读后续写 初中难忘时刻故事续写 讲义 河南省濮阳市第一高级中学2024-2025学年高一下学期4月期中考试英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I always love going to school as I can meet my friends and learn from my teachers. Everyone has an unforgettable moment in their school life and mine was in junior middle school. That day started as usual. I woke up, got ready and went to school, where I first met my friends and then we were required to gather for the daily get-together. After that, we went to our respective classes. I went to my classroom as well and settled down as usual, greeting my classmates and waiting for the teacher to arrive. It was a chemistry class and the teacher asked us to go to the laboratory to conduct a long-anticipated experiment. I took my stuff and was ready to leave the classroom when I felt sharp pain in my stomach. I sat down for a while, with hands rubbing my stomach. I was waiting for the pain to go off by itself. However, it was in vain. The pain still remained. Unfortunately, all of my friends had gone except the class monitor, the one I had never thought to make friends with. But anyway, I called him and informed him of my condition, asking him to help me contact my parents. Noticing my trembling voice and begging eyesight, he agreed instantly and went to contact my parents without any hesitation. On his departure, I realized that things were getting worse. Beads of sweat dropping off my paleface, I had to lean against the desk to ease the severe pain without realizing I suddenly vomited (呕吐). Everything around me was in a total mess, including myself. At that point, I thought my life was over and was scared of all the mean words to be said by my classmates and schoolmates. At that embarrassing moment, the class monitor came back. Obviously, he knew my dilemma. I was frozen with pain on the spot, maybe awkwardness, to be accurate. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 However, he considerately helped me to go to the toilet. _________________________________________________________________ After fully recovering from the food poisoning, I returned to school. _________________________________________________________________ 初中难忘时刻故事续写 续写分析（两段）​ 第一段：“However, he considerately helped me to go to the toilet.” 承接上文尴尬困境，以 “considerately” 一词凸显班长善良体贴的品质。“Holding my arm firmly”“supported...step by step” 等动作描写，生动展现班长帮助 “我” 时的细致与耐心；“patiently cleaned”“helped me wash up” 进一步体现他的无私付出。“assisted”“kept comforting” 等表述，将班长从协助送医到持续安慰的过程完整呈现，为 “我” 得到及时救治做铺垫，突出其关键作用 。​ 第二段：“After fully recovering from the food poisoning, I returned to school.” 自然过渡到康复返校阶段。“filled with gratitude” 直接点明 “我” 的情感变化，“sincerely thanked” 强化感激之情。“To my surprise” 转折，展现班长的谦逊，推动两人关系发展。“became good friends”“realized...kind heart is the most important thing” 等语句，将故事从单纯的帮助事件升华为对人际交往的思考，结尾 “taught me to never judge others” 点明主旨，使故事内涵得到深化 。​ 故事线​ “我” 热爱上学，初中时的一天，像往常一样到校参加日常集会后去教室准备上化学课，老师要求去实验室做实验。​ 临出发时，“我” 突然胃痛，尝试等待疼痛缓解无果，此时教室里只剩班长，“我” 请求他帮忙联系父母，他立刻答应。​ 班长离开后，“我” 病情加重，出现呕吐，场面一片混乱，尴尬又害怕。关键时刻班长返回。​ 班长体贴地扶 “我” 去厕所，耐心清理脏乱，父母到来后，他协助将 “我” 送往医院，途中不断安慰 “我”，最终 “我” 被诊断为食物中毒并得到妥善治疗 。 食物中毒痊愈后，“我” 回到学校，怀着感激之情向班长真诚道谢，班长谦逊回应，此后我们成为好朋友。​ 这段经历让 “我” 明白不能以貌取人，要珍惜身边的温暖与善意，深刻改变了 “我” 对他人的认知 。​ 短语​ considerately help 体贴地帮助​ hold one's arm firmly 紧紧扶住某人的手臂​ step by step 一步一步地​ clean up 清理​ assist in doing sth. 协助做某事​ be filled with gratitude 充满感激​ judge by first impression 以第一印象判断​ cherish the warmth 珍惜温暖​ 主旨升华句​ In the tapestry of life, unexpected acts of kindness from those we least expect can weave the most beautiful threads, teaching us that true worth lies not in appearances but in the heart.​ 在生活的织锦中，那些最意想不到的人给予的意外善意，能编织出最美丽的丝线，让我们明白真正的价值不在于外表，而在于内心。​ Just as a gentle breeze can turn a stormy sea calm, a simple act of kindness in a moment of distress can transform our perception of others and open the door to lasting friendships.​ 正如微风能让波涛汹涌的海面平静下来，困境中一个简单的善举可以改变我们对他人的看法，为持久的友谊打开大门。​ Our initial judgments are often like fog, obscuring the true beauty of others' characters. It's through shared experiences and acts of kindness that the sun of understanding breaks through, revealing the warmth within.​ 我们最初的判断往往像迷雾，遮蔽了他人性格的真正美好。正是通过共同经历和善行，理解的阳光才会穿透迷雾，展现出内心的温暖。​ In the classroom of life, the most valuable lessons are not found in textbooks but in the kindness of others, which teaches us to look beyond the surface and embrace the richness of human connection.​ 在生活的课堂里，最宝贵的教训不在课本中，而在他人的善意里，它教会我们超越表面，拥抱人与人之间丰富的情感联结。​ A moment of vulnerability can be the bridge that connects hearts, turning strangers into friends and reminding us that in the journey of life, kindness is the compass that guides us to meaningful relationships.​ 一次脆弱的时刻可以成为连接心灵的桥梁，让陌生人变成朋友，也提醒我们在人生旅途中，善良是指引我们走向有意义人际关系的指南针。​ 写作示范​ 示范一​ However, he considerately helped me to go to the toilet. His strong arm wrapped around my waist, providing sturdy support as we shuffled towards the restroom. Inside, he fetched wet towels and gently wiped away the mess, his movements as careful as if handling fragile porcelain. When the ambulance arrived, he accompanied me, holding my hand tightly and reassuring me with a soft voice. Thanks to his unwavering presence, I felt less afraid during the scary ordeal.​ After fully recovering from the food poisoning, I returned to school. I approached the class monitor with a handmade thank - you card. His eyes widened in surprise as he accepted it, a shy smile spreading across his face. From that day on, we ate lunch together and shared stories. I learned that kindness has no boundaries, and the most unexpected people can become our closest allies, teaching us to always keep an open heart.​ 示范二​ However, he considerately helped me to go to the toilet. Without a hint of disgust, he supported my trembling body, his gaze filled with concern. He cleaned up the mess, then fetched a glass of water to help me rinse my mouth. When my parents rushed in, he calmly explained the situation. During the hospital trip, he stayed by my side, sharing funny school anecdotes to distract me from the pain. His actions were a beacon of hope in my darkest moment.​ After fully recovering from the food poisoning, I returned to school. I couldn't wait to express my gratitude. I gifted him a box of his favorite snacks and a heartfelt note. He was touched, and our friendship blossomed from that day forward. This experience taught me that kindness can turn a stranger into a lifelong friend, and appearances are never a true measure of a person's character.​ 【答案】参考范文： However, he considerately helped me to go to the toilet. He then advised me to wash up in the toilet while waiting for my parents’ arrival. Meanwhile, he even tried to comfort me and promised he would clean the classroom so that there was no need for me to feel embarrassed. Tears were welling up in my eyes, dripping down into my mouth and tasting like a mixture of embarrassment and gratitude. Shortly after that, my parents arrived. Having known everything from the class monitor, they took me to the hospital immediately. It turned out that I had food poisoning. After fully recovering from the food poisoning, I returned to school. Instead of trying to cover everything up, I shared what had happened to me publicly in front of my classmates and teachers, extending my parents’ and my own heartfelt gratitude not only for the class monitor’s generous assistance but also for his kind consideration. Without his timely help, I wouldn’t have recovered in such a short time. I now clearly know that he is the one that I should make friends with. After all, a friend in need is a friend indeed. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$