专题10 英语作文 【期末必刷10篇】-2024-2025学年高二英语下学期期末考点大串讲（上海）

2024-2025学年高二下学期期末考点大串讲（上海） 专题10 英语作文 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the metructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期末英语试卷 端午已至，明启中学举办了“诗书雅颂吟端午”文化周活动，请你在晨会课上围绕爱国诗人屈原的名句“路曼曼其修远兮，吾将上下而求索，”(long, long had been my road and far, far was the journey; I would go up and down to seek my heart’s desire ) 发表演讲，结合自己的经历谈谈对这句话的理解。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市杨浦区2023-2024学年高二下学期期末英语调研卷 假定你是李华，你的朋友吴磊邀请了5位朋友下周末参加他在家里举办的阅读马拉松活动 (readathon)。他非常需要朋友们的建议来帮助他设计活动并做好各项准备工作。请给他写一封信，提出你的想法和意见。 以下内容仅作参考： 阅读马拉松(readathon)是一项专注于阅读的活动或比赛，通常具有特定的目标或挑战，以个人或团队为单位进行。活动可以结合对阅读速度和质量的考察，采取多种形式展开。例如：阅读规定数量的书籍、持续阅读特定的时长，或者阅读某一特定主题的书籍等等。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市复旦大学附属中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期末英语试卷 你是明启中学高二学生李华，本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学(study tour)。现就两种组织方案征求学生意见。一是以班级为单位，学校随机决定研学地点;二是由学生各自申请想去的中学，学校根据各处报名人数统筹安排。请写一封信给校长谈谈你的看法，信件内容需包括： 1)你选择哪个方案; 2)你选择该方案的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市闵行区2023-2024学年高二下学期6月期末英语试题 假设你是明启中学的高二学生李明，最近你校计划成立一个新社团，校学生会正在全校范围内征求意见。两个备选社团分别为“流浪动物关爱社团（Homeless Animals Care Club）”和“民间艺术保护社团（Folk Arts Protection Club）”。作为学校的一员，你决定写一封电子邮件，向学生会表达自己的想法。 你的邮件内容须包括： 1. 你的选择； 2. 你做出该选择的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120- 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市进才中学2023-2024学年高二下学期英语试题 假设你的英国朋友 Lucy 所在的学校要组织来中国进行主题夏令营活动，可以选择以下三个主题之一：1.传统书法体验(calligraphy)；2.茶文化探索；3.中华美食制作。Lucy来信希望你能给她推荐一个，请你给她回信，内容包括： 1.你的建议 2.你的理由 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below inChinese. 【来源】上海市敬业中学2023-2024学年高二下学期6月期末英语试题 假设你是明启中学高二学生李明，是“The English World”这份英语杂志的忠实读者。最近，这份杂志正在考虑取消纸质版，只在电子阅读器上提供电子版供读者阅读，并就这一计划征求读者意见。写一封邮件给该杂志“读者来信”专栏，内容须包括： 1.你是否赞成杂志的这一计划; 2.你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市宝山区2023-2024学年高二下学期期末教学质量监测英语试卷 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你校英文报《英语拾零》（English Sidelights）正庆祝创刊十周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： ● 读报的经历； ● 喜爱的栏目； ● 期望和祝福。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市敬业中学2023-2024学年高二下学期英语试题 6月 5 日世界环境日 International Environment Day将至, 你所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，你积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请你在全班同学面前介绍你的方案。介绍包括以下两个方面： 1、简述你活动方案的主题和内容。 2、谈谈你设计该活动方案的理由。 (文中不能涉及真实信息) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．Directions：Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市闵行区2023-2024学年高二下学期六校联合教研质量调研考试英语试卷 假如你是明启中学的李明，你的好友李华受邀参加美国的夏令营活动。此时他有两种方案可供选择，一种是选择寄宿在当地居民的家中(homestay)，费用比较高。另一种是参加30小时的志愿者服务活动，但提供免费住宿。对此，他向你求助。 请写一封信给李华，必须包含下列两点： 1.你建议选择哪一种方案; 2.你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．Directions: Write an English composition in about 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市建平中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期中考试英语试题 你是Li Ming，你的学校即将迎来八十周年校庆，学生会正在征集关于校庆周边纪念品设计的方案。请你写一封邮件给学生会提出你的想法，邮件必须包括： 1. 简单描述你设计的纪念品； 2. 说说这样设计理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年高二下学期期末考点大串讲（上海） 专题10 英语作文 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the metructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期末英语试卷 端午已至，明启中学举办了“诗书雅颂吟端午”文化周活动，请你在晨会课上围绕爱国诗人屈原的名句“路曼曼其修远兮，吾将上下而求索，”(long, long had been my road and far, far was the journey; I would go up and down to seek my heart’s desire ) 发表演讲，结合自己的经历谈谈对这句话的理解。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear teachers and fellow students, Today, I’d like to share my thoughts on the inspiring words of Qu Yuan, “Long, long had been my road and far, far was the journey; I would go up and down to seek my heart’s desire.” Personally, I’ve encountered obstacles that seemed insurmountable, but Qu Yuan’s perseverance serves as a beacon. Last year, when I am preparing for a science competition, the path ahead seemed daunting. Yet, with the spirit of “going up and down to seek,” I persevered, sought guidance, and eventually overcame the challenges. This quote encourages us to embrace adversity, to keep striving, and to never lose sight of our aspirations. It’s a testament to the human spirit’s capacity for growth and discovery. As we celebrate the traditions of Duanwu, let us also honor Qu Yuan’s legacy by continuing our own quests, facing life’s journey with courage and determination. Thank you. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。端午已至，明启中学举办了“诗书雅颂吟端午”文化周活动，请考生在晨会课上围绕爱国诗人屈原的名句“路曼曼其修远兮，吾将上下而求索，”发表演讲，结合自己的经历谈谈对这句话的理解。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想法：thought→ idea 鼓舞人心的：inspiring→ encouraging 遇到：encounter→ meet 用作，充当：serves as→ act as 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Personally, I’ve encountered obstacles that seemed insurmountable, but Qu Yuan’s perseverance serves as a beacon. 拓展句：Personally, it is obstacles that I’ve encountered, which seemed insurmountable, but Qu Yuan’s perseverance serves as a beacon. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally, I’ve encountered obstacles that seemed insurmountable, but Qu Yuan’s perseverance serves as a beacon.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Last year, when I am preparing for a science competition, the path ahead seemed daunting.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市杨浦区2023-2024学年高二下学期期末英语调研卷 假定你是李华，你的朋友吴磊邀请了5位朋友下周末参加他在家里举办的阅读马拉松活动 (readathon)。他非常需要朋友们的建议来帮助他设计活动并做好各项准备工作。请给他写一封信，提出你的想法和意见。 以下内容仅作参考： 阅读马拉松(readathon)是一项专注于阅读的活动或比赛，通常具有特定的目标或挑战，以个人或团队为单位进行。活动可以结合对阅读速度和质量的考察，采取多种形式展开。例如：阅读规定数量的书籍、持续阅读特定的时长，或者阅读某一特定主题的书籍等等。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wu Lei, I have heard that you will hold a readathon, which is an activity or race that focuses on reading, usually with a specific goal or challenge, and is conducted individually or as a team. I am delighted to give you some advice on the activity. From my point of view, the activity can focus on the examination of the speed and quality of reading, so we can design some tests to check speed and quality, for instance, finishing reading a book or a passage within specific time. Besides, we can read a book with given topic, then share what we have gained from the book. The activity of reading can be taken in many forms. First, our members can be divided into groups and read together. Then, we can let each member read individually and share their opinion. These are my advice for the activity. I hope they will be helpful for you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给吴磊写封信，对于他将在家里举办的阅读马拉松活动提出想法和意见。 【详解】1.词汇积累 专注于：focus on→ concentrate on 建议：advice→ suggestion 此外：besides→ in addition 有帮助的：helpful→ beneficial 2.句式拓展 同意句转换 原句：Besides, we can read a book with given topic, then share what we have gained from the book. 拓展句：Besides, we can read a book that has a given topic, then share what we have gained from the book. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I have heard that you will hold a readathon, which is an activity or race that focuses on reading, usually with a specific goal or challenge, and is conducted individually or as a team.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Besides, we can read a book with given topic, then share what we have gained from the book.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市复旦大学附属中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期末英语试卷 你是明启中学高二学生李华，本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学(study tour)。现就两种组织方案征求学生意见。一是以班级为单位，学校随机决定研学地点;二是由学生各自申请想去的中学，学校根据各处报名人数统筹安排。请写一封信给校长谈谈你的看法，信件内容需包括： 1)你选择哪个方案; 2)你选择该方案的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear principal, I’m Li Hua, a senior high 2 student of our school. I’m glad to learn that the school plan to organize all the students of our grade to go to many out-of-town schools for a study tour this term. As for the two organizational projects proposed by the school, I suggest that students apply for the schools they want to go to and that our school make overall arrangements according to the number of applicants. The reasons why I choose this project are as follows. First of all, allowing students to choose schools by themselves can help stimulate their enthusiasm and increase their desire to study. Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance so as to make full preparation for the study. Last but not least, our school can make various arrangements ahead of time according to the number of students applying to ensure the smooth progress of study tour. If you could take my advice into account, I would appreciate it. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学事宜，对学校提出的两种组织方案，提出自己的意见和建议，表明自己选择哪种方案，并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 计划：plan→project 建议：suggest→propose 激励、激发：stimulate→inspire 提前：in advance→ahead of time 考虑：take...into account→consider 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance so as to make full preparation for the study. 拓展句：Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance in order that they can make full preparation for the study. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As for the two organizational projects proposed by the school, I suggest that students apply for the schools they want to go to and that our school make overall arrangements according to the number of applicants.（运用了两个以连接词that引导的并列宾语从句和虚拟语气。） 【高分句型2】The reasons why I choose this project are as follows.（运用了以关系副词why引导的定语从句。） 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市闵行区2023-2024学年高二下学期6月期末英语试题 假设你是明启中学的高二学生李明，最近你校计划成立一个新社团，校学生会正在全校范围内征求意见。两个备选社团分别为“流浪动物关爱社团（Homeless Animals Care Club）”和“民间艺术保护社团（Folk Arts Protection Club）”。作为学校的一员，你决定写一封电子邮件，向学生会表达自己的想法。 你的邮件内容须包括： 1. 你的选择； 2. 你做出该选择的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam, Hearing that you are calling on students to give opinions on choosing a student association, I am so interested in it and decide to write a letter to suggest selecting the Homeless Animals Care Club. In my opinion, with your fund, the Homeless Animals Care Club can do some important things to help homeless animals, such as regular medical examinations, which can improve the rehabilitation of homeless animals and promote the all-round development of homeless animals. With the fund, the club can organize some public activities, so that homeless animals and animal-lovers can have some social activities together, which can help homeless animals better integrate into society, reduce their psychological pressure and let them feel the care of society. I think it significant to set up the Homeless Animals Care Club. I hope you can take my suggestion seriously. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学生会写一封邮件，对于新社团的选择提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 建议：suggest→advise 在我看来：in my opinion→from where I stand 改善：improve→enhance 压力：pressure→stress 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I think it significant to set up the Homeless Animals Care Club. 拓展句：I think it is significant to set up the Homeless Animals Care Club. 【点睛】[高分句型1] In my opinion, with your fund, the Homeless Animals Care Club can do some important things to help homeless animals, such as regular medical examinations, which can improve the rehabilitation of homeless animals and promote the all-round development of homeless animals. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] With the fund, the club can organize some public activities, so that homeless animals and animal-lovers can have some social activities together, which can help homeless animals better integrate into society, reduce their psychological pressure and let them feel the care of society. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120- 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市进才中学2023-2024学年高二下学期英语试题 假设你的英国朋友 Lucy 所在的学校要组织来中国进行主题夏令营活动，可以选择以下三个主题之一：1.传统书法体验(calligraphy)；2.茶文化探索；3.中华美食制作。Lucy来信希望你能给她推荐一个，请你给她回信，内容包括： 1.你的建议 2.你的理由 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Lucy,       I am glad that you are going to take part in summer camps in China. Of the three themes, I suggest that you should choose to learn calligraphy. My reasons are as follows.       In the beginning, it is easy to learn calligraphy. Calligraphy can help you build up inner beauty and make you become more versatile. What’s more, calligraphy is popular among Chinese people. By participating in the calligraphy training class, not only can you make some friends with the same interest but also you can get some professional guidance and improve your skills.       I hope you will enjoy your summer camp. I am looking forward to meeting you in China. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友 Lucy 回信，给她推荐一个夏令营活动主题，并介绍推荐理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→pleased 参加：take part in→participate in 此外：what’s more→besides 希望：hope→wish 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句： In the beginning, it is easy to learn calligraphy. Calligraphy can help you build up inner beauty and make you become more versatile. 拓展句： In the beginning, it is easy to learn calligraphy, which can help you build up inner beatuty and make you become more versatile. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Of the three themes, I suggest that you should choose to learn calligraphy. （运用了that引导宾语从句，从句使用虚拟语气） 【高分句型2】 By participating in the calligraphy training class, not only can you make some friends with the same interest but also you can get some professional guidance and improve your skills.（运用了not only提到句首，句子使用部分倒装结构） 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below inChinese. 【来源】上海市敬业中学2023-2024学年高二下学期6月期末英语试题 假设你是明启中学高二学生李明，是“The English World”这份英语杂志的忠实读者。最近，这份杂志正在考虑取消纸质版，只在电子阅读器上提供电子版供读者阅读，并就这一计划征求读者意见。写一封邮件给该杂志“读者来信”专栏，内容须包括： 1.你是否赞成杂志的这一计划; 2.你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor of “The English World”, I am Li Ming, a loyal reader of your magazine from Mingqi High School. I am writing to express my thoughts on the proposed plan to discontinue the physical edition of “The English World” and transition to an electronic-only format. While I appreciate the convenience and environmental benefits of digital reading, I must confess that I am not entirely in favor of this transition. As a student, I find the physical copy of the magazine not only easier to access but also more conducive to focused reading.  It allows them to immerse themselves in the language and culture, free from the distractions of digital devices. Thank you for considering my opinion. I remain a dedicated reader of “The English World” and look forward to its continued success. Sincerely, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给该杂志“读者来信”专栏，论述对于杂志考虑取消纸质版，只在电子阅读器上提供电子版供读者阅读这一做法的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express→extend 支持：be in favor of→approve 此外：moreover→besides 考虑：consider→take into account 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Moreover, the physical edition serves as a valuable resource for language learners, especially those in areas with limited access to technology. 拓展句：Moreover, the physical edition serves as a valuable resource for language learners, especially those who are in areas with limited access to technology. 【点睛】[高分句型1] While I appreciate the convenience and environmental benefits of digital reading, I must confess that I am not entirely in favor of this transition. (运用了while引导让步状语从句) [高分句型2] Thank you for considering my opinion. (运用了动名词作宾语) 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市宝山区2023-2024学年高二下学期期末教学质量监测英语试卷 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你校英文报《英语拾零》（English Sidelights）正庆祝创刊十周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： ● 读报的经历； ● 喜爱的栏目； ● 期望和祝福。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 English Sidelights and Me I have been an avid reader of English Sidelights since the day my teacher recommended it to me. I remember that the first time I picked up a copy of the paper, I was struck by the quality of the writing and the depth of the coverage. Since then, I have made it a habit to read it every day. One of my favorite sections is the Opinion. I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives presented in this section. The editorials are well-researched and thought-provoking, and the guest commentaries offer fresh insights into a variety of issues. I expect the paper to stay true to its core values and to continue to provide readers with high-quality reporting and analysis. On this special occasion of the 10th anniversary of English Sidelights, I hope the paper will thrive and grow in the years ahead. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报《英语拾零》正庆祝创刊十周年，要求考生按照要求写一篇文章投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 热衷的：avid→ keen 呈现：present→ show 提供：offer→ provide 各种各样的：a variety of→ various 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives presented in this section. 拓展句：I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives that are presented in this section. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I remember that the first time I picked up a copy of the paper, I was struck by the quality of the writing and the depth of the coverage.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、the first time引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】On this special occasion of the 10th anniversary of English Sidelights, I hope the paper will thrive and grow in the years ahead.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句） 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市敬业中学2023-2024学年高二下学期英语试题 6月 5 日世界环境日 International Environment Day将至, 你所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，你积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请你在全班同学面前介绍你的方案。介绍包括以下两个方面： 1、简述你活动方案的主题和内容。 2、谈谈你设计该活动方案的理由。 (文中不能涉及真实信息) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As we all know, International Environment Day is approaching. To celebrate it, I have made a plan as follows. First, the theme of the activity is to know more about our environment . Through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it, we may understand that we should protect it. Then, Let some students talk about their own experiences and feelings and how to protect the environment, which will be more convincing .Last, everyone is called on to make a poster, motivating more students to get involved. However, right now and right here, we should do something for it. This is my arrangement about this year’s International Environment Day, and I’m looking forward to your wise suggestions or better plans. Thank you. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。6月 5 日世界环境日 International Environment Day将至, 考生所在的班级准备以此为契机筹划一次班级主题活动，考生积极参与筹划并设计了一个活动方案，请考生在全班同学面前介绍考生的方案。 【详解】1.词汇积累 接近：approach→draw near 保护：protect→preserve 激励：motivate→inspire 建议：suggestion→advice 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it, we may understand that we should protect it. 拓展句：It is through introducing something about the environment by videos and learning about something behind it that we may understand that we should protect it. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Then, Let some students talk about their own experiences and feelings and how to protect the environment, which will be more convincing .（运用which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As we all know, International Environment Day is approaching.（运用as引导的非限制性定语从句） 9．Directions：Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市闵行区2023-2024学年高二下学期六校联合教研质量调研考试英语试卷 假如你是明启中学的李明，你的好友李华受邀参加美国的夏令营活动。此时他有两种方案可供选择，一种是选择寄宿在当地居民的家中(homestay)，费用比较高。另一种是参加30小时的志愿者服务活动，但提供免费住宿。对此，他向你求助。 请写一封信给李华，必须包含下列两点： 1.你建议选择哪一种方案; 2.你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Lihua;   I'm glad to hear that you have access to participating in an overseas communication activity in Britain which will last two months. I suggest that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community to gain a chance to stay in it for free.   My reasons are as follows. Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a lot of money. Undoubtedly, the cost must be high if you choose it. On one hand, only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. It sounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there .On the other hand, during your spare time you will also spend time helping others to be a warm -hearted person. Your arrival will also reduce the burdens there. As an old saying goes, “we can gain both things at the same time”, so why not choose one?   I hope that you will take my advice. It is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation.                                                                      Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友李华写一封回信，就李华在海外交流活动期间的住宿问题表明自己的态度，并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加： participate in→take part in 建议：suggest→advise 获得：acquire→gain 机会：chance→opportunity 2.句式拓展 简单句变强调句 原句：On the other hand, during your spare time you will also spend time helping others to be a warm -hearted person. 拓展句：On the other hand, it is during your spare time that you will also spend time helping others to be a warm -hearted person. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation.（运用了that引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs.（运用了部分倒装句） 10．Directions: Write an English composition in about 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市建平中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期中考试英语试题 你是Li Ming，你的学校即将迎来八十周年校庆，学生会正在征集关于校庆周边纪念品设计的方案。请你写一封邮件给学生会提出你的想法，邮件必须包括： 1. 简单描述你设计的纪念品； 2. 说说这样设计理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear leader of the Student Union,         After learning that the Student Union is soliciting proposals for the design of souvenirs of the school anniversary, I can’t wait to put forward my suggestion for the design.        The souvenir I designed is a custom notebook that combines the historical elements of our school with modern design concepts. The cover of this notebook uses our school’s iconic architecture or landscape as a design theme, which is presented by hand or printed.       The reasons why I put forward such a design scheme are as follows. First, as a common stationery supplies, notebook has high practicality and collection value, suitable as a souvenir of the school to present to teachers, students and alumni. What’s more, by presenting the school landmark buildings or landscapes by hand painting or printing, we can show the unique artistic charm and cultural heritage of our school.       I hope you will consider my design.                                                      Yours,                                                                    Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学生会写一封邮件，提出你对校庆周边纪念品设计的方案的想法，邮件必须包括：1. 简单描述你设计的纪念品；2. 说说这样设计理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→recommendation 首先：first→first and foremost 展示：show→display 另外：what’s more→in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First, as a common stationery supplies, notebook has high practicality and collection value, suitable as a souvenir of the school to present to teachers, students and alumni. 拓展句：First, as a common stationery supplies, notebook, which has high practicality and collection value is suitable as a souvenir of the school to present to teachers, students and alumni. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The souvenir I designed is a custom notebook that combines the historical elements of our school with modern design concepts. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] The cover of this notebook uses our school’s iconic architecture or landscape as a design theme, which is presented by hand or printed. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 1 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$