Unit6 Hitting the road 单元写作指导（讲义）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册易混易错点精讲精炼（外研版）

Unit6 Hitting the road 单元写作指导（讲义） 写作主题： 有关旅行与探索的写作，主要围绕前往中外各地的旅行经历和介绍著名的旅行家的主要事迹展开。与此相关的写作主要涉及： ①介绍自己的旅行计划； ②介绍自己的旅行经历和文化体验； ③介绍一位伟大的旅行家及其生平经历。写这类文章时，一般按照时间顺序进行介绍，使用一般过去时，但在介绍旅行计划时常使用一般现在时和一般将来时。 其中在介绍自己的旅行经历时，通常包含以下几点： ①旅行中发生的难忘的事情； ②旅行目的地的自然景观、历史遗迹、特色美食、风土人情和文化习俗等； ③自己的心情和感悟，以及从旅行中学到的知识。 素材积累： 【开头句】 ①The weather was fine today.I went to the beach for a trip with my classmates. ②I went to Beihai Park with my classmates in May and we had a great time there. ③I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer. 【中间句】 ①There were many people on vacation. ②We also took lots of pictures of the flowers there. ③In the afternoon, we went on a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together. 【结尾句】 ①All of us had a great time! ②All in all,it was a wonderful trip.I'm looking forward to visiting there again. ③I was tired but happy.I hope to visit Beijing again.obWas 【名言积累】 ①Life is short and the world is wide.生命短暂，世界广阔。 ②It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.读万卷书不如行万里路。 单元满分范文： 1．《中国日报》正在开展“中国最宜居城市”评选活动，假如你是 David，你想推荐你的家乡无锡。 我的家乡 位置 江苏东部、距省会南京约200 公里 环境 青山绿水、空气新鲜、鸟语花香 人们 1.友好互助，多种技能，……（自拟一例） 2.健康生活，热爱自然，……（自拟一例） 民间艺术 紫砂壶：由一种陶土制成，…… 我的感受 …… 注意： 1.表达中必须包含所给的要点，省略部分请自拟内容作答。 2.词数80左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 3.表达中请勿提及真实姓名。 Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to recommend my hometown Wuxi City for China’s Most Livable City Award. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think Wuxi City should get the award. I hope you can agree with me. Yours faithfully, David 2．假设你是凯蒂(Kitty)，请你向你的朋友西蒙(Simon)介绍一下你的家乡及你家，并邀请他来你家玩。 要点： 1. 我的家乡在泰州南部的一个小镇上，离泰州市中心大概二十千米； 2. 是个居住的好地方，有公园，可以……有购物中心，可以……，镇上也有一个民间艺术博物馆，可以看到很多手工艺品，了解很多关于中国传统文化…… 3. 我住在公园西面小区的一套公寓里；公寓里有……； 4. 我家养了一只宠物猫，它…… 要求： 1. 词数不少于100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Simon, I want to tell you something about my hometown. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to seeing you! I think you will enjoy your trip to my hometown. Best wishes! Kitty 3．假如你是李华，某英文报社正在举行题为“My meaningful holiday”的英语征文比赛。请根据下面给的提示内容，写一篇短文投稿，介绍你和好朋友王瑶到西双版纳 (Xishuangbanna) 游玩的经历。可适当发挥，字数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入字数。 Who I travelled with 对人耐心和善，擅长拍照 Where I travelled and what I did 位于中国的西南部，富含自然和文化资源 乘船游览澜沧江 (Lancang River)；在雨林徒步，观赏动植物；品尝当地美食：例如竹筒饭 (Bamboo-tube Rice) What I learned and how I felt ……(请至少补充两点) During the holiday, I had an unforgettable trip to Xishuangbanna with my friend Wang Yao. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你是李华，学校英语角正在开展“Travel Stories”主题活动。请你根据以下写作模板及提示，向英语角的同学们介绍你最难忘的一次旅行经历。词数70左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含以上信息，且适当发挥； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．一群来自英国的交换生想要参观你的家乡无锡，你将作为他们本次行程的导游。请以“A Travel Guide to My Hometown”为题，写一篇90词左右的英文短文。要点如下： General information Where is it? What’s it like? Places to visit What are the places of interest to visit? What can visitors see or do there? How can people get there? How long does it take? Local folk art Are there any kinds of folk art? What’s special about the local folk art? What’s the cultural value of it? Hello, everyone! Welcome to my hometown Wuxi. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Bill计划五一节来你的家乡福州旅游。他希望你能在众多景点中为他推荐一个适合骑行的地方。请根据以下思维导图给他回一封邮件，词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含以上信息，且适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．家乡是每个人心中最美的地方，我校即将举行“我为家乡代言”主题活动。请根据以下问题，以“My hometown”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，介绍家乡南通，以及你如何为建设家乡贡献自己的一份力，让家乡变得更美更好。 ●What place of interest can people visit in Nantong? ●What traditional craft do people in Nantong like? Why? ●What voluntary (志愿的) work do you want to do to make Nantong better? 注意：1. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文语连贯、通顺。 2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 My hometown I would like to tell you something about my hometown Nantong. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是Daniel，你们班的英国交换生Andy给你写了一封邮件，请仔细阅读邮件内容并根据邮件内容回复。 Dear Daniel, May Day holiday is coming. I’d like to plan a one-day trip in your hometown Wuxi, but I have no idea. Can you introduce Wuxi to me? What’s Wuxi like? What places of interest can I visit? What can I do there? Are there any traditional Chinese handicrafts in Wuxi? Please tell me more about them. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Andy 注意事项：1.词数：80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.内容必须包含邮件中所提及的问题，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。 Welcome to my hometown Dear Andy, I’m very happy to hear from you and I’d like to tell you something about Wuxi. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It is a good place to visit. I hope you can have a good time in my hometown Wuxi. Yours, Daniel 9．“读万卷书，不如行万里路”，旅途中，我们不仅能够品尝当地的美食，结识不同的人；还能够开拓视野、品味不同的风土人情。 请以“My Unforgettable Travel Experience”为题，分享一次难忘的旅行经历，并谈谈自己的感受与收获。 提示词语：enjoy, explore, taste, culture, fun 提示问题：Where did you go? What did you see or do there? How did you feel about this trip? My Unforgettable Travel Experience As the old saying goes, it’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家庭的15岁小孩Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。 参考词汇：长隆野生动物园Chimelong Safari Park, 省Province 写作要求： 1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.书写要整洁、规范； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Guangzhou, my hometown Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．假如你是小华，上周六和你的家人一起去野营了。请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇短文和大家分享一下你的旅行经历。 写作要求：(1)文中须包含表格所有信息，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (3)词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Place City Park Weather sunny and warm Things to do Before the trip: prepare food and clothes On the trip: set up the tent, take photos... (至少补充1点) Feelings Tired... (至少补充1点) Last Saturday, I went to the City Park for camping with my family. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．一些来自英国的交换生想要参观你的家乡，请为他们设计一份简单的旅游指南，内容包括： 注意事项： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Welcome to my hometown. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I would like to tell you more when I arrive. I hope you will enjoy your trip here. 13．2025年无锡登上央视春晚舞台后，吸引了各地游客纷纷来无锡旅游。作为一名中学生，你打算拍摄一段短视频向中外游客宣传无锡。请根据以下流程图，写一写你心中的无锡。 注意事项：1、内容自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯、符合题意； 2、括号内所给内容为非限定性表达，可自主合理发挥； 3、词数在80个左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4、不得出现真实的个人姓名或学校名。 Welcome to Wuxi! Let me show you around my hometown. It is a beautiful and modern city with a history of more than 3000 years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It’s really a wonderful city, isn’t it? Come and see it with your own eyes! 14．假如你是李华，上周末你的朋友Daniel来福州游玩，你作为东道主，带他四处领略了这座城市的魅力。请你根据表格提供的信息，按照旅途游玩的顺序，以 “An Unforgettable Trip to Fuzhou” 为题，简要介绍你们的游玩经历。 An Unforgettable Trip to Fuzhou Time last weekend Weather sunny Activities ·visited Three Lanes and Seven Alleys ·ate fish balls ·… (至少补充一点) Feelings … 要求： 1. 短文必须包括提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 书写规范，行文流畅，语法正确； 3. 70个词左右。 An Unforgettable Trip to Fuzhou Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Let me tell you one of my unforgettable trips. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．假设你是吴明，在寒假期间，你和你家人一起去了武夷山游玩。请根据下列表格写一篇短文介绍一下此次旅行的情况，字数80左右。开头已给出。 Before the trip the way of transportation (交通) , book the hotel During the trip go mountain climbing take the bamboo raft (竹排) watch Impression Da Hong Pao Show (印象大红袍) ... After the trip feelings During the winter holiday, I went on a 3-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．五一来临，假定你是李华，收到你的英国笔友 Tony 的邮件，得知他想了解你家乡的风土人情并计划来你的家乡游玩。请你根据以下文字给他回邮件，介绍你家乡连云港的风土人情等。 Beautiful Lianyungang Where it is in the north east of Jiangsu... Places to visit Huaguo Mountain Things to do enjoy the seafood.. People&culture friendly..rich... 注意: (1)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数: (2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适 可适当发挥，使文章连贯; (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息. Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear you’ll visit my hometown-Lianyungang. I would like to tell you something about it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．为了保护和宣传闽江，并呼吁大家树立节约用水的意识，学校组织了以“如何节约用水和保护水资源”为主题的春游活动。请你根据以下信息，用英文介绍此次主题活动。 Place Minjiang River Length 562 kilometers Time last Friday People students in Grade 7 and Grade 8 Transportation by bus Activities 1. a speech (演讲) on how to save water in our daily life ... 2. do something useful to protect the river... 3. ... Feelings ... 要求：1. 根据表格提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现除提示词以外的姓名、校名； 4. 词数不少于80词。 To protect Minjiang River and make it known by more people, our school had a spring outing with the theme of “Save Water”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．上周六，你参加了学校举行的一次户外活动。请根据以下信息写一篇英语作文，介绍一下本次活动。 A Trip to Mount Xian Time last Saturday Place to meet the school gate (大门) Activities take the school bus climb the mountain, play games watch flowers, be close to (亲近) the nature take photos Feelings tired but happy; a great trip 写作要求： 1.文中须包含表格中的内容提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右。 A Trip to Mount Xian ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19．假如你是李华，你们学校即将赴常德野生动物世界开展“动物园之旅”研学活动。请你撰写一份活动宣传稿。 内容包括： (1) 描述同学们在动物园里可进行的活动 (至少两个)； (2) 介绍动物园游玩需遵守的规则(至少两个)； (3) 提醒大家遵守规则，注意安全。 要求： (1) 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； (2) 语句连贯，书写规范，适当拓展，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 A trip to the zoo My dear classmates, we will have a trip to Changde Wildlife World next week. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．假如你是张华，你的笔友打算到你的家乡来旅游，他想了解沭阳的情况。请根据所给提示，以“My hometown—Shuyang”为题用英语写一篇短文介绍你的家乡。 家乡名称 沭阳 (Shuyang) 要点 是一个非常美丽而现代的城市 城北公园(Chengbei Park) 很著名；有300多年的历史，人们喜欢在公园里放风筝、运动…… 你最喜欢的地方是南山公园 (Nanshan Park)，我们可以野炊、划船…… 你家住在九层的公寓大楼，有一个客厅、一个厨房、一间浴室和三间卧室。最喜欢自己的卧室，因为…… 社区里有很多志愿者，能帮助人们解决各种各样的问题，例如…… 你对家乡和对自己生活的感受（自由发挥1~2点） 要求： 1. 语句通顺、语言规范。 2. 书写工整、标点符号正确。 3. 词数：80词左右。 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。 My hometown—Shuyang _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit6 Hitting the road 单元写作指导（讲义） 写作主题： 有关旅行与探索的写作，主要围绕前往中外各地的旅行经历和介绍著名的旅行家的主要事迹展开。与此相关的写作主要涉及： ①介绍自己的旅行计划； ②介绍自己的旅行经历和文化体验； ③介绍一位伟大的旅行家及其生平经历。写这类文章时，一般按照时间顺序进行介绍，使用一般过去时，但在介绍旅行计划时常使用一般现在时和一般将来时。 其中在介绍自己的旅行经历时，通常包含以下几点： ①旅行中发生的难忘的事情； ②旅行目的地的自然景观、历史遗迹、特色美食、风土人情和文化习俗等； ③自己的心情和感悟，以及从旅行中学到的知识。 素材积累： 【开头句】 ①The weather was fine today.I went to the beach for a trip with my classmates. ②I went to Beihai Park with my classmates in May and we had a great time there. ③I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer. 【中间句】 ①There were many people on vacation. ②We also took lots of pictures of the flowers there. ③In the afternoon, we went on a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together. 【结尾句】 ①All of us had a great time! ②All in all,it was a wonderful trip.I'm looking forward to visiting there again. ③I was tired but happy.I hope to visit Beijing again.obWas 【名言积累】 ①Life is short and the world is wide.生命短暂，世界广阔。 ②It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.读万卷书不如行万里路。 单元满分范文： 1．《中国日报》正在开展“中国最宜居城市”评选活动，假如你是 David，你想推荐你的家乡无锡。 我的家乡 位置 江苏东部、距省会南京约200 公里 环境 青山绿水、空气新鲜、鸟语花香 人们 1.友好互助，多种技能，……（自拟一例） 2.健康生活，热爱自然，……（自拟一例） 民间艺术 紫砂壶：由一种陶土制成，…… 我的感受 …… 注意： 1.表达中必须包含所给的要点，省略部分请自拟内容作答。 2.词数80左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 3.表达中请勿提及真实姓名。 Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to recommend my hometown Wuxi City for China’s Most Livable City Award. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think Wuxi City should get the award. I hope you can agree with me. Yours faithfully, David 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to recommend my hometown Wuxi City for China’s Most Livable City Award. Wuxi is in the east of Jiangsu. It is about 200 kilometres from the capital city Nanjing. With many trees, lakes and green hills, the air is fresh here. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. People here are all friendly and helpful. They have different skills and often help others with all kinds of problems. They live a healthy life. They take more exercise and watch less TV. To protect the nature, they usually go out on foot or by bike. Wuxi is famous for its Zisha Teapot. It is made from zisha clay. The teapot is made by hand and takes a long time to make. We enjoy our life here. It is really a wonderful place to live. I think Wuxi City should get the award. I hope you can agree with me. Yours faithfully, David 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍家乡的位置、环境、人们以及民间艺术等方面的具体详情。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb with sth帮助某人（做）某事 ②all kinds of各种各样的…… ③live a healthy life过健康的生活 ④be famous for因为……而出名 [高分句型] ①Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. (并列谓语) ②To protect the nature, they usually go out on foot or by bike. (动词不定式做目的状语) 2．假设你是凯蒂(Kitty)，请你向你的朋友西蒙(Simon)介绍一下你的家乡及你家，并邀请他来你家玩。 要点： 1. 我的家乡在泰州南部的一个小镇上，离泰州市中心大概二十千米； 2. 是个居住的好地方，有公园，可以……有购物中心，可以……，镇上也有一个民间艺术博物馆，可以看到很多手工艺品，了解很多关于中国传统文化…… 3. 我住在公园西面小区的一套公寓里；公寓里有……； 4. 我家养了一只宠物猫，它…… 要求： 1. 词数不少于100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Simon, I want to tell you something about my hometown. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to seeing you! I think you will enjoy your trip to my hometown. Best wishes! Kitty 【答案】例文： Dear Simon, I want to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is a small town in the south of Taizhou. It’s about twenty kilometers away from the city center. It’s a wonderful place to live. There’s a beautiful park where I can fly kites and take walks. There’s also a shopping center. I can buy all kinds of things there. And there’s a folk art museum in the town. I can see many handicrafts and learn a lot about Chinese traditional culture. I live in an apartment in a community west of the park. My apartment has two bedrooms, a living room, and a kitchen. It’s very cozy. I have a pet cat at home. It’s white and very cute. It likes to play with balls. I’m looking forward to seeing you! I think you will enjoy your trip to my hometown. Best wishes! Kitty 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于家乡的地理位置、环境设施、民间艺术博物馆以及自家公寓和宠物猫的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明要向朋友介绍自己的家乡； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“家乡地理位置、环境设施、民间艺术博物馆”几个方面重点介绍家乡的具体情况，并描述自家公寓设施以及宠物猫的特点； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Simon来到家乡”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①located in位于 ②all kinds of 各种各样的 ③a wonderful place to live 一个居住的好地方 ④learn a lot about 对……了解很多 [高分句型] ①My hometown is a small town in the south of Taizhou. (简单句) ②I live in an apartment in a community west of the park. (介词短语作后置定语) 3．假如你是李华，某英文报社正在举行题为“My meaningful holiday”的英语征文比赛。请根据下面给的提示内容，写一篇短文投稿，介绍你和好朋友王瑶到西双版纳 (Xishuangbanna) 游玩的经历。可适当发挥，字数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入字数。 Who I travelled with 对人耐心和善，擅长拍照 Where I travelled and what I did 位于中国的西南部，富含自然和文化资源 乘船游览澜沧江 (Lancang River)；在雨林徒步，观赏动植物；品尝当地美食：例如竹筒饭 (Bamboo-tube Rice) What I learned and how I felt ……(请至少补充两点) During the holiday, I had an unforgettable trip to Xishuangbanna with my friend Wang Yao. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My meaningful holiday    During the holiday, I had an unforgettable trip to Xishuangbanna with my friend Wang Yao. Wang Yao, who is patient and kind, is also good at taking photos.     Located in southwest China, Xishuangbanna is rich in natural and cultural resources. We took a boat trip on the Lancang River, enjoying the beautiful views. We went hiking in the rainforest to see amazing plants and animals. Besides, we tasted local food like Bamboo-tube Rice.     This trip broadened my horizons and deepened our friendship. I felt grateful for this wonderful experience! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：材料表格所给内容需按要求完整表达，写作过程注意时态切换。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明主旨并简略介绍朋友特点； 第二步，详细讲述旅行地点和旅行过程中的所见所闻； 第三步，表达收获和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②rich in富含；富有 ③go hiking去徒步旅行；去远足 [高分句型] ①Wang Yao, who is patient and kind, is also good at taking photos.（非限定性定语从句） ②We took a boat trip on the Lancang River, enjoying the beautiful views. （现在分词短语作伴随状语） 4．假定你是李华，学校英语角正在开展“Travel Stories”主题活动。请你根据以下写作模板及提示，向英语角的同学们介绍你最难忘的一次旅行经历。词数70左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含以上信息，且适当发挥； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Trip to Xiamen Last summer vacation, I went to Xiamen with my parents by train. It was my first time to go there. When we arrived, we first went to Gulangyu Island. We visited many old buildings and tasted delicious local snacks. The next day, we went to Nanputuo Temple. It was really a peaceful and beautiful place. Later, we walked along the beach of Xiamen University. The sea was so blue and the sand was soft. This trip was really unforgettable. I not only enjoyed the beautiful scenery but also learned a lot about the local culture. I hope I can go there again in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：明确主题，围绕写作提示写作，注意衔接词语的使用，使前后过度自然，行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，要介绍厦门之旅； 第二步，具体介绍在厦门的活动； 第三步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①walk along沿着……走 ②unforgettable难忘的 ③not only … but also …不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①When we arrived, we first went to Gulangyu Island.（状语从句） ②I hope I can go there again in the future.（宾语从句） 5．一群来自英国的交换生想要参观你的家乡无锡，你将作为他们本次行程的导游。请以“A Travel Guide to My Hometown”为题，写一篇90词左右的英文短文。要点如下： General information Where is it? What’s it like? Places to visit What are the places of interest to visit? What can visitors see or do there? How can people get there? How long does it take? Local folk art Are there any kinds of folk art? What’s special about the local folk art? What’s the cultural value of it? Hello, everyone! Welcome to my hometown Wuxi.________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： A Travel Guide to My Hometown Hello, everyone! Welcome to my hometown Wuxi. It is a city in Jiangsu Province, in the east of China. It is a city by the Taihu Lake. Among the places of interest in Wuxi, Yuantouzhu is well worth visiting. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there. You can also row a boat on the Taihu Lake to enjoy the nice view. Usually, it takes about an hour to get there by bus from the city centre. In Wuxi, we have a traditional craft called Huishan Clay Figurines. They are made by hand and have simple shapes and bright colours. Huishan clay figures are a symbol of the spirit of Chinese craftspeople. I hope you enjoy your trip to Wuxi and have a wonderful time here! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇宣传家乡旅游的材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，需根据问题提示回答家乡特点、著名旅游景点、当地民间艺术等，注意适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家乡地理位置特点； 第二步，介绍家乡著名旅游景点； 第三步，介绍一种当地民间艺术； 第四步，呼吁人们来家乡旅游。 [亮点词汇] ① well worth visiting 值得参观的 ② traditional craft 传统工艺 ③ symbol 标志 ④ wonderful 精彩的 [高分句型] ① Usually, it takes about an hour to get there by bus from the city centre. （It takes some time to do sth. 句型） ② I hope you enjoy your trip to Wuxi and have a wonderful time here!（宾语从句） 6．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Bill计划五一节来你的家乡福州旅游。他希望你能在众多景点中为他推荐一个适合骑行的地方。请根据以下思维导图给他回一封邮件，词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含以上信息，且适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Bill, I’m so excited to hear that you’re coming to Fuzhou during the May Day holiday! I’d like to recommend Minjiang Park for cycling. Minjiang Park is a great place for cycling. It has a long, flat cycling path along the Minjiang River. You can enjoy the beautiful river view while cycling. The fresh air and green scenery will make you feel relaxed. Before cycling, remember to check your bike to make sure it’s in good condition. While cycling, follow the traffic rules and keep a proper speed. After cycling, don’t forget to lock your bike safely. I’m looking forward to seeing you here. Have a good trip! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，为他推荐一个适合骑行的地方； 第二步、说明原因； 第三步、介绍如何保证安全并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①feel relaxed感到放松 ②make sure确保 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I’m so excited to hear that you’re coming to Fuzhou during the May Day holiday!(宾语从句) 7．家乡是每个人心中最美的地方，我校即将举行“我为家乡代言”主题活动。请根据以下问题，以“My hometown”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，介绍家乡南通，以及你如何为建设家乡贡献自己的一份力，让家乡变得更美更好。 ●What place of interest can people visit in Nantong? ●What traditional craft do people in Nantong like? Why? ●What voluntary (志愿的) work do you want to do to make Nantong better? 注意：1. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文语连贯、通顺。 2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 My hometown I would like to tell you something about my hometown Nantong. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 My hometown I would like to tell you something about my hometown Nantong. Located near the Yangtze River, Nantong is famous for its beautiful scenery and rich culture. Visitors can explore Langshan Mountain, where they can enjoy peaceful temples and breathtaking views. A traditional craft here is blue calico. People love it because its natural dyes and patterns show both creativity and eco-friendliness. It’s often used to make clothes or decorations. To make Nantong better, I plan to join voluntary work. For example, I’ll help clean up parks and organize activities to teach tourists about local culture. Also, I share Nantong’s stories online to attract more visitors. Let’s work together to protect our hometown’s beauty and heritage! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍南通的名胜； 第二步，介绍南通的传统手工艺； 第三步，介绍自己想要参加的志愿活动。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……出名 ②be used to被用来…… ③clean up清理 ④organize组织 [高分句型] ①Visitors can explore Langshan Mountain, where they can enjoy peaceful temples and breathtaking views.（定语从句） ②People love it because its natural dyes and patterns show both creativity and eco-friendliness.（原因状语从句） 8．假如你是Daniel，你们班的英国交换生Andy给你写了一封邮件，请仔细阅读邮件内容并根据邮件内容回复。 Dear Daniel, May Day holiday is coming. I’d like to plan a one-day trip in your hometown Wuxi, but I have no idea. Can you introduce Wuxi to me? What’s Wuxi like? What places of interest can I visit? What can I do there? Are there any traditional Chinese handicrafts in Wuxi? Please tell me more about them. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Andy 注意事项：1.词数：80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.内容必须包含邮件中所提及的问题，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。 Welcome to my hometown Dear Andy, I’m very happy to hear from you and I’d like to tell you something about Wuxi. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It is a good place to visit. I hope you can have a good time in my hometown Wuxi. Yours, Daniel 【答案】参考范文 Welcome to my hometown Dear Andy, I’m very happy to hear from you and I’d like to tell you something about Wuxi. Known as the “Pearl of Taihu Lake”, Wuxi is a beautiful city with rich culture. You can visit famous attractions like Lingshan Grand Buddha and Taihu Lake, where you can enjoy boat rides and fresh seafood. Strolling along Nanchang Street, you’ll see traditional Huishan clay figurines—a unique local handicraft. Don’t miss tasting Wuxi’s sweet pork ribs, a must-try dish! It is a good place to visit. I hope you can have a good time in my hometown Wuxi. Yours, Daniel 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍无锡的特色； 第二步，推荐在无锡可以做的事情； 第三部，介绍无锡的传统手工艺术。 [亮点词汇] ①rich丰富的 ②attraction景点 ③unique独一无二的 [高分句型] You can visit famous attractions like Lingshan Grand Buddha and Taihu Lake, where you can enjoy boat rides and fresh seafood.（定语从句） 9．“读万卷书，不如行万里路”，旅途中，我们不仅能够品尝当地的美食，结识不同的人；还能够开拓视野、品味不同的风土人情。 请以“My Unforgettable Travel Experience”为题，分享一次难忘的旅行经历，并谈谈自己的感受与收获。 提示词语：enjoy, explore, taste, culture, fun 提示问题：Where did you go? What did you see or do there? How did you feel about this trip? My Unforgettable Travel Experience As the old saying goes, it’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Unforgettable Travel Experience As the old saying goes, it’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. So I often travel with my family. Last summer, my family and I went to Beijing. We visited many places of interest there, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. They are so beautiful. We also ate Beijing duck. It was delicious. I think it is very important to go travelling. It can not only let us learn more about the world, but also make us feel relaxed. I will never forget this unforgettable trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍自己一次难忘的旅行经历，包括旅行的地点、所做和所看的事情，以及自己的感受。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇点题（已给出）； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍自己旅行的地点、旅行中所做和所看的事情； 第三步，最后谈自己的旅行感受。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②such as比如 ③the Summer Palace颐和园 [高分句型] ①I think it is very important to go travelling.（it作形式主语） ②It can not only let us learn more about the world, but also make us feel relaxed.（并列连词not only...but also...的使用） 10．暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家庭的15岁小孩Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。 参考词汇：长隆野生动物园Chimelong Safari Park, 省Province 写作要求： 1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.书写要整洁、规范； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Guangzhou, my hometown Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Guangzhou, my hometown Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong Province in southern China. It’s a modern city with a long history of over 2,000 years! Here, you can visit the famous Chimelong Safari Park, where you can see pandas and other amazing animals. Guangzhou is also called the “City of Flowers” because of its beautiful parks and warm weather. We love drinking morning tea and eating dim sum, like shrimp dumplings and egg tarts. I hope you can visit Guangzhou one day!   【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文。 ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：根据题干要求完成写作，语言简洁生动，突出城市亮点，展示广州的文化特色。 [写作步骤] 第一步：直入主题，介绍自己的家乡及其地理位置。 第二步：从历史、特色景点、美食等方面介绍广州的特色。 第三步：表达邀请意愿，增强互动性。 [亮点词汇] ① long history悠久历史 ② City of Flowers花城 ③ dim sum点心 [高分句型] ① Here, you can visit the famous Chimelong Safari Park, where you can see pandas and other amazing animals.（定语从句） ②I hope you can visit Guangzhou one day! （宾语从句） 11．假如你是小华，上周六和你的家人一起去野营了。请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇短文和大家分享一下你的旅行经历。 写作要求：(1)文中须包含表格所有信息，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (3)词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Place City Park Weather sunny and warm Things to do Before the trip: prepare food and clothes On the trip: set up the tent, take photos... (至少补充1点) Feelings Tired... (至少补充1点) Last Saturday, I went to the City Park for camping with my family. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last Saturday, I went to the City Park for camping with my family. The weather was sunny and warm on that day. Before the trip, my mother prepared food for us. She made some delicious biscuits and took them with us. My mother also prepared some clothes for us. She is such a careful and kind woman. When we arrived at the camping place, we set up the tent together. After setting up the tent, we went around to enjoy the beautiful nature and took many photos. I felt tired but happy. We all had a wonderful day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据表格提示内容介绍自己上周的旅行经历，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍上周六和父母一起去露营了； 第二步，介绍天气状况及做的事情； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①set up the tent搭起帐篷 ②careful and kind细心体贴的 ③go around四处走动 [高分句型] When we arrived at the camping place, we set up the tent together. (when引导的时间状语从句) 12．一些来自英国的交换生想要参观你的家乡，请为他们设计一份简单的旅游指南，内容包括： 注意事项： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Welcome to my hometown. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I would like to tell you more when I arrive. I hope you will enjoy your trip here. 【答案】例文 Welcome to my hometown. My hometown is a beautiful place with a rich history and culture. Here are some must-visit spots and tips for your trip.   First, you should visit the Old Town, where you can see traditional buildings and learn about the local history. The Old Town Square is especially great. Next, don’t miss the City Museum, which offers a deep dive into the region’s past and present. When it comes to food, be sure to try the local snacks. The town is famous for its dumplings and roasted duck, which you can find at many local restaurants. Lastly, be respectful of local customs and traditions, especially when visiting temples or historical sites.   I would like to tell you more when I arrive. I hope you will enjoy your trip here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍家乡的基本信息； 第二步，介绍家乡的景点和美食，并提醒注意当地的习俗； 第三步，希望对方旅行能够愉快。 [亮点词汇] ①learn about 了解 ②be famous for 因……而出名 [高分句型] ①First, you should visit the Old Town, where you can see traditional buildings and learn about the local history. (where引导的非限定性定语从句) ②When it comes to food, be sure to try the local snacks. (祈使句) 13．2025年无锡登上央视春晚舞台后，吸引了各地游客纷纷来无锡旅游。作为一名中学生，你打算拍摄一段短视频向中外游客宣传无锡。请根据以下流程图，写一写你心中的无锡。 注意事项：1、内容自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯、符合题意； 2、括号内所给内容为非限定性表达，可自主合理发挥； 3、词数在80个左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4、不得出现真实的个人姓名或学校名。 Welcome to Wuxi! Let me show you around my hometown. It is a beautiful and modern city with a history of more than 3000 years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It’s really a wonderful city, isn’t it? Come and see it with your own eyes! 【答案】例文： Welcome to Wuxi! Let me show you around my hometown. It is a beautiful and modern city with a history of more than 3000 years. Wuxi has many attractions, such as Turtle Head Park where you can admire the magnificent scenery of Tai Lake. The water is so clear that it reflects the blue sky and white clouds. The traditional folk art here is also remarkable. Huishan clay figures, which are small but full of details, are very popular among tourists. The local people are kind-hearted and always ready to help. They will make your visit here unforgettable. It’s really a wonderful city, isn’t it? Come and see it with your own eyes! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“欢迎来到无锡！让我带你参观一下我的家乡。”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名胜、传统艺术、居民”三个方面做出详细的介绍。 第三步，书写结语。表达“快来亲眼看看吧！”，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①more than多于 ②admire观赏 ③local本地的 [高分句型] ①Huishan clay figures, which are small but full of details, are very popular among tourists. (which引导的定语从句) 14．假如你是李华，上周末你的朋友Daniel来福州游玩，你作为东道主，带他四处领略了这座城市的魅力。请你根据表格提供的信息，按照旅途游玩的顺序，以 “An Unforgettable Trip to Fuzhou” 为题，简要介绍你们的游玩经历。 An Unforgettable Trip to Fuzhou Time last weekend Weather sunny Activities ·visited Three Lanes and Seven Alleys ·ate fish balls ·… (至少补充一点) Feelings … 要求： 1. 短文必须包括提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 书写规范，行文流畅，语法正确； 3. 70个词左右。 An Unforgettable Trip to Fuzhou Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Let me tell you one of my unforgettable trips. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Trip to Fuzhou Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Let me tell you one of my unforgettable trips. Last weekend, my friend Daniel came to Fuzhou. I was happy to show him around. It was a sunny day. First, we visited Three Lanes and Seven Alleys to learn about the history and culture. Then, we ate fish balls at a local restaurant. It was delicious. Next, we climbed Mount Gu and had fun there. Later, we also rowed a boat in West Lake Park. Finally, we returned home by underground. We felt tired but happy. It was an unforgettable trip and both of us had a wonderful time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据表格信息，介绍游玩经历。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达写作意图，介绍一次难忘的福州之旅； 第二步，详细介绍游玩的时间、地点和活动等； 第三步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be happy to do sth高兴做某事 ②learn about了解 ③have a wonderful time玩得愉快 [高分句型] First, we visited Three Lanes and Seven Alleys to learn about the history and culture.（不定式作状语） 15．假设你是吴明，在寒假期间，你和你家人一起去了武夷山游玩。请根据下列表格写一篇短文介绍一下此次旅行的情况，字数80左右。开头已给出。 Before the trip the way of transportation (交通) , book the hotel During the trip go mountain climbing take the bamboo raft (竹排) watch Impression Da Hong Pao Show (印象大红袍) ... After the trip feelings During the winter holiday, I went on a 3-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 During the winter holiday, I went on a 3-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents. It lies in the north of Fujian Province, China. We took the train for this trip because the high-speed train is very convenient and fast now. Father booked the hotel before the trip. On the first day, we went mountain climbing. When we reached the top of the mountain, we can see the whole picture of Mount Wuyi, which is very beautiful. The next day, we took the bamboo raft at Jiuqu Creek. It was very exciting and fun. In the evening, we also watched the live show of Impression Da Hong Pao. It takes Mount Wuyi tea culture as its theme. On the third day we enjoyed  the local delicious food. And we tasted Dahongpao as well. The three-day visit quickly came to an end. Although I felt a little tired, I had a great time and learned a lot. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头介绍去武夷山旅游的背景； 第二步，中间分别详细描述三天的行程； 第三步，结尾总结这次旅行。 [亮点词汇] ①convenient方便的 ②exciting令人兴奋的 ③delicious美味的 [高分句型] ①When we reached the top of the mountain, we could see the whole picture of Mount Wuyi, which is very beautiful.（which引导的非限定性定语从句） 16．五一来临，假定你是李华，收到你的英国笔友 Tony 的邮件，得知他想了解你家乡的风土人情并计划来你的家乡游玩。请你根据以下文字给他回邮件，介绍你家乡连云港的风土人情等。 Beautiful Lianyungang Where it is in the north east of Jiangsu... Places to visit Huaguo Mountain Things to do enjoy the seafood.. People&culture friendly..rich... 注意: (1)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数: (2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适 可适当发挥，使文章连贯; (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息. Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear you’ll visit my hometown-Lianyungang. I would like to tell you something about it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear you’ll visit my hometown - Lianyungang. I would like to tell you something about it. Lianyungang is in the northeast of Jiangsu. It’s a beautiful city with rich culture and friendly people. There are many great places to visit. Huaguo Mountain is a must-go. It’s famous for the story of “Journey to the West”. You can enjoy the beautiful natural scenery there. When it comes to things to do, you can’t miss the seafood. The seafood here is really fresh and delicious. You can taste all kinds of seafood in local restaurants. People in Lianyungang are very friendly. They are always ready to help others. The local culture is rich, with many traditional festivals and unique customs. I’m looking forward to seeing you here. You’ll surely have a great time! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，要介绍自己的家乡——连云港； 第二步，介绍连云港的地理位置，著名景点，以及文化及饮食特色等； 第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②all kinds of各种各样 ③look forward to doing期待做 [高分句型] ① When it comes to things to do, you can’t miss the seafood. (when引导的时间状语从句) ② There are many great places to visit. (There be句型) 17．为了保护和宣传闽江，并呼吁大家树立节约用水的意识，学校组织了以“如何节约用水和保护水资源”为主题的春游活动。请你根据以下信息，用英文介绍此次主题活动。 Place Minjiang River Length 562 kilometers Time last Friday People students in Grade 7 and Grade 8 Transportation by bus Activities 1. a speech (演讲) on how to save water in our daily life ... 2. do something useful to protect the river... 3. ... Feelings ... 要求：1. 根据表格提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现除提示词以外的姓名、校名； 4. 词数不少于80词。 To protect Minjiang River and make it known by more people, our school had a spring outing with the theme of “Save Water”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 To protect Minjiang River and make it known by more people, our school had a spring outing with the theme of “Save Water”. Last Friday, students in Grade 7 and 8 took a bus to Minjiang River, which is 562 kilometers long. During the activity, we first listened to a speech about saving water in daily life, such as turning off taps and reusing water. Then, we did something useful to protect the river. Some students picked up litter along the bank, while others handed out leaflets to remind people not to pollute the water. Finally, we discussed more ideas to protect water resources. This trip made us realize the importance of saving water. We learned practical ways to help and felt proud of contributing to environmental protection. Let’s work together to save every drop of water! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动的时间、地点、人物及交通方式等信息； 第二步，介绍具体的活动内容； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①turn off关掉 ②pick up捡起 ③hand out分发 [高分句型] Last Friday, students in Grade 7 and 8 took a bus to Minjiang River, which is 562 kilometers long. (which引导的定语从句) 18．上周六，你参加了学校举行的一次户外活动。请根据以下信息写一篇英语作文，介绍一下本次活动。 A Trip to Mount Xian Time last Saturday Place to meet the school gate (大门) Activities take the school bus climb the mountain, play games watch flowers, be close to (亲近) the nature take photos Feelings tired but happy; a great trip 写作要求： 1.文中须包含表格中的内容提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右。 A Trip to Mount Xian ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Trip to Mount Xian Last Saturday, we went on a school trip to Mount Xian. We met at the school gate at 8:30 a. m. We took the school bus to the foot of Mount Xian. Then, we started to climb the mountain. The air there was fresh, and we were excited to be close to the nature. It took us three hours to arrive at the top of the mountain. At the top of the mountain we watched some beautiful flowers and played games. We took lots of photos along the way. It was tired but happy. What a great trip! It was wonderful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据材料，引出活动； 第二步，介绍具体活动内容； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①go on a school trip进行一次学校旅行 ②start to do sth开始做某事 ③arrive at到达 [高分句型] ①It took us three hours to arrive at the top of the mountain. (it作形式主语) ②What a great trip! (感叹句) 19．假如你是李华，你们学校即将赴常德野生动物世界开展“动物园之旅”研学活动。请你撰写一份活动宣传稿。 内容包括： (1) 描述同学们在动物园里可进行的活动 (至少两个)； (2) 介绍动物园游玩需遵守的规则(至少两个)； (3) 提醒大家遵守规则，注意安全。 要求： (1) 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； (2) 语句连贯，书写规范，适当拓展，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 A trip to the zoo My dear classmates, we will have a trip to Changde Wildlife World next week. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A trip to the zoo My dear classmates, we will have a trip to Changde Wildlife World next week. There are many kinds of animals in the zoo. We can see lions, monkeys, and even elephants. We can watch the tiger show and take some photos. We can also buy some gifts. There will be great fun. But when we visit the zoo, we can’t feed the animals or try to touch them. We must keep away from them. Remember not to make loud noises. That will make them scared. Don’t forget to follow the rules and take care of yourself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时与一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍在动物园里可进行的活动以及需遵守的规则； 第二步，提醒大家遵守规则，注意安全。 [亮点词汇] ①take some photos拍一些照片 ②feed the animals喂动物 ③keep away from远离 [高分句型] ①But when we visit the zoo, we can’t feed the animals or try to touch them.（时间状语从句） ②Don’t forget to follow the rules and take care of yourself.（祈使句） 20．假如你是张华，你的笔友打算到你的家乡来旅游，他想了解沭阳的情况。请根据所给提示，以“My hometown—Shuyang”为题用英语写一篇短文介绍你的家乡。 家乡名称 沭阳 (Shuyang) 要点 是一个非常美丽而现代的城市 城北公园(Chengbei Park) 很著名；有300多年的历史，人们喜欢在公园里放风筝、运动…… 你最喜欢的地方是南山公园 (Nanshan Park)，我们可以野炊、划船…… 你家住在九层的公寓大楼，有一个客厅、一个厨房、一间浴室和三间卧室。最喜欢自己的卧室，因为…… 社区里有很多志愿者，能帮助人们解决各种各样的问题，例如…… 你对家乡和对自己生活的感受（自由发挥1~2点） 要求： 1. 语句通顺、语言规范。 2. 书写工整、标点符号正确。 3. 词数：80词左右。 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。 My hometown—Shuyang _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My hometown—Shuyang Shuyang is a very beautiful and modern city. Chengbei Park is very famous and has a history of over 300 years. People like to fly kites, play sports and have fun in the park. My favorite place is Nanshan Park. We can have a picnic and go rowing there. I live in an apartment building with nine floors. There is a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and three bedrooms. I like my bedroom best because it is very comfortable and I can relax myself there. There are many volunteers in the community. They can help people solve all kinds of problems, such as looking after the old people, helping children with their homework and so on. I love my hometown very much. I also feel lucky to live here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家乡是美丽且现代化的城市，着重介绍城北公园和南山公园； 第二步，描述自己居住的九层公寓楼的内部结构及喜欢卧室的原因； 第三步，讲述社区里有很多能帮助人们解决各种问题的志愿者； 第四步，总结自己对家乡和对自己生活的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①go rowing去划船 ②comfortable舒适的 ③all kinds of各种各种的…… ④help sb with sth在某方面帮助某人 [高分句型] ①There is a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and three bedrooms. (there be句型) ②I like my bedroom best because it is very comfortable and I can relax myself there. (because引导原因状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$