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读后续写微技能-情绪描写
by April
Learn to write about
emotion in Continuation Writing
Leading in:How many emotions can you find from the video?
What are they?
How many emotions can you find from the video?
What are they?
1.This family is happy.
2.The little girl is sad, because she can’t play outside.
3.The girl is upset because she failed an exam.
4.The boy feels excited because he won the competition.
5.The girl is afraid of the dog.
Today, we are going to…
learn about words of four emotions
learn how to write sentences to express emotions
try to describe a person’s feelings according to the context
读后续写真题统计
年份 主题语境 主旨大意 情节线(借助他人他物) 情感线
2016.10浙江卷 人与自然 丛林逃生 夫妇森林旅游争执,女主人迷路,想起丈夫曾经的爱后悔,找到一个地方先睡下,第二天跟着河水来到空地,救援队及时赶到。 害怕→后悔→开心
2017.06浙江卷 人与自然 狼口脱险 用辣椒喷雾器(文章有提示)暂退狼,然后路人甲及时援助。 害怕→喜出望外→
害怕→开心
2018.06浙江卷 人与自然 父子骑马寻路 先父亲安慰我,然后我们看到小河后寻路回家。 害怕→镇定→开心
2020.07浙江卷 人与自然 人熊大战 用辣椒喷雾器(文章有提示)暂退熊,然后救援队及时援助。 害怕→镇定→开心
2017.10浙江卷 人与社会 健忘妈妈旅行记 用自己带的帐篷来野营露宿。 困惑→开心
2020.01浙江卷 人与社会 为狗找伴 父母买来小狗,孩子回家后,看到两只狗彼此陪伴和陪伴父母,明白道理。 难过→欣慰
2020.07山东卷 人与社会 助贫创业 一家决定和被救助孩子卖爆米花,路人纷纷购买。 同情→开心与感恩
2021.6新高考全国I卷 人与自我 母亲节惊喜 双胞胎在爸爸的帮助下,重新做了早餐。 失望→开心与感动
→自豪
Complete the table
形容词 副词 名词
喜 delighted
happy
怒 angry
irritated
哀 sad
depressed
惧 fearful
frightened
delightedly
delight
happily
happiness
sadness
sadly
depression
depressedly
fear
fearfully
frightenedly
fright
anger
angrily
irritation
irritatedly
Complete the table
形容词 副词 名词
喜 delighted
happy
怒 angry
irritated
哀 sad
depressed
惧 fearful
frightened
delightedly
delight
happily
happiness
sadness
sadly
depression
depressedly
fear
fearfully
frightenedly
fright
anger
angrily
irritation
irritatedly
How to express feelings with adjectives?
I felt shocked when I heard the horrible news.
We were that the plane would crash.
我们害怕飞机会坠毁。
I was that you won the first prize.
我很高兴你获得了一等奖。
She was by their warm welcome.
她对他们的热烈欢迎十分感动。
主系表(形容词)……
frightened
delighted
touched
How to express feelings with nouns?
1. My heart was filled with fear.
2. I felt a great sense of fear welling up in my heart and surging through me.
我感到一股强烈的害怕的感觉在内心升腾、奔涌。
情绪名词
情绪名词
Facial expression
Body language
1.She wears a shining .
她面带微笑
2.They for joy in the party last night.
他们在昨天的派对上开心得手舞足蹈。
喜:1.面带微笑
2.手舞足蹈
smile
danced/ jumped
wear a shining smile
dance/jump for joy
怒:1.咬牙切齿
2.跺脚
gnash one’s teeth
stomp
The woman gnashed her teeth and stomped out of the room angrily.
这位女士气得咬牙切齿然后跺脚走出了房间。
1.眼泪顺着他的脸颊留了下来。
2.She burst into tears and ran our of the room.
哀:1.突然大哭
2.眼泪从某人脸颊流下来
burst into tears
Tears rolled down one’s cheeks.
Tears rolled down his cheeks.
她突然大哭冲出了房间。
她的脸色苍白,双手颤抖。
惧:1.颤抖
2.脸色苍白
one’s face went pale
tremble
Her face went pale and her hands trembled.
喜:1.面带微笑
2.手舞足蹈
怒:1.咬牙切齿
2.跺脚
哀:1.突然大哭
2.眼泪从某人脸颊流下来
惧:1.颤抖
2.脸色苍白
wear a shining smile
dance/jump for joy
gnash one’s teeth
stomp
burst into tears
Tears rolled down one’s cheeks.
one’s face went pale
tremble
1.They danced for joy in the party last night.
2.Her face went white and her hands trembled.
3.She burst into tears and ran our of the room.
4.The woman gnashed her teeth and stomped out of the room angrily.
happy
angry
frightened
sad
feelings
actions
Use actions to describe the feelings:match
2
1
3
4
使用句子描述下列图片的情绪
Write about the mom’s or kids’ emotions to match the plots.
One day, the kids made a mess in the room. Suddenly their mom came.
Their mother criticized the kids and punished them.
After receiving the apology and seeing their change, their mom
……
1
2
3
When their mom saw the mess, she ganshed her teeth angrily. The kids felt a great sense of fright welling up and surging through them.
After that, the kids felt very sorry and tears rolled down from their cheeks.
was very gratified and her heart was filled with warmth and delight.
Summary
adj facial expression/body language
喜 delighted 面带微笑
happy 手舞足蹈
怒 angry 咬牙切齿
irritated 跺脚
哀 sad 突然大哭
depressed 眼泪从某人脸颊滑落
惧 fearful 脸色苍白
frightened 颤抖
wear a shining smile
dance/jump for joy
gnash one’s teeth
stomp
burst into tears
Tears rolled down one’s cheeks.
tremble
one’s face went pale
Class testing
Homework
1.Make a mind map about the expressions of the four emotions
2.Find out more expressions which can be used in our continuation writing
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