内容正文:
专题06书面表达
经典基础题
Passage 1(23-24八年级下·辽宁沈阳市·期末)
假期将至,学校英语社团计划开展兴趣俱乐部活动,包括Pet Club, UFO Club和 Future Life Club。假如你是李辉,请写一封信,报名参加。
内容要点如下:
1.你的选择;
2.说明原因;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数80左右,开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Sir,
There are going to be some clubs in our school. I would like to join _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hui
Passage 2(23-24八年级下·辽宁沈阳市·期末)
假设你是李辉,你的英国笔友Anna的学校即将开设汉语特色选修课程,她在考虑是否选修汉语,来信询问你的建议,请你写一封建议信。
1. 建议选修汉语。
2. 建议原因及学习方法。
3. 表达祝福。
提示词: take the Chinese course
注意事项:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 信中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名:
3. 词数80—100词之间,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Anna,
I’m to glad to hear from you. Knowing that your School is providing Chinese lessons, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Passage 3(23-24八年级下·辽宁沈阳市·期末)
学校校报举办“让世界充满爱”的征文比赛来帮助同学们了解志愿者工作。请你写一篇文章来进行投稿。内容包括:
1. 你对于志愿者工作的看法;
2. 你将会进行哪些志愿者工作;
3. 号召同学们加入志愿者行列中来。
注意:
1. 词数80—100,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包含所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Nowadays more and more people offer to help those in need. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连市·期末)
每年的7月30日是“International Day of Friendship”,值此佳季,你校 English Club 即将开展以“朋友”为主题的短视频分享活动。假如你是李辉,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,为你的短视频配文。
内容包括:
(1)你对朋友的定义;
(2)你的一段经历;
(3)你的感悟。
注意:
(1)词数不少于 80词;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
优选提升题
Passage 5(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连市·期末)
假如你是李辉。刚刚收到表弟Daming的邮件,请根据其邮件内容做出回复。
内容提示:
(1)对即将开始新的学校生活表示祝贺;
(2)对“朋友”的理解;
(3)给出建议。
要求:(1)中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,体现真实情感;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80~100词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, Daming,
It is great to hear from you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
Passage 6(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连市·期末)
假定你是李辉,来自英国的交换生即将在暑假期间到你校学习汉语课程,作为学生代表,请你给交换生代表Mark写一封邮件。
内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 告知课程相关信息;
3. 提出学习建议。
注意:
1. 词数为80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mark,
I’m the student representative, Li Hui. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
Passage 7(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连市·期末)
一次经历就是一笔财富,它或许会影响你的生活方式,或许会改变你的人生态度。你校校刊正在开展以“An unforgettable experience”为主题的征文活动。请你积极参与,分享你难忘的经历和感受。
内容包括:
(1) What is it?
(2) How did it change your life?
注意:
(1) 词数为80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数:
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 8(23-24八年级下·辽宁丹东市·期末)
中学生在成长过程中难免会磁到一些烦恼,假如你是李华,请根据下面的提示要求,用英语写一篇发言稿在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的看法。
1.要点:
(1)你的烦恼;
(2)你的做法;
(3)对待烦恼的建议。
2.要求:
(1)短文应包含所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
Passage 9(23-24八年级下·辽宁营口市·期末)
经过初中的两年学习,下学期就要上初三了。
1. 回顾初中两年的学习生活情况及自己的进步和收获。
2. 上初三后有什么打算,谈两三条。
3. 约80词左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 10(23-24八年级下·辽宁阜新市·期末)
良好的习惯对于青少年的成长与成功发挥着重大的作用。学校论坛正在就此话题在同学中展开调查。请你写一篇英语短文,向该论坛投稿,描述你的一或两种个人习惯,并谈谈它(们)给你的成长与成功带来怎样的影响。
写作要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
2. 语言准确,行文连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
3. 词数在80—100左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 11 (23-24八年级下·辽宁朝阳市·期末)
假设你是李辉,你的英国笔友Tom在来信中告诉你,他因转入新学校后还没有交到新朋友而感到很苦恼。请你用英语给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 表达安慰;
2. 提出建议;
3. 给予鼓励。
注意:
1. 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
I’m so sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends at your new school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
Passage 12(23-24八年级下·辽宁葫芦岛市·期末)
拥有健康的身体和愉悦的心情能够让我们快乐地生活和学习。为倡导“健康生活、快乐学习”的理念,你的班级将召开一次以“How to have a healthy and happy life?”为主题的班会。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
写作要点:
1. 健康和快乐的重要性;
2. 如何拥有健康快乐的生活(饮食、运动、与人相处等);
3. 发出倡导,提出希望。
写作要求:
1. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 80~100词。
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here and give you a speech. My topic is How to have a healthy and happy life? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 13(23-24八年级下·辽宁辽阳市·期末)
假设你是李华,学校校刊“排忧解难”专栏最近收到明明同学的来信,他因为身材肥胖受到一些同学嘲笑,感到很苦恼,请你给明明回信给出建议。
要点:
告诉明明生活中出现问题是很正常的;
提醒身体健康的重要性;
给出解决问题建议。
注意:词数在100左右;作文中不要出现真实校名和姓名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 14(23-24八年级下·辽宁营口市·期末)
曾子曰:“吾日三省吾身:为人谋而不忠乎?与朋友交而不信乎?传不习乎?”习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话,告诫青少年(teenager)要勇于面对自己的缺点,在学习中求真务实。那么怎样成为更好的自己?
请你根据以下内容提示,以“How to Be a Better Teenager?”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,在演讲比赛中发言。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
要点包括:
(1)演讲目的;
(2)针对演讲题目给出至少两点建议;
(3)发出号召。
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone,
It’s my honour to stand here to give you a speech.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1 / 37
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$$
专题06书面表达
经典基础题
Passage 1(23-24八年级下·辽宁沈阳市·期末)
假期将至,学校英语社团计划开展兴趣俱乐部活动,包括Pet Club, UFO Club和 Future Life Club。假如你是李辉,请写一封信,报名参加。
内容要点如下:
1.你的选择;
2.说明原因;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数80左右,开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Sir,
There are going to be some clubs in our school. I would like to join _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Sir,
There are going to be some clubs in our school. I would like to join the Future Life Club. My reason for this choice lies in my deep fascination with imagining and exploring possibilities beyond our present reality.
The Future Life Club promises a platform where I can engage in discussions about advancements in technology, societal trends, and the shape of our future world. I am confident that being a part of the Future Life Club will not only open my eyes but also develop a sense of responsibility towards shaping a better future. I am looking forward to being an active member of the club.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】社团/俱乐部
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是书信作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我想加入未来生活俱乐部。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你的选择、原因、表达期待等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“我期待成为俱乐部的活跃成员。”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①look forward to期待做某事
②a sense of responsibility一种责任感
③engage in参与
[高分句型]
①The Future Life Club promises a platform where I can engage in discussions about advancements in technology, societal trends, and the shape of our future world.(定语从句)
②I am confident that being a part of the Future Life Club will not only open my eyes but also develop a sense of responsibility towards shaping a better future. (not only...but also)
Passage 2(23-24八年级下·辽宁沈阳市·期末)
假设你是李辉,你的英国笔友Anna的学校即将开设汉语特色选修课程,她在考虑是否选修汉语,来信询问你的建议,请你写一封建议信。
1. 建议选修汉语。
2. 建议原因及学习方法。
3. 表达祝福。
提示词: take the Chinese course
注意事项:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 信中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名:
3. 词数80—100词之间,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Anna,
I’m to glad to hear from you. Knowing that your School is providing Chinese lessons, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
【答案】例文
Dear Anna,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing that your School is providing Chinese lessons, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. Chinese is spoken by the most people in the world. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, and then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】学习策略、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:针对Anna是否选修汉语给出建议,谈谈学习汉语的原因并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,给出建议,是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性;
第二步,结合自身经历,介绍学习汉语的方法;
第三步,最后表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of随着……发展
②not only...but also不但……而且
③What’s more而且
[高分句型]
①Chinese is spoken by the most people in the world.(被动语态)
②With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular.(比较级)
Passage 3(23-24八年级下·辽宁沈阳市·期末)
学校校报举办“让世界充满爱”的征文比赛来帮助同学们了解志愿者工作。请你写一篇文章来进行投稿。内容包括:
1. 你对于志愿者工作的看法;
2. 你将会进行哪些志愿者工作;
3. 号召同学们加入志愿者行列中来。
注意:
1. 词数80—100,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包含所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Nowadays more and more people offer to help those in need. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Nowadays, more and more people offer to help those in need. As far as I am concerned, when we help others, we also help ourselves, because all people need help.
There are many different kinds of voluntary work, such as cleaning the community, visiting the elderly in the old people’s home or organizing activities to donate money to poor areas. The voluntary work is very meaningful that can improve ourselves.
Let’s take actions right now to do some voluntary work to help the people around us and help to make the world a better place.
【知识点】志愿服务、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,提出自己对于志愿者工作的看法;
第二步,介绍一些志愿者工作;
第三步,书写结语,号召同学们加入志愿者行列中来。
[亮点词汇]
①as far as I am concerned在我看来
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①As far as I am concerned, when we help others, we also help ourselves, because all people need help.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②The voluntary work is very meaningful that can improve ourselves.(that引导的定语从句)
Passage 4(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连市·期末)
每年的7月30日是“International Day of Friendship”,值此佳季,你校 English Club 即将开展以“朋友”为主题的短视频分享活动。假如你是李辉,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,为你的短视频配文。
内容包括:
(1)你对朋友的定义;
(2)你的一段经历;
(3)你的感悟。
注意:
(1)词数不少于 80词;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Most of us have some friends. So do I. I think that a good friend will never let you down and always help you when you are in trouble. I’m so lucky to have such a good friend who have helped me a lot. His name is Tom. One day, I did so badly in a math test that I could’t help crying. When he saw this, he came to cheer me up and encouraged me. Besides, he taught me how to learn math. With his guidance and help, I made progress soon in my math. I can always remember how he taught me math patiently. Day by day, we shared happiness and sadness together and became best friends.
Although friends may have difficult time, we are always there to help and support each other. I am thankful that I can make friends with Tom because he makes me a better person in my growth. I hope that our friendship will last forever.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】朋友
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要有遗漏,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“大多数人都有朋友。我也一样。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——朋友的定义、经历、感悟等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”。
[亮点词汇]
①be in trouble处于困境中
②could’t help crying禁不住哭
③cheer me up为我加油
[高分句型]
①When he saw this, he came to cheer me up and encouraged me. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope that our friendship will last forever. (宾语从句)
优选提升题
Passage 5(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连市·期末)
假如你是李辉。刚刚收到表弟Daming的邮件,请根据其邮件内容做出回复。
内容提示:
(1)对即将开始新的学校生活表示祝贺;
(2)对“朋友”的理解;
(3)给出建议。
要求:(1)中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,体现真实情感;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80~100词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, Daming,
It is great to hear from you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Hi, Daming,
It is great to hear from you. I’m glad that you are about to start your new middle school life.
As we all know, friends play an important part in our life. Good friends understand and care about each other, share happiness and offer to help when they’re in trouble. In a new school, you should have several such good friends.
Here is my advice about making new friends. First, show them your kind smile. Everybody likes easy-going friends. Second, offer a hand when others need your help. Be warm, kind and friendly. It is a good way to start a friendship. I hope this helps.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】朋友、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:考生应注意结合Daming的邮件梳理出写作要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对即将开始新的学校生活表示祝贺;
第二步,表达自己对“朋友”的理解;
第三步,给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
① play an important part in 在……中起重要作用
② in trouble 处于困境中
③ offer a hand 伸出援助之手
[高分句型]
Good friends understand and care about each other, share happiness and offer to help when they’re in trouble.(when引导时间状语从句)
It is a good way to start a friendship.(it固定句式)
Passage 6(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连市·期末)
假定你是李辉,来自英国的交换生即将在暑假期间到你校学习汉语课程,作为学生代表,请你给交换生代表Mark写一封邮件。
内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 告知课程相关信息;
3. 提出学习建议。
注意:
1. 词数为80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mark,
I’m the student representative, Li Hui. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mark,
I’m the student representative, Li Hui. Welcome to our school. I’m glad to tell you something about the courses for the summer holiday.
We offer a range of courses, including Chinese, paper cutting, Peking Opera, pottery, and calligraphy. All these courses are taught by experienced teachers. The courses will be held during the morning hours, providing time for practice and questions. You’ll have the chance to learn from experienced teachers. After class, we’ll organize visits to cultural sites and workshops, giving you a deeper understanding of Chinese traditions. What’s more, you’ll meet new friends from around the world and share your cultural insights. Taking part in these courses will not only improve your skills but also enrich your cultural experiences. I’m sure you’ll enjoy them.
By the way, you’d better buy an English-Chinese dictionary. I think it’s helpful for you to learn Chinese. It’s a good idea to read some Chinese newspapers. It can improve your Chinese ability. We’re getting a little hot here, so you should bring some summer clothes. You should also take some cold medicine.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】学习科目、计划、语言与文化
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:文章应该包括三个方面的要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己;表示欢迎;引出话题:介绍暑期课程;
第二步,详细介绍暑期课程安排情况;
第三步,提出一些建议;
第四步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① learn from 向……学习
② what’s more 另外
[高分句型]
① Taking part in these courses will not only improve your skills but also enrich your cultural experiences. (动名词作主语)
② I think it’s helpful for you to learn Chinese. (宾语从句、it作形式主语)
Passage 7(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连市·期末)
一次经历就是一笔财富,它或许会影响你的生活方式,或许会改变你的人生态度。你校校刊正在开展以“An unforgettable experience”为主题的征文活动。请你积极参与,分享你难忘的经历和感受。
内容包括:
(1) What is it?
(2) How did it change your life?
注意:
(1) 词数为80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数:
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
An unforgettable experience
The important moment in my life was when I participated in a volunteer trip to a poor area. It was an unforgettable experience that transformed me deeply.
Before this trip, I lived a rich life, unaware of the hardships faced by others. However, seeing the difficulties of the villagers taught me the value of pity. I realized that every person, regardless of their background, should get the same opportunities. This experience taught me to become more active. It has changed my perspective on life, making me more appreciative of what I have and determined to contribute positively to society.
【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己最难忘的经历是什么;
第二步,具体介绍这次经历以及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in 参加
②unaware of 不知道
③the value of ……的价值
④regardless of 不管
[高分句型]
①The important moment in my life was when I participated in a volunteer trip to a poor area.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②It was an unforgettable experience that transformed me deeply.(that引导的定语从句)
③It has changed my perspective on life, making me more appreciative of what I have and determined to contribute positively to society.(what引导的宾语从句)
Passage 8(23-24八年级下·辽宁丹东市·期末)
中学生在成长过程中难免会磁到一些烦恼,假如你是李华,请根据下面的提示要求,用英语写一篇发言稿在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的看法。
1.要点:
(1)你的烦恼;
(2)你的做法;
(3)对待烦恼的建议。
2.要求:
(1)短文应包含所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself .
My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
Maybe everyone has his or her problems. In my opinion, we should be brave to face them. We can try our best to solve them. And sometimes let it be there. It’s also a good way to solve it. After all, time is the best medicine. Don’t you think so? That’s all. Thank you!
【知识点】方法/策略、青少年问题、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,讲述自己的烦恼以及解决方法;
第二步,介绍自己对待烦恼的建议及看法;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①believe in相信
②communicate with…与……沟通
③feel stressed感到有压力
④achieve a balance between…and…在……和……之间取得平衡
⑤try one’s best尽力而为
[高分句型]
Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies. (祈使句)
Passage 9(23-24八年级下·辽宁营口市·期末)
经过初中的两年学习,下学期就要上初三了。
1. 回顾初中两年的学习生活情况及自己的进步和收获。
2. 上初三后有什么打算,谈两三条。
3. 约80词左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
In the past 2 years, I have learned a lot from my teachers with much teaching experience. I got on well with my classmates. We overcame difficulties, made progress and enjoyed happiness together. I am interested in English, and I have improved my English a lot since I joined the English Club. I think reading is very important because reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.
In my future school life, I will achieve a balance between schoolwork and doing sports. In addition, I will spend more time communicating with my teachers and parents. I will learn to enjoy my school life, and I’ll try my best to do better. I do believe actions speak louder than words.
【知识点】计划、自我管理
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应对题干给出的“回顾自己初中过去两年的情况,对即将来临的新学期的打算”进行描述并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对过去两年进行总结;
第二步,根据题干中的要点,详细描述自己的收获;
第三步,讲述新的学期的计划,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot很多
②get on well with与……相处得好
[高分句型]
①I think reading is very important because reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.(宾语从句,because引导的原因状语从句)
②I will learn to enjoy my school life, and I’ll try my best to do better.(and连接并列句)
Passage 10(23-24八年级下·辽宁阜新市·期末)
良好的习惯对于青少年的成长与成功发挥着重大的作用。学校论坛正在就此话题在同学中展开调查。请你写一篇英语短文,向该论坛投稿,描述你的一或两种个人习惯,并谈谈它(们)给你的成长与成功带来怎样的影响。
写作要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
2. 语言准确,行文连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
3. 词数在80—100左右。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I have two good habits that have had a great impact on my growth and success.
One of my habits is reading. I read various kinds of books every day. This habit enriches my knowledge and broadens my horizons. It helps me do well in my studies and also makes me more creative.
Another habit is exercising regularly. I play basketball or go running several times a week. This keeps me healthy and energetic, allowing me to focus better on my daily tasks and deal with challenges more easily.
In conclusion, good habits are the key to success and a better future.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点需要清晰,描述个人习惯及影响,不要遗漏关键内容,适当展开并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,直接表明拥有两种良好习惯;
第二步,分别阐述阅读和锻炼这两种习惯,并说明其对自身的积极影响;
第三步,结尾总结,强调良好习惯对成功和未来的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②have a great impact on对……有巨大影响
③allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
④In conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①I have two good habits that have had a great impact on my growth and success.(定语从句)
②This keeps me healthy and energetic, allowing me to focus better on my daily tasks and deal with challenges more easily.(现在分词作伴随状语)
Passage 11 (23-24八年级下·辽宁朝阳市·期末)
假设你是李辉,你的英国笔友Tom在来信中告诉你,他因转入新学校后还没有交到新朋友而感到很苦恼。请你用英语给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 表达安慰;
2. 提出建议;
3. 给予鼓励。
注意:
1. 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
I’m so sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends at your new school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m so sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends at your new school. You don’t have to worry too much about this, because it’s very common. I hope the following advice can help you.
First of all, we should know how to share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others. Sharing can give us pleasure. Second, we should be helpful. When we are in trouble, we should help each other. We should be willing to help others and seek help from others in case of difficulties. Finally, we can’t say bad words about others so that we can get on well with each other. We should keep secrets.
I hope these suggestions can help you. At the same time you have to believe in yourself, you will make a lot of new friends.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】方法/策略、朋友、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容给出自己的建议,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,听说没有交到新朋友给出建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,具体描述给出的建议;
第三步,书写结语,希望能够帮助到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble making friends 交朋友有困难
②be willing to help others 乐意帮助其他人
③in case of 万一
④get on well with 和……相处好
[高分句型]
①Finally, we can’t say bad words about others so that we can get well on with each other.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
Passage 12(23-24八年级下·辽宁葫芦岛市·期末)
拥有健康的身体和愉悦的心情能够让我们快乐地生活和学习。为倡导“健康生活、快乐学习”的理念,你的班级将召开一次以“How to have a healthy and happy life?”为主题的班会。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
写作要点:
1. 健康和快乐的重要性;
2. 如何拥有健康快乐的生活(饮食、运动、与人相处等);
3. 发出倡导,提出希望。
写作要求:
1. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 80~100词。
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here and give you a speech. My topic is How to have a healthy and happy life? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here and give you a speech. My topic is How to have a healthy and happy life.
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we live a healthy and happy life?
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【知识点】方法/策略
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,表明健康和快乐的重要性;
第二步,介绍拥有健康快乐的生活的方式方法;
第三步,发出倡导,提出希望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①paying more and more attention to越来越重视
②include包括
③not only…but also不仅……而且
④proper适当的
⑤get along well with…与……相处融洽
⑥communicate with sb.与某人沟通
[高分句型]
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 13(23-24八年级下·辽宁辽阳市·期末)
假设你是李华,学校校刊“排忧解难”专栏最近收到明明同学的来信,他因为身材肥胖受到一些同学嘲笑,感到很苦恼,请你给明明回信给出建议。
要点:
告诉明明生活中出现问题是很正常的;
提醒身体健康的重要性;
给出解决问题建议。
注意:词数在100左右;作文中不要出现真实校名和姓名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear Ming Ming,
It’s not easy being your situation and I can fully understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at news of your overweight. Here is my advice for you.
First of all, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident because it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. In addition, try to eat healthily, keep away from high fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Last but not least, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you will be.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表示理解对方;
第二步,告诉他生活中出现问题是很正常的,并提醒他注意身体健康的重要性;
第三步,具体给出解决问题建议。
[亮点词汇]
① first of all首先
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③ keep away from远离
④ last but not least最后也是最重要的
[高分句型]
①The most important thing is to be confident because it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble.(原因状语从句)
②The more you exercise, the healthier you will be.(比较级用法)
Passage 14(23-24八年级下·辽宁营口市·期末)
曾子曰:“吾日三省吾身:为人谋而不忠乎?与朋友交而不信乎?传不习乎?”习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话,告诫青少年(teenager)要勇于面对自己的缺点,在学习中求真务实。那么怎样成为更好的自己?
请你根据以下内容提示,以“How to Be a Better Teenager?”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,在演讲比赛中发言。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
要点包括:
(1)演讲目的;
(2)针对演讲题目给出至少两点建议;
(3)发出号召。
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone,
It’s my honour to stand here to give you a speech.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone,
It’s my honour to stand here to give you a speech. Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. In order to be a better teenager, we should do the following things.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. For example, we can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. In this way, we can live and study well. What’s more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. Next, we’d better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try to help them. Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let’s try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“怎样成为更好的青少年”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍演讲的目的;
第二步,根据题干要求给出具体的建议;
第三步,号召大家成为更好的青少年,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②had better do最好做
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
①When others need help, we should try to help them.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.(it is adj to do句型)
1 / 37
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$$