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学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 专题09 书面表达 （单元话题写作必背满分范文）15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．（23-24八年级下·上海闵行·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The power of teamwork”. (以“团队的力量”为题写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在日常学习生活中，你是否经常与他人合作？如合作发行一期校报、班报，组织一场活动或完成一项任务等。请结合你的一次团队合作经历，谈一谈你对团队合作的看法。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄阅读不得分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级下·上海静安·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 今年暑假你校将组织一次游学夏令营（study tour summer camp），现有以下四种设想： 1. 博物馆之旅（a trip to the museum）         2. 科技之旅（a science and technology journey） 3. 地理之旅（a geography journey）           4. 艺术之旅（an art journey） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，说明理由，并推荐一个目的地。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24八年级下·上海松江·期末）    Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）     针对学生当中存在浪费电的现象，学校决定举行抵制浪费电的活动。假设你是学校学生会成员之一，请你在学校英文报上写一封倡议书。 1. 活动的理由及目的； 2. 节约用电的具体做法； 3. 呼吁从我做起，节约用电。 以下词汇仅供参考： call on         join hands       take action 注意： 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 照抄阅读语篇不得分； 短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear schoolmates,     Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to______________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Students’ Union June 16th 4．（23-24八年级下·上海杨浦·期末）In 50—100 words, write an article according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇50—100字的短文，标点符号不占格。) 你所在学校的校报正在开展征文活动，主题为“我心中的旅游胜地”。请写一篇短文，向同学们推荐一个你喜欢的旅游地 (travel destination)。文中应包括以下内容： 1. 旅游地的名称和位置； 2. 旅游地的特点和吸引人的地方； 3. 你为什么喜欢这个地方； 4. 给出一些旅行建议。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24八年级下·上海嘉定·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假如你是李华，请你对英国朋友Jack 的邮件进行回复。词数不少于60个单词，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: Li Hua@mail. com Subject: See you soon! Hi, Li Hua! Next month, I’ll be with you in Shanghai. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Any interesting places worth visiting? I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you? I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．（23-24八年级下·上海奉贤·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “How I have changed” 进入初中已经三年了，你的兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习态度……一定发生了很多的变化。请以“How I have changed”为题写一篇英语小短文，描述发生在你身上的一些显著的变化。 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 How I have changed_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（23-24八年级下·上海·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable trip to ________” (以“一次去……的难忘之旅”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following points are only for reference: ▷ When and where did you take the trip? ▷ What did you do there? ▷ Why was the trip unforgettable? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “China is calling”. (以“中国在召唤”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。) 中国这些年来发生了很多的变化，科技发展突飞猛进，人民的幸福指数也上升了。我们的国家发生了哪些改变呢？你的生活又发生了哪些改变呢？请结合自己的亲身经历写出你自己的感想吧。 1. What do you think of your motherland? 2. What can tourists/you see in China? 3. What can tourists/you do in China? (注意：1.短文中不得出现考试姓名/校名等个人信息，否则不与评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 英语课上，你们班进行了一场有关网络小说（web novels）的讨论，同学们提出了不同的看法。请根据表格提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文，表述这次讨论的内容。 一些同学认为 另一些同学认为 你的看法 1.网络小说很有趣； 2.能够开阔视野，提高写作水平。 1.看网络小说影响视力； 2.浪费时间，容易沉迷其中，影响学习。 …… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） Cece Bell虽然患有听力障碍，但她依然努力将自己的故事改编成图画故事，以此表达自己心中所想，并鼓励更多的人。在你的生活中，你也一定会遇到一些困难，请你结合自己的经历，以“This time I won”为题，谈一谈你是如何战胜困难以及你的感悟。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned to be __________ through a school activity” 【以“通过一次学校活动我变得__________”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】提示：初中三年来你一定参加了不少学校活动，也从中学到了不少东西，请就其中一次活动的经历和收获写一篇短文。 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Fire Rules Around Us”. (以“我们身边的防火规则”为题写一篇至少含60个词的短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯。) 1. What should you do before you go into some public places? 2. What will you do when you meet a fire? 3. What do you think is the most important thing to do during a fire? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（23-24八年级下·上海奉贤·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic“A shared moment with ”(以“我和……分享的时刻”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 无论是在校内还是校外，你一定与老师、同学、家人、朋友甚至邻居有许多共同拥有的经历和记忆。有的甜蜜，有的苦涩，有的精彩，有的尴尬……但所有经历都是成长。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A Shared Moment with My Grandmother    One of my most cherished memories is baking cookies with my grandmother last winter.     The kitchen was filled with the warm aroma of butter and sugar as she patiently taught me to knead the dough. Though my first attempts were clumsy, her encouraging smile made me keep trying. When we finally pulled the golden cookies out of the oven, we laughed at their uneven shapes.     That simple moment taught me the joy of perseverance and the sweetness of family bonds. 14．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Camping has become a popular choice for people to relax on weekends. However, some people damage the environment while enjoying the outdoors. Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the suggested questions below. Suggested questions: *What do people do to damage the environment while camping? *What do you think of their behavior? *What advice do you have for them? 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（23-24八年级下·上海长宁·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 学校每年组织远足活动 (如：春游和秋游等)，下周学校将举行“Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文和同学们分享。 1. What do you think of school trips? 2. What did you do in one of your school trips? 3. What advice can you offer to make the school trip more meaningful? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 专题09 书面表达 （单元话题写作必背满分范文）15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．（23-24八年级下·上海闵行·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The power of teamwork”. (以“团队的力量”为题写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在日常学习生活中，你是否经常与他人合作？如合作发行一期校报、班报，组织一场活动或完成一项任务等。请结合你的一次团队合作经历，谈一谈你对团队合作的看法。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄阅读不得分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The power of teamwork Teamwork plays a vital role in achieving success. Last month, I worked with my classmates to organize a school event. We divided tasks, shared ideas, and supported each other. Despite challenges, we completed the event successfully. This experience taught me that teamwork combines individual strengths, making tasks easier and more efficient. Together, we can achieve more than we could alone. Teamwork is truly powerful. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，讲述过去的经历时用“一般过去时”。 ③ 提示：注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明团队合作很重要； 第二步，介绍自己经历的有关团队合作的事情； 第三步，写出总结。 [亮点词汇] ①plays a vital role in在……中发挥着至关重要作用 ②Despite challenges尽管面临挑战 ③making tasks easier让任务更简单 [高分句型] ①This experience taught me that teamwork combines individual strengths, making tasks easier and more efficient. (that引导的宾语从句) 2．（23-24八年级下·上海静安·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 今年暑假你校将组织一次游学夏令营（study tour summer camp），现有以下四种设想： 1. 博物馆之旅（a trip to the museum）         2. 科技之旅（a science and technology journey） 3. 地理之旅（a geography journey）           4. 艺术之旅（an art journey） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，说明理由，并推荐一个目的地。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Zhang, For the study tour summer camp held by our school, I’d like to recommend a trip to the museum. Generally speaking, museums stand for art, culture and history. While visiting the museums, we can not only enjoy the splendid rich Chinese art and culture, but also learn from history. When talking about museums, the Palace Museum, which is famous for the Forbidden City, is the best choice for us. It is the best place for us to see exhibitions from the ancient. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：本文的主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题目分析写作要点完成本篇书面表达，注意不要遗漏要点，并可适当发挥，要使用正确的时态和词汇，使语意通顺，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写明你最喜欢的一种设想； 第二步，写出你推荐这个设想的理由； 第三步，推荐一个目的地。 [亮点词汇] ① recommend 推荐 ② generally speaking 通常来说 ③ splendid 非常好的 ④ exhibition 展览 [高分句型] ① While visiting the museums, we can not only enjoy the splendid rich Chinese art and culture, but also learn from history. (not only...but also...引导的并列句) ② When talking about museums, the Palace Museum, which is famous for the Forbidden City, is the best choice for us. (非限制性定语从句) 3．（23-24八年级下·上海松江·期末）    Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）     针对学生当中存在浪费电的现象，学校决定举行抵制浪费电的活动。假设你是学校学生会成员之一，请你在学校英文报上写一封倡议书。 1. 活动的理由及目的； 2. 节约用电的具体做法； 3. 呼吁从我做起，节约用电。 以下词汇仅供参考： call on         join hands       take action 注意： 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 照抄阅读语篇不得分； 短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear schoolmates,     Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to______________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Students’ Union June 16th 【答案】例文 Dear schoolmates, Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity sources are converted from natural resources and they are limited because they are not renewable. Therefore, we must cherish them. Here are my suggestions on how to save electricity. First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. Second, try to use as little electronics as possible. Third, use new products that consume less electricity. Last, promote the principle of using less electricity to others. I hope you can do this, but not for you, but for everyone. And if everyone can take action from now on, and everyone’s quality of life will become better. Students’ Union June 16th 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：本文的主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节补充内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写出抵制浪费电的活动理由和目的； 第二步，说明节约用电的具体做法； 第三步，呼吁大家节约用电。 [亮点词汇] ① call on 号召 ② natural resources 自然资源 ③ therefore 所以 ④ cherish 珍视 ⑤ as...as possible 尽可能 [高分句型] ① I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity sources are converted from natural resources and they are limited because they are not renewable. (原因状语从句） ② First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. (时间状语从句) ③ And if everyone can take action from now on, and everyone’s quality of life will become better. (条件状语从句) 4．（23-24八年级下·上海杨浦·期末）In 50—100 words, write an article according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇50—100字的短文，标点符号不占格。) 你所在学校的校报正在开展征文活动，主题为“我心中的旅游胜地”。请写一篇短文，向同学们推荐一个你喜欢的旅游地 (travel destination)。文中应包括以下内容： 1. 旅游地的名称和位置； 2. 旅游地的特点和吸引人的地方； 3. 你为什么喜欢这个地方； 4. 给出一些旅行建议。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I would suggest France as a travel destination. France is located in Western Europe and is famous for its rich culture and history. The Eiffel Tower and the historic castles in the Loire Valley are must-see attractions. I love France because of its delicious food, friendly people, and beautiful scenery. When you visit France, make sure to learn some basic French. Also, try to visit both the cities and the countryside to get a full experience. I hope you all consider visiting France during your next holiday. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍旅游地的名称和位置； 第二步，介绍旅游地的特点和吸引人的地方； 第三步，具体阐述自己为什么喜欢这个地方； 第四步，最后给出一些旅行建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be located in位于 ②because of因为 ③make sure确保 ④try to do sth努力做某事 [高分句型] I hope you all consider visiting France during your next holiday.（宾语从句） 5．（23-24八年级下·上海嘉定·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假如你是李华，请你对英国朋友Jack 的邮件进行回复。词数不少于60个单词，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: Li Hua@mail. com Subject: See you soon! Hi, Li Hua! Next month, I’ll be with you in Shanghai. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Any interesting places worth visiting? I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you? I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hi Jack, I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too. It will be very hot in Shanghai next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There are a lot of interesting places, and I have made a wonderful travel plan for you. First, we will play in Changfeng Park. We will take many photos with dolphins and seals. Then, we will visit Yu Garden. It is a traditional place. We will buy some small souvenirs. After that, we will travel to Oriental Pearl Tower. It is the highest building in Asia. Finally, we will take a walk at the magnificent Huang Pu River. I believe you will have a good time in Shanghai. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some. I am looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件； 第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍上海的一些有趣的地方； 第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么，以及表达期待对方的到来。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as 也 ②traditional 传统的 ③souvenirs 纪念品 ④take a walk 散步 ⑤magnificent 壮丽的 ⑥convenient 方便的 [高分句型] ①I believe you will have a good time in Shanghai.（省略that宾语从句） ②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.（if引导的条件状语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．（23-24八年级下·上海奉贤·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “How I have changed” 进入初中已经三年了，你的兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习态度……一定发生了很多的变化。请以“How I have changed”为题写一篇英语小短文，描述发生在你身上的一些显著的变化。 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 How I have changed_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I have changed People have changed a lot in their appearance, personality and hobby. I have changed a lot in my life. When I was a child, I used to fly the kites with my parents. I thought it was very interesting. But now, I am growing up, I like looking at insects. I think the small insects are very lovely. And I have changed a lot in my hobby. I used to run quickly, but now I don’t do exercise any more so I run slowly. Although I’m 15 years old, I am still terrified of the darkness, and I always go to sleep with my bedroom light on, I remember a bad thing. I used not to like tests, so I always got bad grades on tests. My mother was very frustrated. But now, I like studying, and last term I got good grades, my mother was very impressed. These are my changes, what about yours? 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给提示完成写作，不要遗漏信息，人称为第一人称。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出自己生活中的变化； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从兴趣爱好、行为习惯及学习态度几个方面具体介绍自己的变化； 第三步，书写总结。询问读者都有哪些变化。 [亮点词汇] ① fly the kites 放风筝 ② not...any more 不再 ③ be terrified of 害怕 [高分句型] ① When I was a child, I used to fly the kites with my parents.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I think the small insects are very lovely.（省略that的宾语从句） 7．（23-24八年级下·上海·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable trip to ________” (以“一次去……的难忘之旅”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following points are only for reference: ▷ When and where did you take the trip? ▷ What did you do there? ▷ Why was the trip unforgettable? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An unforgettable trip to Beijing I took an unforgettable trip to Beijing last summer vacation. I visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the beauty and history of these places. I also tried some delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck and Peking Noodles. The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste. What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends. We shared our experiences and had a lot of fun together. This trip not only broadened my horizons but also gave me a lot of wonderful memories. I will never forget it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：介绍曾经去过的地方，分享个人的经历，避免语法错误，保持行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍一次难忘的旅行经历； 第二步，简要介绍去的地方、时间、交通方式、游玩的景点以及美食等； 第三步，总结全文，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①such as比如 ②be amazed by对……感到惊讶 ③not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.（so…that引导结果状语从句） ②What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends.（what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句） 8．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “China is calling”. (以“中国在召唤”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。) 中国这些年来发生了很多的变化，科技发展突飞猛进，人民的幸福指数也上升了。我们的国家发生了哪些改变呢？你的生活又发生了哪些改变呢？请结合自己的亲身经历写出你自己的感想吧。 1. What do you think of your motherland? 2. What can tourists/you see in China? 3. What can tourists/you do in China? (注意：1.短文中不得出现考试姓名/校名等个人信息，否则不与评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 China is calling China, which is also known as “the Divine Land”, is located in Asia continent of the earth. It has become one of the largest modern and international contries in the world. With the development of the economy, you can see that transportation in China is becoming increasingly convenient, and high-speed trains can be seen everywhere. All Chinese welcome you to visit China. If you enjoy shopping, you should visit Hong Kong. It is called “Shopping Paradise” in China. You won’t feel bored if you walk in this city and many goods will attract. If you enjoy eating delicious food, don’t forget to visit Xi’an and Chongqing where a lot of local snacks will wait for you there. I will always be in love with my motherland—China! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“中国在呼唤”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“你对祖国的看法、中国的变化、在中国旅游能做什么”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①modern现代的 ②with the development of随着……的发展 ③enjoy doing享受做某事 [高分句型] ①China, which is also known as “the Divine Land”, is located in Asia continent of the earth.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②If you enjoy shopping, you should visit Hong Kong.（if引导的条件状语从句） 9．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 英语课上，你们班进行了一场有关网络小说（web novels）的讨论，同学们提出了不同的看法。请根据表格提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文，表述这次讨论的内容。 一些同学认为 另一些同学认为 你的看法 1.网络小说很有趣； 2.能够开阔视野，提高写作水平。 1.看网络小说影响视力； 2.浪费时间，容易沉迷其中，影响学习。 …… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 We have had a discussion about web novels in our class. Some of my classmates consider that we can read web novels which are very interesting and can also open up our eyes and improve our writing skills. However, others do not agree. They think we shouldn’t do that, because there are too many web novels on the Internet, reading too much on the web is not good for eyesight. What’s worse, it is a waste of time to form the habit of reading network novels, which will not only affect our study but also affect our health. As for me, I don’t want to spend my limited time on web novels now. If I want, I will do that in summer holidays, and try to achieve balance between physical exercise and reading to protect my eyesight well. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示要点，可适当发挥。   [写作步骤]   第一步：表明写作话题——有关网络小说的讨论；   第二步：阐述不同同学的看法；   第三步：表明自己的看法。   [亮点词汇]   ①open up打开 ②is good for对……有好处   ③not only … but also …不但……而且……   [高分句型]   ①Some of my classmates consider that we can read web novels which are very interesting and can also open up our eyes and improve our writing skills. (宾语从句和定语从句）   ②They think we shouldn’t do that, because there are too many web novels on the Internet, reading too much on the web is not good for eyesight. (状语从句) 10．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） Cece Bell虽然患有听力障碍，但她依然努力将自己的故事改编成图画故事，以此表达自己心中所想，并鼓励更多的人。在你的生活中，你也一定会遇到一些困难，请你结合自己的经历，以“This time I won”为题，谈一谈你是如何战胜困难以及你的感悟。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 This time I won In our daily life, we have all kinds of difficulties that prevent us from moving forward. But we can’t give up. When I was in primary school, I struggled with math. I often failed my exams and felt very discouraged. However, I decided not to give up. I started to spend extra time practicing math problems every day. I also asked my teacher and classmates for help whenever I didn’t understand something. Gradually, I began to improve. One day, I finally scored an A on my math test. This time I won. From this experience, I have learned that perseverance and hard work can help us overcome any difficulty. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给话题和题干提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明每个人都会遇到困难； 第二步，具体描述自己的个人经历； 第三步，最后表达自己学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ① all kinds of各种各样的 ② give up放弃 ③ decide to do决定做 [高分句型] ①In our daily life, we have all kinds of difficulties that prevent us from moving forward.（定语从句） ②When I was in primary school, I struggled with math（时间状语从句） ③From this experience, I have learned that perseverance and hard work can help us overcome any difficulty.（宾语从句） 能力综合实践5篇 11．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned to be __________ through a school activity” 【以“通过一次学校活动我变得__________”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】提示：初中三年来你一定参加了不少学校活动，也从中学到了不少东西，请就其中一次活动的经历和收获写一篇短文。 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I learned to be patient through a school activity I used to be impatient. Every time I met math problems that is difficult for me, I would give them up. Last year, my school held a puzzle activity. The student that first finished it would award a big prize. At first, I refused to attend it, but my friend said to me that he would finish it faster than me. I must turn out that I was the best. During the match, when I saw the messy pieces, I wanted to give up. However, I must turn out that I am the best. In the end, there was only me who didn’t make it. Everyone cheer me up. I thought to myself, never give up! Be patient! At last, I made it. Through the activity, I know patience can make everything possible. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据要表达的内容准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍经历这次活动之前的我； 第二步，具体介绍这次学校活动； 第三步，讲述这次活动我的感悟和收获。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do过去常常做某事 ②give up放弃 ③refuse to do拒绝做某事 [高分句型] ①The student that first finished it would award a big prize.（that引导定语从句） ②At first, I refused to attend it, but my friend said to me that he would finish it faster than me.（that引导宾语从句） 12．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Fire Rules Around Us”. (以“我们身边的防火规则”为题写一篇至少含60个词的短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯。) 1. What should you do before you go into some public places? 2. What will you do when you meet a fire? 3. What do you think is the most important thing to do during a fire? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Fire Rules Around Us     Fire rules are crucial for our safety. Before entering public places, we should locate the safety exits. When a fire breaks out, call 119 immediately. Cover our nose and mouth with a wet towel and walk bent-over to avoid smoke. During a fire, the most important thing is to ensure our safety; do not waste time taking personal items. By following these fire rules, we can protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述火灾的危险性，如火灾会烧毁森林、破坏建筑等，进而引出遵守消防守则的重要性； 第二步，详细说明在火灾发生时的具体做法，如如何报警、逃生等。 [亮点词汇] ①run away逃走 ②first of all首先 ③put out扑灭 [高分句型] When a fire breaks out, call 119 immediately. (when引导的时间状语从句) 13．（23-24八年级下·上海奉贤·期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic“A shared moment with ”(以“我和……分享的时刻”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 无论是在校内还是校外，你一定与老师、同学、家人、朋友甚至邻居有许多共同拥有的经历和记忆。有的甜蜜，有的苦涩，有的精彩，有的尴尬……但所有经历都是成长。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Shared Moment with My Grandmother    One of my most cherished memories is baking cookies with my grandmother last winter.     The kitchen was filled with the warm aroma of butter and sugar as she patiently taught me to knead the dough. Though my first attempts were clumsy, her encouraging smile made me keep trying. When we finally pulled the golden cookies out of the oven, we laughed at their uneven shapes.     That simple moment taught me the joy of perseverance and the sweetness of family bonds. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，围绕“分享的时刻”展开个人经历描述； ② 时态：以一般过去时为主，描述过去发生的具体事件； ③ 提示：需选择与他人共享的经历，体现情感或成长，避免透露个人信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引入事件：明确分享的对象（grandmother）和活动（baking cookies）； 第二步：细节描写：通过感官描述（aroma）、动作（knead the dough）和情感（encouraging smile）丰富场景； 第三步：升华主题：结尾点明经历的意义（joy of perseverance, family bonds）。 [亮点词汇] ① cherished memories珍贵的回忆 ② warm aroma温暖的香气 ③ golden cookies金黄的饼干 [高分句型] ①Though my first attempts were clumsy…（让步状语从句突出对比） ②That simple moment taught me the joy of perseverance and the sweetness of family bonds. （and连接抽象名词体现成长） 14．（23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末）Camping has become a popular choice for people to relax on weekends. However, some people damage the environment while enjoying the outdoors. Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the suggested questions below. Suggested questions: *What do people do to damage the environment while camping? *What do you think of their behavior? *What advice do you have for them? 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：     Nowadays, more and more people choose to go camping to relax themselves on weekends. It’s a good way to enjoy the outdoors. However, some campers damage the environment while camping. They carelessly set the campfire, which causes damage to the surrounding animals and plants. When they leave the campsite, some even leave behind a large amount of garbage.     I strongly disapprove of their behavior. I think they should set the campfire carefully to make sure the safety of the environment. Besides, it’s necessary for them to take away the garbage when they leave the campsite. Nature is our home, and it’s our responsibility to protect it well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇写对破坏环境的露营活动看法的话题作文； ②时态：时态为“ 一般现在时态”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意按要求写出露营活动危害、对此的看法和建议，注意写全要点同时适当添加细节，使文章完整通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写人们对露营活动的喜爱以及一些破坏环境的不良行为； 第二步，写对这些行为的看法以及如何改善的建议； [亮点词汇] ①leave behind遗弃 ②disapprove of不赞同 ③responsibility责任 [高分句型] ①When they leave the campsite, some even leave behind a large amount of garbage.（状语从句） ② Nature is our home, and it’s our responsibility to protect it well. (and引导两个句子) 15．（23-24八年级下·上海长宁·期末）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 学校每年组织远足活动 (如：春游和秋游等)，下周学校将举行“Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文和同学们分享。 1. What do you think of school trips? 2. What did you do in one of your school trips? 3. What advice can you offer to make the school trip more meaningful? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Our trip to Xuhui campus    Last week, we had a school trip to Xuhui campus.     We started on a sunny day in the morning. It took us two hours to drive there. When we got there, we were attracted by the landscape garden of Xuhui campus. Then we visited the history of Rongqiao middle school in the museum. We were deeply moved by the spirit of Rongqiao people. Finally, we tasted the delicious food of Xuhui canteen.     To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. In this way, we can gain more knowledge and have a better understanding of what we see. All in all, we had an interesting and meaningful school trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记述学校旅行经历的文章； ②时态：主要为一般过去时； ③提示：文章包含学校旅行的相关要点，介绍旅行去徐汇校区，描述旅行当天的行程，还给出让学校旅行更有意义的建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍上周进行了一次去徐汇校区的学校旅行； 第二步，按时间顺序详细描述学校旅行当天的经历，包括出发时间、路上用时，到达后被校园景观吸引，参观学校历史博物馆，被荣桥人精神打动，以及品尝食堂美食等； 第三步，就如何让学校旅行更有意义提出自己的建议，旅行前对目的地做研究、旅行中做笔记，并强调这样做能带来的收获，最后总结此次旅行有趣且有意义。 [亮点词汇] ①attracted吸引 ②moved感动 ③gain获得 [高分句型] ①It took us two hours to drive there. (It takes sb some time to do句型) ②To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. (不定式作目的状语) 12 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 17 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$