内容正文:
预习答案
1 当谈及到 when it comes to
2 最敬佩的人 the person I admire most
3 被誉为...... be honored/regarded/considered as
4 从小 at an early age
5 致力于...... devote/commit/dedicate oneself to
6 为......做出巨大贡献 make numerous contributions to
7 对......感兴趣;热爱某事 be interested in /have a passion for
8 毕业于...... graduate from
9 为.......树立榜样 set a good example for
10 对工作的奉献 dedication to work
11 被授予...... be awarded
12 去世 pass away
B3U2 Writing
——How to introduce
someone I admire
2
Lead in
What’s Jack
talking about?
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Activity1: Watch and answer
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Activity2:Brainstorming
1. What aspects can be included in your writing?
2. How many paragraphs will you write?
3. What aspects will you write in each of paragraph?
4. Which tense will you use?
Brainstorming
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Activity3: Read for structure
When it comes to the person I admire most, I think of Yuan Longping, who is regarded as the father of hybrid rice.
Born in1930, Yuan Longping had a passion for swimming at an early age. After graduation, he committed himself to agricultural research in Hunan, breeding the hybrid rice successfully in 1975. Not only did he make numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger, but also inspired more people to join him. In 2019, he was awarded to the Medal of the Republic for his outstanding contributions to the hybrid rice breeding. On 22 May 2021, Yuan passed away, and our whole country mourned(v.哀悼) the great loss of a brilliant scientist.
The reason why I admire him is that his dedication to work and to people sets me an good example, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future.
Name,identity,basic information
Achievement, experience
Details and examples
Influence and evaluation
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An introduction
Experiences
Evaluation
Structure
Identification
Content
Name,occupation,birthday&birthplace......
Achievement, contribution...
your opinion/what effects he/she has on people
Tips:
using Simple past tense and present tense
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A person
you admire
Identification
Experiences
Evaluation
How?
How?
How?
Activity4: Discover some useful words and expressions
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Activity 4.1:Discover how to express identification
1.引出人物:
文中:
When it comes to the person I admire most, I think of...
补充:
The person I admire most is….,
Of all the outstanding people, I admire…. the most.
There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is....
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1.引出人物:--- 简单介绍人物背景
(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)
出生于:___________________
酷爱;对……有强烈的兴趣:_____________________________
在……方面有天赋:_______________从某大学毕业:__________
be born in
have/show a passion for
be talented in...
When he was a boy, he (展现对...的热情)maths.
___________(出生于) Shanghai, on September 12th, 1980, Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China.
Born in
graduate from
showed a passion for
Activity 4.1:Discover how to express identification
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归纳总结句型
Born in +地点+时间,人物graduated from….
Born into a ….family, 人物…
1. Born in Beijing in 1930, Yuan graduated from Southwest Agricultural College.
2. Born into a rich family, Song Qingling got a good education and went to study in USA.
3. Born into a musical family, he showed her talent for music when she was a little girl.
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2.介绍人物主要经历---重要词汇
担任/做……工作:____________
致力于,献身于:___________________
起关键性作用:_______________ 坚定的决心:___________________
在…获得巨大的成功:___________________
使某人能够做某事:_____________________
下定决心做某事:_____________________
work as
commite oneself to/devote oneself to...
play a crucial role in
strong will and determination
achieve great success in...
enable sb to do sth
eg. _______________(从……毕业) Peking University in 1993, he__________
(做……工作) a teacher in Wuhan University.
Graduating from
worked as
/ take up a position as
make up one’s mind to do
/ be determined to do sth
Activity 4.2:Discover how to express experiences
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2.介绍人物主要经历---重要句型
文中:
1. After graduation , he commited himself to…
2. Not only did he make numerous contributions to doing...., but also inspired more people to do...
补充:
1. In order to ..., he made up his mind to do...
2. With strong will and great determination, he achieve the great success in...
3. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them.
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3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇
为某人赢得好名声:_______________ 高度评价__________________
做出巨大贡献:________________________ 被授予……:________________
作为……而闻名:__________________ 被尊称为________________________
树立好榜样:_________________
值得我们崇拜和尊重:_________________________________
earn sb a good reputation
think highly of
make great contributions to
be awarded...
be known/famous as
be honored as
set a good example
deserve our admiration and respect
Activity 4.3:Discover how to express evaluation
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3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要句型
文中:
The reason why I admire him is that......
补充:
1. It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
2. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
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Activity5:Drafting
Read Tu Youyou’s CV and introduce Tu Youyou you admire (P30)
A Person I Admire
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Now, you can discuss your composition with your partners in your group and use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft. At last, choose the best one.
Activity6: Peer valuation
Checklist
Item Demands Score
Structure Is the writing clear and well-organized? 3
Contents Does he/she use the correct person and tense?
Does he/she write the key points?
4
Language Are there any grammar or spelling errors? 2
How many words and phrases learned in this unit does he/she use?(1-6)
1(each)
Improvements
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Experiences
Evaluation
Identification
Name,occupation, birthday&birthplace......
Achievement, contribution...
your opinion/what effects he/she has on people
An
Introduction
Tense: Simple past tense and present tense
SUMMARY
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Polish your writing.
Homework:
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