江苏省南京市六校联合体2024-2025学年高一下学期期中调研英语试卷读后续写--洛基山脉徒步故事续写讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Last summer, my friend Jake and I decided to go on a weekend hiking trip in the Rocky Mountains. We were both experienced day hikers but had never ventured deep into the wilderness alone. Excited for the adventure, we packed light—just a couple of water bottles, some snacks, a first-aid kit, and a lighter. We didn’t bother with a map, compass, or extra clothing, assuming the marked trail would be enough. That decision nearly cost us everything. 

We started early in the morning, following a well-known trail that promised stunning views of the valley. The weather was perfect—clear skies and a gentle breeze. By noon, we reached a high viewpoint where we could see endless green valleys and sharp mountain peaks. Jake shouted excitedly, his voice echoing through the mountains. I laughed confidently, feeling completely safe.

Then, everything changed. 

Dark clouds rolled in faster than we expected. Within minutes, the sky turned black, and a cold wind swept. Before we could react, rain poured down. The trail, once dry and easy to follow, turned into a slippery, muddy mess. We tried to hurry back, but visibility dropped to almost zero. 

After an hour of stumbling through the storm, we realized we were no longer on the trail. The markers had disappeared, and our phones had no signal. Jake suggested we keep moving downhill, hoping to find a road or a ranger station (公园管理处). But the terrain (地形) was steep and dangerous, with loose rocks and fallen branches blocking our path. 

As daylight faded, the temperature dropped dangerously low. We were wet and cold. Jake, trying to stay calm, suggested we find shelter for the night and wait for daybreak. 

We spotted a small overhang of rocks—not quite a cave, but enough to block some of the rain. Using the lighter, we managed to start a weak fire. It wasn’t much, but the flickering flames gave us hope.

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(1) 续写词数应为150个左右;

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The awful night rolled slowly away and it tested our limits.____________________________

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Finally, dawn came and the rain stopped._________________________________________

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一、续写分析

第一段续写分析​

此段需聚焦 “恐怖黑夜的煎熬与生存挣扎”。随着夜幕降临，低温、饥饿与恐惧将成为核心挑战。雨水持续渗透临时避难所，微弱的火焰在风雨中摇曳，随时可能熄灭。两人身体因失温而颤抖，牙齿打颤，手脚逐渐失去知觉。 Jake 可能因体力不支陷入昏迷，李华需运用急救知识为其保暖，通过摩擦身体、共享体温等方式维持生命体征。在心理层面，孤独与绝望不断侵蚀两人意志，李华可能会回忆起出发时的疏忽，陷入自责与懊悔。同时，黑暗中可能出现未知声响，如野兽低吼、树枝断裂声，加剧紧张氛围，两人需保持警惕，用仅存的理智应对潜在威胁。随着时间流逝，每分每秒都变得无比漫长，他们在生死边缘徘徊，考验着彼此的体力与精神极限。​

第二段续写分析

该段应围绕 “黎明获救与深刻反思” 展开。曙光初现时，两人因彻夜未眠而疲惫不堪，但求生的希望重新燃起。他们开始在周边寻找新的出路，利用岩石反光、植物生长方向等线索辨别方位。途中可能发现动物足迹或人类活动痕迹，顺着痕迹前行，最终在筋疲力尽时，看到远处的救援队伍或山间小屋。获救后，两人被送往医院接受治疗，身体逐渐恢复。在病床上，他们深刻反思此次冒险的教训，意识到准备不足的严重后果。这段经历不仅让他们学会敬畏自然，更懂得团队协作与生存技能的重要性。同时，他们决定将这次经历分享给他人，警示更多徒步爱好者做好充分准备，尊重自然规律，珍惜生命。​

二、故事线​

冒险启程：主人公 Jake 和李华满怀兴奋开启洛基山脉徒步之旅，因自信而忽视必要准备。​

遭遇危机：天气骤变，暴雨降临，两人迷失方向，被困荒野，陷入困境。​

黑夜挣扎：在恶劣环境下度过艰难夜晚，面临失温、恐惧与未知威胁，考验生存能力与意志。​

黎明求生：黎明到来后，凭借顽强意志寻找出路，最终发现希望，获得救援。​

反思成长：获救后深刻反思，汲取教训，决定分享经历，警示他人，实现自我成长。​

三、短语

venture into：冒险进入​

pack light：轻装出行​

stunning views：壮丽景色​

roll in：滚滚而来​

pour down：倾盆而下​

lose one’s way：迷路​

drop to：降至​

stay calm：保持冷静​

block some of the rain：遮挡部分雨水​

flickering flames：闪烁的火焰​

test one’s limits：考验某人的极限​