读后续写 圣诞节助人故事续写 讲义 山东省青岛市2024-2025学年高一下学期期中学业水平检测英语试题

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Yesterday afternoon, students rushed out of the school gate and greatly rejoiced (高兴) at the arrival of Christmas holiday. They gathered at the flower store to buy flowers for their friends or relatives with pocket money. Opposite the door of the store stood a very small boy named Jim. His face was dirty, with one arm resting against the wall, and his head supported on it, crying sadly. Two or three of the girls came to Jim and asked, “What is the matter that you cry like this?” But he made no reply. Soon many children gathered there out of curiosity.

“Come, tell us what is the matter with you and why you are crying,” one girl repeated softly. And then Jim lifted his face from his arm and said through his tears that he had lost the twenty dollars his parents had given him to buy presents for his grandmother who lived in a nursing home. It had escaped through a hole in his pocket and he showed the hole to them. Jim didn’t want to go home because he was afraid of disappointing his parents. They lived a poor life, and that money meant a lot to them. Saying that, Jim again dropped his head upon his arms and cried in deep sadness.

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The children felt sorry for Jim and tried to find a way to help him out.

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圣诞节助人故事续写

续写分析​

续写部分以孩子们对吉姆的同情为起点，通过 “Without hesitation”“took out”“put into” 等简洁有力的表述，生动展现第一个女孩率先帮助吉姆的果断行

动，为后续其他孩子的善举起到示范作用。“Inspired by her, the others followed suit” 巧妙过渡，体现善良行为的感染力，随后具体说明孩子们捐赠金额的差异，如 “Some donated five dollars, while others gave two or three”，突出孩子们尽力相助的真诚。“collected enough money” 快速推动情节发展，解决吉姆丢失钱的困境。对吉姆的描写 “eyes widened in disbelief”“filled with tears of gratitude”“sobbed”，从神态到语言，细腻刻画他意外获助后的惊喜与感激之情。结尾 “steps light”“heart full of warmth” 以充满画面感的描写，展现吉姆重新获得希望的状态，整个续写在紧凑的情节中，充分传递出童真的善良与温暖互助的美好主题 。​

全文翻译​

昨天下午，学生们冲出校门，为圣诞节假期的到来而欢呼雀跃。他们聚集在花店，用零花钱为朋友或亲人买花。花店门口对面站着一个叫吉姆的小男孩。他的脸脏兮兮的，一只胳膊靠在墙上，头枕在胳膊上，伤心地哭泣着。两三个女孩走到吉姆面前问道：“你为什么哭得这么厉害？” 但他没有回答。很快，许多孩子出于好奇围拢过来。​

“来吧，告诉我们你怎么了，为什么哭？” 一个女孩轻声重复道。然后，吉姆从胳膊上抬起脸，流着泪说，他把父母给他的二十美元弄丢了，那是用来给住在养老院的奶奶买礼物的。钱从他口袋的一个洞里掉了出去，他还把那个洞给大家看。吉姆不想回家，因为他害怕让父母失望。他们生活贫困，那笔钱对他们来说意义重大。说着，吉姆又把头埋在胳膊上，伤心地哭了起来。​

孩子们很同情吉姆，想办法帮他摆脱困境。一个女孩毫不犹豫地掏出剩下的零花钱，放进吉姆手里。受她的鼓舞，其他人也纷纷效仿。有的捐了五美元，有的捐了两三美元。很快，他们就凑够了钱，让吉姆去买礼物。当吉姆看到这些钱时，他难以置信地瞪大了眼睛，随后眼中充满了感激的泪水。“非常感谢你们所有人，” 他抽泣着说。拿着这笔失而复得的钱，吉姆朝着商店走去，脚步轻快，心中满是温暖。​

故事线​

节日喜悦：昨天下午，圣诞节假期来临，学生们兴奋地冲出校门，前往花店买花准备送给亲友。​

发现困境：花店门口对面，小男孩吉姆满脸泪痕、伤心哭泣，引起孩子们的