2025届高考英语写作必备-----高考读后续写12大句型 导学案

2025届高考英语专题复习学案 2025届高考英语写作必备-----高考读后续写“万能”句型 （以2023 &2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写为例） 句型1: Seeing /hearing sth , sb felt a great sense of + 情绪名词 + welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb . 看到/听到……，某人感觉一股 强烈的... 在内心升腾，奔涌 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到写作比赛委员会的回信地址，一种强烈的期待感在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。 Seeing the return address of the writing contest committee, I felt a great sense of anticipation welling up in my heart and surging through me. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)听到老师叫我进去，一种强烈的感激之情在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。 Hearing my teacher’s voice calling me in, I felt a great sense of gratitude welling up in my heart and surging through me. 【写一写】 1.(浙江卷高考读后续写)在山中迷路的简感到极度恐惧。看到一架直升机朝她飞来时，一股强烈的兴奋感在心中涌起，涌上全身。 Lost in the mountains, Jane was feeling genuinely frightened. _________ a helicopter _______________ , _______________________________________ ______________________________________________ . 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我告诉出租车司机我身上没带现金。令我惊讶的是，他只是微笑着点了点头，说没关系。看到他友善的举动，一股强烈的感激之情在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。在这个异国他乡，他的信任和慷慨让我深受感动。 I told the taxi driver that I had no cash on me. To my surprise, he just smiled and nodded, saying it was okay. ___________________________, _________________ ___________________________________________________. I was so touched by his trust and generosity in this foreign land. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)四天后，我回到了同一个地方，并按承诺给那位司机打了电话。在把钱还给他之后，我听到了他温暖的赞扬之词。听到他的认可，一种强烈的喜悦之情在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。信守了自己的诺言并得到他的认可，这种感觉真是太美妙了。 Four days later, I returned to the same place and called the driver as promised. After paying him back, I heard his warm words of praise. __________________, ________ _________________________________________________________________. It was such a wonderful feeling to have kept my word and received his recognition. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我声音紧张，结结巴巴地向司机讲述了我的情况。然而，他没有生气，而是耐心地听着。看到他平静的表情，一种强烈的如释重负之感在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。我知道自己并没有像担心的那样陷入大麻烦。 With a nervous voice, I stammered out my situation to the driver. However, instead of getting angry, he just listened patiently. _________________________, ___________ ____________________________________________________________. I knew that I wasn't in as much trouble as I had feared. 句型2： one’s heart pounding fiercely and one’s palm sweating (独立主格结构） , an inner voice told sb that ... 某人的心在跳，手掌在冒汗，心中有一个声音在说... 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心冒汗，内心有个声音告诉我，这可能是写作比赛的结果。 My heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that this could be the result of the writing contest. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)站在那扇熟悉的门外，我的心剧烈跳动，手心冒汗，内心有个声音告诉我，我的成功归功于推动这一转变的那个人。Standing outside the familiar door, my heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that I owed my success to the man behind this transformation. 【写一写】 1.心跳剧烈，掌心出汗，一个内心的声音告诉我，错误只是进步的阶梯。 _____________________________________________________, an inner voice told me that mistakes were just steps toward improvement. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)站在出租车旁，我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心直冒冷汗，内心有个声音在说，这下可糟透了，我可能会失去这位好心司机的信任。 Standing beside the taxi, _______________________________________________, an inner voice told me that this was a huge mess and I might lose this kind - hearted driver’s trust. 3. (2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)在等待冈特接电话的时候，我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心直冒汗，内心有个声音告诉我，我必须好好表达自己的感激之情。As I waited for Gunter to pick up the phone, ________________________________ ______________________________, an inner voice told me that I had to show my gratitude properly. 句型3：Seeing ..., overwhelmed with ....（情感名词）， sb did sth . 看到……，充满……，某人做了某事。 be overwhelmed with 充满/充溢... 【背一背】 1.看到孩子在人群中走失，被恐慌和无助淹没，母亲发疯似的大喊他的名字。 Seeing her child lost in the crowd, overwhelmed with panic and helplessness, the mother screamed his name crazily. 2.看到弟弟从树上摔下来，一动不动地躺在地上，安娜被焦虑和恐惧淹没，她尖叫着求助，以最快的速度冲向他。 Seeing her little brother fall off the tree and lie motionless on the ground, overwhelmed with anxiety and fear, Anna screamed for help and dashed to him as fast as she could. 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到信封上写作比赛委员会的公章，我心中满是好奇与紧张，颤抖着手指将它拆开。 Seeing the official seal of the writing contest committee on the envelope, overwhelmed with a mix of curiosity and nervousness, I tore it open with trembling fingers. 【写一写】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到老师坐在办公桌前，我心中满是感激之情，于是轻轻地把奖章放在了他的桌上。 _________________________________, __________________________, I placed the medal gently on his desk. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到他始终不渝的( unwavering)信任和善良，我满心感激，紧紧地拥抱了他，并承诺无论发生什么都会回报他。 __________________________________, ________________________, I hugged him tightly and promised to repay him no matter what happened. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到他熟悉的面孔，我心中满是喜悦与宽慰，赶忙递给他一个装有现金和手写感谢便条的信封。 _________________________, ___________________________________, I rushed to give him an envelope filled with the money and a handwritten thank - you note. 句型4：Doing sth ... , 主语 did ... , +非限制性定语从句 【背一背】 1.每周在动物收容所做义工，露娜逐渐对动物产生了深厚的热爱，这最终促使她选择学习兽医学。 Doing volunteer work at the animal shelter every weekend, Luna developed a deep love for animals, which eventually led her to study animal medicine. 2.从小广泛阅读，亚历克斯积累了丰富的词汇，这使他擅长写文章。 Reading extensively since childhood, Alex built a rich vocabulary, which made him excellent at writing essays. 3.他脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，呼喊着他的父母，父母一把将他拉过来，给了他一 个长久的拥抱。 Smiling ever so bright, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for a long hug. 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到信上印着醒目的 “一等奖获得者” 几个字，我从座位上一跃而起，这一举动让坐在旁边的同学们大吃一惊。 ____________ the bold words "First Prize Winner" printed on the letter, I jumped out of my seat, ____________________________________. 【写一写】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我紧紧地握着奖牌，走进房间，老师正站在那里，脸上挂着自豪的微笑等着我。 _____________________________, I stepped into the room, __________________ ________________ with a proud smile. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)冈特意识到我没钱支付，便伸手从口袋里掏出一些现金，这让我震惊得说不出话，心中满是感激。 __________________________, Gunter reached into his pocket and pulled out some cash, _________________________ with shock and gratitude. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到他那辆熟悉的黄色出租车缓缓停下，我手捧一束鲜花快步迎上前去，这让他脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。 _____________ his familiar yellow taxi pulling up, I rushed forward with a bouquet of flowers in hand, ___________________________ to his face. 句型5：动作A + 动作 B + and动作 C （分解动作，形成动作链 ， 使之更加有画面感） 三联动 慢性镜头 【背一背】 1.他掏出肉来，瞄准那只狼，然后径直把肉朝t它扔了出去。 He pulled out the meat , aimed at the wolf and threw it straight to it . 2.她冲上前去，跪了下来，把儿子揽入怀中。 She dashed forward , knelt down and gathered her son into her arm . 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我翻遍了钱包的每个角落，翻找着口袋，甚至倒空了包，希望能找到藏在某个地方的现金。 I searched every corner of my wallet, reached into my pockets, and even emptied my bag, hoping to find some cash hidden somewhere. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我拿起电话，拨通了 Gunter 的号码，焦急地等待他接听。 I picked up the phone, dialed Gunter's number, and waited anxiously for him to answer. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我疯狂地跑过机场大楼，跳上排队的第一辆出租车并告诉司机我的目的地。 I __________________ through the airport building, _______________the first taxi on the rank and __________________ my destination. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我拼命地翻找口袋，掏出所有卡片并逐一查看，希望找到解决办法。 I ______________my pockets desperately, __________ all the cards I had and _________ them one by one, hoping to find a solution. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我一大早就起床，准备好确切金额的钱然后出发去见 Gunter，因能回报他的善意而感到兴奋。 I ___________ early in the morning, ___________ the exact amount of money and __________ to meet Gunter, feeling excited to repay his kindness. 句型6： Doing sth(时间或原因状语), 主语+谓语动词..., +doing sth(伴随状语). 【背一背】 1.他们站在空旷的马路边，抬头望向天空，感受着内心那份珍贵的宁静。 Standing beside the empty road , they looked up into the sky , feeling the precious peace from within . 2.在跑道上奔跑时，杰克大口喘气，努力追赶领跑者。 Running on the track, Jack panted heavily, trying to catchup with the front runner. 3.看到那只狼往后退，保罗立刻爬进车里，重重地关上了身后的车门。 Seeing the wolf back off, Paul climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. 4.沿着河岸骑行时，莉莉开心地笑着，享受着新鲜空气和温暖阳光。 Cycling along the river bank, Lily smiled happily, enjoying the fresh air and warm sunshine. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)在拥挤的航站楼里狂奔，我冲向出租车停靠点，一边大口喘气一边挥手拦车。 _____________through the crowded terminal, I __________ towards the taxi stand, gasping for breath as I waved down a cab. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)难以置信地盯着空空的钱包，我结结巴巴地向冈特道歉，一阵羞愧感涌上心头。 _______________ the empty wallet in disbelief, I stammered an apology to Gunter, _________________________________ wash over me. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)想起朋友关于移动支付的建议，我迅速打开应用程序，一边输入交易码，双手一边颤抖。 ___________________________ about mobile payments, I quickly opened the app, hands _____________ as I entered the transaction code. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)感激地对他理解的微笑点头，我承诺还钱，同时在餐巾纸上匆匆写下联系方式。 _____________________ his understanding smile, I promised to pay him back, _________________ my contact information on a napkin quickly. 句型7： Adj and adj as sb was/were (倒装）, sb did sth, doing短语(作状语) 虽然......，但是...... 【背一背】 1.虽然她疲惫不堪，但仍继续前行,心里说，“决不能放弃”。 Exhausted and tired as she was , she still kept walking，saying to herself, "I mustn't give up." 2.尽管她又累又害怕，但她还是挣扎着站了起来，努力不让自己在身体和精神上崩溃。 Tired and terrified as she was , she struggled to her feet , trying not to have a break down both physically and mentally . 3.尽管紧张又兴奋，莉娜还是走上了舞台，发表了一场感动全场的演讲。 Nervous and excited as she was, Lina stepped onto the stage, delivering a speech that moved everyone in the hall. 4.尽管害怕又不确定，米娅还是跳进泳池，游得比以往任何时候都快。 Scared and uncertain as she felt, Mia jumped into the pool, swimming faster than she ever had before. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)尽管我满心感激与释然，还是按时回到维也纳，立即联系冈特安排还款。 ___________________________, I returned to Vienna on schedule, ____________ Gunter immediately to arrange the repayment. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)尽管我紧张又绝望，还是朝冈特挤出一个微笑，解释说我可以用手机应用转账。 __________________________________, I forced a smile at Gunter, ___________ that I could transfer money via a mobile app. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)尽管我疲惫又惊慌，还是疯狂地翻找背包，希望能找到几枚遗忘的硬币。 ______________________________, I rummaged through my bag frantically, ______________________________________. 句型8：Judging from sb’s voice /eyes / expression .. , it was evident that sb did sth 从某人的声音/ 眼神/表情/行为判断， 很明显某人...... 【背一背】 1.从他的表情判断，很明显他看到这个之后就要大发雷霆了。 Judging from his expression , it was evident that he was about to explode after seeing this . 2.从周围寂静的环境判断，很明显他们仍然被困在森林里，而且没有人来救援。 Judging from the quiet surroundings, it was evident that they were still trapped in the forest without anyone coming to rescue . 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)从他脸上绽放的温暖笑容和眼中闪烁的光芒判断，显然冈特决定相信我 。 ________________________________that spread across his face and the sparkle in his eyes, _______________________________________. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)从冈特脸上如释重负的表情和他坚定有力的握手判断，显然他非常开心自己对人性的信任得以重建 。 _______________________________ on Gunter’s face and the firm clasp of his handshake,_____________________________________ to have his faith in humanity restored. 句型9： it suddenly dawned on sb that sb should do sth ... 某人突然意识 到…… 【背一背】 1.团队突然意识到，如果想赢得比赛，就必须密切合作。 It suddenly dawned on the team that they should cooperate closely if they wanted to win the competition. 2.我突然意识到，成功源于每天的微小努力，而不仅仅是宏大的梦想。 It suddenly dawned on me that success comes from small efforts every day, not just big dreams. 【写一写】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)当校长宣读写作比赛的获奖者名单时，我思绪飘远 —— 直到听到了我的名字。我惊愕不已，手中的铅笔掉落在地。我突然意识到，我应该与那个从一开始就相信我的人分享这一刻：我的老师。 As the principal read out the list of the winners of the writing contest, my mind wandered—until I heard my name. Stunned, I dropped my pencil._______________ ____________________________________________ with the person who believed in me from the start: my teacher. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我握着奖牌和证书，走进房间。老师抬起头，眼睛亮了起来。“恭喜你，” 他从椅子上起身说道。我喉咙发紧，一时说不出话来。我突然意识到，我不仅应该表达感谢，还应该告诉他，他的鼓励是如何将我的自我怀疑转化为自信的。 Holding the medal and certificate, I stepped into the room. My teacher looked up, his eyes brightening. "Congratulations," he said, rising from his chair. Words caught in my throat. ___________________________________________________________, but also how his encouragement had transformed my self - doubt into confidence. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)就在我快要哭出来的时候，我突然想到，我应该给在维也纳的朋友打电话，他也许能给冈特转账。 Just as I was on the verge of tears, it suddenly dawned on me that I should call my friend in Vienna, who might be able to transfer money to Gunter. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)当他微笑着对我的感激不以为意时，我突然意识到，我应该将他给予我的善意传递(pay forward)去，去帮助其他有需要的人。 As he waved off my gratitude with a warm smile, _____________________________ ______________________ by helping others in need. 句型10: What 情绪动词. sb was that +从句 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)令我惊讶的是，我在写作比赛中获得了一等奖。 What astonished me was that I had been awarded the top prize in the writing contest. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)让我激动不已的是，评委们称赞了我的文章，说它视角独特，从马的视角进行的叙述生动形象。 What overwhelmed me was that the judges praised my essay for its unique perspective and vivid storytelling from the horse’s point of view. 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)最让我感动的是，我最初对失败的恐惧已经转变成了一种强烈的成就感。 What moved me most was that my initial fear of failure had transformed into a deep sense of accomplishment. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)让我担心的是，由于当时我资金短缺，仍然不知道如何偿还甘特的车费。 ______________________________ I still had no idea how to pay Gunter back as I was short of money at that moment. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)让我感动的是，甘特即便知道我可能无法立即支付车费，仍毫不犹豫地提供帮助。 ________________________________ Gunter didn't hesitate to offer his help even though he knew I might not be able to pay immediately. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)让我惊讶的是，甘特说他也曾身处类似的困境，非常理解我的感受。 ________________________________ Gunter told me he had once been in a similar tough situation and understood my feeling well. 句型11: with+宾语+宾语补足语 复合结构 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我的心疯狂地跳动着，我打开了那封官方来信，然后发现自己在写作比赛中获得了第一名。 With my heart pounding wildly, I opened the official letter and discovered that I had won first place in the writing contest. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)无数次深夜修改的记忆如潮水般涌上心头，我意识到自己已经取得了很大的进步。 With memories of countless late-night revisions flooding my mind, I realized how far I had come. 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，急忙跑去和家人分享这个消息，心中涌起一种前所未有的自豪感。 With a huge grin spreading across my face, I rushed to share the news with my family, feeling a sense of pride I had never experienced before. 4.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)脖子上挂着奖牌，手里紧紧握着证书，我走进了老师的办公室。 With the medal hanging around my neck and the certificate clutched tightly in my hand, I stepped into my teacher’s office. 5.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)甘特面带温暖的微笑递给我他的名片，说道：“别担心车费。有空联系我就行。 With a warm smile on his face, Gunter handed me his business card, saying, 'Don't worry about the fare. Just contact me when you're free.'” 【写一写】 1.(2023高考英语新课标1卷读后续写)他咧嘴开怀大笑,眼里闪烁着自豪的光芒。 He smiled broadly , ________________________________. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)因为我的钱包落在了酒店，我感到无比尴尬，不知道如何向甘特解释这一情况。 _________________________________________, I felt extremely embarrassed and had no idea how to explain the situation to Gunter. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)路灯微弱地闪烁着，寂静的夜晚见证了甘特和我之间的善意。 _________________________________, the quiet night witnessed the kindness between Gunter and me. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)问题解决后，我们都松了一口气，开始随意地聊起来。 ______________________________________, we both let out a sigh of relief and started chatting casually. 5.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)感激之情在我内心涌动，我感谢他在我自己都没发现自身潜力的时候看到了我的潜力。 ______________________________________, I thanked him for seeing potential in me when I didn’t see it myself. 6.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)这些话语在我耳畔回响(ring)，我离开了他的办公室，下定决心继续写作，探索精彩的文字世界。 _____________________________________, I left his office, determined to keep writing and exploring the wonderful world of words. 句型12: 修辞手法（提升文采） 速记背诵，巧用写作 1．明喻 I feel as if I were floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉自己好像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。 She felt as if her heart had been ripped from her body. 她感觉自己的心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。 (2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我撕开信封时，双手像树叶一样颤抖。里面是一封信，宣布我获得了一等奖！ My hands were shaking like leaves as I tore it open. Inside was a letter stating that I had won the first prize! (2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我的心在胸腔里像受惊的小鹿一样猛地跳动。 My heart leaped like a startled deer in my chest. (2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)泪水在我眼中涌出，如同窗玻璃上的雨滴，模糊了信上的字迹。 Tears welled up in my eyes like raindrops on a windowpane, blurring the words on the letter. (2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)那些为完善文章而度过的无数个夜晚的回忆在我脑海中闪过，我意识到我所有的努力都得到了回报，就像种子在漫长的冬天过后终于绽放花朵一样。 Memories of those countless nights spent perfecting the essay flashed through my mind, and I realized all my hard work had paid off, like seeds finally blooming after a long winter. (2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我胸中的自豪感像即将爆裂的气球般膨胀，手里握着奖牌，走进了老师的办公室。 With pride swelling in my chest like a balloon ready to burst, I walked into my teacher’s office, medal in hand. (2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)“我就知道你能行，” 他说道，声音温暖如春，恰似寒冬里舒适的壁炉。 “I knew you could do it,” he said, his voice as warm as a cozy fireplace on a cold day. 2．暗喻 I felt a lump in my throat，tears welling up in my eyes. 我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。 With the college entrance exam approaching, I often have butterflies in my stomach, but I try to calm myself by reviewing notes carefully. 随着高考临近，我常常感到紧张，但我会通过认真复习笔记来平复自己。 3．拟人 A sense of fear seized/swallowed him.恐惧把他吞噬了。 Anger choked my words.我气得说不出话来。 A good idea suddenly struck me.我突然想到一个好主意。 4．夸张 My heart broke in about a million pieces.我的心成了碎片。 I almost laughed my head off.我都快笑死了。 When they told me the news，I was over the moon/on the top of the world.当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。 It brought my heart into my mouth.它让我的心悬到了嗓子眼。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$2025届高考英语专题复习学案 2025届高考英语写作必备-----高考读后续写“万能”句型答案 （以2023 &2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写为例） 句型1: Seeing /hearing sth , sb felt a great sense of + 情绪名词 + welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb . 看到/听到……，某人感觉一股 强烈的... 在内心升腾，奔涌 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到写作比赛委员会的回信地址，一种强烈的期待感在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。 Seeing the return address of the writing contest committee, I felt a great sense of anticipation welling up in my heart and surging through me. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)听到老师叫我进去，一种强烈的感激之情在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。 Hearing my teacher’s voice calling me in, I felt a great sense of gratitude welling up in my heart and surging through me. 【写一写】 1.(浙江卷高考读后续写)在山中迷路的简感到极度恐惧。看到一架直升机朝她飞来时，一股强烈的兴奋感在心中涌起，涌上全身。 Lost in the mountains, Jane was feeling genuinely frightened. Seeing a helicopter flying towards her , she felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her . 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我告诉出租车司机我身上没带现金。令我惊讶的是，他只是微笑着点了点头，说没关系。看到他友善的举动，一股强烈的感激之情在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。在这个异国他乡，他的信任和慷慨让我深受感动。 I told the taxi driver that I had no cash on me. To my surprise, he just smiled and nodded, saying it was okay. Seeing his kind gesture, I felt a great sense of gratitude welling up in my heart and surging through me. I was so touched by his trust and generosity in this foreign land. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)四天后，我回到了同一个地方，并按承诺给那位司机打了电话。在把钱还给他之后，我听到了他温暖的赞扬之词。听到他的认可，一种强烈的喜悦之情在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。信守了自己的诺言并得到他的认可，这种感觉真是太美妙了。 Four days later, I returned to the same place and called the driver as promised. After paying him back, I heard his warm words of praise. Hearing his approval, I felt a great sense of joy welling up in my heart and surging through me. It was such a wonderful feeling to have kept my word and received his recognition. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我声音紧张，结结巴巴地向司机讲述了我的情况。然而，他没有生气，而是耐心地听着。看到他平静的表情，一种强烈的如释重负之感在我心中涌起，在我全身涌动。我知道自己并没有像担心的那样陷入大麻烦。 With a nervous voice, I stammered out my situation to the driver. However, instead of getting angry, he just listened patiently. Seeing his calm expression, I felt a great sense of relief welling up in my heart and surging through me. I knew that I wasn't in as much trouble as I had feared. 句型2： one’s heart pounding fiercely and one’s palm sweating (独立主格结构） , an inner voice told sb that ... 某人的心在跳，手掌在冒汗，心中有一个声音在说... 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心冒汗，内心有个声音告诉我，这可能是写作比赛的结果。 My heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that this could be the result of the writing contest. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)站在那扇熟悉的门外，我的心剧烈跳动，手心冒汗，内心有个声音告诉我，我的成功归功于推动这一转变的那个人。Standing outside the familiar door, my heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that I owed my success to the man behind this transformation. 【写一写】 1.心跳剧烈，掌心出汗，一个内心的声音告诉我，错误只是进步的阶梯。 My heart pounding fiercely and my palms sweating, an inner voice told me that mistakes were just steps toward improvement. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)站在出租车旁，我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心直冒冷汗，内心有个声音在说，这下可糟透了，我可能会失去这位好心司机的信任。 Standing beside the taxi, my heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that this was a huge mess and I might lose this kind - hearted driver’s trust. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)在等待冈特接电话的时候，我的心脏剧烈跳动，手心直冒汗，内心有个声音告诉我，我必须好好表达自己的感激之情。As I waited for Gunter to pick up the phone, my heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to show my gratitude properly. 句型3：Seeing ..., overwhelmed with ....（情感名词）， sb did sth . 看到……，充满……，某人做了某事。 be overwhelmed with 充满/充溢... 【背一背】 1.看到孩子在人群中走失，被恐慌和无助淹没，母亲发疯似的大喊他的名字。 Seeing her child lost in the crowd, overwhelmed with panic and helplessness, the mother screamed his name crazily. 2.看到弟弟从树上摔下来，一动不动地躺在地上，安娜被焦虑和恐惧淹没，她尖叫着求助，以最快的速度冲向他。 Seeing her little brother fall off the tree and lie motionless on the ground, overwhelmed with anxiety and fear, Anna screamed for help and dashed to him as fast as she could. 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到信封上写作比赛委员会的公章，我心中满是好奇与紧张，颤抖着手指将它拆开。 Seeing the official seal of the writing contest committee on the envelope, overwhelmed with a mix of curiosity and nervousness, I tore it open with trembling fingers. 【写一写】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到老师坐在办公桌前，我心中满是感激之情，于是轻轻地把奖章放在了他的桌上。 Seeing my teacher sitting at his desk, overwhelmed with gratitude, I placed the medal gently on his desk. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)Seeing his unwavering trust and kindness, overwhelmed with gratitude, I hugged him tightly and promised to repay him no matter what happened. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)Seeing his familiar face, overwhelmed with a mix of joy and relief, I rushed to give him an envelope filled with the money and a handwritten thank - you note. 句型4：Doing sth ... , 主语 did ... , +非限制性定语从句 【背一背】 1.每周在动物收容所做义工，露娜逐渐对动物产生了深厚的热爱，这最终促使她选择学习兽医学。 Doing volunteer work at the animal shelter every weekend, Luna developed a deep love for animals, which eventually led her to study animal medicine. 2.从小广泛阅读，亚历克斯积累了丰富的词汇，这使他擅长写文章。 Reading extensively since childhood, Alex built a rich vocabulary, which made him excellent at writing essays. 3.他脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，呼喊着他的父母，父母一把将他拉过来，给了他一 个长久的拥抱。 Smiling ever so bright, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for a long hug. 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到信上印着醒目的 “一等奖获得者” 几个字，我从座位上一跃而起，这一举动让坐在旁边的同学们大吃一惊。 Seeing the bold words "First Prize Winner" printed on the letter, I jumped out of my seat, which surprised my classmates sitting nearby. 【写一写】 1. (2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我紧紧地握着奖牌，走进房间，老师正站在那里，脸上挂着自豪的微笑等着我。 Holding the medal tightly in my hand, I stepped into the room, where my teacher was waiting with a proud smile. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)冈特意识到我没钱支付，便伸手从口袋里掏出一些现金，这让我震惊得说不出话，心中满是感激。 Realizing I had no way to pay, Gunter reached into his pocket and pulled out some cash, which left me speechless with shock and gratitude. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)看到他那辆熟悉的黄色出租车缓缓停下，我手捧一束鲜花快步迎上前去，这让他脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。 Spotting his familiar yellow taxi pulling up, I rushed forward with a bouquet of flowers in hand, which brought a wide smile to his face. 句型5：动作A + 动作 B + and动作 C （分解动作，形成动作链 ， 使之更加有画面感） 三联动 慢性镜头 【背一背】 1.他掏出肉来，瞄准那只狼，然后径直把肉朝t它扔了出去。 He pulled out the meat , aimed at the wolf and threw it straight to it . 2.她冲上前去，跪了下来，把儿子揽入怀中。 She dashed forward , knelt down and gathered her son into her arm . 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我翻遍了钱包的每个角落，翻找着口袋，甚至倒空了包，希望能找到藏在某个地方的现金。 I searched every corner of my wallet, reached into my pockets, and even emptied my bag, hoping to find some cash hidden somewhere. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我拿起电话，拨通了 Gunter 的号码，焦急地等待他接听。 I picked up the phone, dialed Gunter's number, and waited anxiously for him to answer. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我疯狂地跑过机场大楼，跳上排队的第一辆出租车并告诉司机我的目的地。 I ran like crazy through the airport building, jumped into the first taxi on the rank and told the driver my destination. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我拼命地翻找口袋，掏出所有卡片并逐一查看，希望找到解决办法。 I searched my pockets desperately, pulled out all the cards I had and checked them one by one, hoping to find a solution. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我一大早就起床，准备好确切金额的钱然后出发去见 Gunter，因能回报他的善意而感到兴奋。 I got up early in the morning, prepared the exact amount of money and set off to meet Gunter, feeling excited to repay his kindness. 句型6： Doing sth(时间或原因状语), 主语+谓语动词..., +doing sth(伴随状语). 【背一背】 1.他们站在空旷的马路边，抬头望向天空，感受着内心那份珍贵的宁静。 Standing beside the empty road , they looked up into the sky , feeling the precious peace from within . 2.在跑道上奔跑时，杰克大口喘气，努力追赶领跑者。 Running on the track, Jack panted heavily, trying to catchup with the front runner. 1.看到那只狼往后退，保罗立刻爬进车里，重重地关上了身后的车门。 Seeing the wolf back off, Paul climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. 2.沿着河岸骑行时，莉莉开心地笑着，享受着新鲜空气和温暖阳光。 Cycling along the river bank, Lily smiled happily, enjoying the fresh air and warm sunshine. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)在拥挤的航站楼里狂奔，我冲向出租车停靠点，一边大口喘气一边挥手拦车。 Rushing through the crowded terminal, I charged towards the taxi stand, gasping for breath as I waved down a cab. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)难以置信地盯着空空的钱包，我结结巴巴地向冈特道歉，一阵羞愧感涌上心头。 Staring at the empty wallet in disbelief, I stammered an apology to Gunter, feeling a wave of embarrassment wash over me. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)想起朋友关于移动支付的建议，我迅速打开应用程序，一边输入交易码，双手一边颤抖。 Remembering my friend’s advice about mobile payments, I quickly opened the app, hands trembling as I entered the transaction code. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)感激地对他理解的微笑点头，我承诺还钱，同时在餐巾纸上匆匆写下联系方式。 Nodding gratefully at his understanding smile, I promised to pay him back, setting down my contact information on a napkin quickly. 句型7： Adj and adj as sb was/were (倒装）, sb did sth, doing短语(作状语) 虽然......，但是...... 【背一背】 1.虽然她疲惫不堪，但仍继续前行,心里说，“决不能放弃”。 Exhausted and tired as she was , she still kept walking，saying to herself, "I mustn't give up." 2.尽管她又累又害怕，但她还是挣扎着站了起来，努力不让自己在身体和精神上崩溃。 Tired and terrified as she was , she struggled to her feet , trying not to have a break down both physically and mentally . 3.尽管紧张又兴奋，莉娜还是走上了舞台，发表了一场感动全场的演讲。 Nervous and excited as she was, Lina stepped onto the stage, delivering a speech that moved everyone in the hall. 4.尽管害怕又不确定，米娅还是跳进泳池，游得比以往任何时候都快。 Scared and uncertain as she felt, Mia jumped into the pool,swimming faster than she ever had before. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)尽管我满心感激与释然，还是按时回到维也纳，立即联系冈特安排还款。 Grateful and relieved as I was, I returned to Vienna on schedule, contacting Gunter immediately to arrange the repayment. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)尽管我紧张又绝望，还是朝冈特挤出一个微笑，解释说我可以用手机应用转账。Nervous and desperate as I was, I forced a smile at Gunter, explaining that I could transfer money via a mobile app. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)尽管我疲惫又惊慌，还是疯狂地翻找背包，希望能找到几枚遗忘的硬币。Exhausted and panicked as I felt, I rummaged through my bag frantically, hoping to find some forgotten coins. 句型8：Judging from sb’s voice /eyes / expression .. , it was evident that sb did sth 从某人的声音/ 眼神/表情/行为判断， 很明显某人...... 【背一背】 1.从他的表情判断，很明显他看到这个之后就要大发雷霆了。 Judging from his expression , it was evident that he was about to explode after seeing this . 2.从周围寂静的环境判断，很明显他们仍然被困在森林里，而且没有人来救援。 Judging from the quiet surroundings, it was evident that they were still trapped in the forest without anyone coming to rescue . 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)从他紧皱的眉头和犹豫的语气判断，显然冈特在帮助我和担心损失收入之间犹豫不决。 Judging from his furrowed brows and hesitant voice, it was evident that Gunter was torn between helping me and worrying about losing his earnings. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)从他脸上绽放的温暖笑容和眼中闪烁的光芒判断，显然冈特决定相信我 。 Judging from the warm smile that spread across his face and the sparkle in his eyes, it was evident that Gunter had decided to trust me. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)从冈特脸上如释重负的表情和他坚定有力的握手判断，显然他非常开心自己对人性的信任得以重建 。 Judging from the relieved expression on Gunter’s face and the firm clasp of his handshake, it was evident that he was truly glad to have his faith in humanity restored. 句型9： it suddenly dawned on sb that sb should do sth ... 某人突然意识 到…… 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)当校长宣读写作比赛的获奖者名单时，我思绪飘远 —— 直到听到了我的名字。我惊愕不已，手中的铅笔掉落在地。我突然意识到，我应该与那个从一开始就相信我的人分享这一刻：我的老师。 As the principal read out the list of the winners of the writing contest, my mind wandered—until I heard my name. Stunned, I dropped my pencil. It suddenly dawned on me that I should share this moment with the person who believed in me from the start: my teacher. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我握着奖牌和证书，走进房间。老师抬起头，眼睛亮了起来。“恭喜你，” 他从椅子上起身说道。我喉咙发紧，一时说不出话来。我突然意识到，我不仅应该表达感谢，还应该告诉他，他的鼓励是如何将我的自我怀疑转化为自信的。 Holding the medal and certificate, I stepped into the room. My teacher looked up, his eyes brightening. "Congratulations," he said, rising from his chair. Words caught in my throat. It suddenly dawned on me that I should express not just thanks, but also how his encouragement had transformed my self - doubt into confidence. 【写一写】 1.团队突然意识到，如果想赢得比赛，就必须密切合作。 It suddenly dawned on the team that they should cooperate closely if they wanted to win the competition. 2.我突然意识到，成功源于每天的微小努力，而不仅仅是宏大的梦想。 It suddenly dawned on me that success comes from small efforts every day, not just big dreams. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)就在我快要哭出来的时候，我突然想到，我应该给在维也纳的朋友打电话，他也许能给冈特转账。 Just as I was on the verge of tears, it suddenly dawned on me that I should call my friend in Vienna, who might be able to transfer money to Gunter. 4.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)当他微笑着对我的感激不以为意时，我突然意识到，我应该将他给予我的善意传递下去，去帮助其他有需要的人。 As he waved off my gratitude with a warm smile, it suddenly dawned on me that I should pay his kindness forward by helping others in need. 句型10: What 情绪v. sb was that +从句 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)令我惊讶的是，我在写作比赛中获得了一等奖。 What astonished me was that I had been awarded the top prize in the writing contest. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)让我激动不已的是，评委们称赞了我的文章，说它视角独特，从马的视角进行的叙述生动形象。 What overwhelmed me was that the judges praised my essay for its unique perspective and vivid storytelling from the horse’s point of view. 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)最让我感动的是，我最初对失败的恐惧已经转变成了一种强烈的成就感。 What moved me most was that my initial fear of failure had transformed into a deep sense of accomplishment. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)让我担心的是，由于当时我资金短缺，仍然不知道如何偿还甘特的车费。 What worried me was that I still had no idea how to pay Gunter back as I was short of money at that moment. 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)让我感动的是，甘特即便知道我可能无法立即支付车费，仍毫不犹豫地提供帮助。 What touched me was that Gunter didn't hesitate to offer his help even though he knew I might not be able to pay immediately. 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)让我惊讶的是，甘特说他也曾身处类似的困境，非常理解我的感受。 What surprised me was that Gunter told me he had once been in a similar tough situation and understood my feeling well. 句型11: with+宾语+宾语补足语 复合结构 【背一背】 1.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我的心疯狂地跳动着，我打开了那封官方来信，然后发现自己在写作比赛中获得了第一名。 With my heart pounding wildly, I opened the official letter and discovered that I had won first place in the writing contest. 2.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)无数次深夜修改的记忆如潮水般涌上心头，我意识到自己已经取得了很大的进步。 With memories of countless late-night revisions flooding my mind, I realized how far I had come. 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容，急忙跑去和家人分享这个消息，心中涌起一种前所未有的自豪感。 With a huge grin spreading across my face, I rushed to share the news with my family, feeling a sense of pride I had never experienced before. 4.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)脖子上挂着奖牌，手里紧紧握着证书，我走进了老师的办公室。 With the medal hanging around my neck and the certificate clutched tightly in my hand, I stepped into my teacher’s office. 5.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)他咧嘴开怀大笑，眼里闪烁着自豪的光芒。 He smiled broadly , with his eyes shining with pride. 【写一写】 1.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)甘特面带温暖的微笑递给我他的名片，说道：“别担心车费。有空联系我就行。 With a warm smile on his face, Gunter handed me his business card, saying, 'Don't worry about the fare. Just contact me when you're free.'” 2.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)因为我的钱包落在了酒店，我感到无比尴尬，不知道如何向甘特解释这一情况。 3.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)路灯微弱地闪烁着，寂静的夜晚见证了甘特和我之间的善意。 With the streetlights shining faintly, the quiet night witnessed the kindness between Gunter and me. 5.(2024高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)问题解决后，我们都松了一口气，开始随意地聊起来。 With the problem solved, we both let out a sigh of relief and started chatting casually. 6.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)感激之情在我内心涌动，我感谢他在我自己都没发现自身潜力的时候看到了我的潜力。 With gratitude welling up inside me, I thanked him for seeing potential in me when I didn’t see it myself. 7.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)这些话语在我耳畔回响，我离开了他的办公室，下定决心继续写作，探索精彩的文字世界。 With these words ringing in my ears, I left his office, determined to keep writing and exploring the wonderful world of words. 句型12: 修辞手法（提升文采） 1．明喻 1.I feel as if I were floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉自己好像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。 2.She felt as if her heart had been ripped from her body. 她感觉自己的心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。 3.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我撕开信封时，双手像树叶一样颤抖。里面是一封信，宣布我获得了一等奖！ My hands were shaking like leaves as I tore it open. Inside was a letter stating that I had won the first prize! 4.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我的心在胸腔里像受惊的小鹿一样猛地跳动。 My heart leaped like a startled deer in my chest. 5.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)泪水在我眼中涌出，如同窗玻璃上的雨滴，模糊了信上的字迹。 Tears welled up in my eyes like raindrops on a windowpane, blurring the words on the letter. 6.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)那些为完善文章而度过的无数个夜晚的回忆在我脑海中闪过，我意识到我所有的努力都得到了回报，就像种子在漫长的冬天过后终于绽放花朵一样。 Memories of those countless nights spent perfecting the essay flashed through my mind, and I realized all my hard work had paid off, like seeds finally blooming after a long winter. 7.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)我胸中的自豪感像即将爆裂的气球般膨胀，手里握着奖牌，走进了老师的办公室。 With pride swelling in my chest like a balloon ready to burst, I walked into my teacher’s office, medal in hand. 8.(2023高考英语新课标 1 卷读后续写)“我就知道你能行，” 他说道，声音温暖如春，恰似寒冬里舒适的壁炉。 “I knew you could do it,” he said, his voice as warm as a cozy fireplace on a cold day. 2．暗喻 I felt a lump in my throat，tears welling up in my eyes. 我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。 With the college entrance exam approaching, I often have butterflies in my stomach, but I try to calm myself by reviewing notes carefully. 随着高考临近，我常常感到紧张，但我会通过认真复习笔记来平复自己。 3．拟人 A sense of fear seized/swallowed him.恐惧把他吞噬了。 Anger choked my words.我气得说不出话来。 A good idea suddenly struck me.我突然想到一个好主意。 4．夸张 My heart broke in about a million pieces.我的心成了碎片。 I almost laughed my head off.我都快笑死了。 When they told me the news，I was over the moon/on the top of the world.当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。 It brought my heart into my mouth.它让我的心悬到了嗓子眼。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$