Unit 6 课时5 写作-【宝典训练】2024-2025学年八年级下册英语高效课堂（沪教牛津版 广州深圳沈阳通用）

Unit 6 Pets 课时5写作 课时笔记 。 1. Dogs are faithful to their owners. 狗对主人忠心耿耿 (be)faithful to... 对......忠诚的 2. One day, his owner died suddenly of a heart attack. 一天,它的主人死于心脏病突发。 die of死于 辨析:dieof死于内部因素,如疾病等;diefrom死于外部因素,如事故等。 如 ①die of a heart attack死于心脏病 ②die from an accident 死于事故 3. The dog did not know it and kept on waiting for his owner every day for many vears, until he died 这只狗对此毫不知情,多年来仍在每天等主人归来,直至去世。 keep on继续,后接动词的-ing形式;untilconi.到.....时;直到......为止 4. They did not play with me or feed me any more. 他们不再和我玩,也不喂养我了。 not... anv more不再,相当于no more 5. One day, a nice girl called Emma came to visit. 一天,一个名叫埃玛的善良女孩来访。 called Emma是过去分词短语作girl的后置定语,意为“被叫作埃玛的女孩”。还可以用"named...”。 例文呈现 朗读下面的文章,组内讨论自己认为哪种动物最适合当宠物的写作方法和步骤。 Dogs make the best pets I think that dogs make the best pets. Firstly, dogs are lovely. I enjoy plaving with them. It's pleasant to hold them in our arms. Secondly, dogs are faithful. There was once a faithful dog in Japan. One day, his owner died suddenly of a heart attack. The dog did not know it and kept on waiting for his owner every day for many years, until he died. Thirdly, if you keep a pet dog, you need to walk it every day. When you are walking your dog, you are doing exercise. For these reasons. I believe that dogs make the best pets. g7 典训练英语·八年级·下册(牛津版) 熟记本单元常用写作句型 1. Keeping pet dogs is a good idea. 养宠物狗是个好主意。 2. There are lots of reasons for this. 这有许多理由。 3. It's nice to hold them in our arms, and it's wonderful to see them grow up. 把它们抱在怀里的感觉真好,看着它们长大很美好。 4. This stops people from getting any sleep 这让人们无法入睡。 5. They have no choice but to keep their dogs in small spaces. 他们除了在狭小的空间里养狗别无选择 6. A small number of pet dogs even attack people. 少数的宠物狗甚至攻击人们 课堂1分钟 。 许多人喜欢养宠物,那么同学们喜欢养的宠物又是什么呢?请根据下面提示,写一篇英语作文 80词左右,可适当发挥。 提示:1我喜欢养金鱼,金鱼看起来很美丽,它们有漂亮的颜色 2.金鱼吃得非常少,它们的食物很便宜,花费少 3.金鱼虽然难养,需要细心地照顾,但是这可以培养我的责任感 【写作指导】 审题: 第一步:表明自已喜欢养的宠物是什么 第二步:说明为什么喜欢养这样的动物; 第三步:总结全文观点。注意阐述原因时层次分明,逻辑合理。在写作时,可根据提示内容进行 适当发挥。 写作方法指导 一、写什么-细审题,列要点 1.喜欢养金鱼作为宠物; 2.喜欢的原因(三点)。 。 Unit 6 Pets 写作操练 二、怎么写--遣词句,重结构 第一点:喜欢养金鱼作为宠物 1.我愿意养金鱼作为宠物。 第二点:喜欢的原因(三点 2.金鱼看起来很美丽,它们有漂亮的颜色。 3.金鱼吃得非常少,它们的食物很便宜,花费少。 4.金鱼难养,需要细心地照顾。 5.这可以培养我的责任感 【组句成文】 联想:写作本篇作文可以参考的单词、短语 单词:patient有耐心的;cost花费;alive活着的;responsibility责任 短语:keep... as my pet养.....当我的宠物;make sb. feel pleased使某人感到愉快; take care of 照顾; in addition/what's more/besides 此外:for these reasons 由于这些原因 【我的完整作品一书写美观,可适当发挥】 99null