写作:给史密斯先生的标语推荐邮件 讲义-2025届浙江省宁波市等3地县域教研联盟高三下学期二模英语试题
写作
假设你是李华,你校学生会正在为“高三励志墙”征集英文标语。请你给负责此次活动的外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的标语
2.推荐理由
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
给史密斯先生的标语推荐邮件
文本主旨
这封邮件是李华向外教 Mr. Smith 推荐 “高三励志墙” 英文标语。李华提出标语 “Press forward, and you will reach new heights”,并阐述推荐理由,包括标语简洁有力、便于记忆,其内涵能激励高三学生在面对沉重学业压力时,克服困难、不断奋进,保持积极向上的学习态度,表达了该标语适合用于励志墙,能够给予高三学子精神鼓舞的观点 。
高频词汇
recommend(推荐)
motto(标语)
senior three(高三)
inspirational(励志的)
students(学生)
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encourage(鼓励)
pressure(压力)
fit(适合)
短语
write to recommend(写信推荐)
Inspirational Wall(励志墙)
concise yet powerful(简洁有力)
keep striving(不断奋斗)
despite difficulties(尽管困难)
achieve excellent results(取得优异成绩)
face heavy study pressure(面临沉重的学习压力)
serve as a reminder(作为提醒)
stay motivated(保持积极性)
a great fit for(非常适合)
佳句
I’m writing to recommend my motto for the “Senior Three Inspirational Wall”.(开篇直接点明邮件目的,简洁明了,迅速切入主题。)
My suggestion is “Press forward, and you will reach new heights”.(直接给出推荐标语,清晰呈现核心内容。)
This motto is concise yet powerful, easy for students to remember.(从标语特点出发,说明其优势,为后续阐述理由做铺垫。)
As senior three students face heavy study pressure, such a motto can serve as a constant reminder to stay motivated and confident.(结合高三学生实际情况,强调标语的激励作用,增强推荐的说服力。)
I believe it’s a great fit for our inspirational wall.(结尾表明观点,简洁有力地总结推荐态度。)
写作示范一
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m eager to recommend my motto “Burn the midnight oil, and harvest success awaits” for the Senior Three Inspirational Wall. This phrase vividly describes the hard
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