Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land Using Language writing写作课件 2024-2025学年高中人教版（2019）选择性必修第二册

Unit4 Using Language Write about a rail journey across Canada 教学过程 01 视频图片导入 3m 02 带问题语篇阅读 03 语篇结构分析 15m 2m 04 文本词块记忆 10m 05 文本词汇复习 3m 06 写作模式及佳句 7m Lead-in 3ms Part One 学生活动 xmin 考词块 准备OB2U4课本，听写本，回顾文本词汇 1.proceed 2.shore 3.astonish 4.steel 5.adverstisement 6.accent 7.photographer 8.owe 9.toast 1.v. 行进；继续做 2.n.岸，滨 3.v. 使吃惊 4.n.钢，钢铁工业 5.n. 广告 6.n.口音 7.n. 摄影师 8.vt. 欠(某人情),把...归功于 9. n. 烤面包片，干杯 v.为...干杯， 烤 Reading 15ms Part Two What’s the relationship between these two passages? A B Passage B is the next leg of Li and Liu’s trip 路程（或赛程） B 8 “思”环节的设计 问题1： 问题2： 问题3： 问题4： What did the girl see when they went up the CN Tower? Why was it possible to get all kinds of good Chinese food in Toronto ? What did Jean-phillppe tell the girls about Montreal and people there? What order does the passage develop? Task1 画出文本的写作顺序词汇 Task2 画出并背下文本的写作词块 Task3 画出并记下文本的写作 描绘性词语 学生活动 阅读任务 ① Li Daiyu and her cousin arrived in Toronto, the largest and wealthiest city in Canada, they only had a few hours to 1. (消磨) ② they had to proceed to the next leg of their trip to Montreal, ③ they went on a tour of the city. They 2.____________ (登上) the CN Tower and 3. (眺望) the shores of Lake Ontario. Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see 4.____________ (水雾) rising from the great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake. Water from the lake flows into the Niagara River and over the falls on its way to the sea. SEEING THE TRUE NORTH VIA RAIL:TORONTO AND MONTREAL After before so kill went up looked across misty clouds climbed up overlooked misty descriptive word idiom: kill time 同位语 Read for detailed information SEEING THE TRUE NORTH VIA RAIL:TORONTO AND MONTREAL The girls saw hundreds of 5. (钢铁和水泥建造的摩天大楼), and 6. (老式汽车) rolling by. As they walked north from the harbour area, Li Daiyu said, “Lin Fei, one of my mother’s old schoolmates, lives here. I should phone her and see if she’s available for dinner. ” They met Lin Fei around dusk over dinner at a restaurant in 7. (市中心唐人街). The cousins chatted with Lin Fei,who had moved to Canada many years earlier. skyscrapers of glass and steel old-fashioned cars downtown Chinatown descriptive word old-fashioned cars Chinatown in the dead center of Toronto idiom 在…的正中心 be available for sth.有空做某事 roll by驶过,流逝 chat with 与…聊天 “This is the largest Chinatown in Toronto. We have a few more in the Greater Toronto Area, so you can guess that there are a lot of Chinese people in Canada! Chinese people have been coming here for more than a hundred years. ④_______________,we can get all kinds of great food here from all over China, ” Lin Fei told them. Therefore SEEING THE TRUE NORTH VIA RAIL:TORONTO AND MONTREAL The train left late that night and arrived in Montreal early the next morning. At the station, ⑤____________________ Toronto, they heard people talking in French. They were surprised to see that all the signs and advertisements were in French and many people spoke English with an accent. “We don’t leave until this evening, ” said Liu Qian. “Let's go downtown. Old Montreal is close to the water. ” in contrast to they heard people talking in French SEEING THE TRUE NORTH VIA RAIL:TORONTO AND MONTREAL 与……相反/相比 with an accent 带有口音 strong/broad accent 口音重 not until 直到…才 be close to 离…很近 They spent the afternoon in 8.__________________(可爱的小店) and visiting artists in their workplaces along St Paul Street. ⑥ ______ they sat in a restaurant alongside the broad St Lawrence River, a young man sat down with them. “Hello, my name is Jean-Philippe. I'm a photographer,” he said, “and I was wondering where you are from. ” As lovely shops charming SEEING THE TRUE NORTH VIA RAIL:TORONTO AND MONTREAL The girls told him they were from China and were on a train trip across Canada. When they told him they had only one day in Montreal, he said, “That's too bad. You 9._________________ (应该) to stay longer.⑦ __________________, Montreal is a city 10.______________________________ (声色俱佳的). Most of us speak both English and French, and the city has unique Quebec culture and traditions. There are 11.__________________ (很棒的餐馆) and clubs around, too. ⑧______________, we love good coffee, toast, and cheese. And good music, of course!” owe it to yourself Overall with wonderful sights and sounds fantastic restaurants Here idiom descriptive words SEEING THE TRUE NORTH VIA RAIL:TORONTO AND MONTREAL owe it to yourself to do sth. 自己应该做某事 adv. 一般来说，总体上 独特的魁北克文化和传统 That night the train was 12. ______________ (沿……飞驰) the St Lawrence River towards the Gulf of St Lawrence and down to the distant east coast towards the province of Nova Scotia and its largest city, Halifax. The cousins dreamt happily of the beautiful cobblestone streets, old brick buildings, and the red maple leaves of Montreal. speeding along SEEING THE TRUE NORTH VIA RAIL:TORONTO AND MONTREAL dream of 梦想，梦见 Find out another two verbs to express “the train is travelling…”on P39 From Edmonton, the train headed southeast… The train thundered on, through the rolling hills. 砖 铺有鹅卵石的 have a few hours to kill proceed to the next leg of their trip go on a tour of the city stand in the distance be astonished to do see misty clouds rising from ... hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel 仅有几个小时可以消磨 前往旅程下一站 在市区逛逛 站在远处 对...什么感到惊讶 看到从...升腾而起的水雾 很多玻璃钢筋造的摩天大楼 old-fashioned cars phone her available for sth. around dusk speak English with an accent be on a train trip across Canada the beautiful cobblestone streets old brick buildings the red maple leaves 老式汽车 给她打电话 有空做... 黄昏时分 说英语有口音 正在进行横跨加拿大的火车之旅 美丽的鹅卵石街道 古老的砖砌建筑 鲜红的枫叶 writing 15ms Part Three Explore the structure and feature of travel journal Travel Journal Introduction: Body Ending: What you saw what you did How you felt: final thoughts A Clear Goal Carefully-chosen stops / attractions (features of each place) Personal emotions and thoughts Impressive activities (In the order of time) Use of discourse markers Descriptive language Sequence 21 一、审题谋篇，段落分明 河北省遵化市第一中学 严实勤恒 章节题目主讲人 假定你是李黛予，请根据下面的提示给你的父母写一封电子邮件告诉他们你的加拿大之旅： 1．温哥华：购物，徒步旅行； 2．坐火车去加拿大落基山脉的路易斯湖； 3．坐长途汽车穿过落基山脉去贾斯珀(森林、山脉、湖泊、动物)； 4．乘长途火车去多伦多。 河北省遵化市第一中学 严实勤恒 章节题目主讲人 二、要点陈述，语言规范 1．根据下面的地点变换完成句子。 (1)我们从温哥华开始，在那里我们购买礼物，然后去徒步旅行。 We _________ in Vancouver, and there we ______________ for gifts and then ____________． 句式升级：用定语从句改写句子 ________________________________________________________________________ started went shopping went hiking We started in Vancouver, where we went shopping for gifts and then went hiking. 河北省遵化市第一中学 严实勤恒 章节题目主讲人 (2)我们坐火车去加拿大落基山脉的路易斯湖。 We _____________to Lake Louise in the Canadian Rockies. (3)我们坐长途汽车穿过落基山脉去贾斯珀。 We _____________________ the Canadian Rockies ___Jasper. 句式升级：用省略句连接句(2)和句(3) ________________________________________________________________________________________ (4)我们乘坐长途火车去多伦多。 We ___________________________ to Toronto. took a coach through to We took a train to Lake Louise in the Canadian Rockies, and a coach through the Rockies to Jasper. took a long-distance train took a train 河北省遵化市第一中学 严实勤恒 章节题目主讲人 课堂小结 河北省遵化市第一中学 严实勤恒 1. How to analyse the passage structure ? reading skills 2. 文本词块：写作用语 3. How to wrtie a passage about an E-mail 1 (1) - 1. 站在远处，他们惊讶地看到湖南边的尼亚加拉大瀑布升腾而起的水雾。 _______(stand)in the distance, they were astonished to see misty______(rise)from the Great Niagara Fall, ___ is on the south side of the lake. 2. 两个人惊奇地发现所有的标识牌和广告都是用法文来写的。 They ____ ____ _____ ___ that all the signs and advertisements were in French. 学生活动 Did the girls enjoy the trip? 微写作句子： Standing rising which were surprised to see 总的来说，蒙特利尔是一座声色俱佳的城市 Overall, Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds. There are fantastic restaurants and clubs around, too. Did the girls enjoy the trip? Find out the sentences that show their emotions. 课堂小结 河北省遵化市第一中学 严实勤恒 1. How to analyse the passage structure ? reading skills 2. 文本词块背诵：写作用语 3. How to wrtie a passage about an E-mail 1 (1) - 短语背诵检查 篇章结构分析 写作经典 课堂小结 板书设计 教辅选题 知识体系 思维导图 课堂点评 $$