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学科网 www.zxxk.com 让数与学更高效 专题07 应用文写作 经典基础题 (一) (内蒙古集宁一中2023-2024高一下期末试题) 英语课上,同学们就Do smart homesmake lifeeasier?”进行了分组讨论。请你作为小组代表 发言,内容包括: 1. 阐述观点: 2. 说明理由。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 (二) (内蒙古部分名校2023-2024高一下期末联考试题) 你校英文报正在组织征文活动,请你以“TheEducationalValue ofPerformingaPlay”为题写一 篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1培养团队合作精神 2.帮助学生建立自信心和表达情感 3.帮助学生提高语言和非语言沟通技巧 注意: 1写作词数应为80个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 一 学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 参考词汇:非语言的nonverbal The Educational Value of Performing a Play (二) (内蒙占呼伦贝尔市2024-2025高一期末试题) 假定你是李华,你所在的学校即将举行冬日晨跑打卡活动,请你写一封信,邀请交换生Jim 参与此次活动。要点如下: 1. 介绍活动时间. 2.表明活动目的; 3. 说明注意事项。 注意: 1. 词数80词左右,“冬日晨跑打卡”: Winter Morning Run Check-in 2.可活当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim. Yours sincerely. Li Hua 一 学科网 www.zxxk.con 让数与学更高效 (四) (内蒙古赤峰市2022-2023学年高一下期末市级联考试卷) 随着智能手机的普及,许多青少年整天低头玩手机,严重影响了他们的学习、生活和身体健 康,针对这一问题,请你为校报写一篇稿件。内容包括; 1.问题现状; 2沉迷玩手机的副作用 3 具体解决办法。 注意:1写作可数应为100左右 2.可适当发挥,使文章内容连贯。 () (内蒙古自治区赤峰市2024-2025高一期末试题) 假定你是李华,你校学生会需要一批志愿者向到访外宾介绍中国国粹-京剧(PekingOpera)。请 你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括 1你对此活动的认识 2.你对京剧艺术的了解 3.你的个人优势 注意: 1词致80左右: 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 Dear Sir/adam 学科网 www.zxxk.com 让数与学更高效 Yours sincerely Li Hua (六) (内蒙古通辽市第一中学2024-2025高一期末试题) 假定你是李华,你校组织在校留学生于国庆期间游览了长城,而你担任了此次活动的导游。 请你用英语写一篇短文,记述这次游览活动,内容包括: 1. 活动目的;2. 游览过程;3. 大家的感受。 注意:1.词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 优选提升题 () (内蒙古部分学校2023-2024高一期末质检试题) 假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Bruce来中国有一段时间了,但中文的学习一直没有什么进 步,对此他很焦虑。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括; 1.表示理解; 2.分析可能的原因; 一 学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 3.给出建议。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Dear Bruce. Yours. Li Hua 八) (内蒙古自治区巴彦淳尔市2023-2024高一下期末试题) 学校英文报组织同学们分享自已做过的鼓舞人心的善举的故事。请你以此为主题写一篇短 文投稿,内容包括: 1. 事情经过; 2. 收获和感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 An Inspiring Act of Kindness 念学科网 www.zxxk.com 让数与学更离效 (九) (内蒙古鄂尔多斯市西四旗2023-2024高一期末试题) 假定你是李华,你和几位英文爱好者在互联网上建立了一个名叫EasyEnglish的英语学习网 站。请你在校英文报上写一篇短文,向你校学生介绍这个网站。内容包括: 1. 创立网站的目的:2. 网站内容;3. 号召使用。 注意:1. 词数应为100左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 EasyEnglish Is Waiting for You (十) (内蒙古科尔沁左翼中旗实验高级中学2023-2024高一下期末试题) 假定你是李华,从互联网上得知某国外野生动物保护组织正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中 一员,请写一封电子邮件申请加入。内容主要包括: 1. 白我介绍; 2. 申请条件(性格爱好英语能力等): 3. 参加意图(宣传保护动物的重要性): 4. 希望获准。 注意:1词数80左右: 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir/Madam 学科网 www.zxxk.com 让数与学更高效 Yours sincerely Li Hua (十一) (内蒙古自治区乌兰察布市2023-2024高一期末试题) 假定你是李华,你校将要组织一场篮球赛。请给来自美国的交换生Jim写封邮件,邀请他多 赛。内容包括: 1比赛目的 2.比赛安排。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, Yours. Li Hua (十二) / 念学科网 www.zxxk.com 让数与学更高效 (内蒙古名校联盟2023-2024高一下质检试题) 在生活中,家人之间的相处是十分重要的。请你以“HowIGetAlongWithMyParents”为题 向英语校刊投稿,内容包括: 1.阐述与父母相处的重要性 2.谈谈你与父母的相处方式 注意: 1写作词数应为80个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 How I Get Along With My Parents 专题07 应用文写作 （一） （内蒙古集宁一中2023-2024高一下期末试题） 英语课上，同学们就“Do smart homes make life easier?”进行了分组讨论。请你作为小组代表发言，内容包括： 1．阐述观点; 2．说明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Do smart homes make life easier? I think smart homes can make our lives more convenient. In the not-too-distant future, we will be living in smart homes. We will be using advanced technology every day for automatic control of just about everything in our home. In addition, your smart home will be monitoring your health for you every day. Your bed, for example, will record how well you sleep every night. In a word, these smart homes will keep us energetic and provide a more comfortable environment to live in. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以Do smart homes make life easier?为题发表对智能家居的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高级的：advanced→high-level 例如：for example→for instance 总之：in a word→in short 此外：in addition→besides 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：In a word, these smart homes will keep us energetic and provide a more comfortable environment to live in. 拓展句：In a word, these smart homes will provide a more comfortable environment, which can keep us energetic. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I think smart homes can make our lives more convenient. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Your bed, for example, will record how well you sleep every night. (运用了how well引导宾语从句) （二） （内蒙古部分名校2023-2024高一下期末联考试题） 你校英文报正在组织征文活动，请你以“The Educational Value of Performing a Play”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.培养团队合作精神； 2.帮助学生建立自信心和表达情感； 3.帮助学生提高语言和非语言沟通技巧。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇:非语言的 nonverbal The Educational Value of Performing a Play _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Educational Value of Performing a Play Performing a play is a powerful educational tool that cultivates teamwork. Students must cooperate closely, learning to rely on one another to achieve a common goal. This process not only strengthens their social skills but also team work spirit. Additionally, participating in a play is a confidence booster for students. As they step into their characters, they learn to express a range of emotions, which in turn helps them to become more confident. Overcoming stage fright and delivering lines are significant steps in personal growth. Lastly, performing a play is an excellent way to improve verbal and nonverbal communication skills. It requires students to express clearly and use gestures and facial expressions to enhance their message. This approach to communication is invaluable in developing well-rounded individuals. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报正在组织征文活动，要求考生以“The Educational Value of Performing a Play”为题写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 强大的：powerful→strong 培养：cultivate→develop 参加：participate in→take part in 重要的：significant→vital 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Students must cooperate closely, learning to rely on one another to achieve a common goal. This process not only strengthens their social skills but also team work spirit. 拓展句：Students must cooperate closely, learning to rely on one another to achieve a common goal, during which not only strengthens their social skills but also team work spirit. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Performing a play is a powerful educational tool that cultivates teamwork. (运用了动名词作主语) [高分句型2] As they step into their characters, they learn to express a range of emotions, which in turn helps them to become more confident. (运用了as引导时间状语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句) （三） （内蒙古呼伦贝尔市2024-2025高一期末试题） 假定你是李华，你所在的学校即将举行冬日晨跑打卡活动，请你写一封信，邀请交换生Jim参与此次活动。要点如下： 1. 介绍活动时间； 2. 表明活动目的； 3. 说明注意事项。 注意： 1. 词数80词左右；“冬日晨跑打卡”： Winter Morning Run Check-in 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, Our school is going to hold a Winter Morning Run Check-in Activity. It will start at daybreak next Monday. The purpose of this activity is to encourage students to keep fit and embrace the cold winter with enthusiasm. We know you are an enthusiastic runner, so we sincerely hope you can join us. When running, you are supposed to wear properly and do remember to warm up timely. Plus, your running postures counts a lot in the process. Looking forward to your participation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Jim写封邀请信，邀请他参加学校举行的冬日晨跑打卡活动，告知活动时间，活动目的以及注意事项。 【详解】1.词汇积累 举办/组织：hold→organize 开始：start→begin 目的：purpose→aim 保持健康：keep fit→keep healthy 热情：enthusiasm→passion 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句： Our school is going to hold a Winter Morning Run Check-in Activity. It will start at daybreak next Monday. 拓展句： Our school is going to hold a Winter Morning Run Check-in Activity, which will start at daybreak next Monday. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We know you are an enthusiastic runner, so we sincerely hope you can join us.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句“you are an enthusiastic runner”） 【高分句型2】When running, you are supposed to wear properly and do remember to warm up timely.（“When running”为状语从句的省略） （四） （内蒙古赤峰市2022-2023学年高一下期末市级联考试卷） 随着智能手机的普及，许多青少年整天低头玩手机，严重影响了他们的学习、生活和身体健康，针对这一问题，请你为校报写一篇稿件。内容包括： 1.问题现状； 2.沉迷玩手机的副作用； 3 具体解决办法。 注意：1写作可数应为100左右； 2.可适当发挥，使文章内容连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Nowadays, an increasing number of teenagers have their own mobile phones and some of them are addicted to playing with mobile phones. There is no doubt that playing with mobile phones too much not only makes it hard to concentrate on their lessons but also does harm to their physical and mental health. Therefore, it is high time that we should take some measures to solve the problem. Firstly, school should strictly forbid students to bring mobile phones to school. Secondly, parents should limit the time that they spend using the mobile phones. Last but not least, the students should be aware of the negative impact of the mobile phones on their life and learn to use mobile phones properly. I firmly believe that as long as we are determined to deal with the problem, the problem will be greatly improved. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。随着智能手机的普及，许多青少年整天低头玩手机，严重影响了他们的学习、生活和身体健康，针对这一问题，请你为校报写一篇稿件。内容包括：1.问题现状；2.沉迷玩手机的副作用；3 具体解决办法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 集中：concentrate on→focus on 对……有害：do harm to→be harmful to 因此：therefore→as a result 此外：secondly→what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Nowadays, an increasing number of teenagers have their own mobile phones and some of them are addicted to playing with mobile phones. 拓展句：Nowadays, an increasing number of teenagers, some of whom are addicted to playing with mobile phones, have their own mobile phones. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 There is no doubt that playing with mobile phones too much not only makes it hard to concentrate on their lessons but also does harm to their physical and mental health. (运用了固定句型，that引导同位语从句) 【高分句型2】Therefore, it is high time that we should take some measures to solve the problem. (运用了虚拟语气) （五） （内蒙古自治区赤峰市2024-2025高一期末试题） 假定你是李华,你校学生会需要一批志愿者向到访外宾介绍中国国粹-京剧(Peking Opera)。请你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括: 1.你对此活动的认识； 2.你对京剧艺术的了解； 3.你的个人优势； 注意： 1.词致80左右； 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir/Madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely. Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’ve learned some foreigners are coming for a visit and the Students’ Union needs some volunteers to introduce the traditional Chinese art Peking Opera. I’m writing to apply for this position. This visit will not only be a rare opportunity to promote Chinese culture but also will create a platform for students to practice oral English. In addition, with several years of learning experience in Peking Opera, I have a good knowledge of it, including types of roles, facial makeup and musical instruments, which offers me an edge over others. I am looking forward to your early reply. Your consideration will be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写一封申请信，向校学生会申请作为志愿者为到访外宾介绍中国国粹——京剧(Peking Opera)。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 1、你对此活动的认识； 2.你对京剧艺术的了解； 3.你的个人优势； 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） need some volunteers, apply for ,not only...but also..., promote Chinese culture, create a platform,have a good knowledge of , look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1.I’ve learned some foreigners are coming for a visit and the Students’ Union needs some volunteers to introduce the traditional Chinese art Peking Opera. 2.I’m writing to apply for this position. 3.This visit will not only be a rare opportunity to promote Chinese culture but also will create a platform for students to practice oral English. 4. I have a good knowledge of it. 5.I am looking forward to your early reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表并列补充关系： In addition 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1] This visit will not only be a rare opportunity to promote Chinese culture but also will create a platform for students to practice oral English.（运用了not only...but also...的结构） [高分句型2] In addition,with several years of learning experience in Peking Opera, I have a good knowledge of it, including types of roles, facial makeup and musical instruments, which offers me an edge over others.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） （六） （内蒙古通辽市第一中学2024-2025高一期末试题） 假定你是李华，你校组织在校留学生于国庆期间游览了长城，而你担任了此次活动的导游。请你用英语写一篇短文，记述这次游览活动，内容包括： 1. 活动目的；2. 游览过程；3. 大家的感受。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 During the National Day holiday our school organised a visit to the Great Wall, whose purpose was to help the foreign students in our school enjoy the beautiful scenery in China. The moment we got there by school bus, we couldn’t wait to climb it. Seeing this fantastic man-made wonder, the foreign students couldn’t help speaking highly of the building techniques of ancient Chinese people. As the tour guide, I told them some stories about the Great Wall, which aroused their interest. Having spent about three hours getting to the highest section, we were tired but happy. The visit left a deep impression on the foreign students and I feel proud of the great wisdom of Chinese people. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文。要求考生用英语写一篇短文，记述国庆期间游览长城的游览活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助：help→assist 告诉某人某事：tell sb. sth.→inform sb. of sth. 劳累的：tired→exhausted 为……感到骄傲：feel proud of→take pride in 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Seeing this fantastic man-made wonder, the foreign students couldn’t help speaking highly of the building techniques of ancient Chinese people. 拓展句：When the foreign students saw this fantastic man-made wonder, they couldn’t help speaking highly of the building techniques of ancient Chinese people. 【点睛】[高分句型1] During the National Day holiday our school organised a visit to the Great Wall, whose purpose was to help the foreign students in our school enjoy the beautiful scenery in China.（运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] The moment we got there by school bus, we couldn’t wait to climb it.（运用了The moment引导时间状语从句） （七） （内蒙古部分学校2023-2024高一期末质检试题） 假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Bruce来中国有一段时间了，但中文的学习一直没有什么进步，对此他很焦虑。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示理解； 2. 分析可能的原因； 3. 给出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Bruce, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Bruce, I’m sorry to hear that you feel anxious about your Chinese learning. I can understand your feelings. Learning a new language in a foreign country is really a huge challenge, especially when facing high academic pressure. Chinese is quite different from English, so you can be lack of efficient learning methods. In addition, language learning requires patience and perseverance, and it’s normal to have ups and downs along the way. Here are some tips for you. Firstly, make a lot of Chinese friends and practice Chinese as much as possible. If necessary, turn to your teachers, who are sure to give you some professional guidance. Finally, don’t be afraid to make mistakes and stay positive all the time. I hope the suggestions will be beneficial to you and wait for your good news. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Bruce写一封邮件，对于他中文学习一直没有什么进步而感到很焦虑表示理解、分析可能的原因并给出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 大的：huge→big 此外：in addition→ what’s more 向……求助：turn to→ask help for 最后：finally→in the end 2.句式拓展 并列句变复合句 原句：Chinese is quite different from English, so you can be lack of efficient learning methods. 拓展句：Chinese is so different from English that you can be lack of efficient learning methods. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you feel anxious about your Chinese learning.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Learning a new language in a foreign country is really a huge challenge, especially when facing high academic pressure.（运用了状语从句的省略） 【高分句型3】If necessary, turn to your teachers, who are sure to give you some professional guidance.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） （八） （内蒙古自治区巴彦淖尔市2023-2024高一下期末试题） 学校英文报组织同学们分享自己做过的鼓舞人心的善举的故事。请你以此为主题写一篇 短文投稿, 内容包括： 1. 事情经过； 2. 收获和感受。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 An Inspiring Act of Kindness _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 An Inspiring Act of Kindness Last Friday, on my way home from school, I came across a little boy in tears. He had lost his way after school. Without a second thought, I decided to help him. We found a nearby store where the kind shopkeeper let us use the phone to call his parents. It wasn’t long before they arrived, feeling relieved and grateful. This experience taught me that even the simplest act of kindness can have a profound impact. I felt a deep sense of joy and accomplishment, knowing that I had made a difference in someone’s life. 【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求分享自己做过的鼓舞人心的善举，写篇短文进行投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 偶遇：come across→run into 决定做：decide to do→be determined to do 帮助某人：help sb→give sb a hand 影响：impact→influence 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last Friday, on my way home from school, I came across a little boy in tears. 拓展句：Last Friday, on my way home from school, I came across a little boy who was in tears. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We found a nearby store where the kind shopkeeper let us use the phone to call his parents.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】This experience taught me that even the simplest act of kindness can have a profound impact.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） （九） （内蒙古鄂尔多斯市西四旗2023-2024高一期末试题） 假定你是李华，你和几位英文爱好者在互联网上建立了一个名叫EasyEnglish的英语学习网站。请你在校英文报上写一篇短文，向你校学生介绍这个网站。内容包括： 1. 创立网站的目的；2. 网站内容；3. 号召使用。 注意：1. 词数应为 100 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 EasyEnglish Is Waiting for You _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 EasyEnglish Is Waiting for You As everyone highlights the importance of English, we have founded this website - www. easyenglish. com-- to boost your taste for English learning. Various English materials are available here, like English exercises, foreign cultures, English novels, etc. Not only can you dive into the ocean of foreign classics, but you can also enjoy chatting in English to improve your oral English. Furthermore, if you’d like to exchange ideas about your English writings and learning experiences, this website is a perfect choice. Meanwhile, your English can get improved by corrections and practical advice from others. Hopefully our website can be beneficial to your English study. Everyone is welcome to our website and your advice for any improvement will be greatly appreciated. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生在校英文报上写一篇短文，向你校学生介绍你和几位英文爱好者在互联网上建立的一个名叫EasyEnglish的英语学习网站。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 强调：highlight→emphasize 各种各样的：various→all kinds of 此外：furthermore→besides 选择：choice→option 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Various English materials are available here, like English exercises, foreign cultures, English novels, etc. 拓展句：Various English materials, which include English exercises, foreign cultures, English novels, etc. are available here. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As everyone highlights the importance of English, we have founded this website — www.easyenglish.com — to boost your taste for English learning. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句) [高分句型2] Furthermore, if you’d like to compare notes on your English writings and learning experiences, this website is a good choice. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) （十） （内蒙古科尔沁左翼中旗实验高级中学2023-2024高一下期末试题） 假定你是李华，从互联网上得知某国外野生动物保护组织正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员，请写一封电子邮件申请加入。内容主要包括： 1. 自我介绍； 2. 申请条件（性格爱好英语能力等）； 3. 参加意图（宣传保护动物的重要性）； 4. 希望获准。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir/Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I have read the announcement that you posted on the Internet. I would like to work for you as a volunteer. The reasons can be listed as follows. First, I like animals and I know a lot about wild animals by reading books and watching videos. Besides, I’m easy-going and I can get along with others easily. What’s more, I can speak fluent English so that I can communicate with others freely. My purpose is to make more people realize the importance of protecting wild animals. Only in this way can we protect the animals better. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. I am looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，从互联网上得知某国外野生动物保护组织正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员，请写一封电子邮件申请加入。 【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 自我介绍；2. 申请条件(性格爱好英语能力等)；3. 参加意图（宣传保护动物的重要性）；4. 希望获准。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有： read the announcement，as a volunteer，reasons，as follows，know a lot about，easy-going，get along with，speak fluent English，so that，communicate with，realize the importance of protecting wild animals，take my application into consideration，look forward to，Only in this way can we protect the animals better.可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I have read the announcement that you posted on the Internet.这句话运用了that引导的定语从句；What’s more, I can speak fluent English so that I can communicate with others freely.这句话运用了so that引导的目的状语从句；使用了倒装句：Only in this way can we protect the animals better.使用了一些固定词组，如：as follows，get along with，application into consideration，look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 （十一） （内蒙古自治区乌兰察布市2023-2024高一期末试题） 假定你是李华，你校将要组织一场篮球赛。请给来自美国的交换生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参赛。内容包括： 1. 比赛目的； 2. 比赛安排。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, How’s everything going? I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s basketball match. Knowing that you’re really into playing basketball, I think this match is just perfect for you. The match, which is scheduled to be held in the school stadium, will start at 4:20 this Friday afternoon and last about 1 hour. With the aim of making our school life more colorful, attracting more students to take part in the sports and building up students’ body, the match will be full of fun and I’m sure you will enjoy yourself there. Would you like to join us? Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生给来自美国的交换生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参加学校组织的篮球赛，需告知他比赛目的，向他介绍比赛安排。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参加：join in→take part in, participate in 举办：hold→host 开始：start→begin 目的：aim→purpose, objective 充满：be full of→be filled with 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：With the aim of making our school life more colorful, attracting more students to take part in the sports and building up students’ body, the match will be full of fun and I’m sure you will enjoy yourself there. 拓展句：In order to make our school life more colorful, attract more students to take part in the sports and build up students’ body, the match will be full of fun and I’m sure you will enjoy yourself there. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you’re really into playing basketball, I think this match is just perfect for you. (运用了现在分词短语Knowing…作状语、that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] The match, which is scheduled to be held in the school stadium, will start at 4:20 this Friday afternoon and last about 1 hour. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) （十二） （内蒙古名校联盟2023-2024高一下质检试题） 在生活中，家人之间的相处是十分重要的。请你以“How I Get Along With My Parents”为题，向英语校刊投稿，内容包括： 1.阐述与父母相处的重要性； 2.谈谈你与父母的相处方式。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 How I Get Along With My Parents ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How I Get Along With My Parents Getting along well with parents, which is crucial for a happy family life, can lead to better communication and understanding. To achieve this, I show respect to my parents and listen to their advice. We often spend time together, sharing our daily experiences. When there is a problem, we discuss it openly and honestly. Additionally, I help with household chores to show my appreciation. This way, we build a strong bond and maintain a harmonious home. By valuing and respecting each other, we create a supportive and loving family environment. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生关于如何与父母相处向英语校刊投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 至关重要的：crucial→essential 实现：achieve→realize 真诚地：honestly→truthfully 此外：Additionally→Furthermore 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Additionally, I help with household chores to show my appreciation. 同义句：Moreover, I assist with domestic tasks as a gesture of gratitude. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Getting along well with parents, which is crucial for a happy family life, can lead to better communication and understanding. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】When there is a problem, we discuss it openly and honestly. (运用了When引导的时间状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！2 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$