广西壮族自治区2024-2025学年高二下学期4月期中英语试题读后续写--风雨骑行路，父子连心渡讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was supposed to be a perfect father-son biking adventure. Sixteen-year-old Tom and his dad had planned a 50-kilometer bike ride through the countryside to celebrate Tom’s birthday. The night before, Tom was so excited that he could barely sleep. His mind was full of images of the open road and the beautiful scenery they would encounter. Before leaving, Tom’s dad put on an old silver watch. It was a family treasure passed down from his grandpa. The watch’s glass was cracked, showing its long history, but it still kept time accurately, standing as a symbol of the family’s toughness. “This watch has seen its share of tough times, just like all of us,” his dad said, smiling at Tom. “But it keeps going, and so will we.” Tom nodded, feeling close to his dad when he looked at the watch. In the warm morning sun, they set off. Their backpacks were filled with water, energy-boosting snacks and a first-aid kit for any emergencies. Tom’s shiny red bike, which he had spent weeks cleaning and fixing, shone brightly in the sun. As they cycled along the country roads, the fresh smell of grass and wildflowers filled the air. Tom felt extremely happy and pedaled (踩踏板) even harder with excitement. However, as the morning passed, the sun gradually disappeared behind thick dark clouds. By noon, a cold and heavy rain started to fall. The dry dirt path quickly turned into a muddy mess. Tom’s legs, which had been moving smoothly just a few hours ago, now ached with every push of the pedals. He took a deep breath and tried to focus on the rhythm of his pedaling, trying to ignore the rain and the tiredness in his legs. Although they were wet and uncomfortable, they kept going. They were determined not to let the weather stop them. But when they turned a sharp corner, they saw a long, steep slope (斜坡). The rain was still pouring heavily, and the path ahead looked very slippery with mud sliding down. Tom’s heart sank, and he began to doubt himself. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: As Tom hesitated, his dad placed a firm hand on his shoulder. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Gradually, the rain stopped and they arrived at the top of the mountain. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、续写分析​ （一）第一段续写分析 在第一段中，父亲的鼓励是核心情节。从故事线来看，此时汤姆面对陡峭湿滑的斜坡心生犹豫，父亲的举动成为转折点。父亲可能会先通过语言鼓励，提及之前关于手表象征家庭韧性的话题，用 “这块手表经历风雨仍走时精准，我们也能战胜眼前困难” 之类的话语激励汤姆，唤起他的信心，这既承接前文对手表的描写，又自然推动情节。​ 在具体行动上，父亲或许会示范如何应对斜坡，如先下车推行，利用身体重心保持平衡，或者教汤姆在骑行时如何控制速度和方向，这些细节能让故事更具真实感和画面感。同时，两人之间的互动也能进一步深化父子情，比如父亲在教导过程中不经意流露出的关心和爱护，汤姆从最初的犹豫到逐渐被父亲的坚定感染，心理变化过程需要细腻刻画。​ 从语言表达角度，可运用 “clutch the handlebars tightly（紧紧握住车把）”“take a deep breath（深呼吸）”“steel one's nerves（鼓起勇气）” 等短语，生动展现汤姆的紧张与努力；“give a reassuring smile（露出令人安心的微笑）”“gesture patiently（耐心地示意）” 等描述父亲的动作，凸显父亲的沉稳与慈爱。​ （2） 第二段续写分析 第二段聚焦于成功登顶后的场景与情感升华。故事线方面，雨停和到达山顶是重要节点，此时可以描写周围景色的变化，如 “the sun peeked out from behind the clouds（太阳从云层后探出）”“the glistening raindrops on leaves sparkled like jewels（树叶上晶莹的雨滴像宝石般闪耀）”，通过环境描写烘托出胜利的喜悦氛围。​ 父子俩的对话和情感交流是关键。汤姆可能会感慨此次骑行的不易，表达对父亲的感激，父亲则会借此机会给予汤姆人生教诲，将骑行中克服困难的经历与面对生活挑战相联系，实现主旨升华。​ 在主旨升华句的运用上，可写出 “Just like the watch that endured hardships yet kept ticking, their determination had carried them through the storm（就像那块历经磨难却依然走时的手表，他们的决心让他们穿越风雨）”，或者 “This biking adventure wasn't just about reaching the destination; it was about the bond between father and son strengthening through shared struggles（这场骑行冒险不仅是到达目的地，更是父子情在共同的拼搏中愈发深厚）”，使文章内涵得到提升。语言表达上，“bask in the sense of accomplishment（沉浸在成就感中）”“exchange knowing smiles（心照不宣地微笑）”“look back on the arduous journey（回顾艰难的旅程）” 等短语能更好地展现人物情感和场景氛围。​ 二、故事线梳理​ 出发：父子为庆祝汤姆生日计划 50 公里骑行，父亲佩戴祖传银表，两人满怀期待出发，享受乡村美景。​ 遇困：天气突变，大雨倾盆，道路泥泞，汤姆疲惫不堪，面对陡峭湿滑的斜坡心生犹豫。 鼓励：父亲通过语言和行动鼓励汤姆，帮助他克服恐惧，两人共同应对困难。​ 登顶：雨停后，父子成功到达山顶，欣赏美景，情感得到升华，对彼此和生活有了新的感悟。​ 三、短语积累​ clutch the handlebars tightly（紧紧握住车把）​ take a deep breath（深呼吸）​ steel one's nerves（鼓起勇气）​ give a reassuring smile（露出令人安心的微笑）​ gesture patiently（耐心地示意）​ the sun peeked out from behind the clouds（太阳从云层后探出）​ the glistening raindrops on leaves sparkled like jewels（树叶上晶莹的雨滴像宝石般闪耀） bask in the sense of accomplishment（沉浸在成就感中）​ exchange knowing smiles（心照不宣地微笑）​ look back on the arduous journey（回顾艰难的旅程）​ pedal with all one's might（全力踩踏板）​ navigate the slippery path（驾驭湿滑的道路）​ a surge of determination（一股决心）​ wipe the rain off one's face（擦掉脸上的雨水）​ share an unforgettable moment（分享难忘的时刻）​ the wind whistled through the trees（风在林间呼啸）​ a sense of pride welled up inside（内心涌起自豪感）​ embrace the challenges ahead（迎接前方的挑战）​ 四、主旨升华句积累​ Just like the watch that endured hardships yet kept ticking, their determination had carried them through the storm.（就像那块历经磨难却依然走时的手表，他们的决心让他们穿越风雨。） This biking adventure wasn't just about reaching the destination; it was about the bond between father and son strengthening through shared struggles.（这场骑行冒险不仅是到达目的地，更是父子情在共同的拼搏中愈发深厚。）​ The tough journey taught them that with courage and perseverance, no obstacle was insurmountable.（这段艰难的旅程让他们明白，只要有勇气和毅力，没有什么困难是无法克服的。）​ As they stood on the peak, they realized that the beauty of life lay not only in the destination but also in the process of overcoming difficulties together.（当他们站在山顶，他们意识到生活的美好不仅在于目的地，更在于共同克服困难的过程。）​ The watch, a symbol of their family's resilience, now reminded them that they could face any challenge as long as they stood by each other.（那块象征着家庭韧性的手表，此刻提醒着他们，只要彼此支持，就能面对任何挑战。）​ 五、写作示范​ 示范一​ As Tom hesitated, his dad placed a firm hand on his shoulder. “Remember what I said about the watch?” his dad asked, his voice steady and warm. “It’s seen rough times, but it never gave up. We’re no different.” He pointed to the slope. “Let’s walk our bikes up. One step at a time.” Tom nodded, taking a deep breath. Together, they pushed their bikes, carefully navigating the slippery path. The rain continued to pour, but with his dad by his side, Tom felt a surge of determination. Every time his foot slipped, his dad was there to steady him, and soon, they were halfway up.​ Gradually, the rain stopped and they arrived at the top of the mountain. The sun peeked out from behind the clouds, casting a golden glow over the lush green valley below. Tom’s tiredness vanished as he marveled at the breathtaking view. “We did it, Dad!” he exclaimed, his eyes shining with pride. His dad smiled and put an arm around him. “Yes, we did. And remember, life’s slopes are just like this one. With courage and each other, we can conquer anything.” They stood there for a while, sharing an unforgettable moment, the old silver watch on his dad’s wrist glinting in the sunlight, a silent witness to their victory.​ 示范二​ As Tom hesitated, his dad placed a firm hand on his shoulder. “Don’t let the rain and mud scare you, son,” his dad said, giving him a reassuring smile. “Our family has always faced challenges head - on, just like this watch.” He took off the watch and showed it to Tom. “See? Even with a cracked glass, it keeps going. We can too.” Then, his dad got off his bike and started walking it up the slope, gesturing for Tom to follow. Tom wiped the rain off his face and steeled his nerves. Step by step, they inched forward, the sound of their heavy breathing mixing with the patter of raindrops.​ Gradually, the rain stopped and they arrived at the top of the mountain. The glistening raindrops on leaves sparkled like jewels in the sunlight. Tom and his dad looked at each other, then burst into laughter. “We made it!” Tom shouted, throwing his arms up in the air. His dad nodded, his eyes filled with pride. “This adventure isn’t just about the ride, son. It’s about learning to never back down. And I’m proud to face life’s slopes with you.” They sat on a rock, looking back on the arduous journey, the old watch a symbol of their unbreakable bond and shared triumph.​ 示范三​ As Tom hesitated, his dad placed a firm hand on his shoulder. “Tom, look at me,” his dad said, his gaze steady. “The road ahead may be tough, but we’ve come too far to give up. Remember how you fixed up your bike? That same determination can get us up this slope.” He took Tom’s hand and put it on the watch. “This watch has been through generations of our family’s struggles. We’re part of that strong legacy.” Inspired, Tom tightened his grip on the handlebars. With his dad leading the way, they slowly but surely made their way up the slope, the wind whistling through the trees as if cheering them on.​ Gradually, the rain stopped and they arrived at the top of the mountain. A sense of pride welled up inside Tom as he took in the panoramic view. His dad came over and hugged him. “You did great, son. This adventure taught us that no matter how hard life gets, we can overcome it together.” Tom looked at the watch on his dad’s wrist. “Thanks, Dad. This watch really is special. Just like our family.” They stood there, embracing the beauty of the moment and the strength of their bond, ready to embrace the challenges ahead with newfound courage.​ 示范四​ As Tom hesitated, his dad placed a firm hand on his shoulder. “Son, this slope is just a small hurdle in our journey,” his dad said, his voice full of confidence. “Think of all the times our family has overcome difficulties. This watch has been there through it all, and so have we.” He started walking his bike up the slope, looking back at Tom. “Come on, let’s show this slope who’s boss!” Tom grinned, his doubts fading. He pedaled with all his might, his dad beside him, offering words of encouragement. The rain seemed to ease as they got closer to the top, as if nature itself was rooting for them.​ Gradually, the rain stopped and they arrived at the top of the mountain. The world seemed to open up before them, a vast expanse of green fields and rolling hills. Tom and his dad exchanged knowing smiles. “We made it,” Tom said softly. His dad nodded. “Yes, and we’ll keep making it through whatever life throws at us. As long as we have each other and the spirit of this watch.” They stood there, taking in the beauty of the moment, grateful for the adventure and the strengthened bond between them, ready to face the future with the same resilience and determination.​ 六．【参考答案】 Paragraph 1: As Tom hesitated, his dad placed a firm hand on his shoulder. Looking at Tom, his dad said, “Remember the watch? It still works well through hard times. We’re just like it.” Tom listened intently. His dad’s words deeply inspired him. The following hours witnessed his tough struggle and perseverance. Ignoring the pouring rain and the slippery slope, he made every effort to pedal his bike. With mud splashing onto their clothes, they kept going, encouraging each other all the way. Despite the tiredness, they were getting closer to the top of the mountain. Paragraph 2: Gradually, the rain stopped and they arrived at the top of the mountain. The moment they reached the peak, a beautiful rainbow appeared in the sky. The scenery around them was breathtaking. Tom’s dad looked at him with pride, saying, “You did an amazing job, son! I’m so proud of you.” Hearing this, Tom felt the exhaustion from riding his bike were replaced by a sense of excitement and satisfaction. They stood there, immersed in the splendid view. From this unforgettable adventure, Tom realized that it was the simple watch that helped him become stronger. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$