考题猜想05 书面表达【期末易错10题】-2024-2025学年七年级英语下学期期末考点大串讲（冀教版2024）

专题05 书面表达10题 1．某学校初一年级正在进行传统文化和启润课程学习，本周主题是“How I Keep Healthy ”。请你以Peter的名义并根据以下图示写一篇短文，向课程负责人Grace投稿。 注意： 1. 短文须包含图示所有信息； 2. 词数 60 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Grace, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Peter 2．五一劳动节“May Day”即将来临，一位名叫Jack的交换生将在假期来到成都，并住在你家。假设你是李华，请根据图片信息写一封信，简单介绍一下你自己和你的生活方式，及家庭规则。以便Jack能了解你，从而更快适应这里的生活。 要求：1. 内容须包括提示的所有信息，适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 2. 不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等个人信息； 3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear Jack,        May Day is coming! I am very happy to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 3．学校向全校同学征集一份的健康倡议。请你以“How I Keep Healthy ”为题， 根据以下图示写一篇短文投稿，并呼吁大家重视保持健康。 注意：1.  短文须包含图示所有信息； 2.  词数 70 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数； 3.  文中不能出现真实姓名及学校信息。 How I Keep Healthy ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李明，你校英文公众号正在举办以“Keep fit”为主题的征文活动，请你从以下几个方面写一篇短文介绍自己保持健康的方式并投稿。 1. 饮食习惯方面。 2. 运动习惯方面。要求： 1.语言表达准确，语句通顺； 2. 词数不少于80字。开头已给出不计入总词数。 Hi, I’m Li Ming. Now I’m glad to tell you how I keep fit.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．You are John and your school is holding an English speech competition (演讲比赛) to choose the “Healthy Star”. Please write an article with 80-100 words, including (包括) all the information in the following picture. Hi, I’m John. Today I’m going to share my healthy living habits with you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 6．国家正式提出了三年体重管理计划，学校英语社团借此正在举办“Healthy Life, Happy Teens”主题征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：   1. 分享你对“健康饮食”的理解，如多喝水、食物的多样性和平衡等； 2. 描述你的健康生活习惯，如运动（再自行补充一条）；   3. 总结健康生活方式对青少年生活的良性影响（至少2点） 注意： 1. 词数80左右；   2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名；   3. 需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；   4. 参考词汇： balanced diet（均衡饮食） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．如果你是Mike，你想向你的美国笔友Alice介绍你的梦想家园。请你根据以下提示用英语写一封邮件。 梦想家园 美丽的海边城市，住在市中心 社区介绍 邻居：友好善良，乐于助人 志愿者们：……(至少举1例) 可做的事 有许多名胜古迹 去海边散步，品尝美食，观看令人惊叹的日落 最喜爱的民间艺术 剪纸：形状各异，历史悠久，由纸做成 文化价值：…… 你的感受 …… 要求：     1.语句通顺、语言规范、要点齐全； 2.书写工整，不得出现真实的学校名和人名； 3.字数不少于80字。 Dear Alice, I would like to introduce my dream hometown to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Mike 8．请根据表格信息，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍“阳光社区”的活动情况。 Sunshine Community Centre Problems Where to ask for help Not knowing how to work out maths problems Work Out Club: Some college students can help you. Not knowing what is legal (合法的) or not Police Helping Centre: Policemen will tell you what you can do and what you mustn’t do. Not knowing how to use your computer     Computer Group: Some computer engineers will teach you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是李华，转眼间七年级下半学期也已过半，你一定有了很多的改变。你的好朋友Mike想了解你的近况，根据表格中信息给他写封信。 学习习惯 生活习惯 兴趣爱好 感受 1. 准时到校，不迟到 2. 不使用手机，专心学习 3. …… 1. 一日三餐按时吃 2. 喜欢吃蔬菜和水果 3. …… 喜欢运动…… …… 要求：1. 文章应包含上表中所有信息，并适当补充相关内容； 2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 字数60-80词左右；文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How is everything? I’ll tell you something about my new studying habits and new living habits. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can have healthy habits, too! Yours Li Hua 10．假如你是李华，Cindy是你新认识的笔友，她最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，用英语给她回一封电子邮件。 写作要点： 1. 你最喜欢的动物以及原因； 2. 你的校规及你的感受； 3. 你的日常运动习惯和饮食习惯。 写作要求: 1. 应包括所有要点内容，可做适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，卷面干净整洁。 Dear Cindy, I’m glad to receive your letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题05 书面表达10题 1．某学校初一年级正在进行传统文化和启润课程学习，本周主题是“How I Keep Healthy ”。请你以Peter的名义并根据以下图示写一篇短文，向课程负责人Grace投稿。 注意： 1. 短文须包含图示所有信息； 2. 词数 60 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Grace, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Peter 【答案】Dear Grace, I’m Peter. I’d like to share how I keep healthy. I love playing basketball. I exercise from Tuesday to Saturday. It makes me strong and energetic. In terms of diet, I eat plenty of fruits and vegetables. They provide me with essential vitamins. I stay away from junk food like hamburgers and fries. Additionally, I drink enough water throughout the day to keep my body hydrated. Also, I try to have three regular meals a day. By doing exercise and eating healthily, I’m in good shape. Yours, Peter 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先写自己如何通过做运动来保持健康的； 第二步，再写自己在饮食方面如何保持健康的。 [亮点词汇] ①in terms of在……方面 ②stay away from远离…… ③try to do尝试做某事 [高分句型] ①In terms of diet, I eat plenty of fruits and vegetables.（and连接并列成分） ②Additionally, I drink enough water throughout the day to keep my body hydrated.（动词不定式作目的状语） 2．五一劳动节“May Day”即将来临，一位名叫Jack的交换生将在假期来到成都，并住在你家。假设你是李华，请根据图片信息写一封信，简单介绍一下你自己和你的生活方式，及家庭规则。以便Jack能了解你，从而更快适应这里的生活。 要求：1. 内容须包括提示的所有信息，适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 2. 不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等个人信息； 3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear Jack,        May Day is coming! I am very happy to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】[范文] Dear Jack, May Day is coming! I am very happy to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu. Let me tell you something about myself and my family. My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are cute. I usually play basketball with my friends. I play it three times a week. It is relaxing. As for eating habits, I eat fruits and vegetables every day. Because they are good for my health. I hardly have junk food. I also go to bed and get up early. In my family, we must treat others with respect. Everyone needs to do housework, like cleaning the room. I hope you can have fun with us in Chengdu. I’m looking forward to seeing you.   Best wishes, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借由五一旅行的话题来引出自我介绍和家庭规则介绍。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——个人信息和家庭规则等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“祝我们在成都玩的愉快”的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be good for对……有益 ②look forward to doing期待着做 [高分句型] ①I hope you can have fun with us in Chengdu. (宾语从句) 3．学校向全校同学征集一份的健康倡议。请你以“How I Keep Healthy ”为题， 根据以下图示写一篇短文投稿，并呼吁大家重视保持健康。 注意：1.  短文须包含图示所有信息； 2.  词数 70 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数； 3.  文中不能出现真实姓名及学校信息。 How I Keep Healthy ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文：                                                How I Keep Healthy         I do exercise regularly. My favourite exercise is basketball, and I usually play it on Monday, Thursday and Saturday.  After that, I feel relaxed and full of energy. Besides, I always eat healthily. Eating fresh fruit and vegetables makes me strong, while junk food makes me weak.        In the future, we should do more exercise and eat more fruit and vegetables. Then, we can enjoy a better life. 【解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，描述自己保持健康的方式，并呼吁大家重视健康。 ② 时态：使用“一般现在时”来描述自己的健康习惯以及对未来健康生活的展望。 ③ 目标：根据给定提示信息，详细描述保持健康的方法，结合个人经历，同时鼓励同学们采取健康的生活方式。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇简单介绍自己如何保持健康，并提到常做的运动。 第二步：进一步解释健康饮食的习惯，强调食物对健康的重要性。 第三步：总结并给出健康生活的建议，鼓励同学们多运动、少吃垃圾食品。 [亮点词汇] ① do exercise  锻炼 ② full of energy 精力充沛 ③ junk food  垃圾食品 ④ in the future  在未来 [高分句型] ① My favourite exercise is basketball, and I usually play it on Monday, Thursday, Saturday, and Sunday.（并列句） ② Eating fresh fruit and vegetables makes me strong, while junk food makes me weak.（对比句型，强调健康饮食和垃圾食品的不同影响） 4．假如你是李明，你校英文公众号正在举办以“Keep fit”为主题的征文活动，请你从以下几个方面写一篇短文介绍自己保持健康的方式并投稿。 1. 饮食习惯方面。 2. 运动习惯方面。要求： 1.语言表达准确，语句通顺； 2. 词数不少于80字。开头已给出不计入总词数。 Hi, I’m Li Ming. Now I’m glad to tell you how I keep fit.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Hi, I’m Li Ming. Now I’m glad to tell you how I keep fit.   First, I pay attention to my diet. I eat plenty of vegetables and fruits every day, and I drink at least 8 glasses of water. I avoid junk food like chips and soda because they are unhealthy. Instead, I choose fish or chicken.    Second, I exercise regularly. I play basketball with friends twice a week and ride my bike to school every morning. On weekends, I often go hiking with my family. Exercise makes me feel energetic and happy.    By eating well and staying active, I keep my body strong and healthy. Remember: small daily habits make a big difference!    【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用给定开头句引入主题； 第二步，分两段说明饮食和运动习惯； 第三步，总结健康生活方式的重要性 [亮点词汇] ① pay attention to注意 ② plenty of大量的 ③ at least至少 [高分句型] I avoid junk food like chips and soda because they are unhealthy.（原因状语从句） 5．You are John and your school is holding an English speech competition (演讲比赛) to choose the “Healthy Star”. Please write an article with 80-100 words, including (包括) all the information in the following picture. Hi, I’m John. Today I’m going to share my healthy living habits with you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 【答案】范文： Hi, I’m John. Today I’m going to share my healthy living habits with you. I like eating eggs, strawberries and vegetables. They give me energy I need. But I’m not really into hamburgers and chips. They are junk food and are bad for my health. I’m also a sports lover. I play basketball twice a week and play table tennis every Wednesday. What’s more, I never stay up late and drink enough water every day. I think it’s important to have healthy living habits. First, we will not fall ill easily. With a strong and healthy body, we can focus more when we study. Thanks for your listening! 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、介绍自己饮食习惯、运动习惯等； 第三步、介绍健康生活习惯的重要性并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be into…对……深感兴趣 ②be bad for…对……有害 ③stay up late熬夜 [高分句型] ①They give me energy I need.(定语从句) 6．国家正式提出了三年体重管理计划，学校英语社团借此正在举办“Healthy Life, Happy Teens”主题征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：   1. 分享你对“健康饮食”的理解，如多喝水、食物的多样性和平衡等； 2. 描述你的健康生活习惯，如运动（再自行补充一条）；   3. 总结健康生活方式对青少年生活的良性影响（至少2点） 注意： 1. 词数80左右；   2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名；   3. 需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；   4. 参考词汇： balanced diet（均衡饮食） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Healthy Life, Happy Teens Healthy life can make our life better. So what should we do to keep healthy? Here are some suggestions. First of all, we should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food, such as fried chicken, chips and so on. We’d better drink more warm water. In addition, doing exercise is necessary, for example, basketball and football. We can also go for a walk after dinner or take a walk with our parents after dinner. Last but not the least, we can go to bed early and don’t stay up late. Don’t spend too much time on playing computer games. If we can do all of the above, I believe we will have a healthy life. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态： 时态以“一般现在时”为主。 ③提示：文章从饮食、运动、作息三个方面给出健康生活的建议，需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，直接表明健康生活的重要性，引出下文关于保持健康的具体建议。 第二步，分点阐述建议，从饮食上强调多吃蔬果、少碰垃圾食品并多喝水；运动方面列举常见的球类运动以及饭后散步等方式；作息上倡导早睡不熬夜、减少玩电脑游戏时间，全面覆盖健康生活的主要方面。 第三步，结尾进行总结与展望，通过表达如果做到上述建议就能拥有健康生活。 [亮点词汇] ①instead of代替，而不是 ②junk food垃圾食品 ③in addition此外 ④last but not the least 最后但同样重要的 [高分句型] ①Don’t spend too much time on playing computer games. (否定祈使句) ②If we can do all of the above, I believe we will have a healthy life. (if 引导条件状语从句) 7．如果你是Mike，你想向你的美国笔友Alice介绍你的梦想家园。请你根据以下提示用英语写一封邮件。 梦想家园 美丽的海边城市，住在市中心 社区介绍 邻居：友好善良，乐于助人 志愿者们：……(至少举1例) 可做的事 有许多名胜古迹 去海边散步，品尝美食，观看令人惊叹的日落 最喜爱的民间艺术 剪纸：形状各异，历史悠久，由纸做成 文化价值：…… 你的感受 …… 要求：     1.语句通顺、语言规范、要点齐全； 2.书写工整，不得出现真实的学校名和人名； 3.字数不少于80字。 Dear Alice, I would like to introduce my dream hometown to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Mike 【答案】例文 Dear Alice,    I would like to introduce my dream hometown to you. My dream hometown is a beautiful seaside city. I live in the city centre. The community there is wonderful—my neighbors are friendly, kind, and always ready to lend a hand. Volunteers in the neighborhood actively participate in beach clean-ups, making our surroundings even more picturesque.    There are numerous historic sites and attractions to explore. I love taking walks along the seashore, enjoying the delicious local cuisine, and watching the breathtaking sunsets. One of my favorite folk arts is paper cutting. The intricate shapes and long history of this art form, created solely from paper, fascinate me. It holds great cultural value, preserving traditions and stories for future generations.    Living in such a place would bring me immense joy and peace. I feel a deep connection to the sea and the rich cultural heritage that surrounds me.    I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Mike 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示信息写作，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述梦想中的家园并介绍社区中的邻居和志愿者； 第二步，介绍在家园中可做的事和最喜欢的民间艺术； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in参加，参与 ②take walks散步 [高分句型] ①Living in such a place would bring me immense joy and peace.（动名词短语作主语） ②I feel a deep connection to the sea and the rich cultural heritage that surrounds me.（定语从句） 8．请根据表格信息，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍“阳光社区”的活动情况。 Sunshine Community Centre Problems Where to ask for help Not knowing how to work out maths problems Work Out Club: Some college students can help you. Not knowing what is legal (合法的) or not Police Helping Centre: Policemen will tell you what you can do and what you mustn’t do. Not knowing how to use your computer     Computer Group: Some computer engineers will teach you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sunshine Community Centre Sunshine Community Centre provides great help for its members. If you don’t know how to work out maths problems, the Work Out Club can help you. Some college students there will offer you useful ways. For those who are unsure about what is legal, the Police Helping Centre is the place to go. Policemen will patiently explain the laws to you. When it comes to computer problems, the Computer Group is always ready. Some computer engineers will teach you how to use your computer. All in all, the community centre is really helpful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：介绍阳光社区中心为其成员提供大力帮助，引出下文对具体帮助内容的阐述； 第二步，详细列举社区中心针对不同问题所提供的具体帮助途径； 第三步，总结全文，再次强调社区中心确实非常有帮助，与第一段形成呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①all in all 总而言之 ②provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物 [高分句型] ①If you don’t know how to work out maths problems, the Work Out Club can help you. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②When it comes to computer problems, the Computer Group is always ready. (when引导的时间状语从句) 9．假如你是李华，转眼间七年级下半学期也已过半，你一定有了很多的改变。你的好朋友Mike想了解你的近况，根据表格中信息给他写封信。 学习习惯 生活习惯 兴趣爱好 感受 1. 准时到校，不迟到 2. 不使用手机，专心学习 3. …… 1. 一日三餐按时吃 2. 喜欢吃蔬菜和水果 3. …… 喜欢运动…… …… 要求：1. 文章应包含上表中所有信息，并适当补充相关内容； 2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 字数60-80词左右；文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How is everything? I’ll tell you something about my new studying habits and new living habits. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can have healthy habits, too! Yours Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How is everything? I’ll tell you something about my new studying habits and new living habits. First, I’ve improved my study habits. I always arrive at school on time and never use my phone in class, so I can focus better. I also review my notes every day, which helps me understand lessons more easily. Second, my lifestyle has changed too. I eat three healthy meals a day, including lots of vegetables and fruits. I also drink more water now. Besides, I enjoy playing basketball after school—it keeps me active and happy. These changes make me feel more energetic and confident. How about you? I hope you can have healthy habits, too! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学习习惯的变化； 第二步，介绍生活方式的变化； 第三步，介绍兴趣爱好； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①arrive at到达 ②on time准时 [高分句型] I also review my notes every day, which helps me understand lessons more easily. (which引导定语从句) 10．假如你是李华，Cindy是你新认识的笔友，她最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，用英语给她回一封电子邮件。 写作要点： 1. 你最喜欢的动物以及原因； 2. 你的校规及你的感受； 3. 你的日常运动习惯和饮食习惯。 写作要求: 1. 应包括所有要点内容，可做适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，卷面干净整洁。 Dear Cindy, I’m glad to receive your letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Cindy, I’m glad to receive your letter. Now let me tell yousomething about myself. My favorite animals are pandas, because they are very cute and friendly. There are many rules in our school. For example, we can’t be late for school. I think the school rules are good for us, so we should follow them. I have good living habits. I exercise every day by jogging for 20 minutes. I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day. I never eat junk food. I wash my handsbe fore meals. I take a shower and change my clothes every day. What about you? I’d love to hear your stories, too. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍你最喜欢的动物以及原因、你的校规及你的感受、你的日常运动习惯和饮食习惯等； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①for example例如 ②be late for迟到 ③be good for有益于…… ④look forward to盼望…… [高分句型] ①My favorite animals are pandas, because they are very cute and friendly. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②I think the school rules are good for us, so we should follow them. (并列句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$