读后续写：关于善意的故事 讲义-甘肃省庆阳市华池县第一中学2024-2025学年高一下学期5月期中英语试题

读后续写

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Be kind to others. I realize this is simple and very basic. However, it is necessary and it does make a difference. I often have people who cross my daily path to whom I can show kindness. It is often just a smile. A smile often says, “I see you. You aren’t invisible to me. You are important.” People need someone to care about them.

I read a story many years ago about a man who had decided to commit suicide. He’d lost a fortune, his job, his family and nearly everything he owned. He went to a local pawn shop to buy a gun. He planned to take the gun back to his apartment in New York City, and kill himself.

As he was getting on the elevator, a little old lady was slowly getting on too. She had a small cart she was pulling behind her and was having a little trouble getting it into the elevator. He said that he was actually a bit angry because he wanted to hurry up, get to his apartment and end his own life. He reached out to the old lady’s cart and forced it as it had become stuck. He got it free easily and she got on the elevator.

After the door closed, she looked up at him with a big smile and said, “If we had more young men like you in this world, the world would be a better place. You are so kind to help. Such a sweet young man. ”

Of course, it changed his thought of going back to kill himself. He wanted to go around New York and find people that he could help and people who were struggling even with something that was as small as the little old lady’s cart.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

That day his life changed.

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Later, he enjoyed great success in his work and life.

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关于善意的故事续写

续写分析

续写第一段分析（160 字）

第一段以 “that day his life changed” 开篇，直接点明老人善意的话语对他产生的深远影响。“wandered through the streets, eyes peeled for those in need” 生动描绘出他主动寻找需要帮助之人的状态，体现其心态从消极走向积极的转变。通过 “helped an old man carry groceries”“retrieved a child’s toy” 等具体事例，展现他践行善意的过程。“the man’s grateful nods fueling his determination”“the child’s laughter like music to his ears” 从侧面刻画他在帮助他人后获得的情感反馈，进一步推动其内心变化。“darkness... lifted”“renewed sense of purpose and hope” 通过比喻和抽象描述，形象地展现出善意行为对他心理的积极影响，为后文他的成功和进一步传递善意埋下伏笔。

续写第二段分析（160 字）

第二段承接上文，讲述他在生活和事业取得成功后，依然铭记善意的力量。“established a foundation”“spoke at schools and community events” 等行为，展现他将个人的善意升华为更广泛的社会行动，扩大善意的影响力。“never forgot the little old lady” 强调最初的善意对他的深远意义，突出善意传递的源头。“a single act of kindness can save a life” 通过他的话语，直接点明文章主旨，揭示善意不仅能改变个人命运，还能激励更多人。“living testament to the power of kindness” 总结全文，将他的人生经历与善意的力量紧密联系，升华主题，引发读者对善意价值的思考。

故事线

绝望寻死：一个男人因失去财富、工作和家庭，决定自杀。他去当铺买枪，准备回公寓结束自己的生命。

善意触动：在电梯里，他帮助一位难以将小推车推进电梯的老太太，老太太对他的善意表示感谢，并称赞他是个好青年，这改变了他自杀的念头。

践行善意：他开始在纽约街头主动帮助他人，如帮老人提杂货、帮孩子捡玩具等。每一次善举都让他感受到希望和力量，逐渐走出黑暗。

获得成功：他在工作和生活中取得了巨大成功，但始终没有忘记那位老太太