读后续写 Anna烘焙视频日志 讲义-河南省商丘市豫东名校2024-2025学年高一下学期4月期中英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Anna was a cleaner at a local bakery(面包店),a job she loved,which brought her a sense of purpose.Eventhough Anna was happy with her job,she had always wanted to bake tasty bread and cakes that would bring joyto people.However,fear of failure prevented her from trying it in person.

One day,Anna's best friend,Julie,announced that she was starting a food vlog to show her cookingexperiments.When Anna heard this,she felt a wave of admiration.“You should join me!”Julie suggested.“You have so many amazing ideas.We could do this together!”

Anna hesitated,"But I'm not a baker,Julie.I've only ever done the cleaning for the bakery,and I'mfrightened of making mistakes in front of an audience.”

Julie comforted her,"Everyone makes mistakes,Anna!And the only way to get better is to try.This couldbe a great opportunity for you!”

Anna couldn't shake her fears,but Julie's words stayed with her.Weeks passed,and as Julie's vlog gainedpopularity,Anna found herself wondering,“What if?”The idea of sharing her love for cooking with the worldwas attractive,but she couldn't forget criticism(批评)that started in her childhood—her father had always beentough on her,pushing her to achieve more.

One evening,after finishing the work at the bakery,Anna found an old notebook by chance when tidying upher room.The notebook was filled with her recipes(食谱)and sketches.Looking through the pages,she felt asense of joy.

After a sleepless night,Anna made a decision.The next day,she came to Julie with a half-hearted smile.“OK,let's do it.I'll join you on your vlog.”

Julie jumped with excitement,and they quickly set a date for their first video—making a signature cakerecipe together.Anna spent days researching,practicing recipes,and watching cooking videos.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

On the day of filming,the kitchen was lively as Julie set up the camera.

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Anna took a deep breath,and slowly she nodded,“OK.Let's try again.”

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一、续写分析​

第一段续写分析

第一段以拍摄当天厨房热闹场景开篇，核心聚焦 Anna 首次尝试烘焙的紧张与意外状况。开篇先通过环境描写烘托氛围，如 “the kitchen was lively as Julie set up the camera”，为后续情节铺垫。接着细致刻画 Anna 的心理和动作，“Anna could feel her heart racing... Her hands were shaking”，展现其内心恐惧。烘焙失败是本段高潮，描述蛋糕成品 “a dense, awkward lump” 与预期 “fluffy creation” 的巨大反差，既呼应前文 Anna 对失败的担忧，又为后文转变埋下伏笔。同时，Julie 的鼓励 “Everyone faces setbacks. Let's make a new cake together” 推动情节发展，体现友情力量，也暗示 Anna 将克服恐惧。​

第二段续写分析

第二段承接上文，Anna 深呼吸点头决定再试，展现她的心理转变。此段重点描写二人合作烘焙过程，突出相互配合与经验互补，如 “with both of their perspectives”。成功烘焙后，通过 “sliced the cake... Anna felt a sense of pride” 的动作和心理描写，强化成就感。结尾部分，视频发布后的积极反馈 “received an outpouring of love and support” 与 Anna 的感悟 “it is OK to be imperfect” 相呼应，深化主题，表明 Anna 不仅收获了烘焙成果，更实现了自我突破，从害怕失败到接纳不完美，完成人物成长弧光。​

二、故事线​

梦想萌芽：Anna 是面包店清洁工，热爱烘焙却因恐惧失败不敢尝试，好友 Julie 提议合作美食视频日志。​

内心挣扎：Anna 因童年父亲的严厉批评而恐惧失败，在 Julie 鼓励下，看到旧食谱后决定尝试。​

首次受挫：拍摄当天，Anna 紧张导致烘焙失败，精心准备的蛋糕成了一团糟。

合作突破：在 Julie 鼓励下，二人重新尝试，发挥各自优势，成功烘焙出满意蛋糕。​

成长收获：视频收获观众喜爱，Anna 明白接纳不完美，勇敢尝试才是最重要的。

三、短语​

a sense of purpose（目标感）​

be frightened of（害怕）​

gain popularity（获得 popularity）​

stay with sb.（萦绕在某人心中）​

make a decision（做决定）​

set a date for（为…… 确定日期）​

take a wrong turn（出岔子）​

a wave of admiration（一阵钦佩）​

comfort sb.（安慰某人）​

an outpouring of（大量的）​

hesitate to do sth.（犹豫做某事）​

shake one's fears（摆脱恐惧）​

by chance（偶然地）​

look through（浏览）​

half - hearted smile（不怎么热情的微笑）​

四、主旨升华句​

Failure is not the end but a stepping stone to growth, and embracing imperfections is the key to true self - acceptance.（失败并非终点，而是成长的垫脚石，接纳不完美是真正自我接纳的关键。）​

Sometimes, the greatest courage lies not in never falling, but in rising again with determination after every setback.（有时，最大的勇气不在于从不跌倒，而在于每次受挫后都能坚定地重新站起来。）​