Unit4 话题写作指导 -2024-2025学年外研版英语（2024）七年级上册

Unit4 话题写作指导 20242025学年外研版英语（2024）七年级上册 话题：描述如何过节 话题分析 本单元的话题是"过节"，写作任务是介绍自己或他人如何度过节假日。写作时需要注意以下几点： 1. 描写节假日的活动及感受，可以包括当前的节日活动或过去的节日经历。 2. 时态选择：描述当前节日用一般现在时，回忆过去的节日经历用一般过去时。 3. 人称选择：以第一人称或第三人称为主。 常用句型： One’s family always have + 食物 + at + 节日. It be one’s first + 节日 + in + 地点. Sb. miss(es) one’s family so much. Sb. feel(s) like sb. be back home. My family always have...for... ...is a must for... 写作实例 题目： "独在异乡为异客，每逢佳节倍思亲。"朱辉是中国深圳的一名学生，他现在独自在美国学习。端午节到了，请结合提示写写朱辉的美国寄宿家庭及其中国的家人是如何过端午节的。 提示内容： 朱辉的家人：妈妈和婶婶包粽子；爸爸和叔叔看电视上的龙舟赛。 朱辉的寄宿家庭：妈妈为孩子读故事；爸爸在电视上看足球赛。 朱辉的活动：没有看龙舟赛，也没有吃粽子，而是和他深圳的堂弟通电话。 要求： 1. 文中要包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，行文连贯，书写规范。 2. 词数不少于70。 3. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等。 思路点拨 介绍朱辉家人过端午节 地点：at home 活动： 妈妈和婶婶：make zongzi 爸爸和叔叔：watch the dragon boat races on TV 习俗：Eating zongzi is a must during the festival. 介绍朱辉寄宿家庭过端午节 背景：his first Dragon Boat Festival in the US, like any other day 活动： 母亲：read a story 父亲：watch a soccer game 朱辉：not watch the dragon boat races or eat zongzi, talks on the phone to his cousin in Shenzhen 朱辉的感受 misses his family and zongzi 感叹："no place like home" 经典范文 Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. Zhu Hui’s family are at home. His mum and aunt make zongzi. His dad and uncle watch the dragon boat races on TV. Eating zongzi is a must during the festival. For Zhu Hui, it is his first Dragon Boat Festival in the US. It’s like any other day. There isn’t a Dragon Boat Festival here. The mother reads a story to her young children. The father watches a soccer game on TV. Zhu Hui doesn’t watch the dragon boat races or eat zongzi. He talks on the phone to his cousin in Shenzhen. Zhu Hui misses his family and his mum’s delicious zongzi. Oh, there’s still "no place like home". 亮点点评 1. 用"...is a must during + 节日"描述朱辉家人在端午节必吃的食物。 2. 用"It be one’s first + 节日 + in + 地点."描述这是朱辉第一次在美国过端午节。 3. 用"miss"一词描述朱辉对家人和粽子的思念。 4. 用"no place like home"进一步强调家的温暖。 实战演练 写作题目: "难忘的节日" 写作要求 1. 描述你或他人度过的一个难忘节日（春节、中秋节、端午节等） 2. 需包含以下内容： 节日名称及时间 节日期间的主要活动 参与活动的人物 你的感受或收获 3. 词数要求：80100词 4. 时态要求：一般过去时或一般现在时 5. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名 写作提示 1. 开头：点明节日名称和时间 例：Last Spring Festival... 例：The MidAutumn Festival is... 2. 主体：描述节日活动 常用动词：prepare, decorate, celebrate, enjoy, gather等 常用名词：reunion dinner, moon cakes, dumplings, lanterns等 3. 结尾：表达感受 例：I really enjoyed... 例：It was a...festival for me. 参考范文 A Special Mid-Autumn Festival Last Mid-Autumn Festival was very special for me. My family gathered at my grandparents' home to celebrate this traditional festival. In the morning, we helped prepare the reunion dinner. My mother and aunt made delicious moon cakes while my father and uncle decorated the house with beautiful lanterns. In the evening, we sat in the yard, eating moon cakes and admiring the bright full moon. My grandfather told us the story of Chang'e. What made this festival special was that my cousin who studies abroad came back. We hadn't seen each other for two years. We talked and laughed until late at night. This was the most memorable Mid-Autumn Festival I've ever had. I realized how important family reunion is during traditional festivals. 范文点评 1. 结构完整： 开头点明节日（Mid-Autumn Festival） 主体部分按时间顺序描述活动（morning→evening） 结尾总结感受 2. 语言亮点： 使用准确的节日词汇（moon cakes, lanterns, reunion dinner） 运用多样动词（gathered, prepare, decorated, admire） 使用复合句（What made...was that...） 3. 情感表达： 通过具体事例（cousin的归来）体现节日特殊性 结尾升华主题（family reunion的重要性） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$