内容正文:
专题06 第一节写作
(书信体写作)
一、邀请信
(2023-2024学年高一下·徐州市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是班长李华,本周日上午将组织全班同学进行美化校园的活动。请给外教Vincent写一封邮件,邀请他参加。
内容包括:1. 介绍活动;
2. 发出邀请。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Vincent,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Vincent,
Hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to participate in an event of beautifying our campus.
The event will start at 8:00 a.m. on Sunday. We have scheduled several tasks: planting more trees along the main walkway, cleaning up the school garden, creating a new flower bed near the entrance, and installing birdfeeders in the trees. These activities aim to enhance the ecological beauty of our school and promote environmental awareness among students.
We would be delighted if you could join us and lend a helping hand. Your participation would not only inspire us but also make the event more enjoyable and meaningful for everyone involved.
Looking forward to your positive reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。本周日上午将组织全班同学进行美化校园的活动,要求考生按照要求给外教Vincent写一封邮件,邀请他参加。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
参与,参加:participate in→ take part in
开始:start→ begin
安排:schedule→ arrange
增进,提高:enhance→ improve
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原 句:I’m writing to invite you to participate in an event of beautifying our campus.
拓展句:It is an event of beautifying our campus that I’m writing to invite you to participate in.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to participate in an event of beautifying our campus.
(运用了动名词beautifying作宾语)
【高分句型2】We would be delighted if you could join us and lend a helping hand.
(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
二、建议信
(2023-2024学年高一下·无锡市·期末统考)
66. 假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Alex发邮件告诉你,最近他参加汉语书法比赛没有获奖,心情不好,请你给他回信。
内容包括:1. 表示理解并安慰;
2. 给予鼓励和建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you didn’t win the Chinese calligraphy contest, I understand how disappointing it can be and please accept my sincere sympathies.
However, you should be proud of yourself for even participating in such a challenging event. It takes dedication to learn a new skill like Chinese calligraphy. Try to find a good teacher who can give you constructive feedback and keep practicing.
Every failure is a stepping stone to success. Hope you’ll continue to pursue your passion for Chinese calligraphy and wish you all the best in your future endeavors.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生给英国朋友Alex发邮件,安慰他因参加汉语书法比赛没有获奖而心情不好。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累:
追求:pursue→chase
比赛:contest→competition/game
真诚的:sincere→genuine
建议:feedback→suggestion/proposal
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复杂句
原 句:However, you should be proud of yourself for even participating in such a challenging event.
拓展句:However, you should be proud of yourself for even participating in such an event, which is so challenging.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Learning that you didn’t win the Chinese calligraphy contest, I understand how disappointing it can be and please accept my sincere sympathies.(运用了现在分词作状语和how引导宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】Try to find a good teacher who can give you constructive feedback and keep practicing.
(运用了who引导定语从句。)
(2023-2024学年高一下·常州市溧阳市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华,你的好友 Ryan发邮件问你该如何合理使用社交媒体。请给他回复一封电子邮件。
内容包括:1. 写信目的;
2. 你的建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
Nowadays, various social media are emerging in endlessly, such as WeChat, Weibo, Tiktok, etc. On social media, there are all kinds of people and information, so it is necessary for us to use social media reasonably.
Firstly, set a fixed time and duration for using social media every day, so that you can focus more on learning and other more important things. Secondly, before receiving and sharing information, it is important to ensure its accuracy, because the information seen on social media may not always be accurate and authentic. Thirdly, carefully choose the content you want to publish and avoid the leakage of personal identity information. Do not casually add strangers as friends. Finally, others’ perspectives should be accepted with an open mindset. Their privacy should also be protected. Do not post their photos and information without permission.
These are my suggestions. I hope them will be helpful to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友 Ryan写邮件,回复该如何合理使用社交媒体,并提出自己的建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
各种各样的:all kinds of→a variety of/all sorts of
专注于:focus on→concentrate on
选择:choose→select/pick out
观点:perspective→viewpoint/outlook
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原 句:Finally, others’ perspectives should be accepted with an open mindset. Their privacy should also be protected.
拓展句:Finally, not only should others’ perspectives be accepted with an open mindset, but also their privacy should be protected.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Firstly, set a fixed time and duration for using social media every day, so that you can focus more on learning and other more important things. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Thirdly, carefully choose the content you want to publish and avoid the leakage of personal identity information. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
三、告知信
(2023-2024学年高一下·南京市六校联合体·期末联考)
66. 假定你是李华,最近学习了一些对社会发展有突出贡献的科学家的故事,请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件介绍一位你最喜欢的科学家。
内容包括:1. 他(她)的基本信息;
2. 对你的影响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going? _________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you one of my favourite scientists. Recently I have learnt the stories of some amazing scientists, of whom I admire Tu Youyou best, the first female scientist to be awarded the Nobel Prize in China.
Born in a well-educated family in 1930, Tu had access to good education and acquired a good knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine in college. After graduation, she devoted herself to finding a cure for malaria patients, who suffered a lot at that time for lack of effective medicine. After countless failures, she succeeded in discovering qinghaosu. Tu’s spirits inspired me not to give up my dream no matter what difficulty I may encounter.
Do you have an idol to share with me? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件介绍一位你最喜欢的科学家。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
鼓舞:inspire→encourage
治疗方法:cure→medical treatment
遇到:encounter→run into
无数的:countless→numerous
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:Born in a well-educated family in 1930, Tu had access to good education and acquired a good knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine in college.
拓展句:Tu, who was born in a well-educated family in 1930, had access to good education and acquired a good knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine in college.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 Recently I have learnt the stories of some amazing scientists, of whom I admire Tu Youyou best, the first female scientist to be awarded the Nobel Prize in China. (运用了介词+关系代词结构非限制性定语从句,不定式作定语)
【高分句型2】Tu’s spirits inspired me not to give up my dream no matter what difficulty I may encounter.
(运用了no matter what引导让步状语从句)
(2023-2024学年高一下·苏州市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华,最近你校将为国际交换生举办“品中华传统美食”(Taste Traditional Chinese Cuisine)的活动。请给你校国际交换生Michael写一封电子邮件,告知此事并邀请他参加。
内容包括:1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Michael,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Michael,
I’m thrilled to inform you about a piece of good news that our school is hosting a “Taste Traditional Chinese Cuisine” event for international exchange students, and I’d like to extend a warm invitation for you to join us.
The event is scheduled to take place on June 26th, 2024, at 3:00 PM in the school’s main cafeteria. We will have a variety of traditional Chinese dishes for you to sample, including Peking duck, dumplings, and so on. Additionally, there will be a cooking demonstration where you can learn how to make some of these dishes yourself.
I’m confident that this event will provide you with a unique opportunity to experience the rich flavors of Chinese cuisine. Please let me know if you can attend, and I look forward to seeing you there.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校国际交换生Michael写一封电子邮件,告知学校将为国际交换生举办“品中华传统美食”(Taste Traditional Chinese Cuisine)的活动一事。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→exhilarated
活动:event → activity
表达:extend→express
此外:additionally→ in addition
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:We will have a variety of traditional Chinese dishes for you to sample, including Peking duck, dumplings, and so on.
拓展句:We will have a variety of traditional Chinese dishes for you to sample, which include Peking duck, dumplings, and so on.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m thrilled to inform you about a piece of good news that our school is hosting a “Taste Traditional Chinese Cuisine” event for international exchange students, and I’d like to extend a warm invitation for you to join us.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally, there will be a cooking demonstration where you can learn how to make some of these dishes yourself.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
(2023-2024学年高一下·镇江市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华,上周四你校音乐社团在校礼堂举办了一场主题为“East Meets West”的音乐会,请你给英国朋友Jerry写一封邮件分享这次经历。
内容包括:1. 音乐会内容;
2. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jerry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jerry,
I’m writing to share with you a concert with the theme “East Meets West”, which was held in our school hall last Thursday. It was truly a night worthy to be remembered.
The concert staged by our school’s music club was absolutely amazing, featuring performances of traditional Chinese instruments, Western classical music, and a chorus show. The most impressive part was the refreshing performance of Butterfly Lovers, which combined both Chinese and Western musical elements. The audience was completely immersed in the music, and the applause was deafening.
I was deeply impressed by the unique charm brought by different cultural backgrounds in music. I hope you can attend our next concert too!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生给英国朋友Jerry写一封邮件,分享主题为“East Meets West”的音乐会的经历。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
举办:stage→hold
印象深刻的:impressive→ unforgettable
沉浸于:be immersed in→be lost in
大声的:deafening→loud
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:I was deeply impressed by the unique charm brought by different cultural backgrounds in music.
拓展句:I was deeply impressed by the unique charm which was brought by different cultural backgrounds in music.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to share with you a concert with the theme “East Meets West”, which was held in our school hall last Thursday.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The most impressive part was the refreshing performance of Butterfly Lovers, which combined both Chinese and Western musical elements.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(2023-2024学年高一下·南通市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华,昨天你参加了学校举办的“中华传统美食”厨艺大赛,请你给英国好友David写一封邮件。
内容包括:1. 介绍你的参赛作品;
2. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
I’m writing to share with you my experience in the cooking contest held in our school yesterday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
I’m writing to share with you my exciting experience in the “Chinese Traditional Cuisine” cooking contest held in our school yesterday. I was thrilled to participate and presented my signature dish, Kung Pao Chicken. This classic Sichuan dish combines the spicy and sour flavors that truly capture the essence of Chinese cuisine.
The contest was a fantastic opportunity to showcase my culinary skills and appreciate the rich diversity of Chinese food culture. I felt honored to be a part of it and was deeply moved by the enthusiasm and appreciation of my peers and teachers.
Looking forward to sharing more about Chinese culture with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友David写一封邮件,介绍自己参加了学校举办的“中华传统美食”厨艺大赛的情况。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
比赛:contest → competition
举办、组织:hold → conduct
展示:showcase → exhibit
热情:enthusiasm → ardour
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:The contest was a fantastic opportunity to showcase my culinary skills and appreciate the rich diversity of Chinese food culture.
拓展句:The contest was a fantastic opportunity which showcases my culinary skills and appreciates the rich diversity of Chinese food culture.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】This classic Sichuan dish combines the spicy and sour flavors that truly capture the essence of Chinese cuisine. (运用了关系代词that引导限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The contest was a fantastic opportunity to showcase my culinary skills and appreciate the rich diversity of Chinese food culture. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
(2023-2024学年高一下·盐城市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了Happy Dumpling Festival,请你给英国朋友Allen写封邮件分享这次活动。
内容包括:1. 活动内容;
2. 你的感受。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Allen,
I’m writing to share with you the Happy Dumpling Festival held last Friday at our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Allen,
I’m writing to share with you the Happy Dumpling Festival held last Friday at our school.
The festival, which took place in our school gymnasium, was a joyous event filled with activities centered around making and eating dumplings. Students and teachers came together to prepare dumpling fillings, wrap dumplings, and cook them. There were also various performances, including traditional Chinese dances and music.
I had a wonderful time participating in the festivities. It was not only fun but also a great opportunity to learn more about Chinese culture. The sense of community and the delicious food made it an unforgettable experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Allen写封邮件分享上周五学校举办的Happy Dumpling Festival。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
欢乐的:joyous→happy
准备:prepare→ready
美妙的:wonderful→fantastic
机会:opportunity→chance
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原 句:There were also various performances, including traditional Chinese dances and music.
同义句:Additionally, there were diverse shows featuring classical Chinese dances and musical performances.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The festival, which took place in our school gymnasium, was a joyous event filled with activities centered around making and eating dumplings. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was not only fun but also a great opportunity to learn more about Chinese culture.
(运用了not only…but also连接的并列句)
(2023-2024学年高一下·连云港市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件询问你最钦佩的科学家是谁,请你回复一封邮件。
内容包括:1. 人物简介;
2. 钦佩的原因。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I admire Albert Einstein the most. He was a German-born theoretical physicist who developed the theory of relativity, one of the two pillars of modern physics. His work is also known for its influence on the philosophy of science.
What I admire about Einstein is not only his groundbreaking contributions to science but also his character. He was a man of great intellect and creativity, always seeking the truth and pushing the boundaries of knowledge. His life is a testament to the power of curiosity and the importance of perseverance in the pursuit of understanding the universe.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件询问你最钦佩的科学家是谁,要求考生就此内容回复一封邮件。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
仰慕:admire→look up to
影响:influence → impact
突破:push→break through
证明:testament→ proof
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:I admire Albert Einstein the most.
拓展句:I admire Albert Einstein the most, who is one of the greatest scientists in the world.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】He was a German-born theoretical physicist who developed the theory of relativity, one of the two pillars of modern physics. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】He was a man of great intellect and creativity, always seeking the truth and pushing the
boundaries of knowledge. (运用了现在分词作状语的结构)
(2023-2024学年高一下·南京市金陵中学·期末校考)
66. 假如你是李华,你校学生会将举行“给你一朵小红花”活动。请你给校摄影社团的Larry 写一封邮件,邀请他一起参加。
内容包括:1. 活动的目的;
2. 活动安排和内容;
3. Larry 的任务。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Larry,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Larry,
Our school’s student union is to hold the “Give You a Little Red Flower” event and we’d like to invite you to join us.
The purpose of this event is to recognize and appreciate outstanding contributions from students and faculty members alike.The event will take place next Monday in the school auditorium from 2:00 PM to 4:00 PM. It will include performances put on by the dance club, as well as a short speech made by our principal.
As part of the photography club, your task is to capture the event’s essence. Your photos will make it unforgettable. Please let us know at your earliest convenience if you can participate.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作。要求考生给校摄影社团的Larry 写一封邮件邀请他参加学生会即将举行的“给你一朵小红花”活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
举办:hold→host
目的:purpose→aim/goal
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
参加:participate→take part
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原 句:The event will take place next Monday in the school auditorium from 2:00 PM to 4:00 PM. It will include performances put on by the dance club, as well as a short speech made by our principal.
拓展句:The event will take place next Monday in the school auditorium from 2:00 PM to 4:00 PM, which will include performances put on by the dance club, as well as a short speech made by our principal.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Please let us know at your earliest convenience if you can participate.
(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】It will include performances put on by the dance club, as well as a short speech made by our principal. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
(2023-2024学年高一下·无锡市一中·期末校考)
66. 假定你是李华,你所在的学校摄影社团上周五去公园采风。请给你的英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的这次经历。
内容包括:1. 你的作品内容;
2. 你的感想。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I wanted to share with you my recent experience with the photography club from my school. Last Friday, we went to the park for a photo shoot and it was truly an amazing experience.
Our theme for the day was “nature and its beauty”. I captured various shots of the stunning landscapes, vibrant flowers, and serene ponds. One of my favorite photos is a close-up of a butterfly perched on a petal, with its delicate wings spreading wide against the vibrant background.
It was a great opportunity for me to connect with nature and express my creativity. I feel truly grateful to be part of this photography club and I can’t wait for our next adventure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你所在的学校摄影社团上周五去公园采风。要求考生给你的英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的这次经历。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
极好的:amazing→gorgeous
拍摄:capture → shoot
生机勃勃的:vibrant→animate
机会:opportunity→ chance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:I wanted to share with you my recent experience with the photography club from my school.
拓展句:I wanted to share with you my recent experience with the photography club from my school, which was more than meaningful and wonderful.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】One of my favorite photos is a close-up of a butterfly perched on a petal, with its delicate wings spreading wide against the vibrant background.(运用了with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】It was a great opportunity for me to connect with nature and express my creativity.
(运用了it作形式主语,不定式结构为真正的主语)
四、推荐信
(2023-2024学年高一下·扬州市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华,请为校英语报“Reading Novels, Learning English”栏目写一篇稿件,向同学们推荐一本你喜欢的英文小说。内容包括:
1. 内容简介;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
In order to learn English well, I would like to recommend… ______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
In order to learn English well, I would like to recommend Harry Potter, which enjoys great popularity throughout the world.
It is a series of seven fantasy novels written by J. K. Rowling, who narrates the adventures and growth of Harry at Hogwarts with crafted language. You will get fully immersed in the rich vocabulary, unique writing style and typical British culture. It is an excellent way to improve English while being entertained.
I am sure you will benefit from Harry Potter. Grab a copy and let the magic of the enchanting tales transform your journey in English.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,为校英语报“Reading Novels, Learning English”栏目写一篇稿件,向同学们推荐一本自己喜欢的英文小说,需涵盖小说内容介绍和推荐理由两方面的内容。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
叙述:narrate→relate, recount
独特的:unique→distinctive
典型的:typical→representative, classic
提升:improve→sharpen, enhance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:You will get fully immersed in the rich vocabulary, unique writing style and typical British culture.
拓展句:There is no denying that you will get fully immersed in the rich vocabulary, unique writing style and typical British culture.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In order to learn English well, I would like to recommend Harry Potter, which enjoys great popularity throughout the world. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It is a series of seven fantasy novels written by J. K. Rowling, who narrates the adventures and growth of Harry at Hogwarts with crafted language. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)
(2023-2024学年高一下·盐城市一中·期末校考)
66. 假定你是李华,你校英国交换生Taylor发邮件说她加入了你校“中国艺术社”,该社团本学期开设了两门课程:中国书法和京剧,希望你能向她推荐其中一门课程。请你给她回一封邮件。
内容包括:1. 你推荐的课程;
2. 推荐理由;
3. 你的祝福。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Taylor,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Taylor,
Knowing that you are still undecided as to which course to choose between Chinese calligraphy and Beijing Opera, I am writing to offer my recommendation.
As far as I’m concerned, Chinese calligraphy is highly recommended for the following reasons. First and foremost, Chinese calligraphy is the cultivation of one’s morality as well as a window into Chinese profound culture. Furthermore, the course, which is a combination of theory and practice, is given by a retired but renowned master, professor Zhang. Last but not the least, the course ranks number one among our school courses in terms of popularity.
Wish you a rewarding voyage of discovering the beauty of Chinese calligraphy.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国交换生Taylor回一封邮件,给她推荐学校“中国艺术社”本学期开设的两门课程:中国书法和京剧中的一门,并说明推荐理由,表达你的祝福。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
选择:choose→select
提供:offer→provide
另外:furthermore→moreover
著名的:renowned→celebrated
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原 句:As far as I’m concerned, Chinese calligraphy is highly recommended for the following reasons.
拓展句:I hold the belief that Chinese calligraphy is highly recommended for the following reasons.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that you are still undecided as to which course to choose between Chinese calligraphy and Beijing Opera, I am writing to offer my recommendation.
(运用了非谓语动词作状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, the course, which is a combination of theory and practice, is given by a retired but
renowned master, professor Zhang. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
五、申请信
(2023-2024学年高一下·盐城市亭湖高级中学·期末校考)
66. 假设你是李华,听闻《中国日报》(China Daily)为了宣传中国传统文化,正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中国著名历史文化景点,你很想参加本次宣传活动,请你就此事给报社写一封英文申请信。
内容包括:1. 写信目的;
2. 自荐理由;
3. 申请参与。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m so excited to hear that China Daily is in need of some volunteers to introduce Chinese culture overseas that I can’t wait to apply for the position.
As a citizen, it’s my responsibility to make Chinese historical and cultural attractions known to the whole world. In addition, with an outgoing and open-minded personality, it’s easy for me to get along well with others. Last but not least, I have been to numerous famous scenic spots and my hometown is a famous historical and cultural city, where I often act as a volunteer tour guide to show foreign tourists around, from which I’ve gained relevant experience.
So, I firmly believe that I’m the very person you’re looking for. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封申请信,申请成为《中国日报》宣传活动的志愿者。内容包括:写信目的;自荐理由;申请参与。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
责任:responsibility→duty
与……和睦相处:get along well with→get on well with/be on good terms with
考虑:take…into consideration→take…into account
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原 句:In addition, with an outgoing and open-minded personality, it’s easy for me to get along well with others.
拓展句:In addition, with an outgoing and open-minded personality, it’s easy that I can get along well with others.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m so excited to hear that China Daily is in need of some volunteers to introduce Chinese
culture overseas that I can’t wait to apply for the position.
(使用了so…that…引导结果状语从句,不定式分别作原因状语、目的状语、宾语)
【高分句型2】Last but not least, I have been to numerous famous scenic spots and my hometown is a famous historical and cultural city, where I often act as a volunteer tour guide to show foreign tourists around, from which I’ve gained relevant experience. (使用了第一个and连接并列句、where引导非限制性定语从句、不定式作目的状语、from which引导非限制性定语从句)
(非书信体写作)
一、演讲(稿)
(2023-2024学年高一下·南京市江宁区·期末统考)
66. 假定下周六晚上你校将举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会,你是音乐社团的负责人李华,准备在本周各社团集中时做一个活动安排的演讲。
内容包括:1. 音乐会的具体时间和地点;
2. 音乐会的主要安排;
3. 欢迎大家参加。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good afternoon, boys and girls!
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【答案】
Good afternoon, boys and girls! I’m Li Hua, in charge of the music club. I am here today to give a speech on a coming concert.
Aiming to enrich our extracurricular activities, our school will hold a musical concert in the school gym next Saturday, from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m. During the concert, we can appreciate not only classical folk music of China and western countries, but some music originally composed by gifted students. And you will be impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.
Welcome everyone to this fantastic concert! Believe me, it will be so wonderful that you can’t miss it!
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇关于音乐会安排的演讲稿。内容包括:1. 音乐会的具体时间和地点;2. 音乐会的主要安排;3. 欢迎大家参加。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
做演讲:make a speech→deliver a speech
欣赏:appreciate→admire
精彩的:wonderful→brilliant
相信:believe→trust
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:Aiming to enrich our extracurricular activities, our school will hold a musical concert in the school gym next Saturday, from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m.
拓展句:Aiming to enrich our extracurricular activities, our school will hold a musical concert in the school gym next Saturday, which will last from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Aiming to enrich our extracurricular activities, our school will hold a musical concert in the school gym next Saturday, from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】Believe me, it will be so wonderful that you can’t miss it!
(运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句)
二、(新闻)报道
(2023-2024学年高一下·常州市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华,上周日你校邀请心理学家王教授做了题为“积极情绪的力量”的讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 时间地点;
2. 参加人员;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lecture on the power of positive emotions
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Last Sunday, Professor Wang, a famous psychologist, was invited to our school to deliver a lecture on the power of positive emotions.
The lecture was held in the school assembly hall at 2 p.m. and a large number of teachers and students attended the lecture. Professor Wang gave us examples of how positive emotions have helped people in the face of adversity and suggested several helpful ways to stay positive in life. His words were inspiring, as some of us have been struggling with our study.
The lecture was very well-received. Through his advice, we learned how to tap into our inner strength and make choices that would lead to a healthier, happier, and more successful life.
【导语】本文是一篇报道,要求考生以李华的身份,对上周日你校邀请心理学家王教授做了题为“积极情绪的力量”的讲座的相关情况写一篇英文报道。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
有名的:famous→ renowned
邀请:ask → request someone’s presence at
帮助:help→ assist
有益的:be helpful→ be beneficial
2. 句式拓展
同义句改写
原 句:The lecture was held in the school assembly hall at 2 pm and a large number of teachers and students attended the lecture.
拓展句:The lecture was held in the school assembly hall at 2 pm and was attended by a large number of teachers and students.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Last Sunday, Professor Wang, a famous psychologist, was invited to our school to deliver a lecture on the power of positive emotions.(动词不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】Through his advice, we learned how to tap into our inner strength and make choices that would lead to a healthier, happier, and more successful life.(that引导的定语从句)
(2023-2024学年高一下·泰州市·期末统考)
66. 假定你是李华,上周你校举办了首届校园美食节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,介绍此次活动。
内容包括:1. 活动的目的;
2. 活动的内容;
3. 学生的反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The First Ever Food Festival
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The First Ever Food Festival
Aimed at providing an opportunity for students to enjoy diverse food and learn about its culture, our school held the first ever Food Festival last week.
During the festival, every class set up food stands with various food for students to try. Cooking classes were arranged in which students learned how to cook and explored the culture of traditional cuisines. The highlight was the cooking show where students displayed their cooking talents.
All the students thought highly of the festival, saying it not only satisfied their taste buds but also deepened their understanding of food culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道,介绍学校举办的首届校园美食节。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
机会:opportunity→chance
各种各样的:various→a variety of
安排:arrange→organize
高度评价:think highly of→sing high praise for
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:Aimed at providing an opportunity for students to enjoy diverse food and learn about its culture, our school held the first ever Food Festival last week.
拓展句:Our school held the first ever Food Festival last week, which was aimed at providing an opportunity for students to enjoy diverse food and learn about its culture.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The highlight was the cooking show where students displayed their cooking talents.
(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】All the students thought highly of the festival, saying it not only satisfied their taste buds but also deepened their understanding of food culture. (运用了现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)
(2023-2024学年高一下·宿迁市泗阳县·期末统考)
66. 为弘扬中国传统文化,你校举办了“迎端午·包粽子”的活动,请你给校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 活动目的;
2. 活动过程;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Wrapping Zongzi for Dragon Boat Festival
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Wrapping Zongzi for Dragon Boat Festival
Aimed at promoting traditional Chinese culture and celebrating the Dragon Boat Festival, our school organized an exciting rice dumpling wrapping activity on June 2 in the school cafeteria.
Grouped by class, students actively participated in the activity, following the instructions of experienced teachers. They learned the art of preparing the ingredients and wrapping the rice dumplings in a traditional way. Afterwards, the rice dumplings were boiled and tasted by the eagerly waiting students. The rich and pleasant flavor quickened their laughter and conversation, making the rice dumplings the perfect way to relax with friends.
All the students were fired up about traditional Chinese festivals. Not only did the celebration foster a sense of teamwork but also helped them learn to honor fine Chinese values.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇关于端午节的文章。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
提倡:promote→advocate
食堂:cafeteria→canteen
参加:participate in→take part in
促进:foster→boost
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原 句: Not only did the celebration foster a sense of teamwork but also helped them learn to honor fine Chinese values.
转化句:The celebration not only fostered a sense of teamwork but also helped them learn to honor fine Chinese values.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Grouped by class, students actively participated in the activity, following the instructions of experienced teachers. (运用了过去分词作状语和现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Not only did the celebration foster a sense of teamwork but also helped them learn to honor fine Chinese values. (运用了not only的倒装)
三、投稿
(2023-2024学年高一下·常州市联盟学校·期末联考)
66. 假定你是李华,校英文报组织了“我所做的一顿饭”的征文活动,请你写一篇文章投稿。
内容包括:1. 这顿饭的内容、过程;
2. 选择描写这顿饭的理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Meal I Cooked
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The Meal I Cooked
Last week, I cooked a meal for my mother.
First, I put a certain amount of rice and water into the rice cooker, and then I started cooking dishes. The first dish was Stir-fried tomato and scrambled eggs, which is the dish I am good at. Then I made my mother’s favorite dish, Kung Pao chicken. It took me a lot of time before finishing this dish. Finally, I also made a soup. When my mother came back to taste the dishes I made, she said, “It’s so delicious,and I’m proud of you.”
Through this meal, I learn about my mother’s hard work and I realize that I am old enough to share some household chores. Those are also the reasons why I will insist on cooking in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇文章参加校英文报组织了“我所做的一顿饭”的征文活动。内容包括:这顿饭的内容、过程和选择描写这顿饭的理由。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
开始:start→begin
擅长于:be good at→do well in
完成:finish→accomplish
感到骄傲:be proud of→take pride in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:It took me a lot of time before finishing this dish.
拓展句:It took me a lot of time before I finished this dish.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Through this meal, I learn about my mother’s hard work and I realize that I am old enough to share some household chores.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Those are also the reasons why I will insist on cooking in the future.
(运用了why引导的定语从句)
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经典基础题
(书信体写作)
一、邀请信
(2023-2024学年高一下徐州市期末统考)
66.假定你是班长李华,木周日上午将组织全班同学进行美化校园的活动。请给外教Vincent写一封邮件,
邀请他参加。
内容包括:1.介绍活动:
2.发出邀请。
注意:1,写作词数应为80个左右:
2请按如下格式在答趣卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Vincent.
Yours,
LiHua
二、建议信
(2023-2024学年高一下无锡市期末统考)
66.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友A1ex发邮件告诉你,最近他参加汉语书法比赛没有获奖,心情不好,请
你给他回信。
内容包括:1.表示理解并安慰:
2.给予鼓励和建议:
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3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
Yours,
LiHua
(2023-2024学年高一下常州市溧阳市期末统考)
66.假定你是李华,你的好友Ry发邮件问你该如何合理使用社交媒体。请给他回复一封电子邮件。
内容包括:1.写信目的:
2.你的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
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三、告知信
(2023-2024学年高一下南京市六校联合体期末联考)
66.假定你是李华,最近学习了一些对社会发展有突出贡献的科学家的故事,请你给英国朋友Cis写一封
邮件介绍一位你最喜欢的科学家。
内容包括:1.他(她)的基本信息:
2.对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
Yours,
LiHua
(2023-2024学年高一下·苏州市期末统考)
66.假定你是李华,最近你校将为国际交换生举办“品中华传统美食”(Taste Traditional Chinese Cuisine)的
活动。请给你校国际交换生Michael写一封电子邮件,告知此事并邀请他参加。
内容包括:1.活动时间和地点
2.活动内容。
注意:1.词数80左右
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Michael.
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LiHua
(2023-2024学年高一下镇江市期末统考)
66.假定你是李华,上周四你校音乐社团在校礼堂举办了一场主题为“East Meets West'"的音乐会,请你给英
国朋友Jcmy写一封邮件分享这次经历。
内容包括:1.音乐会内容;
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jerry,
Yours sincerely.
LiHua
(2023-2024学年高一下南通市期末统考)
66.假定你是李华,昨天你参加了学校举办的中华传统美食"厨艺大赛,请你给英国好友Dvid写一封邮件
内容包括:1.介绍你的参赛作品:
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dear David.
I'm writing to share with you my experience in the cooking contest held in our school yesterday.
Yours.
LiHua
(2023-2024学年高一下盐城市期末统考)
66.假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了Happy Dumpling Festival,请你给英国朋友Allen写封邮件分享这次
活动。
内容包括:1活动内容:
2.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Allen,
I'm writing to share with you the Happy Dumpling Festival held last Friday at our school.
Yours,
LiHua
(2023-2024学年高一下·连云港市-期末统考)
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66.假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Pter给你发来邮件询问你最饮佩的科学家是谁,请你回复一封邮件。
内容包括:1.人物简介:
2.钦佩的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
LiHua
(2023-2024学年高一下南京市金陵中学期末校考)
66.假如你是李华,你校学生会将举行“给你一朵小红花”活动。请你给校摄影社团的Ly写一封邮件,
邀请他一起参加。
内容包括:1.活动的目的:
2.活动安排和内容:
3.Larry的任务。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Larry,
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Best regards,
LiHua
(2023-2024学年高一下·无锡市一中期末校考)
66.假定你是李华,你所在的学校摄影社团上周五去公园采风。请给你的英国好友Chs写一封邮件分享你
的这次经历。
内容包括:1.你的作品内容:
2.你的感想。
注意:1.词数:80词左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
LiHua
四、推荐信
(2023-2024学年高一下扬州市期末统考)
66.假定你是李华,请为校英语报“Reading Novels,Learning English”栏月写一篇稿件,向同学们推荐一本你
喜欢的英文小说。内容包括:
1.内容简介:
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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In order to learn English well.I would like to recommend...
(2023-2024学年高一下盐城市一中期末校考)
66.假定你是李华,你校英国交换生Taylor发邮件说她加入了你校“中国艺术社”,该社团本学期开设了两
门课程:中国书法和京剧,希望你能向她推荐其中一门课程。请你给她回一封邮件。
内容包括:1.你推荐的课程
2.推荐理由:
3.你的祝福。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Taylor,
Yours sincerely
LiHua
五、申请信
(2023-2024学年高一下·盐城市亭湖高级中学期末校考)
66.假设你是李华,听闻《中国日报》(China Daily)为了宜传中国传统文化,正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中
国著名历史文化景点,你很想参加本次宣传活动,请你就此事给报社写一封英文申请信。
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内容包括:1.写信月的:
2.自荐理由:
3.申请参与。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
优选提升题
(非书信体写作)
一、演讲(稿)
(2023-2024学年高一下南京市江宁区-期末统考)
66.假定下周六晚上你校将举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会,你是音乐社团的负责人李华,准备在本周
各社团集中时做一个活动安排的演讲。
内容包括:1.音乐会的具体时间和地点:
2.音乐会的主要安排:
3.欢迎大家参加。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good afteroon,boys and girls!
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That's all.Thanks for your listening!
二、(新闻)报道
(2023-2024学年高一下.常州市期末统考)
66.假定你是李华,上周日你校邀请心理学家王教授做了题为“积极情绪的力量”的讲座。请你为校英文报
写一篇报道。
内容包括:1.时间地点:
2.参加人员:
3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右:
2.请按如下格式在答趣卡的相应位置作答。
Lecture on the power of positive emotions
(2023-2024学年高一下泰州市期末统考)
66.假定你是李华,上周你校举办了首届校园美食节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,介绍此次活动。
内容包括:1.活动的月的:
2.活动的内容:
3.学生的反响。