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Unit 6 Sunshine for all
Task
poor people
disabled people
Who needs our help?
blind people
elderly people
deaf people
homeless people
survivors of a disaster
n. 幸存者
[sə'vaivə]
Who else needs our help?
Earthquake survivors
a child with a serious disease
cost a lot for medical treatment
don’t have enough money to have an operation
need to have an operation.
lose her life.
give a helping hand
We can write a letter to ask for more people’s help.
Peter has read an article about a middle school student in the newspaper. He wants to write a letter to ask for help. He is organizing his ideas first.
1. Who needs our help?
2. Why does he need help?
3. What kind of help do his family need?
4. How can we help Xiao Wei?
He has a serious blood disease.
They need money for Xiao Wei's operation.
We can donate money.
Read carefully and answer the questions.
Xiao Wei.
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Para 1 _________ needs help?
Who
Para 2 ___________ about the person in need
Information
Para 3 _______do they need our help?
Why
Para 4 What kind of help do they need?
___________ can we help them?
How
Para 5 __________ for help
Thanks
Dear all,
A Grade 9 student at No.2 Middle School needs our help!
The student’s name is Xiao Wei. He has been ill in hospital since last month.
The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease. An operation may save
him, but it will cost over 300,000 yuan.
Xiao Wei’s parents are both farmers. They do not have enough money for such
an operation. However, it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation as
soon as possible. Otherwise, he may lose his life.
I am writing to ask for your help. Please donate money. Many hands make light
work. If all of us can give a helping hand, he may get well again soon.
Thanks a lot for your help.
Peter
Words or phrases to show Xiao Wei's difficulty
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Dear all,
A Grade 9 student at No.2 Middle School needs our help!
The student’s name is Xiao Wei. He has been ill in hospital since last month.
The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease. An operation may save
him, but it will cost over 300,000 yuan.
Xiao Wei’s parents are both farmers. They do not have enough money for such
an operation. However, it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation as
soon as possible. Otherwise, he may lose his life.
I am writing to ask for your help. Please donate money. Many hands make light
work. If all of us can give a helping hand, he may get well again soon.
Thanks a lot for your help.
Peter
Words or phrases to show Xiao Wei's difficulty
Introduce the information about the people in need clearly.
State the trouble in detail.
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practice
Introduce the information about the people in need clearly.
State the trouble in detail
An 81-year-old man called Mr Sun needs help.
A. Mr Sun is 81 years old. He has no children. He can’t
look after himself.
B. Mr Sun is an 81-year-old man. He has no children. He
is too old to look after himself. He can’t see or hear
well.
C. Mr Sun is 81 years old. He is too old to look after himself well. He is often weak and sick. He gets tired easily. He has difficulty hearing and seeing things clearly. He has no children. The only dog he had died last month, so he feels lonely from time to time.
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Dear all,
A Grade 9 student at No.2 Middle School needs our help!
The student’s name is Xiao Wei. He has been ill in hospital since last month.
The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease. An operation may save
him, but it will cost over 300,000 yuan.
Xiao Wei’s parents are both farmers. They do not have enough money for such
an operation. However, it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation as
soon as possible. Otherwise, he may lose his life.
I am writing to ask for your help. Please donate money. Many hands make light
work. If all of us can give a helping hand, he may get well again soon.
Thanks a lot for your help.
Peter
Transitions
Transitional words moreover, as a result, first, second, then, finally, above all, at last…
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Dear all,
A Grade 9 student at No. 2 Middle School needs our help!
The student’s name is Xiao Wei. He has been ill in hospital since last month. The doctor says that he has a serious blood disease. An operation may save him, but it will cost over 300,000 yuan.
Xiao Wei’s parents are both farmers. They do not have enough money for such an operation. However, it is important for Xiao Wei to have the operation as soon as possible. Otherwise, he may lose his life.
I am writing to ask for your help. Please donate money. Many hands make light work. If all of us can give a helping hand, he may get well again soon.
Thanks a lot for your help!
Peter
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Peter organizes his ideas
Information
about the
person in need
why does
he need
our help
How can
we help
Thanks for help!
General
Specific
Who
needs help
who needs help?
....needs our help
...is in need of our help
Someone with a serious disease
people in poor areas
blind and deaf people
the elderly
earthquake survivors
children without parents
orphan [ˈɔːfn] 孤儿
children of migrant workers(农民工子弟)
left-behind children(留守儿童)
Information about the person in need
serious, be badly ill/hurt...
Why is it necessary for us to help?
It‘s important/dangerous for… to do...
An operation may bring hope to him.
do not have enough money for.../to do sth.
can't afford sth.
too...to... = so...that...
be unable to do
It will cost .... to ..
How can we help?
We must do something to help...
What they need most is ...
We can raise money for …
We can help by donating money/books/clothes/food to…
We can work as volunteers for…/to do…
We can visit them regularly
We can help them with their homework/housework
We can read stories/newspapers to them
We can make use of the power of the media to help them.
If all of us can give a helping hand, ... may...
Show our thanks.
Thanks for your help/support/kindness.
Who needs help Tom (11 years old)
His problems • born with eye problems
• too poor to pay for the operation
• can’t go to school
What we can do • donate money to him
• ...
Your hope ...
Dear all,
We will have a Charity Day next week. It’s time to do something meaningful for people in need.
...
Thanks for your help.
An 1l-year-old boy called Tom is in need of our help. Tom was born with eye problems. An operation can bring hope to him. But his family is too poor to pay for the operation. The boy can’t go to school now. But he wishes he could study at school like us!
I am writing to ask you to help him. What he needs most is money for the operation. We can donate some money to his family. Moreover, we can visit him and read interesting stories to him.
I hope all of us can give a helping hand and Tom will get well soon.
假设你是某慈善组织的Tony,你们想帮助不幸罹患重病的Susan。
请你根据下面表格中的信息,用英语写一封倡议书,号召大家捐款。
提示信息:
Name Susan
Age 14
Her problems got a heart disease last month, in danger of
dying, no money for operation
The cost of the
operation 200,000 yuan
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知识概要
课时讲练
知识清单
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Dear all,
Please help a girl who is badly ill.
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
Susan is a 14-year-old girl. She is a top student in her school.
But sadly, she got a heart disease last month and is in danger of
dying now. Only an operation can save her life. The operation will
cost 200,000 yuan. Susan’s family is too poor to pay for it. But she needs to have the operation as soon as possible.
So I am writing here to ask all of you for help. Many hands
make light work. Please show your loving heart and donate money to
our charity to save Susan’s life.
Thanks for your time.
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知识概要
课时讲练
知识清单
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Post writing
1.结构(5’)
A clear structure 文章整体段落板块分明。
2.内容(5’)
Who/what/how/Transitions 文章中内容丰富,有连接词,体现逻辑性。
3.准确度(2’) 文章没有拼写或语法错误。表达流畅。
4.语言(2’)
Good sentences 有较好的词汇、句型。
5.书写(1’) 书写工整
If everyone gives his help to the people in need, the world will be full of .
sunshine
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