2025届广东省深圳市高三下学期一模英语试题读后续写课件

2025年2月深圳市高三年级第一次调研考试 The car turned onto the familiar road that led to Grandma's farm. “Jude, this summer holiday will be a great chance for you to stay with your grandma,” Dad said as he drove. Every moment, we were moving farther away from the city, the place where I knew how to do things right. The car engine wasn't off before Grandma hugged me. I slowly dragged myself out of the car. " Jude, you look unhappy. Why?" Grandma asked. She acted like nothing bad had happened last time. Could I ask how much money her neighbor Mr. Jackson had lost because of my mistake? Was he still upset with me?“I'm fine,” I answered. “I'm just missing my computer camp. Computers are something I'm good at.”“That sounds disappointing,” Grandma nodded. I liked visiting the farm during breaks before I messed things up last summer. Grandma lived alone, and Mr. Jackson was like family to her. Then one day I forgot to lock the gate and let the goats into his flower bcds. He lost almost all his roses for the farmers' market. Now, back at the farm, I felt nervous. I was trying to hide in the room when I saw Mr.Jackson! He was opening the door and calling Grandma. “I need help!” he yelled to her. “Just a second for the freshly barvested roses!” That was when he saw me. I felt my heart tighten and was ready for his criticism. I descrved it. He had probably been waiting for this moment since last summer. However, Mr. Jackson greeted me happily, “Great, Jude is here! Your grandma always tells us you are a wonderfully competent(有能力的) computer programmer.” I shook my head. “I am not competent. I am sorry I messed things up.” He was surprised and comforted me, “It was an accident. Being competent doesn't mean you never make mistakes.” I looked out of the window. There were piles of roses waiting to be sold. “Jude, can you help us? We want to sell roses online. We have a computer and all the parts(零件) for our internet connection, but we just can't set it up,” Grandma asked. No internet. They seemed to live in the twentieth century. 真题再现 注意： 1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Maybe I could be someone who was really competent.   Within a few hours, orders for roses flooded in. 语篇分析 故事情节大意 故事讲述了主人公Jude在暑假被父亲送到祖母的农场，他因为去年夏天忘记锁门导致邻居Mr. Jackson的玫瑰花被山羊破坏而感到内疚和不安。回到农场后，Jude本想躲起来，却意外遇到Mr. Jackson。出乎意料的是，Mr. Jackson并没有责怪他，反而称赞他在计算机方面的能力。祖母和Mr. Jackson请求Jude帮忙在网上销售玫瑰花。 故事情绪发展 初期情绪Jude因过去的错误而感到内疚、紧张和不安。他不确定自己是否能够弥补之前的过失，尤其是面对Mr. Jackson时，情绪更加压抑。 转折情绪在Mr. Jackson宽容的态度和鼓励下，Jude的内心逐渐开始放松。他开始相信自己，认识到错误是成长的一部分。 高潮情绪当Jude成功帮助祖母和Mr. Jackson销售玫瑰花时，他感到无比的自豪和满足，这种情绪标志着他从过去的阴影中走了出来，重新找回了自信。 语篇分析 语篇分析 故事主题分析 Jude通过自己的技能，帮助解决问题，从而实现自我救赎，抓住了重新证明自己的机会。这不仅是技能的展示，更是个人成长的体现。 1.第一段描写Jude利用自己的专长帮助解决问题 1. 有了新的信心，Jude连接设备，调试网络；（衔接） 2. Jude创建网页商店，Grandma和Mr.Jackson惊叹；（情节过渡） 3. Jude内就心情缓解，同时屏幕跳出了第一个订单通知，Jude欣喜。（衔接） 2.第二段描写网络商店成功销售玫瑰，Jude重获自信    1. 电脑“叮咚”的提示音不断响起；（衔接） 2. Mr.Jackson拍手叫好，祖母夸赞，Jude内心自豪；（情节过渡） 3. Jude抓住了第二次机会证明自己，也明白有能力并不意味着永不犯错。（升华） 语篇分析 续写的关键要点 情感的层层推进：从内疚到自信，从不确定到负责。要在续写中表现Jude从一个自责的孩子，变成一个通过努力帮助他人并完成任务的有责任感的人。 技术细节和实际应用：在Jude帮助搭建网站、解决网络问题时，需要通过合理的技术细节展现他的能力，但避免过度复杂的技术描述，要保持故事的流畅性。 角色关系的强化：通过与祖母、Mr. Jackson的互动，展现支持和宽容对Jude成长的重要性，同时也让故事情节更加丰满。 参考范文 $$