专题08 英语作文 【期末必刷12篇】-2024-2025学年高一英语下学期期末考点大串讲（上海）

2024-2025学年高一下学期期末考点大串讲（上海） 专题08 英语作文 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市华东师范大学第一附属中学2023-2024学年高一下期期终考试英语试卷 你是天镇中学的高一学生黎明。学校拟采购添置一批设备物资，用于改善学生的校园生活品质。校方提供了三个物品选项，征求全体学生的意见。请给校长写封信，就“最值得购买的物品”提出自己的看法，并说明理由。 1 自动贩卖机 vending machine 2 空调 air-conditioner 3 微波炉 microwave oven _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市复旦大学附属中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期末英语试卷 假设你是旦华中学高一学生李明，鉴于最近校内有数名学生在体育课上受伤，学校英语报针对这一情况开展主题为“如何提高学生身体素质”的征文活动。写一篇投稿，内容须包括： 1）两条有助于改善身体素质的建议 2）你提出这些建议的理由 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Directions: Write an English composition in around 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市大同中学2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末英语试题 假设你是大同中学的学生，学校将在暑假期间改造操场，团学联正在开展征文活动，题目为“What you can do to make the playground more convenient”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括： 1. 描述你想提出的意见； 2. 说明你的理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海师范大学附属中学闵行分校2023-2024学年高一下学期期末英语试题 你是明启中学的王磊，你班本学期剩余一笔总额三千元的班费class fee结余，目前有两个方案：1．为教室添加一台空气净化器；2．为每位同学订阅一份英语周报Shanghai Students’ Post。请你给班委会class committee写一封信，谈谈你的看法，必须包括： 1．你赞同的方案； 2．你赞同该方案的理由； 3．你对于执行此方案的建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Lei 5．Directions:  Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市宝山区2023-2024学年高一下学期期末教学质量监测英语试卷 假如你是明启中学高一学生李明，在你校英语报读到如下征文启事：从小学至今，每个 人都制定过许多计划，有过许多新学期愿景，其中有些中途放弃了，有些坚持到底了。请你就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写一篇征文，内容需包括： ●  简单描述你曾经中途放弃或坚持到底的某个计划； ●  阐述你中途放弃或坚持到底的原因以及对你的启示。 (文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Directions:  Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市浦东新区2022-2023学年高一下学期期末英语模拟卷 假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校将邀请当地某艺术学校王教授进行以“中国国画”（traditional Chinese painting）为主题的讲座。请你以学生会的名义写一则通知。 内容包括：1. 讲座目的以及讲座的时间和地点；  2. 讲座内容。 注意：1. 词数80左右；  2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Notice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 7．Directions:  Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市黄浦区2022-2023学年高一6月期终调研测试英语试题 假设你是启明中学高一学生李明。临近期末，你的英语老师正在设计暑假作业，现征求学生意见。请写一封电子邮件给老师，内容须包含： 1. 不同形式与内容的作业建议2-3条； 2. 给出你的理由。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Ming 8．Directions: Please write an essay of about 100-120 words based on the following instructions in Chinese. 【来源】华东政法大学附属松江高级中学2022-2023学年高一期末英语试题 假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校为丰富学生课余生活，营造英语学习氛围，决定开展一次有关传统节日的英语征文活动。为积极响应学校号召，你准备写一个最让你难忘的节日，内容包括： 1) 该节日的简单介绍； 2) 你最难忘的场景。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高一上学期学习能力诊断英语试题 假设你是明启中学的学生李华，学校正在征求学生对每周缩短上学时间至 4 天的看法和感受。请发送一封邮件至校长信箱，你的邮件内容须包括： 1）你是否赞同缩短上学时间； 2）你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市上海市闵行区六校2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末联考英语试题 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你的笔友David 要来中国旅游，因为对中国文化很感兴趣，他发邮件请你推荐一个旅游景点。在老街古镇和博物馆之间你会推荐哪一个？理由是什么？ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．Directions: Write an English composition in around 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市黄浦区2023-2024学年高一下学期期末英语试题 假设你是明启中学的学生，学校将在暑假期间重新装修图书馆，校报正在开展英语征文活动，题目为“Small changes make an ideal school library”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括： 1．描述你希望图书馆发生的1~2个变化 2．说明你的理由 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．Directions: Write an English composition in around 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市曹杨第二中学2022-2023学年高一下学期期末考试英语试题 学校校刊正以“旅行者故事”为主题，向全校征集特殊或精彩的旅行故事。假设你是高一学生李明，请写一篇文章投稿，内容须包括： 1)详细叙述你的一次旅行经历； 2)简单说说这次旅行对你的影响。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年高一下学期期末考点大串讲（上海） 专题08 英语作文 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市华东师范大学第一附属中学2023-2024学年高一下期期终考试英语试卷 你是天镇中学的高一学生黎明。学校拟采购添置一批设备物资，用于改善学生的校园生活品质。校方提供了三个物品选项，征求全体学生的意见。请给校长写封信，就“最值得购买的物品”提出自己的看法，并说明理由。 1 自动贩卖机 vending machine 2 空调 air-conditioner 3 微波炉 microwave oven _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Principal, As a freshman, I really appreciate the initiative to enhance our campus life through new acquisitions. Among the options presented—vending machines, air conditioners, and microwave ovens—I firmly advocate for the installation of air conditioners. The rationale behind this choice is that, while vending machines and microwave ovens offer convenience, they do not address the fundamental issue of thermal comfort, which is paramount for academic success. As we all know, the comfort of a regulated temperature is crucial for our learning environment, especially during extreme weather conditions. Therefore, by ensuring a comfortable classroom temperature, air conditioners will not only improve our concentration but also foster a healthier and more productive learning atmosphere. Thank you for considering my perspective. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以黎明的身份，给校长写信，就学校物资的采购发表意见，从所给的三个物品选项中选出自己认为最值得购买的物品，并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 改善：enhance→improve 解决：address→handle, tackle 至关重要的：paramount→principal 确保：ensure→guarantee 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Among the options presented—vending machines, air conditioners, and microwave ovens—I firmly advocate for the installation of air conditioners. 拓展句：Among the options presented—vending machines, air conditioners, and microwave ovens—I firmly advocate that our school should install air conditioners. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The rationale behind this choice is that, while vending machines and microwave ovens offer convenience, they do not address the fundamental issue of thermal comfort, which is paramount for academic success. (运用了that引导表语从句、while引导让步状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] As we all know, the comfort of a regulated temperature is crucial for our learning environment, especially during extreme weather conditions. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句) 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市复旦大学附属中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期末英语试卷 假设你是旦华中学高一学生李明，鉴于最近校内有数名学生在体育课上受伤，学校英语报针对这一情况开展主题为“如何提高学生身体素质”的征文活动。写一篇投稿，内容须包括： 1）两条有助于改善身体素质的建议 2）你提出这些建议的理由 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Improving Students’ Physical Health My name is Li Ming, a freshman at Danhua High School. Recently, several students have been injured during PE classes, highlighting the need for better physical health. I have two suggestions to improve our physical fitness. Firstly, the school should mandate regular warm-up and cool-down sessions, which can help prevent injuries. These exercises increase flexibility and slowly prepare the body for rigorous activities. Secondly, I recommend incorporating more diverse sports activities into the curriculum. Sports like swimming and yoga, which are less injury-prone, provide excellent full-body workouts and enhance endurance. These suggestions are essential because they not only minimize the risk of injuries but also promote long-term health benefits. A well-rounded exercise program ensures that students are physically fit, which will improve their overall well-being and academic performance. By implementing these changes, we can foster a healthier and safer school environment. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英文报以“如何提高学生身体素质”为主题写一篇文章投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 受伤：injured→wounded 增强：improve→enhance 多样的：diverse→variety 必不可少的：essential→necessary 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：By implementing these changes, we can foster a healthier and safer school environment. 同义句：By putting these modifications into effect, we can cultivate a more healthful and secure atmosphere within our educational institution. 【点睛】【高分句型1】A well-rounded exercise program ensures that students are physically fit, which will improve their overall well-being and academic performance. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】These suggestions are essential because they not only minimize the risk of injuries but also promote long-term health benefits. (运用了not only…but also引导的并列句) 3．Directions: Write an English composition in around 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市大同中学2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末英语试题（含听力） 假设你是大同中学的学生，学校将在暑假期间改造操场，团学联正在开展征文活动，题目为“What you can do to make the playground more convenient”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括： 1. 描述你想提出的意见； 2. 说明你的理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 What You Can Do to Make the Playground More Convenient As a student of Datong Middle School, I am excited about the upcoming renovation of our playground during the summer vacation. I believe there are several ways we can contribute to making our playground more convenient for everyone. Firstly, I propose to introduce of a smart booking system. Moreover, I suggest installing additional benches and shelters. This will provide students with a place to rest and take a break from their activities, especially during hot summer days. Finally, I believe it is crucial to involve our student community in the planning process. In conclusion, by implementing these measures, we can contribute to making our playground more convenient and enjoyable for everyone. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“What you can do to make the playground more convenient”为题写一篇投稿文章。 【详解】1.词汇积累 相信：believe→hold the belief that 一些：several→some 建议：propose to do→suggest doing 重要：crucial→vital 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I believe there are several ways we can contribute to making our playground more convenient for everyone. 拓展句：I hold the belief that there are several ways we can contribute to making our playground more convenient for everyone. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe there are several ways we can contribute to making our playground more convenient for everyone. (运用了省略that的定语从句修饰ways) [高分句型2] Finally, I believe it is crucial to involve our student community in the planning process. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海师范大学附属中学闵行分校2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末英语试题 你是明启中学的王磊，你班本学期剩余一笔总额三千元的班费class fee结余，目前有两个方案：1．为教室添加一台空气净化器；2．为每位同学订阅一份英语周报Shanghai Students’ Post。请你给班委会class committee写一封信，谈谈你的看法，必须包括： 1．你赞同的方案； 2．你赞同该方案的理由； 3．你对于执行此方案的建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear class committee, As we all know, there is a class fee balance of 3,000 yuan remaining for this semester. At present, there are two ways to spend it: one is to add an air purifier to the classroom; the other is to subscribe to the Shanghai Students’ Post for each student. I am in favor of subscribing to the Shanghai Students’ Post. For one thing, the Shanghai Students’ Post is a good journal for our English studies. For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons. We should set aside two classes every week for our students to read it, and find an opportunity to let the students report on what they have read. Yours, Wang Lei 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给班委会写一封信，谈谈对如何使用本学期剩余班费方案的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 学期：semester → term 目前：at present → now 支持：be in favor of → support 机会：opportunity → chance 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：For one thing, the Shanghai Students’ Post is a good journal for our English studies. For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons. 拓展句：Not only is the Shanghai Students’ Post a good journal for our English studies, but also it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons. 【点睛】[高分句型1] For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons.(运用了关系代词which 引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] We should set aside two classes every week for our students to read it, and find an opportunity to let the students report on what they have read.(运用了连接代词what引导宾语从句) 5．Directions:  Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市宝山区2023-2024学年高一下学期期末教学质量监测英语试卷 假如你是明启中学高一学生李明，在你校英语报读到如下征文启事：从小学至今，每个 人都制定过许多计划，有过许多新学期愿景，其中有些中途放弃了，有些坚持到底了。请你就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写一篇征文，内容需包括： ●  简单描述你曾经中途放弃或坚持到底的某个计划； ●  阐述你中途放弃或坚持到底的原因以及对你的启示。 (文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Dilemma of Persistence and Surrender As a freshman at Mingqi High School, I have encountered many forks in the road of my life. Among the numerous plans and aspirations I’ve set for myself, one stands out — my decision to learn the piano. Initially, the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, but soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll. I surrendered, overwhelmed by the challenge. Looking back, I realize that my surrender was a result of my lack of resilience. I failed to persevere when faced with difficulties. This experience taught me a valuable lesson: giving up too easily can lead to missed opportunities and unfulfilled dreams. Now, I strive to be more determined, understanding that true growth lies in overcoming obstacles, not avoiding them. Persistence, not surrender, is the key to success. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写一篇征文。 【详解】1.词汇积累 遇到：encounter→run into 意识到：realize→be aware of 努力：strive to→struggle to 障碍：obstacle→barrier 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Initially, the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, but soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll. 拓展句：Initially, although the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking back, I realize that my surrender was a result of my lack of resilience. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I failed to persevere when faced with difficulties.(运用了状语从句的省略) 6．Directions:  Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市浦东新区2022-2023学年高一下学期期末英语模拟卷 假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校将邀请当地某艺术学校王教授进行以“中国国画”（traditional Chinese painting）为主题的讲座。请你以学生会的名义写一则通知。 内容包括：1. 讲座目的以及讲座的时间和地点；  2. 讲座内容。 注意：1. 词数80左右；  2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Notice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 【答案】参考范文： Notice To enrich our school life and spread traditional Chinese culture, a lecture on the theme of traditional Chinese painting will be held in our school. The lecture, which will be given by Professor Wang from a local art school, is scheduled to be delivered on Friday afternoon from 3 p.m. to 5 p.m. in the school lecture hall. The professor will first give us an overall introduction to traditional Chinese painting while showing pictures of some famous Chinese paintings. Then he will show us the basic painting skills and draw a painting on the spot. Finally, there will be a question-and-answer session where we can have direct communication with Professor Wang. Anyone interested is welcome to attend the lecture! The Students’ Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校将邀请当地某艺术学校王教授进行以“中国国画”为主题的讲座撰写一则通知。 【详解】1.词汇积累 主题：theme → topic 举办：hold → host 总体的：overall→ general 展示：show → display 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To enrich our school life and spread traditional Chinese culture, a lecture on the theme of traditional Chinese painting will be held in our school. 拓展句：A lecture on the theme of traditional Chinese painting will be held in our school, whose aim is to enrich our school life and spread traditional Chinese culture. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The lecture, which will be given by Professor Wang from a local art school, is scheduled to be delivered on Friday afternoon from 3 p.m. to 5 p.m. in the school lecture hall. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Finally, there will be a question-and-answer session where we can have direct communication with Professor Wang. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) 7．Directions:  Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市黄浦区2022-2023学年高一6月期终调研测试英语试题 假设你是启明中学高一学生李明。临近期末，你的英语老师正在设计暑假作业，现征求学生意见。请写一封电子邮件给老师，内容须包含： 1. 不同形式与内容的作业建议2-3条； 2. 给出你的理由。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mrs. Wang, When conveyed that you are soliciting opinions concerning designing summer homework, I feel delighted and hasten to express my suggestions and opinions. To begin with, I think it is a better form to complete a sentence with the correct words, because in this way can we check whether we have mastered the words we have learned this term. More importantly, writing in English reflects students’ comprehensive learning of the English language. Thus I strongly suggest that you put this form of homework on your list. I think it will be very helpful to the students. I hope that you can take my suggestions into consideration. And I have the confidence that the homework you will give us will be reasonable and practical. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封建议信，为英语老师的暑假作业提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 涉及：concerning → involving 高兴的：delighted → joyful 以这种方法：in this way → with this method 学期：term → semester 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Thus I strongly suggest that you put this form of homework on your list. I think it will be very helpful to the students. 拓展句：Thus I strongly suggest that you put this form of homework on your list, which I think will be very helpful to the students. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When conveyed that you are soliciting opinions concerning designing summer homework, I feel delighted and hasten to express my suggestions and opinions. (运用了状语从句的省略和that引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】And I have the confidence that the homework you will give us will be reasonable and practical. (运用了that引导的同位语从句和省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句) 8．Directions: Please write an essay of about 100-120 words based on the following instructions in Chinese. 【来源】华东政法大学附属松江高级中学2022-2023学年高一期末英语试题 假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校为丰富学生课余生活，营造英语学习氛围，决定开展一次有关传统节日的英语征文活动。为积极响应学校号召，你准备写一个最让你难忘的节日，内容包括： 1) 该节日的简单介绍； 2) 你最难忘的场景。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     As is known to us, the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the major Chinese traditional festivals, which family members spend together laughing and chatting. The last Mid-Autumn festival is the most unforgettable one in my life. It seems that it had happened yesterday. On that day, led by our headmaster, we went to the Xiyang nursing home, which housed many elderly people. Their adult children, mostly migrant workers, couldn’t keep them company. First, we swept the floor, cleaned dinner tables with cloths. Then we instructed the elderly techniques involving how to order goods online and use smart phones skillfully. Finally we chatted cheerfully while eating mooncakes and admiring the moon together. As tired we were on that day, we were delighted at the sight of smiles on their faces. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生介绍一个最让你难忘的节日，内容包括：该节日的简单介绍；你最难忘的场景。 【详解】1.词汇积累 主要的：major→main 教；指导：guide→instruct 兴致勃勃地：excitedly→cheerfully 陪伴某人：accompany sb.→keep sb. company 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Their adult children, mostly migrant workers, couldn’t keep them company. 拓展句：Their adult children, mostly migrant workers who worked in big cities, couldn’t keep them company. 【点睛】[高分句型1] On that day, led by our headmaster, we went to the Xiyang nursing home, which housed many elderly people.  (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] As tired we were on that day, we were delighted at the sight of smiles on their faces. (运用了as引导的部分倒装语序的让步状语从句) 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高一上学期学习能力诊断英语试题 假设你是明启中学的学生李华，学校正在征求学生对每周缩短上学时间至 4 天的看法和感受。请发送一封邮件至校长信箱，你的邮件内容须包括： 1）你是否赞同缩短上学时间； 2）你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear principal, I’m Li Hua, a student from senior three. Learning that our school is asking for our opinions on shortening the school week to four days, I am writing to express my thoughts. Although shortening the school days will give students better rest and plenty of time to do the things that they are fond of, it will be a disaster for the students who need more time to get ready for their school career. As a senior three student, I think a four-day school week is not a good choice for us students, because we not only need teacher’s help in academy but also ought to do a number of exercises to prepare for the college entrance examination. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion and make a careful decision.                                                                        Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长写信表达对每周缩短上学时间至四天的看法和感受，并说明是否赞同及理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 准备：prepare for →get ready for 考虑：consider → think of 比赛：be fond of →like 应该：ought to→ should 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Learning that our school is asking for our opinions on shortening the school week to four days, I am writing to express my thoughts. 拓展句：Because I Learn that our school is asking for our opinions on shortening the school week to four days, I am writing to express my thoughts. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Although shortening the school days will give students better rest and plenty of time to do the things that they are fond of, it will be a disaster for the students who need more time to get ready for their school career.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句、that引导的定语从句和who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion and make a careful decision.（运用了if引导的宾语从句） 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市上海市闵行区六校2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末联考英语试题 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你的笔友David 要来中国旅游，因为对中国文化很感兴趣，他发邮件请你推荐一个旅游景点。在老街古镇和博物馆之间你会推荐哪一个？理由是什么？ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear David, I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to China! Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I would highly recommend visiting an ancient town like Laojie. Laojie offers a unique glimpse into traditional Chinese life. Walking through its narrow lanes, you’ll be surrounded by ancient buildings, traditional crafts, and local delicacies. The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, allowing you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. In contrast, museums, though informative, lack the lived-in feel and authentic charm of a place like Laojie. I’m confident that a visit to Laojie will leave you with unforgettable memories and a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. I look forward to hearing about your adventures! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写信给David，推荐一个中国的旅游景点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 围绕：surround→enclose 本质：essence→nature 激动：thrilled→excited 难忘：unforgettable→memorable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, allowing you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. 拓展句：The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, which allows you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Walking through its narrow lanes, you’ll be surrounded by ancient buildings, traditional crafts, and local delicacies. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] I’m confident that a visit to Laojie will leave you with unforgettable memories and a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 11．Directions: Write an English composition in around 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市黄浦区2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末英语试题 假设你是明启中学的学生，学校将在暑假期间重新装修图书馆，校报正在开展英语征文活动，题目为“Small changes make an ideal school library”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括： 1．描述你希望图书馆发生的1~2个变化 2．说明你的理由 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Small Changes Make an Ideal School Library As a student of Mingqi High School, I am excited about the upcoming renovation of our library during the summer vacation. Among the many potential improvements, I particularly envision two important changes. Firstly, I hope to see more comfortable seating arrangements, including sofas and beanbags, to create a cozy reading environment. Secondly, I propose introducing a digital reading zone with computers and tablets, enabling students to access e-books and online resources effortlessly. These changes are crucial because they directly enhance the student experience. Comfortable seating encourages longer reading sessions, fostering a deeper engagement with books.  Meanwhile, the digital reading zone caters to the modern learning trends, making it easier for students to access information beyond the physical shelves. With these small yet impactful adjustments, our library will transform into an ideal learning hub that meets the needs of both traditional and digital learners. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生以“Small changes make an ideal school library”为题，写一篇文章投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：firstly→to begin with 许多的：many→a number of 重要的：important→significant 加强：enhance→strengthen 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, I hope to see more comfortable seating arrangements, including sofas and beanbags, to create a cozy reading environment. 拓展句：Firstly, I hope to see more comfortable seating arrangements, which include sofas and beanbags, to create a cozy reading environment. 【点睛】[高分句型1] These changes are crucial because they directly enhance the student experience.（运用了because引导原因状语从句） [高分句型2] With these small yet impactful adjustments, our library will transform into an ideal learning hub that meets the needs of both traditional and digital learners.（运用了that引导定语从句） 12．Directions: Write an English composition in around 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 【来源】上海市曹杨第二中学2022-2023学年高一下学期期末考试英语试题 学校校刊正以“旅行者故事”为主题，向全校征集特殊或精彩的旅行故事。假设你是高一学生李明，请写一篇文章投稿，内容须包括： 1)详细叙述你的一次旅行经历； 2)简单说说这次旅行对你的影响。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                      My Visit to Chengdu Last month, my parents and I went on a trip to Chengdu in Sichuan Province. It’s a city with a long history and rich culture. There are so many places of interest that we can’t have enough time to visit all of them. We climbed Emei Mountain, which is famous for its religious history. We met many cute monkeys there, and I took a lot of pictures of them. Besides, Chengdu has many famous foods, among which hot pot is my favorite. We tried the hot pot in a restaurant, and it was spicy and delicious! What’s more, Sichuan is home to pandas, so it would be a regret without seeing pandas. There’re many panda signs and panda-themed stores, which might not be common in any other place. We also went to the zoo to see the famous panda “Hua Hua”! In short, my travelling experience to Chengdu is totally unforgettable. And it makes me proud of the beauty of our country. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性写作，要求考生写一篇文章投稿，详细叙述自己的一次旅行经历，并简单谈论一下这次旅行对自己的影响。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 去旅行：go on a trip→ take a trip/go to travel 以……而出名：be famous for→ be known for/get the reputation for 遗憾：regret→ pity 简言之：in short→ in a word 2. 句式拓展 简单句合并为复合句 原句：Last month, my parents and I went on a trip to Chengdu in Sichuan Province. It’s a city with a long history and rich culture. 拓展句：Last month, my parents and I went on a trip to Chengdu in Sichuan Province, which is a city with a long history and rich culture. 【点睛】【高分句型1】There are so many places of interest that we can’t have enough time to visit all of them.(使用了there be句型、so…that…引导结果状语从句和不定式作后置定语) 【高分句型2】Besides, Chengdu has many famous foods, among which hot pot is my favorite.(使用了“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句) 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$