内容正文:
应用文写作
假定你是李华,英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.使用教材的收获;
2.改进教材的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Professor Nunan,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段:问候与表明意图
以礼貌的问候语开启邮件,向 Professor Nunan 表达感谢,说明写信目的是分享使用教材的收获并提出改进建议。
第二段:阐述使用教材的收获与改进建议
收获:从知识学习和能力提升两方面展开。教材内容丰富,涵盖语法、词汇、文化知识,拓宽了知识面;多样化的练习和活动,如角色扮演、小组讨论,锻炼了听说读写能力。
建议:结合实际使用体验提出。建议增加当下热点话题,让内容更贴近时代;补充实用的学习策略,帮助学生提高学习效率;优化课后练习设计,平衡难度,增加趣味性。
第三段:结尾与祝福
再次感谢 Professor Nunan,并表达对其工作的尊重。期待对方考虑建议,最后送上祝福,礼貌结束邮件 。
短语积累
enrich one's knowledge(丰富某人的知识)
broaden one's horizons(拓宽某人的视野)
improve language skills(提高语言技能)
practical learning strategies(实用的学习策略)
keep up with the times(与时俱进)
arouse students' interest(激发学生的兴趣)
cultural background knowledge(文化背景知识)
well - designed activities(精心设计的活动)
role - playing games(角色扮演游戏)
group discussions(小组讨论)
balanced difficulty level(平衡的难度水平)
hot topics(热点话题)
express one's gratitude(表达某人的感激之情)
take...into consideration(考虑……)
look forward to(期待)
be beneficial to(对…… 有益)
comprehensive language learning(全面的语言学习)
put forward suggestions(提出建议)
佳句积累
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the excellent English textbook and share my thoughts on how it could be further improved.(我写信是为了表达对这本优秀英语教材的衷心感谢,并分享我关于如何进一步改进它的想法。)
The textbook has greatly enriched my knowledge of English grammar and vocabulary, helping me build a solid foundation for language learning.(这本教材极大地丰富了我的英语语法和词汇知识,帮助我为语言学习打下了坚实的基础。)
Through the diverse activities such as role - playing games and group discussions, I have significantly improved my speaking and communication skills.(通过角色扮演游戏和小组讨论等多样化的活动,我的口语和沟通能力得到了显著提高。)
The cultural background knowledge introduced in the textbook broadened my horizons and enabled me to have a deeper understanding of English - speaking countries.(教材中介绍的文化背景知识拓宽了我的视野,让我对英语国家有了更深入的了解。)
I sincerely hope that you can consider adding more hot topics to the textbook, which will make it more relevant and engaging for students.(我真诚地希望您能考虑在教材中加入更多热点话题,这将使它对学生更具相关性和吸引力。)
It would be beneficial to include practical learning strategies in the textbook, which can guide students to learn more effectively.(在教材中加入实用的学习策略将是有益的,这可以指导学生更有效地学习。)
The well - designed activities in the textbook not only arouse students' interest but also promote comprehensive language learning.(教材中精心设计的活动不仅激发了学生的兴趣,还促进了全面的语言学习。)
I suggest optimizing the after - class exercises to strike a better balance between difficulty levels and add more fun elements.(我建议优化课后练习,以更好地平衡难度水平,并增加更多有趣的元素。)
The textbook's clear explanations and abundant examples have been extremely helpful in my English study, making complex grammar points easy to understand.(教材清晰的解释和丰富的例子对我的英语学习非常有帮助,使复杂的语法点易于理解。)
I believe that by incorporating these suggestions, the textbook will become an even more valuable resource for English learners.(我相信通过采纳这些建议,这本教材将成为英语学习者更有价值的资源。)
Once again, thank you for your dedication to creating such a wonderful English textbook.(再次感谢您为编写如此出色的英语教材所付出的努力。)
The variety of reading materials in the textbook provides us with ample opportunities to practice reading comprehension and expand our vocabulary.(教材中丰富多样的阅读材料为我们提供了大量练习阅读理解和扩大词汇量的机会。)
I hope my suggestions can contribute to the continuous improvement of this excellent textbook.(我希望我的建议能为这本优秀教材的持续改进做出贡献。)
The textbook's combination of language learning and cultural exploration has made my English study more interesting and meaningful.(教材将语言学习与文化探索相结合,使我的英语学习更加有趣和有意义。)
I look forward to seeing the improved version of the textbook in the future.(我期待在未来看到改进后的教材版本。)
写作示范
写作示范一
Dear Professor Nunan,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for the English textbook. It has been an invaluable learning companion.
Using this textbook, I’ve greatly enriched my knowledge of grammar and vocabulary. The vivid examples and well - designed activities, like group discussions and role - playing games, have effectively improved my speaking and listening skills. Meanwhile, the cultural stories in it broadened my horizons. However, I’d like to suggest adding more hot topics to keep up with the times, which can arouse students’ interest. Also, it would be better if some practical learning strategies were included to help us study more efficiently.
Thank you again for your hard work. I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Professor Nunan,
I’m writing to share my experience of using your English textbook and offer some suggestions.
This textbook has been extremely beneficial to my English study. It provides comprehensive knowledge, from grammar rules to cultural background. The diverse reading materials and writing exercises have enhanced my overall language skills. The audio materials accompanying the textbook also contribute a lot to my listening ability. Nevertheless, I think the textbook could be improved. For instance, more current hot topics should be added to make it more engaging. And it would be great if the after - class exercises were designed with a more balanced difficulty level.
Thank you for your outstanding work. I’m looking forward to your consideration of my suggestions.
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Professor Nunan,
I’m writing to express my gratitude for the English textbook and share my thoughts on its improvement.
The textbook has played a crucial role in my English learning journey. It covers a wide range of topics, helping me broaden my horizons and improve my language proficiency. The well - organized structure and clear explanations make it easy for me to understand complex grammar points. Moreover, the various exercises, especially the speaking tasks, have significantly enhanced my communication skills. However, I suggest adding practical learning strategies to guide us on how to learn more effectively. Also, incorporating more interesting and trendy content would make the textbook more appealing.
Thank you for your great effort. I hope my suggestions can be of some value.
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作示范四
Dear Professor Nunan,
I’m writing to extend my heartfelt thanks for the wonderful English textbook and put forward some suggestions.
This textbook has been a great help to me. It enriches my knowledge and improves my language skills in an all - round way. The cultural elements in it not only arouse my interest but also deepen my understanding of English - speaking countries. The reading and writing exercises are well - designed, offering sufficient practice opportunities. But I think it would be better if more hot topics were added to make the content more up - to - date. Additionally, it’s advisable to optimize the after - class exercises by adding more fun elements.
Thank you again for your hard work. I sincerely hope my suggestions can be considered.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Professor Nunan,
Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I’m glad to share my thoughts.
I find the textbooks incredibly beneficial. The well-selected materials, filled with intriguing stories and fresh opinions, have aroused my interest in language learning and opened up a new world for me. My language skills have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook.
However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience.
Thank you for considering my feedback.
Best regards,
Li Hua
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