读后续写-心情动作风景思路 清单-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

高考读后续写冲刺练习 情绪描写 高兴、喜悦、笑 be happy/delighted/overjoyed; be over the moon欣喜若狂with delight/joy/pleasure高兴地 with a smile on one’s lips 嘴角带着笑容in a good/bad mood心情好/坏 to one’s satisfaction令某人满意的是wear a bright/shining smile on one’s face 脸上露出灿烂的笑容 grin from ear to ear 咧嘴笑 burst into laughter/burst out laughing突然大笑jump to one’s feet/jump up and down 高兴地跳起来 兴奋、激动 be thrilled/excited兴奋地 with a surge/rush of excitement 一阵兴奋/激动之情 a surge/rush of excitement flood/sweep over sb 一阵激动之情涌上我的心头 couldn’t resist the excitement in his heart难以抑制内心的激动 伤心、哭 be sad/sorrowful/frustrated/depressed/down/heartbroken伤心地 with tears welling up in her eyes 眼泪涌上了我的眼睛with tears blurring my eyes眼泪模糊了我的眼睛in tears掉泪 in low spirits情绪低落 struggled to hold/fight back tears试图抑制住眼泪 start to cry开始哭 burst into tears/burst out crying/couldn’t help crying突然大哭wipe away one’s tears擦泪 生气 be angry/furious/mad at sth对某事生气 be filled with anger/fury满腔怒火 be in a temper/lose one’s temper发脾气 with a long face面色难看 with anger/rage愤怒地 explode with anger气到爆炸 flush with anger气得涨红了脸 stamp one’s feet跺脚 glare at sb怒视某人 contain one’s anger抑制某人的愤怒 惊讶 be surprised/astonished/amazed/shocked at sth/to do sth惊讶 with astonishment/ /in shock to one’s surprise/astonishment/amazement/shock令某人惊讶的是… What surprised/amazed/astonished/shocked sb most is…最让某人惊讶的是… He couldn’t/hardly believe …他难以相信… 害怕 be scared/frightened of sth/to do sth害怕 be shaking/trembling/shivering with fear吓得发抖 be frozen with fear/terror 吓得浑身僵直in fear/fright/terror/horror/panic惊恐地My mind was blank.我的脑子一片空白 感激、感动 be moved to tears被感动到流泪in/with relief如释重负 with a surge of relief一阵如释重负的轻松感 to one’s relief令某人欣慰的是… move/touch sb deeply深深地感动了某人 shed tears of gratitude留下感激的泪水hugged sb tightly/firmly紧紧拥抱某人 express/convey sincere appreciation/gratitude, thank sb from the bottom of one’s heart从心底感激某人 失望 be disappointed at/in sth; feel disappointed; with/show disappointment 绝望 be desperate/hopeless; in/with despair; desperately 焦虑 be/feel anxious/worried about sth; be stressed out; with anxiety; suffer from anxiety 紧张 be/feel nervous sth; with nervousness; with my heart in one’s mouth…; relieve one's nervousness缓解紧张 羞愧 be ashamed of sth 羞愧，难为情 动作描写 说/听/看/ tell告诉, shout喊, ask问, answer回答, add补充, continue继续, reply回答, whisper小声说, express表达, explain解释, argue争辩, insist坚持, announce宣布, recall回忆, conclude总结； hear, listen听；catch sight of看见 notice sb/sth注意到；stare at盯着看; 怒视glare at; glance at瞥/扫了一眼; exchange glances交换眼色; see/spot sth看到；wink at sb眨眼； 走/站/冲/跳 approach走近；go/head/walk to some place走向； wander aimlessly无目的地闲逛；stand/spring/rise to one’s feet站起来；walk/stand on tiptoe踮脚尖走/站; slide into the classroom溜进教室；dash, rush冲进； jump/ leap跳； stamp one’s feet跺脚; 头/心思 shake/nod/raise/lower one’s head摇头/点头/抬头/低头；hit sb on the head打某人的头； My mind is racing to think of a solution. 我转动脑筋去想一个解决方法；read one’s mind读懂某人的心思； 手 point to sb/sth指着; hold one’s hands/shake hands握住手; pat sb on one’s back/shoulder轻拍; grasp sth. tightly with both hands双手紧紧抓住某物; grasp sb by the arm抓住某人的胳膊; hide one’s face in one’s hands用手捂脸; Thunderous applause filled the stadium雷鸣般的掌声响彻整个体育场；a storm of applause 雷鸣般的掌声；applaud loudly热烈鼓掌；clap one’s hands拍手，鼓掌； 鼓励/激励 encourage/inspire sb to do sth鼓励/激励某人去做某事 gather up one’s courage鼓起勇气 take a deep breath深呼吸 applaud/praise sb. for sth.表扬/称赞某人； 道歉/安慰 apologize to sb for sth为某事对某人道歉；be/feel sorry for sth对某事道歉 comfort sb with a beautiful gift/a warm hug/encouraging words用…安慰某人; hugged/ gave sb a hug拥抱; pull sb into one’s arms拉某人入怀; open/stretch one’s arms张开双臂; greet sb with a big smile/flowers用微笑/花欢迎/迎接某人； 帮助 reach out to sb/sth帮助、取得联系；lend a helping hand to those in need帮助有需要的人； 摔倒/治疗/康复 tripped over a stone被石头绊倒；fall over a toy car被玩具车绊倒；fall down摔倒；fall off the bike摔下车；lose one’s balance and fall to the ground失去平衡、摔倒在地；be worn out筋疲力尽；speed up加速；get up/rise to one’s feet爬/站起来；hurt one’s knee膝盖受伤；sprain/twist one’s ankle扭伤脚踝； get better/make a good recovery康复/恢复； recover from a serious illness从重病中康复；fully recovered完全康复；cure sb. of one’s cancer治愈了他的癌症；an effective cure for cancer治愈癌症的有效疗法；treat sb for a broken leg治疗断腿；receive treatment接受治疗； 结尾升华 make progress 取得进步；regain one’s confidence 重获自信；meet the challenge bravely 勇敢迎接挑战；develop the spirit of never giving up养成了永不放弃的精神；remember all one’s life终身难忘；Freedom is important but safety counts more.自由诚可贵，安全价更高；What an unforgettable experience! 多么难忘的经历！ 句式套用 1. so…that… so后面跟情感形容词，that从句中用动作动词 They were so frightened that they did not know how to act. 他们吓得不知所措。 I was so nervous that I heard my heart pounding. 我紧张得听到自己的心跳声。 He was so moved that he turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes. 他感动得热泪盈眶，颤抖着转向我。 Lucy was so proud that she felt as if she had completed the impossible. 露西非常自豪，感觉自己仿佛完成了一件不可能的事。 2. with结构 with的部分表达感情，可+介词短语/名词短语/doing/done With a smile on her lips, Jenny rushed to her mom’s room to show off her new painting. 她嘴角挂着微笑，跑到妈妈屋里炫耀她的新画。 With tears welling up in my eyes, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street. 我热泪盈眶，冲出公寓，沿街奔跑。 The young man stood silently with tears rolling/streaming/flowing/running/pouring down his cheeks. 年轻人静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。 With regretful tears welling up in my eyes, I rushed out to apologize to him. 我眼里涌出懊悔的泪水，冲出去向他道歉。 With my heart pounding wildly in my chest, I was filled with anxiety and found myself unable to focus on anything. 我的心在胸膛里狂跳，我充满了焦虑，发现自己无法专注于任何事情。He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。 With the help of him, everything was going smoothly. 在他的帮助下，一切进展顺利。 With determination and the right approach, there is no difficulty that cannot be overcome. 只要有决心和正确的方法，就没有克服不了的困难。 3. doing/done非谓语 After submitting his final exam, Lucas ran out of the classroom, shouting with joy. 提交期末考试后，卢卡斯高兴地跑出了教室。 Sarah clapped her hands, her eyes shining with joy. 萨拉拍手，眼睛里闪着喜悦的光芒。 I couldn’t help but smile, feeling a warm sense of pride. 我忍不住笑了，感到一种温暖的自豪感。 Her eyes sparkled with delight, twinkling like the brightest stars on a clear night sky. 她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦的光芒，像晴朗夜空中最明亮的星星一样闪闪发光。 Her face lit up like a thousand suns, a broad smile stretching from ear to ear. 她的脸像一千个太阳一样闪闪发光，一个灿烂的笑容从耳朵延伸到耳朵。 He was in low spirits, standing silently outside her room, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他情绪低落，默默地站在她的房间外，泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。 She looked extremely nervous, her heart pounding, her mouth dry, her throat tight, and her hands trembling. 她看起来非常紧张，心跳加速，口干舌燥，喉咙紧绷，双手颤抖。 Edward ran as if he were being chased by a pack of wolves, his heart pounding with fear. 爱德华跑得好像被一群狼追赶，他的心因恐惧而砰砰直跳。 He grasped the thing in both hands, a fire of rage burning in his heart. 他双手抓着那东西，一股怒火在心中燃烧。 She stood there speechless, her face turning pale and her hands trembling with rage. 她的脸变得苍白，站在那里说不出话来，她的手因愤怒而颤抖。 The young man lost his temper, stamping his feet angrily. 这个年轻人发脾气了，气得直跺脚。 He patted the child on the shoulder, encouraging him to keep working hard. 他拍了拍孩子的肩膀，鼓励他继续努力。 After achieving my lifelong dream, I felt a great sense of fulfillment swept over me. 在实现了我毕生的梦想之后，我感到一种巨大的满足感席卷了我。 Hearing the judge announce "winner", we jumped up, joy flooding over/ welling up inside us. 听到裁判宣布“获胜者”，我们跳了起来，喜悦涌上心头。 Noticing the trembling stray dog, I knelt down slowly, my heart filled with compassion. 看到那只颤抖的流浪狗，我慢慢跪下，心中充满了同情。 4. 形容词 直接用情感形容词描述主语情感，后面句子中用动作动词 After a while, she looked up, her eyes red and swollen from crying. 过了一会她抬起头，双眼哭得又红又肿。 Anxious and nervous, she walked onto the stage accompanied by her mother. 她焦虑不安，在母亲的陪同下走上舞台。 5. 动作并列 用and连接并列的两个以上的动作 She burst into tears and ran out of the room. 她突然哭了起来，跑出来房间。 The man dashed/rushed to the exit and escaped in panic. 男人向出口冲去，惊恐地逃走了。 My stomach was full of butterflies and my hands were sweaty. 我心里直打鼓，手心都是汗。 She sank into despair and her heart was almost broken.她陷入绝望，心都要碎了。 Hope for the best and prepare for the worst. 报最好的希望，做最坏的准备。 6. when时间状语从句 When I heard the name of my opponent, all I wanted to do was get out of the office. 当我听到对手的名字时，我只想离开办公室。 When we finally met, I shook his hands with excitement as if we were long-lost friends. 当我们最终见面时，我激动地握住他的手，仿佛我们是失散已久的朋友。 7. the moment/on时间状语从句 The moment I received the news, a rush of excitement flooded over me. 一收到这个消息，一阵激动之情涌上我的心头。 The moment she received the news, a look of surprise spread over her face. 她一收到这个消息，脸上便露出惊讶的神情。 On hearing the bad news, she lowered down her head with great guilt. 一听到这个坏消息，她非常内疚地低下了头。 On entering/approaching the room, an old photo on the desk caught my eye. 8. as表伴随、原因 A mixture of relief and guilt filled my heart as I watched the rescued puppy limp toward its owner. 当我看着获救的小狗蹒跚地走向主人，我的心里充满了解脱和内疚。 He felt a surge of relief, as the intense speech contest had finally come to an end just now. 他如释重负，因为刚刚那场紧张激烈的演讲比赛终于结束了。 Tears welled up in her eyes again as she started to speak. 她一张口说话，泪水再次从眼中涌出。 His voice was filled with enthusiasm as the coach encouraged his team to never give up. 当教练鼓励他的球队永不放弃时，他的声音充满了热情。 9. 介词/副词短语描写情感 Out of curiosity, they went into the cave. To their relief, their son returned, safe and sound. He sprang up in a fury. 他勃然大怒，跳了起来。 Our mouths dropped open in surprise. 我们惊讶地张大了嘴。 I was fraught with anxiety, at a loss for what to do next. 我充满了焦虑，不知道下一步该怎么办。 To our relief, the difficulties were all overcome. 令我们欣慰的是，困难都克服了。 To hide her embarrassment/awkwardness, she lowered/dropped her head. 为了掩饰尴尬，她低下头。 Everyone cries sometimes. It’s nothing to be ashamed of. 每个人都会有哭的时候--没什么好难为情的。 10. 语言描写 “Why do you so hard on me?” I shouted at Mom, slamming the door. “你为什么对我这么苛刻？” 我冲着妈妈大喊，砰地关上了门。 “Stay away from me.” He shouted. “离我远点”，他喊着。 “You scared me half to death.” She yelled. 你吓得我半死，她叫道。 “Stop it!” Jessie shouted angrily. “住手！”Jessie怒喝道。 “How is this possible?” he whispered with astonishment. “这怎么可能？” 他惊愕地低声说道。“Is it true?” he whispered with astonishment. “是真的吗？”他惊讶地小声说。 “Mom, I’m sorry for what I have done! Would you forgive me?”我为我做的事情道歉，你能原谅我吗？ “Thank you. This is the most delicious breakfast/best gift that I have ever got in the world!” she said pleasantly/ in a pleasant tone/ with excitement. “谢谢你。这是我这辈子吃过的最美味的早餐 / 收到的最棒的礼物！”她愉快地 / 语气愉悦地 / 激动地说道。 With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Peter hugged Green tightly and said, "Thanks for saving me." 彼得感激的泪水顺着脸颊滚落，他紧紧地抱住格林说：“谢谢你救了我。” “It’s so clever and thoughtful of you to put forward such a brilliant idea.” 你能提出如此绝妙的主意，真是既聪明又周到。 She winked at me and said, “This is between you and me.” 她冲我眨了眨眼，说道：“这是你我之间的秘密。” 11. by被动 Overwhelmed by despair, he felt everything seemed to be going wrong. 他绝望了，每件事情似乎都不顺利。 She was completely overcome by disappointment. 她完全被失望的情绪所压倒。 Everyone was moved to tears by their performance. 他们的表演让所有人都感动得流下了眼泪 。 12. 生动表达 Words cannot express how disappointed I was. 言语无法表达我是多么失望。 A great sense of gratitude was welling up in her heart. 一种强烈的感激之情在她心中油然而生。I expressed sincere appreciation/gratitude to him. 我向他表达了诚挚的感激之情。 环境描写 天空、太阳 the sun rose太阳升起；lighten the day照亮天空；a sunny day 晴天；a blue and cloudless sky/a clear blue sky蔚蓝无云的天空; The sun shone/blazed brightly, bathing the world in a golden light/sheen. 太阳炽热地照耀着，将世界沐浴在金色的光辉中。 The sun shone gloriously, making everything glisten like diamonds. 太阳灿烂地照耀着，使一切都像钻石一样闪闪发光。 A clear blue sky stretched as far as the eye could see, with fluffy white clouds floating by. 湛蓝的天空一望无际，蓬松的白云飘过。 A cloudless sky served as a perfect backdrop for the bustling activities below. 万里无云的天空为下面热闹的活动提供了完美的背景。 雨天 a cold and grey evening很冷的、灰蒙蒙的晚上；a rainy day雨天; The rain started to fall.下雨; The rain showered down. 大雨倾盆而下； A steady drizzle fell, pattering softly on the rooftops and adding a touch of melancholy to the scene.细雨绵绵，轻柔地敲打着屋顶，给这场景增添了一丝忧郁的气息。 The rain poured/pelted down mercilessly, turning the streets into a sea of water. 雨无情地倾泻而下，把街道变成了一片汪洋。 A gentle rain was falling, whispering secrets to the earth. 一场温柔的雨在下着，向大地倾诉着秘密。 风 A gust of wind rose up.一阵风刮起来. The wind howled fiercely, like a wild beast roaring.风猛烈地呼啸着，像一头野兽在咆哮。 A gentle breeze caressed one’s face, bringing a sense of calmness/tranquility. 一阵微风轻抚着脸庞，带来一种宁静的感觉。 夜晚 The moon hung like a silver plate in the star-studded sky, casting a dreamy glow over the sleeping town. 月亮像一个银盘挂在繁星点点的天空中，给沉睡的小镇洒下梦幻般的光辉。 The moon bathed the landscape in a soft, ethereal light, creating a fairy-tale scene. 月亮将柔和、空灵的光洒在大地上，营造出童话般的场景。 The night was so dark that it seemed as if a thick black curtain had been drawn over the world. 夜晚黑得仿佛一块厚厚的黑色幕布被拉在了世界上。 雪 Snowflakes fluttered down gracefully, covering the world in a white blanket. 雪花优雅地飘落，给世界盖上了一层白色的毯子。 The heavy snow was falling in big flakes, creating a magical winter wonderland. 大雪纷纷扬扬地飘落，营造出一个神奇的冬日仙境。 闪电雷鸣 Lightning flashed across the sky, followed by a deafening thunderclap. 闪电划过天空，紧接着是一声震耳欲聋的霹雳。 The thunder rumbled in the distance, like the growl of an approaching giant. 雷声在远处轰鸣，像一个逼近的巨人的咆哮。 春、夏、秋、冬 The vibrant spring has arrived. Overnight, colorful flowers have bloomed with joy, green grasses are poking their heads, and the branches of the young trees also sprout tender green new shoots. This is truly the season for all things to grow! 生机勃勃的春天来了，一夜之间，五颜六色的花儿绽开了笑颜，青色的小草从地里探出了头，小树的枝条也吐出了嫩绿的新芽。这真是万物生长的季节啊! Summer is red, with the sun hanging in the sky like a fireball and roasting the earth. The dense leaves steam with the scorching heat, casting a layered blush, as if bright red flowers were swaying in the wind. Summer is so red that it's hard to breathe, but it's also so passionate and pure. 盛夏是红色的，天空中悬挂着火球似的太阳将大地烤得通红；茂密的叶片蒸腾着炽热的暑气，晕染出层叠的红晕，像一朵朵红艳艳的花随风摆动。夏天红得让人喘不过气，也红得热烈、纯粹。 Early autumn is colorful, with red maple leaves fluttering in the air like butterflies. The golden rice sway with the wind as if the golden waves were rolling. Pink flowers compete to blossom like a young girl showing off her graceful figure. Early autumn is as beautiful as an oil painting! 初秋是五彩缤纷的，红色的枫叶如蝴蝶一样在空中飞舞;金灿灿的稻谷随风摇摆，宛如金色的浪花在翻滚;粉色的木芙蓉竞相开放，像少女在展示自己优美的身姿。初秋美得像一幅油画! In bitter winter, pure white snowflakes swirl in the air and fall like goose feathers, and pink plum trees are in bloom, giving off waves of faint scent. The beautiful winter scenery really takes our breath away! 严冬，洁白的雪花犹如鹅毛一般纷纷扬扬，一树树粉红色的梅花绽开了，散发出一阵阵清香。美丽的冬景真让人忍不住赞叹! 逻辑衔接 转折 However, things took an unexpected turn. 然而，事情发生了意想不到的转折。 But to everyone’s surprise,… 但令所有人惊讶的是， Nevertheless, a sudden twist of fate intervened. 然而，命运的突然转折介入了。 Unexpectedly, a sudden obstacle emerged out of nowhere. 出乎意料的是，一个突然的障碍不知从哪里冒了出来。 因果 Therefore, it was no wonder that… 因此，难怪 As a result/consequence, their efforts paid off handsomely. 作为结果，他们的努力得到了丰厚的回报。 Due to his persistent efforts and unwavering belief, he managed to break through the difficulties. 由于他坚持不懈的努力和坚定的信念，他成功突破了困难。 递进 Moreover, 此外，… What’s more, 更重要的是，… Furthermore, not only did he gain valuable experience, but he also made lifelong friends during this journey. 此外，在这段旅程中，他不仅获得了宝贵的经验，还交到了一生的朋友。 In addition to achieving academic excellence, he also cultivated strong leadership skills through various activities.除了在学业上取得优异成绩，他还通过各种活动培养了很强的领导能力。 对比 In contrast to his previous hesitation, he now made a decisive decision. 与他之前的犹豫形成对比，他现在做出了果断的决定。 While others were still complaining, he took action immediately. 当其他人还在抱怨时，他立即采取了行动。 让步 Although it was a difficult task, he managed to complete it with great effort. 尽管这是一项艰巨的任务，但他通过巨大的努力成功完成了。 Despite the harsh conditions, they remained optimistic and persistent. 尽管条件艰苦，他们仍然保持乐观和坚持。 总结 All in all, this experience taught them the importance of teamwork and perseverance. 总而言之，这次经历教会了他们团队合作和坚持不懈的重要性。 To sum up, the story conveys a powerful message about the value of friendship and kindness. 总之，这个故事传达了一个关于友谊和善良价值的强烈信息。 读后续写思路 第一段： 情节线：冲突— 解决1— 失败— 解决2— 成功 与环境：迷路了、困住了、遇险了----靠环境：太阳、雨、机会 与别人：争吵、误解、伤害、背叛----靠别人：帮助、鼓励、安慰、善良、爱 与自己：孤独、自卑、失败、伤心、贫困、残疾----靠自己：勇气、努力、冷静、灵机一动 第二段： 情绪线 高兴、感动、紧张、尴尬、绝望、害怕、惊讶、伤心、愿望 动作线 跑、走、冲、看、拥抱、绊倒、扭伤、摔伤、康复… 结尾句： 感叹 What a 形容词1 and 形容词2 experience! 回忆 After all these years, the 形容词 scenes are still vivid in my mind. 感悟 Only then did I realize that… 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$