2025届诸暨市高三二模英语读后续写 ：“我”面对过山车时的退缩与自我挣扎讲义

2025诸暨市高三二模英语读后续写 ：“我”面对过山车时的退缩与自我挣扎

题目原文

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文。

In my collection of photographs is an old picture that is forever imprinted in my memory. It shows me with Dad and my two sisters arm in arm and grinning for the camera. Looming (耸立) in the background is Magnum, the world's tallest and fastest roller coaster. The picture is thirty years old, but the memory it contains is timeless, especially my father's words — “Don't ever apologize for knowing your limits.”

Every time I see this photo, all the details of that summer day at the amusement park rush back: the shining morning sun; the heavy smell of popcorn; the way we decided to ride the roller coaster; the precious photo taken before we took the ride, etc.

But no one knew I was secretly terrified of riding the roller coaster. I fear height. Now that the rest of my family all nodded with excitement, I didn’t want to be the only one to stay behind. My little sister, who barely met the height requirement, behaved fearlessly. If she wasn't afraid, how could I admit that I was?

While inching our way up the long line, I tried to swallow my fear and stand resolute. “You can do this,” I repeated to myself. But with every step forward, a sense of unease grew in my chest.

All too soon, we reached the end of the line. Our turn came. The cars rolled up and clicked to a stop and the gate swung open. It was time to step in. My body went stiff with fear, and at that moment I knew: I could not ride Magnum.

I looked at the attendant and said, “I don’t want to go.” She was so considerate as to wave me toward an exit ramp (坡道) and instructed me on how to find my way down. Too embarrassed to face my family, I simply called over my shoulder to Dad that I was leaving. There wasn’t time for him to say anything, and I didn’t look back. I walked down the exit ramp on shaky but relieved legs. Whatever disappointment or ridicule I would face for chickening out was a small price to pay for skipping that ride.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1 ：I sat down on a bench in the shade and waited for the others. 

Paragraph 2 ：“So what happened to you up there?” Dad asked.

 

读后续写以“游乐园惊魂记”为背景，描写了“我”面对过山车时的退缩与自我挣扎。

 

解题思路详解

 

情节节奏建议

• 第一段：坐下 → 思绪翻涌 → 紧张担忧家人反应 → 家人走来 → 开始交流
• 第二段：爸爸发问 → 我坦白内心 → 爸爸回应并安慰 → 呼应父亲名言 → 情感升华

 

情感递进线

羞愧 → 害怕 → 释怀 → 理解 → 自我接纳

 

第一段： I sat down on a bench in the shade and waited for the others.

1.情感描写（固定句）

A wave of shame and regret welled up in my chest and spread through me. 

体现主角当下心理状态。

2. 细节描写（不固定句）
My hands picked at the edge of my shirt while my eyes stayed fixed on the ground.

行为细节描写增强真实感。

3. 动作链推进（固定句）
Upon hearing familiar footsteps approaching, I straightened up, held my breath, and looked up.

推动情节进入关键“对话”环节。