读后续写 拳击课故事 讲义-湖北省武汉中学2024-2025学年高二下学期期中考试英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 In Grade 9 I joined boxing classes. My friend Lea and I were the only girls in the class. We got to throw our first punches (拳击) and learned how we should stand. I still didn’t know how to do it well, but I felt that choosing the boxing class was a right decision. Mr. Vernon, our boxing teacher, made us work hard and sweat. The boxing pads (防护垫) were my favorite, but my punches weren’t strong enough. After participating in more practices, we had learned how to punch in six different ways. The boys were improving a lot on their strength, and Lea with her speed. What about me? Well, I had a hard time seeing the difference. Mr. Vernon would always tell me that practice would make me stronger, and this was what helped motivate me to continue. Each practice there was at least one boy who would make fun of me and say, “Oh, you’re too short to box. Mr. Vernon has to bend down when you are on the boxing pads; oh, you’re not strong enough; you punch like a mouse.” I know those comments were not to hurt me, but just to have fun. It’s true. I’m a small and short person and I did lack confidence; but hearing those comments can either bring you down, or make you feel motivated to show them they are wrong. In my case, they started to discourage me. I didn’t have the strength to think they were wrong, and part of me thought that they were speaking the truth. I hid it inside my heart because I thought that showing I was doubting myself would make it worse. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then came one particular practice. _________________________________________________________________ The experience taught me a great lesson. _________________________________________________________________ 拳击课故事续写 续写分析（两段）​ 第一段分析：第一段紧扣 “转折与突破” 展开，通过 “as usual” 延续前文男孩们对 “我” 嘲笑的情节，营造压抑氛围，随后 “on the verge of giving up” 将 “我” 的困境推向顶点，此时老师的出现成为关键转折点。“Don’t let their words define you” 等话语直接点明主题，给予 “我” 精神支撑。“ignored the snickers”“concentrated on each punch” 等动作描写，生动展现 “我” 心态的转变；“pictured all my doubts and insecurities as targets” 运用比喻，将抽象情绪具象化，使 “我” 力量迸发的过程更具感染力。“boys fell silent, watching me in disbelief” 以他人的反应侧面烘托 “我” 的突破，为后文感悟做铺垫 。​ 第二段分析：第二段围绕 “感悟与升华” 推进，首句直接表明此次经历带来深刻教训，起到总领作用。“It wasn’t my size or strength that mattered most, but my determination and belief in myself” 通过对比，深刻揭示故事主旨，强调内在精神的重要性。“Those mocking words...became the fuel that drove me forward” 运用比喻，巧妙将负面因素转化为成长动力，深化主题。结尾 “whenever I faced challenges...find the courage to fight back” 将拳击课的感悟延伸到生活各个方面，使故事内涵得到升华，展现出积极向上的人生态度 。​ 翻译全文​ 接着迎来了一次特别的训练。和往常一样，一些男孩又开始对我的身材和力量评头论足。就在我几乎要放弃的时候，弗农老师走了过来。“别让他们的话定义你，” 他坚定地说，“专注于你的进步，别在意他们的看法。” 他的话在我脑海中回响，我踏上了拳击防护垫。这一次，我无视那些窃笑，专注于每一次出拳。我把所有的疑虑和不安都想象成目标，每击中一次，都感到一股力量涌上来。令我惊讶的是，我的出拳变得更有力了，动作也更加流畅。男孩们都沉默了，难以置信地看着我。​ 这次经历给了我一个深刻的教训。最重要的不是我的身材或力量，而是我的决心和对自己的信念。那些嘲讽的话非但没有击垮我，反而成了推动我前进的动力。我明白了，面对质疑，证明别人错误的唯一方法就是坚持下去，向他们展示我真正的能力。从那以后，每当我遇到挑战，我就会想起拳击课上的那一天，从而找到反击的勇气，无论是在拳击场上，还是在生活中。​ 故事线​ 九年级时，“我” 和朋友莉娅加入拳击课，成为班里仅有的女生，开始学习基本拳击动作，但 “我” 的出拳不够有力。​ 随着训练深入，同学们都有进步，男孩们力量增强，莉娅速度提升，而 “我” 却难以看到自身变化，还时常遭到一些男孩的嘲笑，这些嘲讽逐渐让 “我” 感到气馁和自我怀疑 。​ 在一次特别的训练中，当 “我” 濒临放弃时，弗农老师鼓励 “我” 不要受他人言语影响，专注自身进步。“我” 听从老师的话，在训练中无视嘲笑，将内心的疑虑化作力量，最终出拳变得有力，动作更加流畅，让嘲笑者惊讶不已。​ 这次经历让 “我” 深刻领悟到，身材和力量并非关键，决心与自信才最重要，嘲讽的话语反而能成为前进的动力，从此 “我” 在面对各种挑战时都能从中汲取勇气 。​ 短语​ on the verge of 濒临；在…… 边缘​ give up 放弃​ echo in one's mind 在某人脑海中回响​ concentrate on 专注于​ a surge of 一股​ in disbelief 难以置信地​ in the face of 面对​ fight back 反击​ 主旨升华句​ Just as a diamond is forged under pressure, our true strength emerges when we rise above the doubts of others and believe in our own journey.​ 正如钻石在压力下锻造而成，当我们超越他人的质疑，相信自己的道路时，真正的力量便会显现。​ The boxing ring of life often tests our mettle with mockery and doubt, but it is our unwavering determination that becomes the gloves to fight back and claim victory.​ 生活的拳击场常常以嘲讽和质疑考验我们的勇气，但正是我们坚定不移的决心，成为反击并赢得胜利的手套。​ Like a seed that breaks through the hard soil to reach the sun, our self - belief can overcome the weight of others' opinions and bloom into success.​ 就像一颗种子冲破坚硬的土壤拥抱阳光，我们的自信能够战胜他人意见的重压，绽放出成功之花。​ In the storm of ridicule, it is not the size of our stature but the magnitude of our spirit that determines whether we sink or soar.​ 在嘲讽的风暴中，决定我们沉沦还是翱翔的，不是我们身材的大小，而是我们精神的力量。​ Doubts are but shadows cast by others, and the light of self - assurance is the only torch that can guide us through the darkest alleys of challenge.​ 质疑不过是他人投射的阴影，而自信之光是唯一能引领我们穿越挑战最黑暗小巷的火炬。​ 写作示范​ 示范一​ Then came one particular practice. The boys’ jeers filled the air as I stepped onto the mat. My hands trembled, and I fought back tears. Mr. Vernon noticed my distress and pulled me aside. “Remember why you started,” he said. Those words struck a chord. I squared my shoulders and returned to the pads. With every punch, I channeled my frustration. My breathing grew steady, and my movements grew sure. By the end of practice, I was sweating but grinning. The boys, for once, had nothing to say.​ The experience taught me a great lesson. It showed me that true growth happens outside our comfort zones. The 嘲笑 that once wounded me became the motivation I needed. I learned that self - belief is more powerful than any insult. Now, whenever I face difficulties, I think of that day in the boxing gym. It reminds me that with determination, I can overcome anything that comes my way.​ 示范二​ Then came one particular practice. As the boys started their taunts again, I felt a spark of anger ignite within me. Instead of shrinking, I walked straight up to the punching bag. Mr. Vernon’s words about perseverance echoed in my head. I threw punch after punch, harder and faster. My vision tunneled, and all I could hear was the thud of my gloves hitting the bag. When I finally stopped, gasping for breath, I turned to see the boys looking at me with newfound respect.​ The experience taught me a great lesson. It made me realize that our greatest battles are often within ourselves. The opinions of others can only hold us back if we let them. From that day on, I refused to be defined by my critics. Whether it’s in boxing or in life, I now face challenges head - on, knowing that my self - worth isn’t determined by what others think of me.​ 【答案】 Then came one particular practice. Somehow I was mad and angry, which made my punches suddenly stronger and faster. What amazed me was that gradually I just didn’t have that anger in me. After the practice, all my classmates burst into cheers for my great performance and Mr. Vernon also said that I was making great progress. With his praise I finally found the strength I needed. In the following practices, he was impressed with my good boxing skills, because they were getting powerful. The experience taught me a great lesson. Boxing requires a lot of work and effort, but it has also taught me not to feel discouraged about what others say. Thanks to boxing, I have gradually realized that being short doesn’t define me. If we focus on our strong points and improve our weak ones, there is no reason for us to feel disappointed. Day by day I am becoming increasingly confident, definitely sure nothing will limit me to doing what tall or strong people can do. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$