4自我提升-【智乐星中考·学考传奇】2025年山东省济南市中考英语以读促写(人教版Word)
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以读促写四 自我提升
(2024吉林改编)It might be difficult to make yourself better. If you try the following ways, they may help you.
1. You cant decide what you look like, but you can decide what you want to be. So accept yourself, and then anything will be possible.
2. Learning is a lifelong journey. No matter how old you are, there will always be lessons in front of you. As the saying goes, “Its never too old to learn.”
3. Good learners keep practicing what they have learned. Try new things and practice them over and over again to make yourself better and better.
4. Life is like a mirror. If you smile at it, it will smile back at you. There is a lot of trouble in your life. Keep smiling when you are in trouble.
5. Maybe you dont dare to take part in school activities. Thats because you dont believe in yourself. But actually you are great. Just have a try.
根据短文内容,从方框中选出每段的主旨大意,其中有两个选项是多余的。
A.Trust yourself.
B.Smile at your life.
C.Talk with others.
D.Never stop learning.
E.Try to accept yourself.
F.Practice makes perfect.
G.Make more friends.
素材提取
根据主题阅读的文章内容,完成下列问题。
细审题意
1.文体:说明方法,文体为 ;
2.人称:通过提建议的形式阐述应该如何提升自我,应以 为主;
3.时态:客观说明进行自我提升的方式方法,主要使用 时态;
4.要点:①引出话题“如何进行自我提升”;② 。
搭建框架
☞ 短语积累
1.make oneself better 让自己变得更好
(主题阅读第1行)
2.try the following ways 尝试以下方法
(主题阅读第2行)
3.keep practicing 不断练习(主题阅读第8行)
4.depend on 依靠;信赖(八下P22)
5.a good way to... 一种很好的……方式
(九年级P67)
6.whats more 而且;更重要的是
☞ 句式积累
1.You cant decide what you look like, but you can decide what you want to be.
你不能决定你的样子,但你可以决定你想成为什么样的人。(主题阅读第3行)
2.No matter how old you are, there will always be lessons in front of you.
不管你多大,总有需要你学习的东西在眼前。(主题阅读第5行)
3.Good learners keep practicing what they have learned. 好的学习者会不断练习他们所学到的东西。(主题阅读第8行)
4.Try new things and practice them over and over again to make yourself better and better.
为了让自己变得越来越好,要尝试新事物并一遍又一遍地练习。(主题阅读第8行)
5.There is a lot of trouble in your life. 生活中有很多麻烦。(主题阅读第12行)
6.No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all problems can be solved in the end.
无论我们有多少困难,我相信所有的问题最终都能够被解决。(九年级P56)
☞ 谚语积累
1.Its never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。(主题阅读第6行)
2.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。(九年级P6)
3.All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难。
4.Never put off what you can do today until tomorrow. 今日事,今日毕。
☞ 优化提升
1.I try new things. I practice new things many times. I want to make myself better and better.(用and连接短句,并用to do不定式结构给句子升阶)
2.In this way, I can know about what to learn clearly.(用only位于句首的倒装句升阶)
自主学习是学习者自我管理的一种能力,良好的自主学习模式会助力我们的学习。请以“To study by ourselves”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊的英语专栏投稿,内容包括:
1.自主学习的益处;
2.如何进行自主学习。
注意:1.词数100左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
To study by ourselves
细审题意
1.文体:说明方法,文体为 ;
2.人称:通过展示自身学习方式来阐述自主学习的方式方法、重要性及其益处,应使用 ;
3.时态:客观说明进行自主学习的方式方法,主要使用 时态;
4.要点:①引出话题:整体说明自主学习很重要;② ;
③最后讲述自主学习的益处。
搭建框架
衔接成篇
润色升级
To study by ourselves
It is very important for us to study on our own. Id like to share some of my experience.
First, I set a goal. Only in this way can I know about what to learn clearly. Second, as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” I keep practicing what I have learned. I also try new things and practice them over and over again to make myself better and better. Third, I learn to manage my time, which helps me finish my learning tasks on time.
Studying by ourselves has many advantages. We can learn more knowledge, and it is a good way for us to develop the ability of managing ourselves. Whats more, it makes us be more independent. We neednt depend on our teachers too much to study anymore.
Lets take action to study by ourselves right now.
It is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.句型开篇点题,强调自主学习的重要性。
“积累提升”中keep doing,比较级+and+比较级,whats more, a good way to, depend on及谚语“Practice makes perfect.”的运用,使文章表达更有逻辑和层次感。
let型祈使句在结尾发出号召,升华全文。
(2024邯郸三模改编)自我管理能力是个体终身成长和发展的关键。你校正在对学生进行自我管理方面的调查。请你先完成下面的自我管理评价,再根据提示以“How I manage myself”为题写一篇短文。
Self-management Assessment
I can use my pocket money properly.
I can do exercise once a week.
I can plan my time of study and rest well.
提示:1.Do self-assessment according to your form.
2.Make a plan to improve your self-management abilities.
注意:1.词数100左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How I manage myself
Self-management is important to us.
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以读促写四
主题阅读
1.E 2.D 3.F 4.B 5.A
框架结构
Step 1 1.说明文 2.第二人称 3.一般现在 4.介绍进行自我提升的具体方法
Step 2
积累提升
1.I try new things and practice them over and over again to make myself better and better.
2.Only in this way can I know about what to learn clearly.
写作升级
Step 1 1.说明文 2.第一人称 3.一般现在 4.具体阐述如何进行自主学习
Step 2
实践运用
How I manage myself
Self-management is important to us. I think I behave well in managing myself. I can manage my pocket money well. I have healthy living habits—getting up early and keeping running every day. However, I sometimes have difficulty managing my time of study and rest.
To better manage myself, I will make a clear plan for my study and rest time and firmly carry it out. Besides, I will ask my friends and parents for their advice. I will also read some books about managing oneself, from which I will get some useful tips.
Managing myself is a long way to go, but I will keep learning while doing.
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