读后续写--一场由夹克引发的风波 讲义-四川省泸州市江阳区泸州高级中学校2024-2025学年高一下学期4月期中英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 左右。

Lorena parted the curtain in her living room and looked out onto the wet street. She was relieved the sunlight appeared. If it didn't stop raining it would ruin her day. Her mother had promised to drive her to Fashion Fair if it were sunny. Lorena was eager to go there because she had to replace a Nike jacket.

Earlier that Wednesday afternoon, Eddie, the most popular seventh-grader, had given Lorena his jacket and asked her to keep an eye as he would play basketball in a hurry. Lorena was quite happy to be of help.

During her last class, the biology teacher made them cut apart dead frogs. For fear of getting blood on Eddie's jacket, Lorena folded it and placed it on a chair. Then she took the knife and cut the skin quickly. She felt sick opening the frog's belly.

When the bell rang Lorena hurried out because the bus she caught for home left ten minutes after school. She raced to board the bus and found a seat. After a few minutes the driver started the engine and drove away when Lorena looked out of the window and saw Eddie. "The jacket!" she screamed. She shot from her seat and ran up to the driver. "You've got to stop! I forgot Eddie's jacket!" "Who's Eddie? " the driver said angrily. "Sit down."

All that evening she was upset and blamed her biology teacher for her problem. If he hadn't made them dissect(解剖) frogs, ,she wouldn't have been so absent-minded. The next day Lorena rushed from the bus to the biology room. The jacket was not there!

"How can I ever tell Eddie?" she closed her eyes. She spent most of her break and lunch period in the rest room, brushing her hair and worrying. On Friday she stayed home to avoid Eddie. She told her mother she wanted to go shopping to buy her a gift for her birthday, which was the next week. Actually, she wanted to buy a Nike jacket with her life savings at Fashion Fair.

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Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left, asking her not to waste money.

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Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his Nike jacket.

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一、续写分析​

第一段续写分析

Lorena 来到 Fashion Fair 后，内心充满焦虑与期待。她穿梭在琳琅满目的店铺中，眼神急切地搜寻着与 Eddie 那件一模一样的 Nike 夹克。每路过一家运动品牌店，她都快步上前，仔细查看货架上的款式，却一次次失望而归。此时，她的脑海中不断浮现出 Eddie 发现夹克丢失时的表情，自责与不安愈发强烈。​

在寻找过程中，她可能会遇到一些小插曲。比如，在一家店铺里，她看到一件相似的夹克，满心欢喜地拿起来，却发现颜色和细节与 Eddie 的那件略有不同。店员热情地向她介绍这款夹克的特点和优惠活动，但她只是礼貌地回应，心思完全不在此。又或者，她在匆忙寻找时，不小心撞到了其他顾客，连忙道歉后，继续焦急地前行。​

随着时间的推移，她渐渐感到疲惫和绝望，甚至开始怀疑自己是否真的能找到那件夹克。然而，就在她几乎要放弃的时候，她在一个角落里的店铺橱窗中，看到了那件梦寐以求的 Nike 夹克。那一刻，她的眼睛瞬间亮了起来，心中涌起一丝希望。她迫不及待地冲进店铺，向店员询问价格和尺码，生怕这件夹克被别人买走。当得知有合适的尺码时，她毫不犹豫地拿出自己的积蓄，买下了这件夹克，心中的一块大石头终于落了地。​

第二段续写分析

Lorena 满心欢喜地拿着新买的夹克，正要离开时，看到了穿着 Nike 夹克的 Eddie。她瞬间愣住了，心中充满了疑惑和惊讶。Eddie 也看到了她，微笑着向她走来。Lorena 紧张地握着手中的夹克，不知该如何开口。​

Eddie 先打破了沉默，他感谢 Lorena 之前帮他保管夹克，并解释说那天他在篮球场找了一圈没找到，后来回到教室发现夹克还在那里，原来是他记错了放置的位置。Lorena 听后，又好气又好笑，心中的愧疚瞬间烟消云散。她向 Eddie 讲述了自己这几天为了找夹克所经历的种种，Eddie 听后十分感动，也为自己的粗心向 Lorena 道歉。​

两人相视而笑，之前因为夹克产生的小插曲反而让他们的关系变得更加亲密。Lorena 意识到，虽然这几天的经历充满了波折和焦虑，但最终有了一个圆满的结局。这次经历不仅让她学会了要更加细心，也让她明白了朋友之间的信任和理解是多么重要。他们一起走出 Fashion Fair，阳光洒在他们身上，仿佛也在为他们的友谊而欢呼。​

二、故事线​

委托保管：周三下午，Eddie 将夹克委托 Lorena 保管，Lorena 欣然答应，为故事发展埋下伏笔。​

意外丢失：生物课上，Lorena 因解剖青蛙，将夹克放在椅子上，下课后匆忙赶公交，忘记拿夹克，导致夹克丢失。​

焦急寻找：接下来的几天，Lorena 在学校和家里都没能找到夹克，内心十分焦虑，决定去 Fashion Fair 购买同款夹克。​

曲折购买：在 Fashion Fair，Lorena 经历多次失望后，终于找到并购买到了心仪的夹克。​

误会解除：准备离开时，Lorena 遇到 Eddie，得知夹克并未丢失，两人误会解除，友谊更进一步。​

三、短语

keep an eye 照看，留意​

in a hurry 匆忙地​

be of help 有帮助​

for fear of 生怕，以免​

run up to 跑向​

shoot from 从…… 冲出去​

be absent-minded 心不在焉的​

avoid sb. 避开某人​

in search of 寻找​

be filled with 充满​

break the silence 打破沉默​

apologize to sb. 向某人道歉​

learn from 从…… 中学习​

a happy ending 一个圆满的结局​

hand in hand 手拉手​

四、主旨升华句

Sometimes, the twists and turns in life can lead to unexpected but beautiful outcomes, just like how Lorena's worry about the lost jacket turned into a deeper friendship.（有时候，生活中的曲折会带来意想不到却美好的结果，就像 Lorena 对丢失夹克的担忧最终转化为更深厚的友谊。）​

This experience taught Lorena that a moment of carelessness might cause trouble, but with responsibility and determination, problems can be solved.（这次经历教会 Lorena，一时的粗心可能会带来麻烦，但只要有责任感和决心，问题就能得到解决。）​

True friendship isn't shaken by misunderstandings; instead, it grows stronger through open communication and mutual understanding.（真正的友谊不会被误解动摇，相反，它会通过坦诚的交流和相互理解变得更加牢固。）​