范畴三人与自然-【中考宝典】2025年中考英语升格作文（广东专用版）

话题升格作文 日 范畴三人与自然 主题群7自然生态 话题九（原创）》 4月22日是“世界地球日”，旨在提高民众对于现有环境问题的认识，并动员民众通过绿色低碳生活，改 善地球的整体环境。某英文网站正在开展以“Low-carbon Life低碳生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李 华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你是怎样理解低碳生活的，并描述你在日常生活中实现低碳生活的具体 做法。 低碳生活 你对低碳生活的看法？ 对于低碳生活，你平时是怎么做的？ 发出号召 1.绿色出行 2.… 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名： 3.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计人总词数。 写作指寻 第一步：审题。 体裁： 时态： 人称： 第二步：列提纲。 I think it important to ... 第一段：你对低碳生活的看法。(1分）， 参考句型 ..is good for everyone. 第二段：对于低 First,I always walk to...instead of... 碳生活，你平时 是怎么做的？ 参考句型 Besides,I will try to... 提纲 (3点，3分) What's more,I will ...when .. 第三段：发出号 It's our duty to... 召2点。(2分) 参考句型 If everyone....I believe... 第三步：列出主要的单词和短语。 1.过低碳生活 4.而不是 2.对…有好处 5.关灯/水龙头 3.骑车上学 6.对…起作用 第四步：句子仿写。 1.Doing exercise every day is good for our health.每天锻炼对我们的健康有好处。 结构：be good for对…有好处。 仿写：低碳生活对每个人都有好处。 一21 新课标中考富典|英语·（广东专用版） 2.So I suggest(hat)we should drink water as much as possible..所以我建议我们应该尽可能多地喝水。 结构：I suggest(that)…引导的宾语从句，“我建议…”。 仿写：所以我建议我们应该尽可能长时间地重复使用书籍。 第五步：名言警句： Save the earth,our only home.保护地球，我们唯一的家。 第六步：连词&过渡句： 连词：运用and,because,but,first,second,besides,finally,also等连接词将以上要点连成文章，注意句型多 样化。 过渡句：To help protect the environment,I live a low-carbon life.为了保护环境，我过着低碳的生活。 ?实战演练 【一次写作】 Low-carbon Life "Low-carbon lifestyle"is a kind of new pattern of lifestyle. 项目 自评分 互评分 老师评分 1.你对低碳生活的看法(1分) 内容分 2.对于低碳生活，你平时是怎么做 (6分) 的？(3点，3分) 3.发出号召2点。(2分) 意思连贯；涵盖所有要点 语言分 过渡句：过渡词；连词等 (9分) 书写及词数 【二次写作】 Low-carbon Life "Low-carbon lifestyle"is a kind of new pattern of lifestyle. -22- 话题升格作文 主题群8环境保护 话题十(2024·广东中考模拟卷)】 河流是最重要的自然资源之一，它对人类有着重要意义。然而，世界上的河流正在遭到人类的破坏。请 你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。 保护河流 河流的重要性 河流被污染的原因 解决方法 1.河流能为人类和农作 1.工厂排放污水 1.制定法律 物提供干净的水源， 2.*+ 2.… 也被用来发电 2.4… 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 【写作指寻 第一步：审题。 体裁： 时态： 人称： 第二步：列提纲。 第一段：介绍河流的重要性2点。(2分) C参考句型人They can beused t 第二段：阑述 河流被污染的 Many factories...and they pour...into... 参考句型 捉纲 原因2点。(2 People destroy... 分) 第三段：提出 It's our duty to... 解决办法2 参考句型 The government should... 点。(2分) People should... 第三步：列出主要的单词和短语。 1.被用于 4.制定法律 2.发电 5.阻止/制止某人做某事 3.把…倒进… 6.保护环境 第四步：句子仿写。 1.It's our duty to save the earth.拯救地球是我们的责任。 结构：It's our duty to do sth.做某事是我们的责任。 仿写：保护环境，人人有责。 2.The people who break the rules should be punished.违反规则的人应该受到惩罚。 结构：The people who..…由引导词who引导的定语从句，“那些…的人”。 -23 新课标中考富典1英语·（广东专用版） 仿写：那些污染环境的人应该受到惩罚。 第五步：名言警句： Green mountains are gold mountains./Clear waters and green mountains are as good/valuable as mountains of gold and silver..绿水青山就是金山银山。 第六步：连词&过渡句： 连词：运用and,because,.but,first,.second,besides,finally,also等连接词将以上要点连成文章，注意句型多 样化。 过渡句：However,nowadays,many rivers are still polluted. /As we know,rivers are one of the most important natural resources. 。实战演练 【一次写作】 Rivers are very important to us. 项目 自评分 互评分 老师评分 1.介绍河流的重要性2点。(2分) 内容分 2.阐述河流被污染的原因2点。(2 (6分) 分) 3.提出解决办法2点。(2分) 意思连贯；涵盖所有要点 语言分 过渡句；过渡词；连词等 (9分) 书写及词数 【二次写作】 Rivers are very important to us. -24 话题升格作文 主题群9灾害防范 话题十一 炎炎夏日，太阳炙烤大地。滚滚热浪袭来，很多人会选择去水里寻找凉意，但潜在的溺水风险不容小觑。 同学们外出游玩时，应时刻具备防溺水意识，保护自身安全。请你以“Self-protection”为题，根据以下思维导 图提示用英文写一篇短文。 自我保护 谈谈自我保护 如果有人掉入水中， 自我保护的号召 的重要性。 面对潜在的溺水风险，你有 哪些建议？（至少列举2点） 我们该怎么做？ 1.不独自下水游泳： 1. 2.+444 2.… 注意：1，可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 【写作指导 第一步：审题。 体裁： 时态： 人称： 第二步：列提纲。 As is known to us all,swimming is very popular... 第一段：谈谈自我保护的重要性。(1分) 一参考句型 So it is important for us to... 第二段：面对 Here are some suggestions 潜在的溺水风 First,we should... 险，你有哪些 参考句型 建议。（至少 Besides,we'd better... 2点，2分) It's also important... 提纲 第三段：如果 有人掉入水 If someone...,we should... 里，我们该怎 参考句型 For example,. 么做？（至少 2点，2分) ..is also a good chioce. 自我保护的号召 Life is valuable,so we should take it seriously. 参考句型 (1分) We must remember that... 第三步：列出主要的单词和短语。 1.受欢迎 4.掉入水中 2.认真对待 5.正确方式 3.防止溺水 6.尽可能地大声喊 第四步：句子仿写。 1.I find that many of us pay little or no attention to the environmental protection. 结构：pay little or no attention to sth.很少或者不在乎某事。 仿写：我发现我们很多人很少或根本不注意自我保护。 2.If we see someone in trouble,we should go and help her. 我们看到别人遇到麻烦，我们应该去帮助她。 -25- 新课标中考富典|英语·（广东专用版） 结构：fwe.,we should..(f☑引导的条件状语从句)如果…我们应该…。 仿写：如果我们看到有人掉进河里，我们应该用适当的方法救他。 第五步：名言警句： Life is valuable..生命是宝贵的。 Safety should always come first while swimming..游泳时安全永远是第一位的。 第六步：连词&过渡句： 连词：运用and,because,.but,first,.second,besides,finally,also等连接词将以上要点连成文章，注意句型多 样化。 过a渡句：However,.I find that many of us pay little or no attention to the self-.protection./ In order to prevent people from drowning,here are some suggestions. ?实战演练 【一次写作】 Self-protection As is known to us all,swimming is very popular among people,especially children and teenagers. 项目 自评分 互评分 老师评分 L.谈谈自我保护的重要性。(1分) 2.面对潜在的溺水风险，你有哪些 内容分 建议？（至少2点，2分） (6分) 3.如果有人掉进水里，我们该怎么 做（至少2点，2分）》 4.自我保护的号召。(1分)》 意思连贯；涵盖所有要点 语言分 过渡句；过渡词；连词等 (9分) 书写及词数 【二次写作】 Self-protection As is known to us all,swimming is very popular among people,especially children and teenagers. -26- 话题升格作文 主题群10 宇宙探索 话题十二 随着神舟十八号顺利升空，中国航天事业和航天英雄再次成了人们关注的焦点。假设你是李明，你校英 语俱乐部拟举行一次主题为“我心中的航天英雄”的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示拟一则 通知。 英语演讲比赛通知 比赛的地点和时间 演讲的内客和要求 参家对象和奖项 1内容：介绍自己的航天 1所有学生均可参加 英雄及他/她影响你最 2… 深的地方 2要求：… 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名： 3.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 汉写作指寻 第一步：审题。 体裁： 时态： 人称： 第二步：列提纲。 第一段：比赛的主题（已给出）小时间、地点。(1分) 参考句型一It will be held 第二段：演讲 的内容（航天 In your speech,you should...and... 英雄1分；影 参考句型 提纲 响1分)和要 You're supposed to.. 求(1分) 第三段：参赛 ..are welcome to join in the competition. 对象(1分) 和奖项(1分】 参考句型 The winners will be given... .is also a good chioce. 第三步：列出主要的单词和短语。 1.…的主题 4.欢迎做某事 2.…的介绍 5.准备好 3.不超过 6.及时 第四步：句子仿写。 1.The journey to his dream took a very long time,他的梦想之旅花了很长时间。 结构：take在句中做谓语动词，表示“花费时间”。 仿写：我哥哥花了很长时间准备这次的演讲。 -27 新课标中考富典1英语·（广东专用版） 2.In your speech,you should give us an introduction to your hobby. 在你的演讲中，你应该给我们介绍一下你的爱好。 结构：give sb.an introduction to给某人介绍…。 仿写：在你的演讲中，你应该给我们介绍一下你的太空英雄。 第五步：名言警句： Now or never..机不可失，失不再来。 第六步：连词&过渡句： 连词：运用and,because,.but,first,second,besides,finally,also等连接词将以上要点连成文章，注意句型多 样化。 过渡句：You must pay attention to the following points 。实战演练 【一次写作】 Notice We are going to hold an English Speech Competition with the theme of "My Space Hero". English Club December 7,2024 项目 自评分 互评分 老师评分 1.比赛的主题（已给出），时间、地 内容分 点。(1分) (6分) 2.演讲的内容(2分)和要求(1分)。 3.参赛对象(1分)和奖项(1分)。 意思连贯：涵盖所有要点 语言分 过渡句：过渡词；连词等 (9分) 书写及词数 【二次写作】 Notice We are going to hold an English Speech Competition with the theme of"My Space Hero". English Club December 7,2024 -28-话题升格作文 日 like basketball.We play together and have fun.Above all,it 6.show talent for... makes me full of energy.And I can study better after doing 7.make our school life more colorful sports. 8.the importance of... I hope everyone takes part in sports.It can keep us healthy 第四步： and energetic. 1.He encouraged us to be more active and creative 主题群5历史、社会与文化 2.Students showed talents for science and technology and 话题七 enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. 第一步：体裁：应用文 【范文】 时态：一般现在时 Dear John, 人称：第一，三人称 How is everything going?Our school's science and 第三步：l,a friend of mine 2.give up technology festival was a great success.Let me tell you something about it. 3.keep (on)doing sth. 4.get great grades The festival took place in the school hall on January 20th. 5.make progress 6.learn from sb. There were many kinds of activities on that day.First,the 7.in the face of difficulty 8.positive energy seience teacher gave an interesting speech.He encouraged us to 第四步： be more active and creative.Then,we had a design 1.Although she is disabled without the ability to walk,she never competition.Some students'works were really perfect.After the gives up working hard. competition we shared inventions with others. 2.In the face of difficulty.I should never give up easily but keep Students showed talents for science and technology and on doing what I should do. enjoyed the happiness that they brought them.Science and 【范文】 technology lead the future.Also.these activities not only made Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.It's my honor() our school life more colorful but also helped us realize the to be here to share my speech.In our lives,there are always importanee of seience and technology. some people with positive energy.Today,I would like to introduce Yours. a friend of mine to you.Her name is Helen.Although she is Li Hua disabled(残疾的)without the ability to walk,she never gives up working hard.She keeps on studying hard and gets good 范畴三人与白然 grades.Besides,she always helps me and other classmates with 主题群7自然生态 study.With her help,most of us make great progress. 话题九（原创） How brilliant she/he is!I should learn from her.In the face of difficulty,I should never give up easily and keep on 第一步：体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时 doing what I should do.What's more,I should treat others 人称：第一人称 around with kindness. 第三步：l.living a low-carbon life 2.be good for As the saying goes,"The secret of getting ahead is getting 3.ride to school 4.instead of started."So let's try our best and face difficulty bravely.If 5.turn off the lights/taps 6.make a difference to everyone lives and works with positive energy,our world will 第四步： become better and better. 1.Living a low-earbon life is good for everyone. 主题群6科学与技术 2.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. 话题八 【范文】 第一步：体裁：应用文（书信） Low-carbon Life 时态：一般过去时 "Low-carbon lifestyle"is a kind of new pattern of lifestyle. 人称：第一、三人称 Living a low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help proteet the 第三步：l.take place environment,I live a low-carbon life.I always walk or ride a 2.muny kinds of bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use 3.encourage sb.to do sth. things that can be reeyeled and I never forget to turn off the lights 4.give a speech when I leave the elassroom.We need to use less energy. 5.share sb.sth.share sth.with sb. Save the earth,our only home.I think it's my duty to live a 31 新课标中考官典|英语·（广东专用版） 号● low-earbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real proper way. difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse 【范文】 books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much Self-protection money on expensive clothes. As is known to us all,swimming is very popular among If everyone does something for the environment,I believe people,especially children and teenagers.However,I find that the earth will be a better place.Let's change from ourselves. many of us pay little or no attention to the self-protection.So it is 主题群8环境保护 important for us to protect ourselves during swimming. 话题十 In order to prevent people from drowning,here are some 第一步：体裁：说明文 suggestions.First,we shouldn't go swimming alone.We'd better 时态：一般现在时 go with our parents.Besides,it's also important for us not to go 人称：第三人称 swimming in dangerous places or places that we don't know well, 第三步：l.be used to do/be used for sth. such as rivers or lakes and so on.Instead,it will be safer to go 2.produce/make electriciB.pour...into... to the swimming pool. 4.make laws 5.stop sb.from doing sth. If we see someone fall into the river,we should save him in 6.proteet the environment a proper way.For example,we should shout as loudly as we can 第四步： to get those with good swimming skills to help him.We can call 1.It's our duty to protect the environment. the emergency for help if necessary. 2.The people who pollute the environment should be punished. Life is valuable.We should take it seriously.We must 【范文】 remember that safety should always come first while swimming. Rivers are very important to us.They give people and crops 主题群10宇宙探索 clean water.They can also be used to make electricity for our 话题十二 cities.Besides,they can be used for transportation. 第一步：体裁：应用文 However,nowadays,many rivers are still polluted.For 时态：一般现在时、一般将来时 example,many factories have been built near rivers.And they 人称：第一、二人称 pour dirty water into rivers.What's more,people destroy the 第三步：l.the theme of. 2.an introduetion to environment around rivers.Therefore.the river becomes dirtier. 3.no more than 4.be welcome to do sth. Clear waters and green mountains are as good as mountains 5.get ready 6.in time of gold and silver.As we know,rivers are one of the most 第四步： important natural resources.So it's our duty to proteet them.The 1.It took my brother a very long time to get ready for the speech. government should make laws to stop factories from polluting 2.In your speech,you should give us an introduction to your rivers.In addition.people should stop throwing rubbish into space hero. rivers and the people who pollute the environment should be 【范文】 punished. Notice 主题群9灾害防范 We are going to hold an English Speech Competition with 话题十一 the theme of "My Space Hero".It will be held in the school hall 第一步：体裁：说明文 on the first floor of the teaching building at 3:00 p.m.on 时态：一般现在时 December 20,2024.You must pay attention to the following 人称：第一人称 points. 第三步：1.be popular 2.take...seriously In your speech,you should give us an introduction to your 3.prevent from drowning 4.fall into the river space hero and why he or she influences you most.The time for each student is no more than 5 minutes. 5.in a proper way 6.shout as loudly as we can All the students are welcome to join in the competition.The 第四步： top six speakers will be given prizes.Now or never.Please get 1.I find that many of us pay little or no attention to the self- ready in time. English Club protection. we see someone fall into the river,we should save him in June7.2024 -32