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小升初英语专题总复习
专题二十二 书面表达
一、书面表达的考查要求
《义务教育英语课程标准》要点:学生乐于用书面语言表达意思,仿写语句,根据提示表达基本信息,书写基本规范。能够正确地使用大小写字母和常用的标点符号。形成基本的写作能力。
理解和运用有关下列话题的语言表达形式:个人情况、家庭与朋友、身体与健康、学校与日常生活、文体活动、节假日、饮食、服装、季节与天气、颜色、动物等。
二、书面表达的基本题型
小学阶段书面表达通常有五种基本题型:
1. 命题作文
命题作文一般只给出一个题目,没有或者很少有附加的文字、图片等信息,题目通常以同学们所熟悉的生活题材为主,便于立意,有话可说。
2. 话题作文
话题作文一般给出要求所写文章的主题,即写什么内容。要求学生围绕这个话题写一篇短文或对话。
3. 提示类作文
要求学生根据中文或英文提示的信息或要求,按照一定的主题或体裁写出短文或对话。
拓展:提示类作文包含以下几种情况:中文提示、英文提示、要点提示、关键词提示等。
4. 看图类作文
提供一幅或一组富有情节或线索的图片,并可能在图片内或图片下配有关键性的提示词,要求学生写一篇符合图片内容、语法正确的短文。
5. 写信
一般是提供一些文字,要求学生以所给人物的名义或根据自己的实际情况写一封信或根据某人的来信写一封回信。
三、书面表达的解题技巧
1. 对于命题作文来说,由于没有具体的限定材料,写作中很容易跑题。因此,写作时要仔细审题,确定中心,明确要求。
2. 写话题作文时,由于限定了内容,只要运用相关的英语知识,组织成通顺的短文即可。因此,平时要多积累一些词汇和好的句型。
3. 写提示类作文时,首先应该按照提示信息,整理出要点,然后将这些要点组成语意连贯的短文。但要特别注意,不能一字一句地去汉译英,那样写出来的短文不仅严重缺乏生动性,而且容易出现诸多语法上的错误。
4. 在写看图类作文时,第一,要仔细观察图画,根据提示找到必要的信息,所写的句子一定要符合图意;第二,把提示的单词、短语或句子都尽量用上,所写的句子要简单明了,表达的意思要准确;第三,记事类、看图类文章一般使用和过去相关的时态,因此动词过去式的拼写一定要记清,不要写错。
5. 写书信时,切记格式要正确。一般情况下,第一行顶格写收信人的称呼,后用逗号;第二行空两格,开始写正文;信写完后,另起一行写结束语和谦称,后加逗号;在谦称下面写写信人的姓名。注意,收信人的称呼前一般用dear开头;写信人的姓名必须是全名,且必须与谦称语对齐。
四、书面表达的常用句型
1. 写人或事物类
一般我们可以用这几个句型:
He/ She/ It is+岁数/形容词/动词的现在分词……
He/ She/ It has+名词。
He/ She/ It likes...
His/ Her/ Its favourite…is…
2. 写场地、方位类
不管写的是什么地方,我们用到的句型是:
There is…
There are...
The…is+方位词+参照物。
3. 写看图作文
我们可以按照以下方法去写:
由静到动。静态的东西用There is...或There are...来描述,动态的东西用现在进行时或一般过去时来描述。需要注意的是,如果你在一开始选择了什么时态,你整篇文章的时态就应该一致。
学霸点拨:尽量使用自己熟悉的句子。但要注意变换句型,避免重复。
一、请你写一写你最好的朋友,告诉大家他(她)长什么样子、喜欢什么、他(她)的兴趣爱好是什么。 例题
要求:1.写出你最好朋友的外貌、兴趣爱好及特点;
2.条理清晰,意思明确、连贯,句子通顺,标点正确,书写工整、规范;
3.不得少于60个单词。
My best friend
例文:
My best friend
I have many friends. They are Peter, Jack, Mike, Mary and so on.Peter is my best friend. We are in the same class. We are classmates.
Peter is a lovely boy. He's from China. His Chinese name is Wang Liwei.
Wang Liwei is 11 years old. He is tall and strong. He has big eyes.But his mouth is small. He is cool. He can draw pictures and play the violin. He likes playing football and swimming. He likes blue best. His favourite animal is dogs. He is a good student. He's good at math and English. He speaks English well. The teachers and students all like him very much.He is a happy boy. I like him, too. We often study and play together.
This is my best friend. Do you like him? Let's make friends!
二、你一定很喜欢小动物吧?看下面的图片,你最喜欢其中的哪一个小动物呢?请你从下面的小动物中找一个你最喜欢的作为你的宠物,并以“My pet”为题,写一篇小作文。 例题
要求:1.选取其中一个小动物,写出它的特点及习性,可适当发挥想象;
2.条理清晰,意思明确、连贯,句子通顺,标点正确,书写工整、规范;
3.不得少于50个单词。
My pet
例文:
My pet
This is my pet. It is a cat. Its name is Kitty. It is so cute. It's yellow. It has two big eyes and a long tail. It has a red hat on its head. It likes eating fish. It often catches mice. Its favourite colour is red. It likes sitting on the sofa. It likes enjoying sunshine. I like my pet. Do you have a pet? What's your pet?
三、现代社会人们更多地关注健康问题,请以“Please keep good healthy habits”为题写一篇50个词左右的文章。要求:语句通顺,条理清楚,书写清晰规范。例题
Please keep good healthy habits
例文:
Please keep good healthy habits
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. And then, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don't feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once. Finally, it's very important to have a good mood towards life. A good mood will bring you a healthy body, too.
四、请向大家介绍一下你们的教室。 例题
要求:1.用上there be句型;
2.条理清晰,意思明确、连贯,句子通顺,标点正确,书写工整、规范;
3.不得少于65个单词。
My classroom
例文:
My classroom
Look! This is my classroom. It's big and bright. It's nice and clean.It's on the fourth floor.
What's in the classroom? There are two blackboards, four fans, eight lights, many desks and chairs. The wall is white. The floor is grey. The doors are red. The windows are brown. You can see four pictures on the wall. They're beautiful. We have an air conditioner. Look at the teacher's desk. It's orange. There is a beautiful flower on it. It's for our teacher.Look! This is my seat. It's near the window. We study and play in the classroom. We have fun every day.
I like my classroom. Do you like my classroom?
五、家是最温暖最舒适的地方。你的家是什么样子的?有几间卧室?几个卫生间?请着重介绍书房和客厅。让我们来参观一下你的家,你作向导,向大家介绍一下你的家吧! 例题
要求:1.用上there be句型;
2.条理清晰,意思连贯,句子通顺,标点正确,书写工整、规范;
3.不得少于65个单词。
My home
例文:
My home
Look! This is my home. We have 6 rooms. You can see a living room, two bedrooms, a study, a kitchen and a bathroom. They're so clean.
Look at this room. It's a study. It's small but nice. There is a desk,a chair, and a shelf in it. You can see a lamp on the desk. There are many books on the shelf. The books are my friends. I like them very much. I do my homework and study here every day.
This is our living room. There are three sofas, a TV, a table and an air conditioner in the living room. You can see two pictures on the wall.They're beautiful. We often watch TV here. I like watching TV very much.
I live in this beautiful house. My father and mother love me very much. I'm very happy! It's a warm home.
六、下面是居住在香港(Hong Kong)的埃米写给她的笔友班迪的一封信。班迪住在武汉。假设你是班迪,请给埃米写一封回信。 例题
要求:1.回答埃米所提的问题。正文用一般过去时进行写作;
2.条理清晰,意思连贯,句子通顺,标点正确,书写工整、规范;
3.注意书信格式;
4.不得少于70个单词。
Dear Bandy,
I'm very glad to receive your letter. This time, let me tell you about my holiday.
I had a very wonderful trip last holiday. I went to Beijing with my parents. I played with my cousin. I ate delicious food. The next day,I visited the Great Wall.There were hundreds of people. I took many pictures. I also visited the Palace Museum. I stayed in Beijing for a week. I came back to Hong Kong yesterday. That was a nice trip. We were so happy.Did you take a trip on your holiday? Tell me about your last holiday, please!
Love,
Amy
例文:
Dear Amy,
I'm very glad to receive your letter. I had a nice trip on my holiday,too.
I went to Shanghai with my parents last holiday. We went there by plane. My elder sister Jane was there. She is a university student. She studies in Shanghai. She met us at the airport. I played with her a lot. I visited Shanghai Jinmao Tower. That's so tall. I took many pictures. My mother likes taking pictures very much. The evenings of Shanghai are beautiful. I ate nice food at City God Temple of Shanghai. There were so many people. There was so much nice food. I ate a lot. I came back to Wuhan the day before yesterday. That was a nice trip!
There is a photo of my trip. Can you give me a photo of your trip?
Yours,
Bandy
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