读后续写--百家饭香暖人心:社区共助帕克夫人爱犬 讲义-2025届湖北省武昌区高三下学期5月质量检测英语试题

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Mrs.Parker threw a ball across the yard,and her dog raced after it.Donovan,a neighbor pulling weeds nearby,smiled as he watched their playful interactions,Mrs.Parker,thought always stting in a wheelchair after a stroke(中风),was beloved in the neighborhood for her funny stories and kindness.Her dog was like a pet to everyone.

Suddenly,the ball bounced and rolled into the street.At that exact moment,a truck swung around the cornerand hit the dog,leaving him seriously injured.Liz Mrs.Parker's daughter,and the driver rushed the dog to theanimal hospital immediately.

Waiting nervously for news about the dog,Donovan offered to help out with Mrs.Parker while Liz was at thehospital.Late that evening,Liz returned with depressing news:the dog would recover,but the vet bill was $2000—money they didn't have.

Donovan wantedto help butonly had $17 saved for a cookbook as he had become fascinated withcookinglately.What else could he do?The question stuck in his mindall through the night and the next day at school.When hegot home,he noticed the delicious smell of his own cooking—a pot of stew(炖肉)he had prepared earlier.Hetasted it and thought,“Maybe I could bring some to Mrs.Parker.Liz must be too busy to cook right now.”

When Donovan entered Liz's kitchen,he was stunned by the scene.It seemed as ifall their neighbors had sentfood.He stopped tocheck onMrs.Parker,who assuredhim,"P′m fine,just woried abouthe dog's vetbill.Anyway,what did you bring over,dear?”

“Stew,”Donovan replied,squeezing his bowl in between two dishes."But I think you have a wide menu tochoose from tonight.I haven't seen that many dishes since the school's potluck(百家饭)supper.”注意:

1.续写词数应为150个左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Ah!Potluck!A brilliant idea struck him.

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The day of the potluck fundraising fair came.

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一、续写分析​​​

第一段续写分析​

“Ah! Potluck! A brilliant idea struck him.” 此句点明多诺万受到启发,接下来应围绕 “百家饭” 展开具体行动。多诺万会详细构思如何将百家饭转化为筹集狗治疗page number 0

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费的活动,他可能先兴奋地向帕克夫人和利兹阐述自己的计划,说明通过举办类似百家饭的活动,邀请邻居们携带美食参加,并设置捐赠环节,用筹集的资金支付兽医账单。之后,多诺万开始积极筹备活动,包括制作宣传海报,在社区内张贴,写明活动的时间、地点和目的;挨家挨户拜访邻居,热情地邀请他们参与,讲述帕克夫人和狗狗的困境,呼吁大家伸出援手;同时,他还会和利兹一起规划活动场地,考虑如何布置才能营造出温馨又热闹的氛围,预估所需物资并着手准备。在筹备过程中,可能会遇到一些小困难,比如部分邻居一开始不太理解活动意义,或物资准备不足等,但多诺万凭借自己的真诚和努力一一克服。​

第二段续写分析

“The day of the potluck fundraising fair came.” 此句开启活动当天的情节。当天,社区居民纷纷响应,带着各式各样的美食来到现场,活动现场热闹非凡,充满欢声笑语。大家品尝美食、交流互动,气氛十分融洽。捐赠环节中,居民们慷慨解囊,有人拿出自己的积蓄,有人捐出闲置物品用于义卖,孩子们也拿出自己的零花钱,希望能帮助狗狗。多诺万在现场忙碌地引导大家,心中满是感动。最终,筹集到的资金不仅足够支付狗狗的兽医账单,还略有剩余。帕克夫人和利兹被邻居们的善举深深打动,向大家表达诚挚的感谢。多诺万也从这次活动中收获满满,他不仅帮助了他人,还深刻体会到社区团结的力量,明白只要大家齐心协力,就能克服困难,让爱与温暖在社区中传递 。​

二、故事线​

意外发生:帕克夫人的狗被车撞,受伤严重,治疗费用高昂,利兹一家无力承担。

启发萌生:多诺万看到邻居们送来的食物,由 “百家饭” 联想到举办筹款活动。

积极筹备:多诺万为举办百家饭筹款活动做准备,包括宣传、邀请、场地布置等,克服重重困难。​

活动开展:百家饭筹款活动当天,社区居民热情参与,捐赠美食和资金,场面温馨感人。​

圆满结局:活动成功筹集到足够资金,狗狗得到救治,社区邻里关系更加紧密,爱与温暖得以传递。​

三、短语​

come up with an idea(想出一个主意)​

be fascinated with(对…… 着迷)​

be stunned by(对…… 感到震惊)​

a wide menu(丰富的菜肴)​

plan for(为…… 做计划)​

set up(布置;设立)​

reach out to(接触;联系)​

make efforts(努力)​

with enthusiasm(热情地)​

in response to(响应)​

be filled with(充满)​

from all walks of life(来自各行各业)​

express gratitude(表达感激)​

pull together(齐心协力)​

overcome difficulties(克服困难)​

四、主旨升华句​page number 1

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