内蒙古巴彦淖尔市第一中学2024-2025学年高一下学期3月月考英语试题读后续写佐拉演讲比赛失利故事讲义续写
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
In the classroom of Class 7, Grade 8, students were excited about an upcoming event. The school had organized a speech competition titled “Ways to Become Successful,” and many students were eager to showcase their public speaking skills. Among them was 13-year-old Zora, who, had already won two speech contests and was full of confidence that she could win again.
Zora volunteered to represent her class in the competition, and after a round of voting, she was chosen as the class representative. Although there were only seven days left until the big day, Zora felt a sense of ease about the competition. After all, she had been here before and knew what it took to win.
At home, Zora’s father congratulated her on her achievement, while her mother reminded her to take the competition seriously. Despite her parents’ advice, Zora was convinced that her past successes meant this would be a walk in the park. Her teacher also urged her to prepare diligently, but Zora only sought help once to revise her initial draft.
As the days went by, Zora did not put in the necessary effort to refine her speech. When the day of the competition arrived, she was hit with a sudden wave of panic. She couldn’t remember the content of her speech, and as she stepped onto the stage, her anxiety only grew. After delivering the opening lines, she froze, unable to continue. The supportive applause from the audience only added to her confusion, leaving no room for her to recall her prepared words.
Zora struggled through the rest of her speech, finishing it in a state of embarrassment and shame. As she walked off the stage, she saw the disappointment in her teacher’s eyes and felt the letdown from her classmates. It was a heavy burden to bear.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
I went home that day and set out to write a story.
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The next day, Zora went to school and apologized to her class.
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佐拉演讲比赛失利故事续写
续写分析
第一段(I went home that day and set out to write a story.)
此段以 Zora 回家写故事为切入点,采用隐喻手法,通过描写故事中 “自夸歌声美妙却拒绝练习,最终在比赛中忘词出丑的鸟儿”,巧妙映射 Zora 自身经历。“tears blurred her vision”“realized she’d been just like that arrogant bird” 等描写,细腻刻画了 Zora 在创作过程中逐渐意识到自己因傲慢与懒惰导致失败的心理转变过程,将抽象的反思具象化为生动的故事,使人物形象更加立体。“vowed to never let pride cloud her judgment again” 则直接点明 Zora 痛定思痛后的决心,为后文的行动转变埋下伏笔,完成了从失败后的懊悔到自我反思的情节推进 。
第二段(The next day, Zora went to school and apologized to her class.)
该段承接上文,Zora 向班级道歉,“voice trembling”“I let you all down” 等语言和神态描写,生动展现出她真诚悔过的态度。“classmates were surprised”“teacher smiled” 从侧面烘托出 Zora 道歉的感染力与大家对她态度转变的认可。“joined the debate club”“spent hours perfecting her speech” 等具体行动描写,体现了 Zora 践行承诺、努力自我提升的过程,与第一段的决心相呼应。结尾 “hard - work and humility paid off” 点明努力和谦逊带来的积极结果,既完成了 Zora 从失败到成功的成长弧线,又升华主题,强调了谦逊和勤奋在追求成功道路上的重要性 。
翻译全文
那天回家后,我开始写一个故事。在故事里,一只天赋异禀的鸟儿总是吹嘘自己美妙的歌声,却拒绝为森林歌唱比赛练习。比赛当天,它忘光了旋律,出尽了洋相。写作时,泪水模糊了我的视线。我意识到,自己就像那只傲慢的鸟儿。我的过度自信和懒惰让我输掉了比赛。这个故事就像一面镜子,清晰地映照出我
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