the match. It dawned on me that trust and integrity are always invaluable treasure, illuminating our brighter and broader future. 修改版： On Thursday, the paper came out with the headline “Bye-Bye Perry” on the front page. In the article, we detailed Perry’s retirement and explained that the player needed to be with their family, accompanied by a parent. To our surprise, the report quickly gained widespread acclaim. I even overheard some classmates murmuring that our story should be seen as a “lucky report”. It was clear that our integrity spoke louder than sensationalism(哗众取宠) and earned us renewed public attention. Inspired by the article, a flood of students spontaneously organized a farewell event before the match. It dawned on me that trust and integrity are invaluable treasures—illuminating the path to a brighter and bolder future. Lavf59.14.100 $$