读后续写微技能之无灵主语 课件 2025届高三高考复习英语专题
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高考新题型读后续写微技能之
无灵主语
Comparison
She changed greatly after ten years of hard work.
Ten years of hard work changed her greatly.
At dusk, she was crying in the street.
Dusk found her crying in the street.
He lost courage.
Courage deserted him.
Subjects: person Subjects: lifeless nouns
01 Concept inanimate subject
无灵主语
用无生命的事物做主语,用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语,因此这类句子常常自带拟人化的修辞色彩,把没有生命的东西,赋予生命力,从而增加了主语的多样性,使语言更加生动化。
Appreciation
This lesson will take root in my mind.
An earthquake came like a thief at midnight without warning.
The smile on her face was as vibrant(充满生机的) as the sun on a summer day.
02 Focus
1. 情感状态类名词
2. 带动词意味的名词
3. 时间地点场景类名词
4. 自然现象类名词
5. 身体部位/音容笑貌类名词
1. 情感状态类名词
Fear ruled the whole village.
Anger and bitterness has seized/taken hold of him continually for weeks.
Anxiety tore her into pieces.
Pratice
紧张的情绪涌上他的心头。
她兴奋极了。
一想到考试的失败,他就万念俱灰。
我气得说不出话。
Nervousness washed over him.
Excitement took hold of her.
Despair seized him at the thought of his failure in the exam.
Anger choked my words.
2.带动词意味的名词
Rewrite the following sentences with inanimate subjects together.
1. We walked for ten minutes and arrived at the hotel.
2. When he saw his father, he was afraid that he was in for
another cursing(咒骂).
3. After taking a rest, he gained confidence and a feeling
of security.
A ten minutes' walk brought us to the hotel.
The sight of his father made him afraid that he was in for another cursing.
Rest brought him confidence and a feeling of security.
Pratice
看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧。
我突然想到一个可怕的想法。
想到不久就要见到她的儿子,她心中感到十分快乐。
The sight of the scene filled me with horror.
A terrible thought suddenly struck me.
The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness.
3.自然现象类名词
Dawn found him already on the road.
Autumn sees/witnesses many young people in colorful sweaters.
The town boasts (以拥有......而自豪) a beautiful lake.
Pratice
落日见证了这座城市的美丽。
漆黑的夜晚,一只小狗在一条林荫大道中间趴着。
The sunset witnesses/sees the beauty of the city.
The dark night found a little dog lying in the middle of a street/ an avenue.
4.时间地点场景类名词
The rain prevented me from coming.
A heavy rain visited the city.
常见的自然现象类名词:sun;sunshine;moon;moonlight;fog,mist 雾;rain;earthquake …
常见的谓语动词:blanket 覆盖;come;bring;prevent 妨碍阻止;strike 打击侵袭;threaten 威胁/即将来临等。
5.身体部位/音容笑貌类名词
常见的谓语动词:light up, brighten 照亮;linger 继续存留;well up 涌出;flash 闪烁等。
常见的部位、外貌类名词:face;laughter;smile;tear等。
Pratice
笑声在房间里萦绕。
泪水从Lily的眼中涌出。
他尴尬的脸都红了。
Laughter lingered around the room.
Tears welled up in Lily’s eyes.
His face burned with embarrassment.
Pratice
一 根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空,并背诵。
1.她站在门口,绝望得说不出话来。
She stood by the door, and ____(主语)choked her words.
2.看到那头可怕的狼,我吓得喉咙发紧,两腿发软。
At the sight of the frightening wolf. I felt so scared that_____(主语)_____(动词)and _____(主语)felt weak.
Pratice
3.浓雾笼罩着整个大地。
___________blanketed the field.
4.我突然想到一个可怕的想法。
A terrible thought suddenly ______me.
5.沿着小路,我们来到一个古镇。
The path____us____an ancient town.
My English teacher, Enid, asked me to give a presentation about what we’ve learnt. 1.Seeing so many honorable teachers, I was fearful. Embarrassed, I didn’t say anything. 2. The whole class were totally silent. Everybody was fixing their eyes on me, waiting for my answer.3. I was extremely nervous and I kept my head down, eyes fixed on the desk. Then came Joyce’s encouraging voice, “have a try and believe you can!” Hearing this, 4. I became confident and I began my speech. 5. I would remember the experience forever.
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The sight of so many honorable teachers filled me with fear.
Dead silence seized the whole class.
A wave of nervousness flooded over me.
A sense of confidence welled up in me.
The experience would take root in my mind forever.
Pratice
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Spotting the mess, Dad was a little worried. Before he could question the kids, Jenna threw herself at him, feeling sad. “Dad, we failed to prepare the gift for Mom!” Dad felt surprised and concerned, and the sense of responsibility drove him to help. “Let's do it together.” Suddenly, the twins smiled. The next moment witnessed their efforts to make breakfast and they finally made it. They were happy and satisfied to head for 3the upstairs.
Activity : Rewrite the paragraph (10m)
修改以下段落,要求用上至少2句无灵主语句。
Inanimate Subjects Animate Verbs
Time/ Place/Scene
Emotion courage/luck/confidence
panic/fright/excitement /regret/sorrow/joy…
Body part/Voice/ Expression
Action
sight/thought/glance/idea
Summary
see/witness/find/bring…
desert/leave/abandon/seize/conquer/strike/hit/ /flood/wash(over)hit/
bright/light up/well up
/linger/flash
bring/remind/tell/frighten/
strike/hit/occur /arouse…
Homework
描述一下电影片段,用上无灵主语。
Thank You
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