应用文写作 安慰Ben的英文邮件 讲义 广东省深圳市福田区红岭中学2024-2025学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题

应用文写作

假如你是李华，你们班在上周的篮球赛中输了。Ben认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，对此他感到遗憾和难过，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你给Ben写一封英文邮件，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Ben,

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Yours,

Li Hua

一、写作提纲​

第一段：表达安慰与共情​

点明得知 Ben 因比赛失利难过，直接回应其自责情绪。​

强调比赛结果非个人因素决定，弱化 Ben 的自我否定。​

第二段：分析队友态度与提出建议​

解释队友责怪源于比赛失利的沮丧，而非针对 Ben 个人。​

提出具体建议，如主动沟通表达感激、强调团队训练提升默契。​

第三段：鼓励展望未来​

再次强调团队精神，将失败视为成长机会。​

以积极态度鼓励 Ben 振作，为下一场比赛做准备。​

二、短语积累​

blame oneself too much：过度自责​

a team sport：团队运动​

miss a shot：投失一球​

try one’s best：尽某人最大努力​

frustration from the loss：失利带来的沮丧​

open communication：坦诚沟通​

share one’s efforts：分享某人的努力​

build better coordination：建立更好的配合​

strengthen the bond：加强联系​

keep one’s head up：振作起来​

get ready for：为…… 做准备​

feel upset about：对…… 感到沮丧​

decide the result：决定结果​

as time passes：随着时间流逝​

focus on：专注于​

make mistakes：犯错​

a part of：…… 的一部分​

look forward to：期待​

三、佳句​

It’s not fair to carry the weight of the whole team’s loss on your shoulders alone.（独自承担整个团队失利的责任是不公平的。）​

In a basketball game, every player’s contribution counts, and the outcome is a collective result.（在篮球比赛中，每个球员的贡献都很重要，比赛结果是集体努力的成果。）​

Rather than dwelling on the past mistake, let’s learn from it and become stronger as a team.（与其纠结过去的失误，不如从中吸取教训，让团队变得更强大。）​

Your determination and hard work throughout the season have inspired all of us, and this one miss doesn’t define your worth.（整个赛季你的决心和努力激励着我们所有人，一次投失并不能定义你的价值。）​

I understand your disappointment, but remember that setbacks are stepping stones to success.（我理解你的失望，但请记住，挫折是成功的垫脚石。）​

Expressing your feelings and listening to your teammates’ perspectives can help clear up misunderstandings.（表达你的感受并倾听队友的想法有助于消除误解。）​

A simple “I’m sorry” can go a long way in mending relationships, especially when

accompanied by genuine actions.（一句简单的 “对不起” 在修复关系上大有帮助，尤其是配上真诚的行动时。）​

The strength of our team lies in our ability to support each other through both victories and defeats.（我们团队的力量在于无论胜负都能相互支持。）​

Let’s channel our energy into training harder and improving our strategies for the upcoming matches.（让我们把精力投入到更刻苦的训练和改进未来比赛的策略中。）​

Don’t let this one loss overshadow all the great moments we’ve shared as a team.（不要让这一次失利掩盖我们团队共同度过的美好时光。）​

Teamwork isn’t just about playing together; it’s about standing by each other in tough times.（团队合作不仅是一起打球，更是在困难时刻相互支持。）​

By acknowledging everyone’s efforts and working towards common goals, we’ll bounce back stronger.（通过认可每个人的努力并朝着共同目标前进，我们会以更强的姿态卷土重来。）

You’re an essential part of our team, and your skills and spirit are irreplaceable.（你是我们团队重要的一员，你的技术和精神无可替代。）​

The road to victory is paved with failures, and this experience will make us more resilient.（胜利之路由失败铺就，这次经历会让我们更有韧性。）​

Let’s use this setback as motivation to prove ourselves in the next competition.（让我们把这次挫折当作动力，在下一场比赛中证明自己。）​

四、写作示范四篇​

示范一​

Dear Ben,I heard you’ve been feeling down about the basketball game, and I want you to know that you’re not to blame. Basketball is a game where every pass, every defense, and every shot contributes to the final score. Missing the last shot doesn’t mean you failed—we all faced challenges on the court.​

Some teammates might be frustrated now, but their words come from disappointment, not from doubting your ability. To ease the tension, you could organize a team meeting to discuss what went well and what we can improve. Also, planning friendly practice matches together can rebuild trust and teamwork.​

Our team is like a family, and we grow stronger through both wins and losses. Keep your chin up, and let’s show everyone what we’re made of in the next game!​