应用文写作 消防演练新闻报道 讲义 辽宁省大连市沙河口区大连市第八中学2024-2025学年高一下学期4月月考英语试题

写作

假定你是李华，昨天你校组织全体师生进行了一次消防演练活动，请为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：1. 活动目；2. 演练经过；3. 活动反响。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80个左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

3. 参考词汇：evacuate 疏散，撤离  fire extinguishers 灭火器

A Firefighting Drill

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消防演练新闻报道

文本主旨

这篇英文新闻报道以学校消防演练活动为核心，先点明活动旨在提升学生安全意识、培养应急技能；接着按流程详细叙述演练中拉响警报、师生有序疏散，以及消防员演示灭火器使用、学生现场实践等环节；最后阐述活动收获师生积极反响，学生增强了应急信心，教师认可其对安全教育的重要性，全面展现校园安全教育活动的开展与意义。​

高频词汇​

firefighting drill（消防演练）​

school（学校）​

safety awareness（安全意识）​

emergency skills（应急技能）​

evacuate（疏散）​

firefighters（消防员）​

fire extinguishers（灭火器）​

feedback（反响）​

短语​

organize a firefighting drill（组织消防演练）​

enhance safety awareness（提升安全意识）​

equip with（配备；使具备）​

begin with（以…… 开始）​

fire alarm（火警警报）​

designated routes（指定路线）​

on - site（现场）​

handle emergencies（处理紧急情况）​

safety education（安全教育）​

positive feedback（积极反响）​

佳句​

Yesterday, our school organized a firefighting drill to enhance students’ safety awareness and equip them with emergency skills.（开篇点明时间、主体和活动目的，简洁明了，迅速切入主题。）​

The drill began with a fire alarm. Teachers guided students to evacuate quickly and orderly through designated routes.（用简洁的语句，按顺序描述演练起始和关键环节，逻辑清晰。）​

Once safely outside, firefighters demonstrated how to use fire extinguishers properly, and some students practiced it on - site.（承接上文，继续推进演练流程，突出实践操作部分。）​

The drill received positive feedback.（过渡自然，引出师生对活动的评价，使报道结构完整。）​

Students said they felt more confident in handling emergencies, and teachers believed such practical activities were essential for students’ safety education.（通过师生的具体感受，体现活动效果，增强报道说服力。）​

写作示范一​

A Firefighting Drill​