读后续写 ：志愿服务主题读写整合---语言应用复习课公开课 Volunteering Beyond service hour 课件 -2025届高三英语一轮复习专项

高三阅读与写作整合语言复习课 Volunteering: beyond service hour 厦门市海沧中学 廖鹭鹭 2024.12.17 Our school's students appeared on Brazilian television. What were they doing? Have you ever done volunteer work? Who is this? Pictures of last year's Science and Technology Festival(科技节) What other voluntary work do you know? Animal Shelter Senior Centers Soup Kitchen 回顾语篇深度学习 语篇一：2019高考英语全国II卷阅读理解B篇 unwilling ended up being an invaluable member What was the parent's attitude at first? Why? What changed the parents ' minds? persuaded How might "I" feel? worried busy, uninterested How do "I" feel about volunteering? so good Why does it feel so good? relieved Let's see how the author expresses her ideas. 根据构词法猜测词义 valuable invaluable overvalue undervalue value 家族 极宝贵的，不可或缺的 有价值的 低估，重视不够 高估，过分重视 value n.价值，价值观 v.重视 语篇回填 examine the language Some where along the way, the same parent ends up 1._________ (become) an 2.__________(value) member of the team. The coach is able to focus on the kids while the other parents are relieved to be 3.______ the hook for another season. Handing out sliced oranges to bloodthirsty kids can be as exciting as watching your own kid score a goal. Still, most of us volunteers breathe a sigh of relief when the season comes to 4.__ close. That relief is 5.________(couple) with a deep understanding of 6.____ the same people keep coming back for more: Connecting to the community as you 7._______(free) give your time, money, skills, or 8.________(service) provides a real joy. Volunteering just feels so good. In that sense, I’m pretty sure volunteeringis more of a selfish act 9._____ I’d freely like to admit. However, if others benefit in the process, and I get some reward too, does it really matter where my 10.___________(motivate) lies? becoming invaluable off freely services a why than coupled motivation Pay attention to the structure and key expressions she used to describe feelings and thinking. What words can be used to describe volunteer work? □meaningful □joyful □time-consuming □boring □beneficial □rewarding The author values volunteer work regardless of(不管) the motivation behind it. Somewhere along the way, the same parent ends up becoming an invaluable member of the team. 1.在某个时刻，我的志愿服务之旅从一种责任感转变成了对帮助他人和贡献社区的深切热情。 ______________________________, my volunteering journey transformed from __________________ into ______________________ for helping others and contributing to my community. 2. 我知道这并不是我在帮助他人旅程的终点；而是一个终身致力于善良和同理心的开始。 I knew this wasn't ____________________________ in helping others. Instead, it was just the beginning of a lifelong commitment to kindness and empathy. Somewhere along the way a sense of duty a profound passion Read for language 素材积累及仿写 the end of my journey at some point during a journey, process, or experience 在某一过程的某个时刻/阶段 用来描述在某个活动或经历中的变化、发现、认识 Somewhere Somewhere along the way, the same parent ends up becoming an invaluable member of the team. Read for language 素材积累及仿写 我们在“食物银行”服务的时间最终变得无比宝贵，因为它不仅提供了餐食，还培养了我们的社区意识，以及对那些需要帮助的人的人更深切的同情。 Our time spent__________(serve) at the Food Bank ________________________________, as it not only provided meals but also fostered __________________________ and a deeper __________ for those in need. serving ended up being invaluable our sense of community empathy an unexpected result 用于表示出乎意料的结果 Connecting to the community as you freely give your time, money, skills, or services provides a real joy. Volunteering just feels so good. 那天晚上，当我走出动物收容所时，我感到一种成就感和满足感。 _______________________the Animal Shelter that night, I felt a sense of accomplishment and fulfillment. As I walked out of Read for language 素材积累及仿写 as引导时间状语从句，译为“当...” Connecting to the community as you freely give your time, money, skills, or services provides a real joy. Volunteering just feels so good. 清理养老院并看到老年人微笑的面孔，让我充满了深深的成就感和满足感。 ________________ the nursing home and _____________________________ of the elderly filled me with a profound sense of accomplishment and fulfillment. Cleaning up seeing the smiling faces Read for language 素材积累及仿写 动词ing形式作主语，增加句式多样性，使描述更加生动 Read for language 素材积累及仿写 more + Adj. + than 比...更... 这次经历的意义远超我的预期。 The experience was ________________________ than I had expected. far more meaningful 我从未如此感激我拥有的一切。 I had never been _________________for all that I had. never be more + Adj. 没有更... more grateful 这次经历激励我做得更多——不仅是在收容所，还要超越其范围。 The experience inspired me ________________— _______________at the shelter _____ beyond. more not only/just..., but to do more not just/only but 寻找更多丰富表达 语篇二：帮助残疾人 Volunteering to help people with disabilities in their daily lives was an experience that truly made a big difference. As we assisted them with simple tasks, we opened the door to warmth and comfort, making their day a little easier. Their smiles and heartfelt thanks brought them a lot of joy and fun, and seeing their reaction as we helped them made my day—it felt as though our care and attention lit up their souls. They felt more than thankful for our serving and caring, and their gratitude touched my heart deeply. I had never been more grateful for all that I had and for the opportunity to help others in need. It was a profound time in my young life that I would never forget. This experience taught me that sometimes a small act of kindness can really make a difference to others, showing the power of compassion and human connection. was an experience that truly made a big difference 是可以产生很大影响的一次经历 opened the door to warmth and comfort 打开了温暖与舒适之门 brought them a lot of joy and fun 给他们带来了很多喜悦和乐趣 made my day 让我开心了一整天 lit up their souls 照亮了他们的灵魂 felt more than thankful 十分感谢 I had never been more grateful for all that I had 我从未如此感激我所拥有的一切 It was a profound time in my young life that I would never forget. 这是我年轻生命中意义深远的一段时光 a small act of kindness can really make a difference to others 一个小小的善举真的可以对别人产生影响 Read for content 提炼要点 the lady next to me the homeless the community service hour passing dinners tired scared smiled at a good meal and a warm place a good meal and a warm place brightest smile fulfilled proud Para 2: I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. _________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1.从感受与反思的角度对首句进行衔接，下面合适的句子是（ ） A.It wasn't just about fulfilling a requirement. Instead, it was more about making a real difference. B.Somewhere along the way, I realized I couldn't wait to go home and play video games all night. “To earn service hour” was “my” purpose at first, but did “I” just earn service hour? What else could I get? reflection, life skills, emotional fulfillment, understanding of volunteering, meaningful connections and inspiration for the future 2.从情节发展的角度对首句进行衔接衔接，下面合适的句子是（ ） A.As I walked out of the soup kitchen, I rushed home to do homework without saying goodbye. B.As I walked out of the soup kitchen, I felt a sense of accomplishment and fulfillment. 3.从未来计划的角度对首句进行衔接，下面合适的句子是（ ） A.Next time, I’ll make sure to choose something more fun and relaxed instead. B.Inspired, I planned to volunteer more, because even one hour could bring joy. What can we write about ? A. personal insights志愿服务的意义 B. interaction with the homeless和流浪汉的互动 C. action inspiration行动启发 D. the reaction of the homeless流浪汉的反应 E. comparison and reflection生活情况对比和反思 Para.1 Para.1 维度 标准 自评 content 包含个人感悟/对比反思/行动启发等 （Include personal insights/comparative reflections/action inspiration） language 尝试使用所学词汇（empathy, transform, beneficial, rewarding, joyful, meaningful, connect）、短语（somewhere along the way, a deep/ profound sense of community/fulfillment/accomplishment, open the door to/make a difference/a profound time in my life that I would never forget/lit up thier soul）、动词Ving作主语的用法、as引导时间状语从句，more + adj./n. (than)、not only/just..., but (also)，end up doing, as 引导时间状语从句等，丰富语言 （Try to use rich language） hand-writing 书写工整 （Write neatly） Step out of your comfort zones and try volunteer service. Helping others; discovering yourself; gaining responsibility; making the world a little brighter! Lavf60.16.100 $$