辽宁省大连市沙河口区大连市第八中学2024-2025学年高一下学期4月月考英语试题读后续写戴夫篮球梦想故事续写讲义

读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Dave had loved basketball for as long as he could remember and he had never had a day without playing it. At primary school and junior high school he joined basketball clubs, attended training programs and watched basketball games, from which he learned the moves of the star players, wishing to play in a professional team like them and shine on the court.

Now as a senior high school student, however, his dream of becoming a professional player was dimming (变暗) because he was only of average height. He had to give up the hope of joining the school team. The guys on the school team were all tall boys who played matches and won honors for the school. They were like heroes. Dave watched them play and cheered them but he knew he would never be one of them.

Dave felt it a pity not to be tall enough, but this didn’t stop him from pouring his passion into basketball. He just played for the love of the sport. He played in the school gym with other boys or by himself every day, even during holidays and weekends, when it was open for two hours in the morning. He enjoyed every minute on the court making every effort to play better.

It was one Saturday morning. Dave was playing in the gym by himself, as all the other boys were busy with other weekend affairs. Then he noticed a tall boy approaching. It was Lankas. Everybody knows him as captain of the school basketball team. “Hi, Lankas,” Dave greeted him. “My name is Dave.” “Hi, Dave,” Lankas replied as he got closer. “Nice to see you here. Do you need an opponent to play against?” Dave was shocked, frozen right there, unable to believe his ears but somehow, he answered, “Why not?”

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So, a game of two players began.

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The next Saturday, when Dave was playing in the gym, Lankas appeared shouting, “Dave, I have good news for you.”

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戴夫篮球梦想故事续写

续写分析

第一段（So, a game of two players began.）​

此段以两人比赛开启，通过 “nervous at first” 到 “fear melted away” 的心理变化描写，生动展现 Dave 面对校队队长时从紧张到专注投入的状态转变。“dribbled swiftly”“dodging...moves”“accurate shots”“tenacious defense” 等一系列动作细节，突出 Dave 扎实的篮球功底和精湛技巧。“Lankas seemed surprised”“eyes widening” 从对手的反应侧面烘托 Dave 表现的出色，两人 “neither willing to give an inch” 的对抗，增强了比赛的紧张感与戏剧性。结尾 “exhausted but exhilarated” 点明 Dave 虽疲惫却因展现实力而兴奋，既体现比赛的激烈，又为后续情节埋下伏笔，完成从日常练习到与高手对决的重要情节推进，塑造了 Dave 热爱篮球且实力不俗的形象 。​

第二段（The next Saturday, when Dave was playing in the gym, Lankas appeared shouting, “Dave, I have good news for you.”）​

该段承接上文，以 Lankas 带来好消息展开。“big smile”“an important match...injured” 先交代消息背景，“After seeing your performance...a great substitute” 直接说明 Dave 因上周出色表现获得认可，使故事发展顺理成章。“heart skipped a beat”“excitement and disbelief” 细腻刻画 Dave 听到消息时的惊喜与不敢置信，强化情感冲突。Dave 的回应 “Of course, I’d love to!” 干脆利落，展现其渴望加入校队的迫切心情。结尾 “unwavering passion...paying off” 直接升华主题，点明 Dave 凭借对篮球的热爱与坚持迎来梦想的转机，深化文章主旨，完成人物从默默无闻到获得机会的成长转变 。​

翻译全文​

于是，一场两人对决开始了。起初，戴夫有些紧张，但当球触碰到他的手时，