读后续写 色盲老爸的 “翻车” 杰作：门廊秒变棉花糖现场 讲义 2025届浙江省精诚联盟高三下学期三模英语试题

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Here are a few things you need to know about my dad.First,he was a slightly impatientkind of a guy.If he wanted something done,he wanted it done NOW,if not sooner.Second,you need to know that Dad was an early riser.Every single day.No exceptions.No excuses.Work or no work.Holidays or vacation days,there was my father,up and ready to go.Oh,andyou should know that Mom was a night owl,up late watching a late movie or a wrestling match.

One more thing about my dad.He was color-blind.That usually doesn't matter.And hewas a fairly conservative kind of person.For instance,he bought our new home out in the country and objected immediately o the stucco(灰泥)being a pale peach colo.Way too “flashy”for Dad.He hired a painter to cover upall that peach with a nice,not-flashy gray.Dad was fondof gray anyway.And so,we arrived at the Saturday morning when Dad sprang out of bed as bright-eyed asever,felt restless,and looked around for something that needed doing.Mom was sound asleep,as usual.My brother and I slept in a bit.There was nobody around to keep an eye on Dad andwhatever he decided to do next.

So,Dad decided that the porch(门廊)on our newly gray house needed a fresh coat ofpaint.He headed offto the hardware store to get paint and painting supplies.He did not tell anyof us.Nor did he invite any of us along.We've never been sure what happened at the hardware store.Did he ask for advice?Didhe study color samples?Did another shopper help him choose?Who knows?But we're allpretty sure that Dad had no clue what color he was painting the wooden porch.My brother andI woke up,wondered where Dad was,and went looking for him.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.                请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:We froze in our tracks when we stepped outside.

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Paragraph 2:Looking at the bright pink porch,we three exchanged looks,unsure how to break the news.

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一、续写分析

第一段续写分析

情节切入点："We froze in our tracks when we stepped outside."
核心任务：描绘父亲刷漆后的门廊颜色冲击，铺垫人物反应与冲突。

视觉冲击：门廊颜色需与父亲保守、厌恶 “浮华” 的性格形成强烈反差（如亮粉色、荧光黄等），突出其色盲导致的误选。

人物反应：

兄弟 / 姐妹的震惊（“下巴差点掉在地上”“目瞪口呆”）；

回忆父亲对 “桃色” 灰泥的排斥，强化色彩选择的戏剧性；

猜测父亲在五金店的糗态（如误读色卡、拒绝店员帮助）。

细节铺垫：通过环境描写（“阳光照射下，粉色门廊像块巨大棉花糖”）渲染荒诞感，为第二段母亲醒来后的冲突埋下伏笔。

第二段续写分析

情节切入点："Looking at the bright pink porch, we three exchanged looks, unsure how to break the news."
核心任务：处理家庭矛盾，展现父亲的转变与亲情温度。

冲突升级：

母亲醒来后的反应（笑到流泪 / 假装晕倒）；

父亲的困惑（“这是稳重的浅灰啊！”），揭示色盲误会；

兄弟 / 姐妹的 “补刀”（如 “比桃色更闪眼”），呼应前文。

情感转折：

父亲从愤怒到尴尬（“耳尖泛红”“嘟囔着色盲的好处”）；

母亲的包容（“不如留着？粉色很衬春天”），化解矛盾；

全家合影留念，突出 “不完美中的温暖”。

主题升华：通过色彩冲突展现代际差异与包容，强调 “家是讲爱的地方，不是讲理的地方”。

二、故事线

父亲的强迫症：早起找事做，决定刷门廊，因色盲误选颜色。

色彩冲击：孩子们发现门廊变成亮粉色，震惊于父亲的 “审美崩塌”。

真相揭露：父亲坚持 “灰色” 无误，家人委婉告知色盲误会。

矛盾化解：母亲提议保留粉色，父亲妥协，全家接受 “意外惊喜”。

温暖收尾：粉色门廊成为家庭笑谈，见证包容与爱的成长。

三、短语积累

freeze in one’s tracks 突然停住脚步

step outside 走到外面

fresh coat of paint 一层新漆

hardware store 五金店

color sample 颜色样本

have no clue 完全不知道

exchange looks 交换眼神

break the news 说出实情

sound asleep 熟睡

spring out of bed 从床上跳起来

object to 反对

cover up 覆盖

be fond of 喜欢

look around for 四处寻找

keep an eye on 留意

四、主旨升华句（含汉意）

In a family, laughter at shared absurdities often strengthens bonds more than perfect harmony ever could.
（在家庭中，对共同荒诞经历的欢笑，往往比完美和谐更能增进感情。）

Sometimes the most beautiful mistakes are those that reveal the humor and warmth hidden in everyday life.
（有时最美丽的错误，恰恰揭示了日常生活中隐藏的幽默与温暖。）

A home isn’t built by matching colors or following rules—it’s crafted from the love that embraces imperfection.
（家不是由协调的色彩或规则构建的，而是由包容不完美的爱塑造的。）

Color blindness may distort hues, but it can never dim the brightness of a family’s ability to laugh and love together.
（色盲或许会扭曲色彩，但永远无法黯淡一家人共同欢笑与爱的光芒。）

The pink porch taught us that joy often lies in surrendering to chaos, trusting that love will paint over the mistakes.
（粉色门廊教会我们：快乐往往在于拥抱混乱，相信爱会为错误添上色彩。）

五、写作示范

示范一