内容正文:
话题升格作文
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范畴二人与社会
主题群3社会服务与人际沟通
话题四(2024·广西南宁期末卷改编)】
学校英语文化节将举办“我的家乡”的VIog(短视频)制作比赛。假如你是Zhang Lei,请根据以下思维
导图中的内容要点提示,用英语写一篇V门g解说词介绍你的家乡。
1,位置
2.名胜
我的家乡
3美食
4.最佳放游时间
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息:
2.不能照抄原文:不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
写作指导
第一步:审题。
体裁:
时态:
人称:
第二步:列提纲。
It's in...
第一段:承接开头,介绍自己家乡的位置。(1分)
参考句型
It lies/locates in...
第二段:介绍
It's famous/well-known for...
家乡的名胜古
介绍家乡的名胜古迹
参考句型
...be well worth visiting...
迹和美食
(4分)
介绍家乡美食一be popular among…
第三段:最佳
旅游时间
参考句型一介绍最径旅游时间一May you always.
(1分)
第三步:列出主要的单词和短语。
1.位于
4.美食
2.因…而出名
5.受欢迎
3.名胜
6.…的最佳时间
第四步:句子仿写。
1.As for me,my school is the most unforgettable place in my heart.
对于我来说,在我的心底里我的学校是最难忘的地方。
结构:As for me..对于我来说…。
仿写:对于我来说,我的家乡是世界上最美丽的地方。
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2.My hometown is fine all year round and the best time to visit is spring,when everything comes back to life.
我的家乡一年四季气候宜人,最佳旅游时间是春天,万物复苏。
结构:he best time to visit is.…最佳旅游时间是…。
仿写:我的家乡一年四季都很关丽,最好的旅游时间是夏天,在湖里可以看到美丽的荷花。
第五步:名言警句:
East or west,home is best.金窝级窝,不如自己的狗窝。
第六步:连词和过渡句:
连词:运用and,because,but,frst,second,finally,also等连接词将以上要点连成文章,注意句型多样化。
过渡句:As for me,my hometown is the most beautiful place in the world,.
。实战演练
【一次写作】
My hometown
Hello,I'm Zhang Lei.I'd like to say something about my hometown.
项目
自评分
互评分
老师评分
1.介绍家乡位置。(1分)
内容分
2.介绍家乡的名胜古迹。(2分)
(6分)
3.介绍家乡的美食。(2分)》
4.介绍家乡的最佳旅游时间。(1分)
意思连贯;涵盖所有要点
语言分
过渡句:过渡词;连词等
(9分)
书写及词数
【二次写作】
My hometown
Hello,I'm Zhang Lei.I'd like to say something about my hometown.
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话题升格作文
话题五(原创)
沟通是心灵的桥梁,合理有效的沟通可以增进人与人之间的感情。
某英文网站正在开展以“有效沟通(effective communication)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你
写一篇英文短文投稿,谈谈有效沟通的重要性,并结合自己经验,就如何进行有效沟通给出一些可行的建议。
有效沟通
重要性
建议
希望
1可以清楚表达自己
1认真倾听很有必要】
2.
2*
3
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息:
2.不能照抄原文:不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名:
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【写作指导」
第一步:审题。
体裁:
时态:
人称:
第二步:列提纲。
第一段:承接开头,为什么
要进行有效沟通。(2分)
参考句型-〈Iu/no.
By improving our communication skill,we can...
To build a good relationship with....It's necessary...
第二段:有蚊
First and foremost,..is a good idea.
提纲
沟通的建议3
参考句型
点.(3分)
In addition.we'd better...
More importantly,don't forget to..
第三段:希
参考句型一
All in all.learning how to...is a necessary lesson
望.(1分)
And I hope my advice can be helpful to you.
第三步:列出主要的单词和短语。
1.交流
2.节省时间
3.避免误会
4.为了与…建立良好的友谊
5.保持真诚的态度
6.创造一个积极的交流环境
第四步:句子仿写。
1.By taking exercise,we can improve our health.
通过运动,我们可以改善健康。
结构:by doing sth,通过做某事。
仿写:通过提高我们的沟通技巧,我们可以节省时间,避免误解。
2.Only when we take good care of the environment can we live a good life
只有当我们保护好环境,我们才能过上好的生活。
结构:“0ly+状语从句”位于句首,句子需要部分倒装。
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仿写:只有当我们保持友好和礼貌的态度,我们才能创造一个积极的交流环境。
第五步:名言警句:
Understanding depends on good communication..理解取决于良好的交流。
第六步:连词:
运用and,because,but,frst/first and foremost,second,in addition,finally,also,more important山y,等连接词将
以上要点连成文章,注意句型多样化
。实战演练
【一次写作】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
项目
自评分
互评分
老师评分
1.为什么要进行有效沟通。(2分)
内容分
2.你对有效沟通的建议3点。(3分)
(6分)
3.希望。(1分》
意思连贯:涵盖所有要点
语言分
过渡句:过渡词:连词等
(9分)
书写及词数
【二次写作】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
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主题群4文学、艺术与体育
话题六(2024年广东中考模拟卷改编)
体育运动影响青少年健康,学校的英语校刊正在以“运动使我快乐”为主题开展征文比赛活动。假如你
是李明,请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,写一篇文章投稿。
运动使我快乐
运动的好处
呼呼
介绍自己运动习惯
1.
保持身体健康
希望大家积板参与
2.
体育运动
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息:
2.不能照抄原文:不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名:
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【写作指导1]
第一步:审题。
体裁:
时态:
人称:
第二步:列提纲。
go running
每天跑步一小时
第一段:承接开头,讲述日
an hour a day
参考词汇
常运动习惯2个,(2分)
climb hills
周末和朋友爬山
at weekend
第二段:运动
It can keep...
提钢
的好处3个
参考句型
I can make new friends when...
3分)
It makes me...
We should...
第三段:呼
。(1分)
参考句型
I hope.…
I am sure...
第三步:列出主要的单词和短语。
1.打篮球
6.做运动
2.跑步
7.使…健康
3.慢跑
8.交朋友
4.对…有好处
9.充满能力
5.优点/好处
第四步:句子仿写。
1.It's a good way for us to relax after a long time of study.
这是我们长时间学习后放松的好方法。
结构:'s a good way for us to do sth.这是我们做…的好方法。
仿写:这是我们从繁忙的功课中放松的好方法。
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2.In my opinion,reading has many advantages.
在我看来,阅读有很多好处。
结构:In my opinion.(表达观点)在我看来…。
仿写:在我看来,做运动有很多好处。
第五步:名言警句:
Life needs sports.生命在于运动。
第六步:连词和过渡句:
连词:运用and,because,but,irst,rst of all,second,besides,finally,also等连接词将以上要点连成文章,注
意句型多样化。
过渡句:In my opinion,.doing sports has many advantages..
As we know,it is very important for teenagers to do sports.
T实战演练
【一次写作】
Doing sports plays an important role in our daily life.
项目
自评分
互评分
老师评分
1.讲述日常运动2个。(2分)
内容分
2.说明运动的好处3个。(3分)
(6分)
3.呼吁。(1分)
意思连贯:涵盖所有要点
语言分
过渡句;过渡词;连词等
(9分)
书写及词数
【二次写作】
Doing sports plays an important role in our daily life.
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主题群5历史、社会与文化
话题七(2024年广东省肇庆市期末卷改编)】
《觉醒年代》塑造了一批具有“正能量”的青年形象,他们在战火纷飞的年代克服重重因难,为国家的发
展贡献力量。你身边也有具有正能量的人吗?学校正在举行以正能量为主题的演讲比赛,请你根据以下思
维导图内容提示写一篇演讲稿。
做个具有“正能量”的人
推荐对象
你从他身上学到了什么
发出号召
1姓名
1决不放弃且坚持自己应该做的事情
2.推荐理由
(1)…
(2)
注意:1,可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息:
2.不能照抄原文:不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名:
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计人总词数。
1写作指导1
第一步:审题。
体裁:
时态:
人称:
第二步:列提纲。
He /She is.../His/Her name is...
第一段:介绍推荐对象1分),并说明理由2点(2分).
参考句型
Although...he/she never gives up...
第二段:你从他/地
I should learn...from him/her.
身上学到了什么?
参考句型
(2点,2分)
What's more,I should...
提纲
Let's...
第三段:发出
参考句型
号召。(1分)
I think if we...we can...
Try our best and...
第三步:列出主要的单词和短语。
1.我的一个朋友
5.取得进步
2.放弃
6.向…学习
3.坚持做某事
7.面对困难
4.取得好成绩
8.正能量
第四步:句子仿写。
L.Although he is weak in study,he never gives up.尽管他学习比较差,但他一直没放弃。
结构:although尽管,引导让步状语从句的引导词。
仿写:虽然她是无法走路的残疾人,但她从不放弃努力。
2.In the face of danger,he was never afraid.面对危险,他从不害怕。
结构:in the face of面对
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最●
仿写:在困难面前,我不应该轻易放弃,而要继续做我应该做的事情。
第五步:名言警句:
The secret of getting ahead is getting started.取得成功的秘诀是开始行动。
第六步:连词:
连词:运用and,because,but,first/first and foremost,second,in addition,finally,also,more importantly,等连
接词将以上要点连成文章,注意句型多样化。
过渡句:How brilliant she/,heis!I should learn from him/her.她/他多聪明啊!我应该向他/她学习。
。实战演练
【一次写作】
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.It's my honor (to be here to share my speech.In our lives,there
are always some people with positive energy.Today,I would like to introduce
项目
自评分
互评分
老师评分
1.介绍推荐对象。(1分)
2.并说明理由两点。(2分)》
内容分
(6分)
3.你从他/她身上学到了什么?(2
点,2分)
4.发出号召。(1分)
意思连贯:涵盖所有要点
语言分
过渡句:过渡词:连词等
(9分)
书写及词数
【二次写作】
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.It's my honor to be here to share my speech.In our lives,there
are always some people with positive energy.Today,I would like to introduce
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主题群6科学与技术
话题八(2024·宁夏银川·二模)
假定你是李华,你参加了你校开展的主题为“创新体验,快乐成长”的科技节活动。请结合如图所示,分
享此次活动的过程和感受。
Date:Jan.20th
Activities:
创新体脸
I.give a speech
Place:the school hall
快乐成长
2.have a design competition
3.share inventions
Feeling(s):...
(可以再适当添加1-2条活动】
(2点)
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息:
2.不能照抄原文:不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名:
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【写作指导
第一步:审题。
体裁:
时态:
人称:
第二步:列提纲。
第一段:承接开头,引出话题。(已给出)
第二段:介绍
科技节活动的
时间和地,点一The festival took place on+地点+具体时间.
时问和地点
参考句型
There were many kinds of activities on that day.
提纲
(1分),其
具体活动
体的活动:
First..Then...Finally
(3点3分)
第三段:介绍
..make our school life more colorful
自己的感受】
参考句型
点.(2分)
..help us realize the importance of...
第三步:列出主要的单词和短语。
1.发生
5.和某人分享某物
2.许多种类
6.展示…的才华
3.鼓励某人做某事
7.让校园生活更精彩
4.演讲
8.…的重要性
第四步:句子仿写。
L,She encouraged us to take part in the activity.她鼓励我们参加这个活动。
结构:encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
仿写:他鼓励我们要更积极、更有创造力。
2.Students showed talents for sports and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them.
学生们展示了自己的体育天赋,并享受着体育带来的快乐。
结构:hat引导的定语从句
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仿写:学生们展示了自己的科技天赋,享受着科技带给他们的快乐。
第五步:名言警句:
Science and technology lead the future.科技引领未来。
第六步:连词:
连词:运用and,because,but,first/first and foremost,second,in addition,final山y,also,more importantl山y等连接
词将以上要点连成文章,注意句型多样化。
过渡句:There were many kinds of activities on that day.那天有很多种活动。
。实战演练
【一次写作】
Dear John,
How is everything going?Our school's science and technology festival was a great success.Let me tell you
something about it.
Yours,
Li Hua
项目
自评分
互评分
老师评分
L.介绍科技节活动的时间和地点。
内容分
(1分)
(6分)
2.介绍科技节活动3个。(3分)
3.介绍自己的感受2点。(2分)》
意思连贯;涵盖所有要点
语言分
过渡句:过渡词;连词等
(9分)
书写及词数
【二次写作】
Dear John,
How is everything going?Our school's science and technology festival was a great success.Let me tell you
something about it.
Yours,
Li Hua
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号●山小a山a
put on some interesting shows and make dumplings together with
6.create a positive environment for communication
them.Besides,we will have a better understanding of the life in
第四步:
the past by listening to their old stories.It will also make them
1.By improving our communication skills,we can save time and
feel warm when they talk about those experiences.
avoid misunderstandings.
Through this activity,we ean not only spread the spirit of
2.Only when we keep a friendly and polite attitude can we ereate
honoring the old but also build a harmonious society.So let's
a positive environment for communication.
take action right now.
【范文】
范畴二人与社会
Dear Sir/Madam.
It is crucial to communicate with others effectively so that
主题群3社会服务与人际沟通
we can express ourselves elearly and fluently.By improving our
话题四
communication skills,we can save time and avoid
第一步:体裁:说明文
misunderstandings.
时态:一股现在时
To build a good relationship with our family and friends,it's
人称:第三人称
necessary for us to learn some skills.First and foremost,listening
第三步:l.bein/lies in/located in
to others carefully is a good idea,which can show our respeet to
2.be famous for/be well-known for
others.In addition.we'd better maintain a sincere attitude
3.places of interest
towards others'words.Only when we keep a friendly and polite
4.delicious food
attitude can we create a positive environment for communication.
5.be popular
More importantly,don't forget to learn some skills to help us
6.the best time to do sth.
express ourselves efficiently.
第四步:
All in all,learning how to communicate effectively is a
1.As for me,my hometown is the most beautiful place in the
necessary lesson for us to explore and leam.And I hope my
world.
advice ean be helpful to you.
2.My hometown is beautiful all year round and the best time to
Yours,
visit is summer,which beautiful lotuses are seen on the lake.
Li Hua
【范文】
主题群4文学、艺术与体育
My hometown
话题六
Hello,I'm Zhang Lei.I'd like to say something about my
第一步:体裁:说明文
hometown.
时态:一般现在时
East or west,home is best.As for me my hometown is the
人称:第三人称
most beautiful place in the world.It is surrounded by clean water
第三步:l.play basketbal
2.go running
and green mountains,which lies in the south of China.There are
3.go jogging
4.be good for
many interest of places in my hometown.It's well-known for
5.advantage(s)
6.do sports/exercise
West Lake and Gaobang Mountain is well worth visiting.
7.make...healthy/fit
8.make friends
Dongpo's braised pork is quite delicious and popular among
9.be full of energy
tourists.My hometown is beautiful all year round and the best
第四步:
time to visit is in summer,which beautiful lotuses are seen on
1.It's a good way for us to relax from busy schoolwork.
the lake.
2.In my opinion,doing sports has many advantages.
Weleome to my hometown.I'm sure you will like it.
【范文】
话题五(原创)
Doing sports plays an important role in our daily life.I
第一步:体裁:说明文
enjoy sports as well.On weekdays.I usually play basketball with
时态:一般现在时
my classmates for an hour after school.It's a good way for us to
人称:第一人称
relax from busy schoolwork.At weekends.I often go hiking
第三步:l.communicate with
2.save time
when the weather is nice.
3.avoid misunderstandings
As we know,life needs sports.And doing sports has many
4.to build a good relationship with
advantages.First of all,it ean keep me healthy.It stops me from
5.maintain a sincere attitude
getting ill.Besides,I can make more friends by playing sports
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like basketball.We play together and have fun.Above all,it
6.show talent for...
makes me full of energy.And I can study better after doing
7.make our school life more colorful
sports.
8.the importance of...
I hope everyone takes part in sports.It can keep us healthy
第四步:
and energetic.
1.He encouraged us to be more active and creative
主题群5历史、社会与文化
2.Students showed talents for science and technology and
话题七
enjoyed the happiness that they brought them.
第一步:体裁:应用文
【范文】
时态:一般现在时
Dear John,
人称:第一,三人称
How is everything going?Our school's science and
第三步:l,a friend of mine
2.give up
technology festival was a great success.Let me tell you
something about it.
3.keep (on)doing sth.
4.get great grades
The festival took place in the school hall on January 20th.
5.make progress
6.learn from sb.
There were many kinds of activities on that day.First,the
7.in the face of difficulty 8.positive energy
seience teacher gave an interesting speech.He encouraged us to
第四步:
be more active and creative.Then,we had a design
1.Although she is disabled without the ability to walk,she never
competition.Some students'works were really perfect.After the
gives up working hard.
competition we shared inventions with others.
2.In the face of difficulty.I should never give up easily but keep
Students showed talents for science and technology and
on doing what I should do.
enjoyed the happiness that they brought them.Science and
【范文】
technology lead the future.Also.these activities not only made
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.It's my honor()
our school life more colorful but also helped us realize the
to be here to share my speech.In our lives,there are always
importanee of seience and technology.
some people with positive energy.Today,I would like to introduce
Yours.
a friend of mine to you.Her name is Helen.Although she is
Li Hua
disabled(残疾的)without the ability to walk,she never gives
up working hard.She keeps on studying hard and gets good
范畴三人与白然
grades.Besides,she always helps me and other classmates with
主题群7自然生态
study.With her help,most of us make great progress.
话题九(原创)
How brilliant she/he is!I should learn from her.In the
face of difficulty,I should never give up easily and keep on
第一步:体裁:说明文
时态:一般现在时
doing what I should do.What's more,I should treat others
人称:第一人称
around with kindness.
第三步:l.living a low-carbon life
2.be good for
As the saying goes,"The secret of getting ahead is getting
3.ride to school
4.instead of
started."So let's try our best and face difficulty bravely.If
5.turn off the lights/taps
6.make a difference to
everyone lives and works with positive energy,our world will
第四步:
become better and better.
1.Living a low-earbon life is good for everyone.
主题群6科学与技术
2.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.
话题八
【范文】
第一步:体裁:应用文(书信)
Low-carbon Life
时态:一般过去时
"Low-carbon lifestyle"is a kind of new pattern of lifestyle.
人称:第一、三人称
Living a low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help proteet the
第三步:l.take place
environment,I live a low-carbon life.I always walk or ride a
2.muny kinds of
bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use
3.encourage sb.to do sth.
things that can be reeyeled and I never forget to turn off the lights
4.give a speech
when I leave the elassroom.We need to use less energy.
5.share sb.sth.share sth.with sb.
Save the earth,our only home.I think it's my duty to live a
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