内容正文:
写作
假如你是高二学生李华,你感到新作文题型“读后续写”(continuation writing)颇具挑战,请写信向你的外教老师 Alex 求助。
内容包括:1.说明困难;
2.请求帮助。
写作要求:1.词数80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
向亚历克斯求助读后续写的信
文本主旨
这封信件是高二学生李华向外教老师 Alex 表达在应对新作文题型 “读后续写” 时遇到困难并寻求帮助。信中先直接表明写信目的,随后具体阐述在情节构思、语言运用和时间把控三个方面的困难,最后诚恳地请求老师提供策略和建议,希望借助老师的指导攻克难题,体现出学生积极寻求提升写作能力的态度 。
高频词汇
continuation writing 读后续写
challenging 具有挑战性的
plot 情节
language 语言
strategies 策略
advice 建议
guidance 指导
help 帮助
短语
seek one's help 寻求某人的帮助
struggle to do sth. 努力做某事;挣扎着做某事
fit the given story 符合给定的故事
express ideas 表达想法
run out of time 时间不够;用完时间
deal with 处理;应对
offer advice 提供建议
be of great help 非常有帮助
writing task 写作任务
a big headache 令人头痛的事
佳句
Like a lost ship navigating through stormy seas, I find myself adrift in the vast ocean of continuation writing, desperately seeking the lighthouse of guidance to lead me to safe shores.
如同在暴风雨中迷失方向的船只,我在 “读后续写” 的茫茫大海中漂泊,急切地寻找指引我驶向安全彼岸的灯塔。
Continuation writing, with its unique requirements, is like a complex puzzle, and I’m struggling to fit the pieces of plot, language, and time together to form a complete and beautiful picture.
读后续写以其独特的要求,宛如一个复杂的拼图,而我正努力将情节、语言和时间的碎片拼凑成一幅完整而美丽的画面。
The challenges of continuation writing loom large before me, like mountains blocking my path. I earnestly hope your wisdom can be the pickaxe that helps me break through these barriers.
读后续写的挑战在我面前如高山耸立,阻挡着我的道路。我真诚地希望您的智慧能成为帮助我突破这些障碍的镐斧。
In the garden of writing, continuation writing is a tricky plant that I find hard to nurture. I long for your expert hands to teach me the secrets of making it thrive.
在写作的花园里,读后续写是一株难以培育的棘手植物。我渴望您那双专业的手,教我让它茁壮成长的秘诀。
Just as a traveler needs a map to explore unknown lands, I’m in dire need of your strategies and advice to navigate the uncharted territory of continuation writing.
正如旅行者需要地图探索未知之地,我迫切需要您的策略和建议,来探索读后续写这片未知的领域。
写作示范
示范一
Dear Alex,
I’m writing to pour out my troubles with continuation writing. It’s like a formidable fortress I can’t breach. When I start, I’m at a loss about how to develop a coherent plot that seamlessly connects with the original story. Moreover, translating my thoughts into vivid English expressions seems an insurmountable challenge. Time management is another foe, as I often end up rushing through the writing. I’m in desperate need of your expertise. Could you share some tips on brainstorming ideas, enriching vocabulary use, and managing time effectively? I’m eagerly awaiting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Alex,
I’m truly in a bind with the continuation writing task. Every time I face it, I feel as if I’m stepping into a maze without an exit. Concocting a logical and interesting plot feels like searching for a needle in a haystack. And when it comes to using appropriate language, I stumble and fumble. What’s worse, the ticking clock adds to my anxiety, leaving me flustered. I’d be extremely grateful if you could hold a workshop or give me some personalized guidance. Your help would be a beacon of hope in my writing struggle.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Alex,
The continuation writing has become a mountain of difficulties for me. I’m constantly grappling with forming a plot that not only makes sense but also grabs the reader’s attention. The right words seem to elude me, making my writing dull and unappealing. And the limited time always puts me under great pressure. I’ve tried many methods, but nothing seems to work. I’m turning to you, my trusted teacher. Would you mind sharing some successful examples and analysis? I firmly believe your advice will light up my way to mastering this challenging writing form.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Alex,
Confronted with the new type of test called “continuation writing”, so bewildered do I feel that I am writing in no time to request your professional and practical guidance, as you are exceptionally experienced in essay writing.
For one thing, I feel it rather demanding to analyze the reading text accurately, let alone complete an impressive composition in such a limited time during an examination. For another, a shortage of vivid expressions to describe actions, feelings and surroundings undoubtedly becomes an enormous obstacle for me. Therefore, I’m in dire need of your assistance and advice.
I’d appreciate it if you could burden yourself with my trouble and lend me a helping hand. Hopefully, blessed with your expert guidance, I could make more progress. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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