2025届青岛5月二模应用文 图表图画类应用文讲义

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表达观点常用句型:

(1)From our group's perspective, ...

(2)It is our group's consensus that ...(我们小组一致认为…… )

(3)Our group unanimously holds the view that ...(我们小组一致持有这样的观点…… )

In our group's opinion, this weekend schedule... (negative)

(1)is unsuitable/improper/not appropriate/not reasonable/not practical.

(2)shows poor time - management.

(3) doesn't work.

In our group's opinion, this weekend schedule... (critical thinking)

(1)makes some sense but calls for refinement.

(2)has some rationality but needs improvement.

(3)has its upsides but improvements are necessary.

观点+批判评价+建议

范文:While the schedule ensures enough time for study, which helps to keep up with academic progress, it's challenging to focus for two hours at a time. We suggest  dividing the morning study session in to shorter intervals. 

仿写:

Example 1

While the schedule provides time for socializing by hanging out with friends, which is good for maintaining relationships, spending two consecutive hours might be too long and could cut into other productive activities like reading or exercising.

Example 2

While the schedule allocates time for playing video games, which offers a way to relax, two continuous hours might be excessive and affect other meaningful activities. We suggest reducing the video - game duration to one hour.

Example 3

While the schedule arranges a long study session from 18:00 - 23:00, which allows for in - depth study, studying continuously for five hours is too tiring and may reduce efficiency. We suggest dividing this evening study period into shorter parts with breaks in between.

如何描述表格?

方法1:Overview+details

(Overview)This weekend schedule details daily activities from 07:00 to 23:00. (Details)It covers routines like essential daily activities , studying, and entertainment, with specific time slots allocated for each.

方法2:details(分类)+implication

生活起居类:The schedule includes essential daily - living activities. (From 07:00 - 08:00 is for washing up, and 08:00 - 09:00, 12:00 - 13:00, 17:00 - 18:00 are set for having breakfast, lunch, and dinner respectively), ensuring basic life needs are met.

学习类:Study time is allocated twice. It's from 09:00 - 12:00 in the morning and 18:00 - 23:00 in the evening, providing page number 0

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concentrated periods for academic pursuits.

休闲社交类:For relaxation and socializing, 13:00 - 15:00 is dedicated to playing video games, and 15:00 - 17:00 is for hanging out with friends, balancing work and play.

(2022年新高考乙卷)学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:

1.学习活动状况描述:

2.简单评论;

3.你的建议。

 

 

一、写作技巧

 对于图表作文,写作内容主要包括三个方面:

1. 读出图表所传达的信息,并对信息进行分类

2. 整合信息,总结规律/分析原因

3. 数据处理,关注差异比较大或变化比较明显的信息,有所侧重,写作详略之分。

 

二、常用词汇

1. 点明图表所反映的主题时常用的词汇:

table 表格,chart 图表,diagram 图解/示意图,figure图形/数字

describe 描述,tell 告诉,show 表明, represent 描绘/展示,indicate 显示

 

2. 分析数据差异及变化趋势时常用的词汇:

(1)表示上升或增加的:rise, increase, go up

(2)表示下降或减少的:decrease, fall, reduce, decline, drop, go down

(3)表示变化特点的:sharply 急剧地,quickly 迅速地,rapidly 快速地,dramatically 戏剧性地,slowly 缓慢地,gradually 逐渐地。

(4)表示比较的:compared different from, difference between, while, contrary, however, more than, less than。

(5)表示百分比常用句型:①It accounts for 30% of the total population. ②There are 4 members with master’s degrees, making up nearly a quarter of the workforce. ③Doctors make up 40% of the staff in the hospital.

 

三、常用句式

1. 点明主题时:

I have recently carried out a survey about... 

Last week, we conducted a survey on…

A survey has been made on…

2. 呈现数据/分析原因时:

(1)呈现数据 :

The above table shows that…

As can be seen from the pie chart...

From the graph we can see…

(2)分析原因:page number 1

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There are several reasons that account for this phenomenon.

A number of factors lead to the change.

A number of factors result in the change.

3. 发表看法/提出建议时:

Personally/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned/From my point of view...

It is high time that we should

 

 

【范文 1】

Learning English Beyond the Classroom

There are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently a survey about how to learn English beyond the classroom has been conducted. As can be clearly seen from the statistics, appreciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50% who choose to watch movies as a way of English learning. Reading English books prove to be the less popular ways making up 18%, together with visiting English learning websites, taking up 12% .

It turns out that students attach greater importance to interest and entertainment instead of traditional approaches such as reading books when learning English.

However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it is one of the best ways to increase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding of grammar. Therefore, students become best English learners quickly.

【译文】

要学好英语,我们可以做很多事情。最近进行了一项关于如何在课堂之外学习英语的调查。从统计数据中可以清楚地看出,欣赏英语歌曲占65%,而选择看电影作为一种英语学习方式的比例为50%。阅读英语书籍被证明是不太受欢迎的方式,占18%,同时访问英语学习网站,占12%。

事实证明,学生在学习英语时更重视兴趣和娱乐,而不是像阅读书籍等传统方法。

然而,在我看来,对学生最有利的是阅读英语书籍,因为这是增加词汇量和加强对语法理解的最好方法之一。因此,学生很快就能成为最好的英语学习者。

【范文2】

Learning English Beyond the Classroom

There are many things we can do to learn English well. A recent survey suggests that the majority of students being interviewed, about 65%, tend to learn English by listening to English songs. 50% of the students choose to watch English movies as a way of learning. Reading English books and visiting English learning sites prove to be the less popular ways accounting for 18% and 12% respectively.

Overall, the results are quite interesting, indicating that language learning can be integrated with personal hobbies and entertainment. In the future,I think our school could provide some activities such as book clubs or English corners to further inspire students interest in learning English.

【译文】

在课堂之外学习英语

要学好英语,我们可以做很多事情。最近的一项调查显示,大多数接受采访的学生,约占65%,倾向于通过听英语歌曲来学习英语。50%的学生选择看英语电影作为一种学习方式。阅读英语书籍和访问英语学习网站是不太受欢迎page number 2

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